dil se(updated on pg:25) - Page 9

Hey dear

great update........good that the both fially confessed....the scene was ver cute.

Thanks ......waiting for the next update 😊

awsome
superb
very nice 👏
finally they confesseed 😉 good
waiting for u'r next update

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TOO GOOD 👏 I HAD NICE FUN.. KITNA ACHA HOTA AGAR REAL LRL MEIN AISA HOTA 😕 BUT ANYWAYS U HAV DONE A GREAT JOB AND PLEASE CARRY ON.. WAITING FOR THE NEXT PART 😃 😃 😃


RANU

dear friends
i really made a mistake by writting nair's name ....as i have edited it and i assure u tat no such mistakes will be repeated..
really thanks for tat lovely comments
i vll soon update
tc
love
ashu

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hi friends
sorry pichle update me maine galti se major nair ka naam likh diya tha...but i have edited it now...
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abhi navin and naina and raj reached abhi's room..
where aalekh and gunny were talking

abhi(to gunny) :kya hua aap khana leke kyon nahi aaye....

g :arre vo naye major aane wale hai na issi liye suriji bahot tensed and u will be surprised to hear tat bc is also tensed..
aur rahi baat khane ki to i think we will have to bring some food from outside....

aalekh :haan sir yaha sab itne dare hue kyon hai jaise koi major nahi hitler ho...

raj :vaise naam kya hai naye major ka..

navin :koi major sharma hai...

raj :ok....

g :suriji to bechare pehle se he itne tensed the aur uparse pata chala ke lolitaji(warden of girls hostel) ka transfer hua hai....
aalekh :to iss wajah se unka meter subahse down hai..

abhi : koi nayi officer bhi aane wali hai ....

navin :pata nahi ye naye samples kaise honge..

raj :tum apne cadets ke samne asse baat kar rahe ho??????????

navin :oh sorry tum log(naina and aalekh) kisiko batana mat aur agar galtise bataya bhi to mera naam mat lena in teeno me se kisika bhi naam le sakte ho....(pointing to raj abhi and gunny)

finally naina spoke...

naina :bhai aap kabhi nahi badalenge.....

naina :mai to aap he ka naam lungi...

navin :kya behen hai yaar humesha mujhe chod kar dusaro ka saath dete hai are..

abhi :akhir humari cadet hai...

g :ok guys mujhe bukh lagi hai mai bahar jake khana leke aata hoon

a :humbhi chalte hai..

naina :to thek hai mai room me jaa rahi hoon..

abhi:ok chaliye hum aapko hostel tak company dete hai..

naina :theak hai

navin :bye gudiya...

n :bye bhai...

raj :bye naina

naina :bye raj.........

all r surprised to hear this........aur abhi aur navin ke chehare dekhne layak the....

abhi :naina abhi app ne raj... kaha na

gunny and aalekh r just smiling

navin :maine bhi yahi suna...

naina raj ki taraf dekhti hai and then she says

naina :agar class ke bahar mai aap ko abhi bula sakti hoon to kaj inhe raj nahi bula sakti..

navin :....ha...vo humne ye expect nahi kiya tha na issi liye..

naina :ok aub mai chalti hoon...
bye...
par khana aa jaye to plz mujhe bulalena ok....

aalekh :ruk apun bhi chalta hai tere saath..

they both leave....

gunny :arre yaar vo actually mujhe bc ne bulaya tha to navin tu abhi ke saath chala ja plz....

navin :ok....vaise bhi mujhe kuch saman bhi lena hai..

abhi :ok then lets leave...

aur vo dono wahase chale jate hai leaving gunny and raj.....
raj ko pata hai ke gunny jooth bol raha hai...

g :to aap bataye ge ke seharme kya hua...

r :kuch nahi mera checkup hua aur hum reports leke
aa gaye....(raj try hard to say this casually....)

g :(smiles)achha raj...par tumhara chehara to kuch aur he keh raha hai...

r :so u r not going to leave me........

g :.........

r :i proposed her and she said yes

g :tats really a good news.........congrats

r :but i am worried.......i dont really know how navin will react....

g :i think he vll be happy.....

r :i am not sure abt tat...

g :so r u thinking of hiding all this from him..............

r :yeah..........

g :but how long can u hide this..........

r :till she completes her education.....

g :i think its a good idea..........

raj just nods...
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at the same time aalekh and naina are on there way....

aa :naina apun tere liye bahot kush hai.......vaise kisne pehle kaha tune ya unhone????????

naina :aalekh tujhe kaise.............i mean tujhe kaise pata chal jata hai......

aa :tere chehre pe saaf saaf likha hai....aur jab tu kamre mai aayi na tabhi apun ko laga ke unhone keh diya hoga ...

aa :aur jab tune unhe raj kaha to confirm ho gaya....

aa :vaise tere bhai ko pata hai iss bare me

naina :nahi...

n :mujhe darr kag raha hai pata nahi vo kaise react
karenge....

aa :kuch nahi hoga tu khali tension mat le abhi to raj sir tere saath hi na

aa :par manna padega shalini mam ko kya plan banaya...

naina :plan kaisa plan....

aa :tujhe aur sir ko bahar bhejneka....

naina :yani.........

aa :haan agar hum tum dono ko bahar nahi bhej te to tum
log ek dusare ko kabhi nahi keh pate....

naina :aur koun koun shamil hai aapke iss plan mai????

aa : sirf dr.s,gunny.....

naina :just smile :thanks aalekh tere jaisa dost sirf kismat waloko he milta hai...and i must say iam very lucky...
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navin and abhi are on there way to city...

n :abhi tumne aaj naina ko notice kiya vo kitni kush lag rahi thi...

a :haan...usse bahot dino baad itna kush dekha hai...

a :raj ke uss accident ke baad ussne jaise jeena he chod diya tha....usse aaj itna kush dekh kar humme bahot accha laga..

n :haan raj bhi naina ke bare me bahot baat karta tha...

n :aur aaj mujhe bahot aacha laga jab naina ne raj ko sir nahi balke raj bulaya...

a :what??????? tumhe accha laga ...humme to laga tha ke
aap ko bura lagega...i mean...

n :ek baat kahu abhi mai humesha chata tha ke naina ko raj jaise koi ladka mile...u know what i wanna say...

a :haan agar raj aur naina ki jodi sachme acchi rahegi..

n :but i really dont know what they feel abt each other.....

a :humme lagta hai vo dono bhi ek dusareko pasand karte

hai..

n :i wish ye sach ho....
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hey friends
plzzz do comment
and pm me if u guys wanna some change in story

track.......or if u feel it boring...or anything else...
i am waiting for ur comments...
take care
bye
love
ashu

awwesome too good very nice waiting for next asap.