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Posted: 17 years ago
A very funny update 😆 .....the dialogues between raj, abhi gunny and navin are very good 😃 . thanks for the update.....will wait for the next. 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
too good.superb 👏 .cont soon......
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Posted: 17 years ago
IT WAS A LOVELY PART 👏 👏 👏 AND ESPECIALLY THE SCENES BETWEEN GUNNY, RAJ AND NAVIN 😆 .. I MUST SAY THE DIALOGUES WERE JUST AWESOME 👏 👏 I WILL BE WAITING FOR THE NEXT PART AND ONCE AGAIN ALL THE BEST FOR UR EXAMS

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RANU 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
three boy cadets enter the mess they see that all tables are full except one table where 2 girls are sitting

aakash: excuse me grils....kya hum log yaha baith sakte hai....as u can see there is no place...

aastha: why not...plz....

aastha: kya aap log bhi fresher hai..

aakash: haan..i am aakash...

aastha: aur mai aastha....

rohit: mai rohit aur ye rahul...

aastha: tum dono zerox copy jaise ho...i mean...

rahul: yes we are twince...

rohit: mai coffee lene ja raha hu..app log kuch lenge...

aastha: nahi mujhe kuch nahi chahiye......

rohit:aur aap...

akriti: nahi...

rohit: vaise naam kya hai aap ka

akriti:akriti..

rohit: nice name....

rahul(murmers):kahi pe ladki dekhi nahi shuru ho jata hai.....
aakash hears this and smiles...

by then our six cadets come there

yudi: hi....i guess u r freshers...
aakash: yes....aur aap..
yudi:we r ur seniors...(proudly)
aakash: oh hi...

and they introduce them self to each other..

naina: agar tum logoko kisi bhi tarah ki help chahiye to aap hume contact kar sakte hai...
akriti: thanks...ahhh
naina:naina..u guys can call us by our names ....
huda: arre phoolan vo mai batana he bool gaya ....tujhe capt navin dhond rahe the...
naina: ok guys....bye...
ali: pooja ye naina ko kya hua hai...inka ring tone kaise badal gaya...
pooja: arre yaar uska pyar...
aalekh gave her a killing look...and
pooja: i mean uska bhai usse vapas mil gaya to khush to hogi he na..
yudi: haan jab se capt navin vapas aaye hai vo bahot khush rehne lagi hai
huda:haan yaar vo to hai..par ali iss punjaban ke saath reh kar tere language bhi bilkul ussi ki tarah ho gaya hai...

aastha: pooja tum naina ki baat kar rahi ho na...vaise lagta hai capt r.... i mean sir se vo bahot pyar karti hai...
aalekh was surprised by her words.......as he thought she might be refering to some other person and not navin......
huda:pyar to karegi na akhir bhai he uska...
ali: humme aub chalna chahiye,,agle class ka waqt ho gaya hai
yudi: u r rt bro....ok guys...see u then...

and they left mess...and suriji came to there table...introduced himself...and had a friendly chat with them...and he liked the cadets...after some time all cadets left to there room...but aastha was still there....
gunny and raj were standing outside mess waitng for abhi and navin
suriji: arre puttar tu gayi nahi apne dosto ke saath...
aastha: nahi vo actually kya hai na akriti... mere room mate usse jyada baat karna pasand nahi... aur mai jyada der tak chup nahi reh sakti...to issi liye maine socha ke yahi pe thoda time spend karke phir room me jau..
aastha: suriji...kya mai aap ke kam me kuch madat kardu...as iam getting really bored..
suriji: arre puttar tu to thak gayi ho gi...aur vaise bhi kal se tumhari drill shuru ho jayegi to tumhe aaram se baithne ka time nahi milega....
aastha:mai yaha aaram karne nahi aayi suriji.......(she said this with a determined look on her face)
suriji:theak hai puttar agar koi bhi kam hoga to mai tujhe bata dunga..abhi chal mai tujhe kitchen dikhata hoon...

and they were in kitchen now...

aastha: suriji kya aap mujhse dosti karenge....
suriji ko pata nahi chal raha hai ke vo kya kahe aur kya kare...
aastha: itni buri bhi nahi hoon mai.....bas ek he burayi hai ke jyada bakbak karti hoon....
aur vaise aap mujhse dosti karke faide me rahen ge....(and she smiled naughtily and took her hand out)

and suriji shook her hand....

aastha: kya aap mere haath ki coffee piyenge...sab kehte hai ke accha bana leti hu..
suriji: puttar mai coffee nahi peta...vo..
aastha: pata hai aap lassi ,doodh aur daru ke sivaye kuch aur nahi pete..rt suriji..
suriji: oye ye sab tujhe kaise pata!!!!!!!!!!!!
aastha: mai apne dosto ke bare mai sab kuch janti hoon...

raj call suriji... they all (navin, raj abhi gunny)r in mess...
suriji: aaya sirji....
navin: aap hume sir mat kahi ye...plz suriji
suriji: theak hai puttar...kya loge aap log...batao...
raj: sandwiches.....aur coffee....
suriji: abhi laya..

and huda comes to mess
navin: cadet huda aap akele naina aur baki cadet kaha hai...

huda:vo sirji phoolan..i mean naina ko kuch puchna tha shalini mam se to unhike pass gayi hai aur ud uske piche piche gaya hai...aur apni heer ranjhe ke saath hai.....aur vo kaidi mere piche piche he aa raha tha.. vo dekho aa gaya...

suriji sab ke liye sandwiches aur coffee late hai...

raj: suriji ye sandwiches bahot tasty hai...
gunny: aur coffee its superb...
abhi: humme to assa lag raha hai hum apni riyasat me khana kha rahe hai...
navin: its really too good ....suriji kya ye sach me aapne banaya hai?????????i mean itna accha....
suriji: oye tu kehna kya chata hai ...ke roz mai accha khana nahi banata....
raj: assa kuch nahi hai suriji..par aaj ka taste kuch alag tha....
suriji: vaise aaj ye sab maine nahi banaya..
aalekh:(murmers): issi liye to itne acche hai....
guuny: to phir kisne banaya hai.....
suriji: meri dostne....
huda: lolita mam ne....
suriji: oye nahi oye....arre putaar baakike sandwiches ban gaye ho to like aaja...
aastha comes there...
suriji: inse milo ye hai mere nayi friend .......
raj:cadet aastha.....(looking at gunny)
abhi: sandwiches bahot acche hai cadet...
raj: aur capt randhawa ko coffee bahot acchi lagi...........
and gunny starts coughing...
navin: kya hua gunny r u all rt....
gunny: yes i am.....(and he gave an angery look to raj)
huda: agar tujhe aaj mummyji ne dekh liya hota to vo foran tujhe...(but before he completes his sentence aastha say's)
aastha: haan pata hai mujhse tumhe rakhi bandwa dete........
all start laughing...
aastha: mai aub chalti hoon as i still have to unpack my belongings....
navin: ok cadet....
aalekh: huda ye bhi tere haath nahi aane wali..........kya solid mamu banaya ussne tujhe.....
huda: tu chup kar kaidi.....
huda: vo dekh naina aa gayi...
raj ne naina ko dekha ......vo log apni date ke baad nahi mile the.......
gunny(whispers in raj's ear): mere tang kheech raha tha na...aub tere bari hai....
but aalekkh heard this and strarted smiling...
naina came and sat by raj' s side facing navin..
naina: bhaya aap yahaan hai mai aapke room me gayi thi aap vaha nahi the........
navin : haan vo me raj ke saath tha...
naina: aap ne kaha tha ke aap ko mujhse kuch puchna hai...
navin: nahi assi koi zaroori baat nahi hai....
abhi: naina tum kuch logi...
naina: haan ek coffee...
suriji gets up to make coffee..
naina: aap baithiye mai bana lungi...
gunny: naina rajko bhi ek cup cofee bana dena..
naina: ok
navin: abhi to isne coffee piya tha...
g: arre bechara ko kitne sare tension hai..aur kitna kam karta hai...to kya ye ek aur cup coffee nahi pee sakta...
a: haan kyun nahi....

aalekh apne teachers ko asse ek dusare ki taang keechte hue dekh kar has raha tha...
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so guy's i know iss update me story wahi ki wahi hai...agle update mai i promise kuch naya hoga.....so guy's plz do comment.............i am waiting for ur suggestions..
take care
love
ashu
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Posted: 17 years ago
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
amazing superrrrrrrrrrrrr
awesome

point 1857 scene is soooooooooooooo romantic 😳

new cadet entry is guddddddd 😛

raj & navin teasing gunny 😆 😆

naina raj ke liye coffee bana rahi hai 😳 😳
mindblowing update

👏 👏 👏

update soon 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
Too good!!!Awesome!!!

You have chosen a new set of Cadets!!!Fine but yeh kya Akriti is paired with Navin 😭 😭 😭 !!!!No yaar I want Akriti with Abhimanyu!!!I like their pair!!!!Navin ke saath bilkul acchi nahi dikhegi!!!

Aur yeh nayi major aayi hai unka jeena haram karne!!!Bad!!!! 😡

This Aastha is behaving very suspiciously!!!!Kuch ajeeb hai uske baare mein!!!! 😕

The teasing was very good!!!Even of the teachers and last mein Naina aate hi Gunny ka Raj ko chhedna 😆 !!!

Next time thoda romanc bhi dalna!!!Aur yeh rooms ajdi alag karo sabke!!!Taaki Raj ke bedroom mein bahut saara romance ho sake 😉 😉 !!!! 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
Awesome update. 😊

Loved the way in which raj and gunny pulled each others leg. 👏 👏

Waiting for your next update
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Posted: 17 years ago
hahahahahaha...hilarious one...extremely a very interesting part...Astha is too good...last part was faaaaaaaabulous...thanku soo much for this wonderful update...
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Posted: 17 years ago
THE PART WAS JUST MIDBLOWING 👏 👏 I HAD LOT OF FUN.. BAHUT HASSI AAYI 😆 GUNNY AND RAJ DONO HI NO.1 BADMAASH HAI.. FRESHERS KI ENTRY IS REALLY A GOOD IDEA DI.. AB THO GUNNY BHI PYAAR MEIN PADH GAYA 😆 😆 😆 IT WAS A LOVELY PART DI.. WAITING FOR THE NEXT ONE...


LOVE
RANU 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
updaaaaate..please 😳 😊

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