dil se(updated on pg:25) - Page 12

Originally posted by: RSZR

AWESOME PART YAAR 👏 I WISH KE NAVIN KO SAB KUCH JALDI PATA CHAL JAAYE.. AND RAJ IS SO ROMANTIC 😳 😳 😳 BAOT ACHA UD.. WAITING FOR THE NEXT PART EAGERLY



RANU 😊

thanks dear.....

so sweet & cute update
lovely

waitinggggggggggg eagerly for da update plzzzzzzzzzzzzz with long part asap now only.

hi friends....
aaj ka update sirf rn par based hai... i hope u guys like it
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naina raj kma ke ground mai hai...
naina :raj hum kaha ja rahe hai...
raj :where do u wanna go..........for our first date.......... 😊
naina :pt 1857...
raj :aur hum vahi ja rahe hai...
raj :vaise naina tum aaj bahot acchi lag rahi ho....aur........
naina :aur..........
raj :kuch nahi....chalo humme vaha tak jane mai time lagega..

aur vo apna haath naina ki taraf badhata hai
and naina takes his hand and the start walking...
after some time they reach naina is just shocked to see the view....and her eyes are filled with tears and she turns to raj.......

n :raj tum ne ye sab kub.......kaise..............

he just gives his 100 $ smileeeeeeeeeee

aaj pt 1857 kuch alag he lag raha tha....it was a romantic place but today it was looking completely different............kyon ki usse raj ne apne pyaar ke rang se rang diya tha....there was a table with two chairs and a candle....and number of candles were there around wishing piller....and the floor was filled with petals of rose
(i hope u guys can imagine as i am not getting words to express it)

r :aub kyon ro rahi ho..........
n :thanks rajjjjjjjjj....
r aur naina wishing piller ke pass jate hai
r :kuch wish karna chahogi...
n :nahi aaj mere pass sab kuch hai....mujhe aur kuch nahi chahiye....bus yahi dua karti hoon ki jo diya hai uo hamesha mere pass hi rahe..
r :arre tum phir se senti ho gayi..
n : tumhari language ko kya hua hai....
r :arre ye sab chodo...chalo waha chale
they go to table were two glasses are placed with a wine bottle and r opens the bottle and pours wine in two glass...
n apne khayalome khoi hue hai....the last time when they came here.....the way they were shouting each others name...
r : naina kaha kho gayi...
n :yaad hai aapko jab hum yaha pichale bar aaye the tab humne kaise maza kiya tha....
r : haan aur ye bhi yaad hai tumne kitna zid kiya tha yaha par aane ke liye...
and naina picks her glass and was about to take sip..... she notices tat there is something in her glass...and ...
n :ye... ye ring.......thank u raj.............
r :tumhe pasand to hai na ye ring... i mean maine kabhi kisi ladki ke liye kuch liya nahi to...if u dont like it then i vll
before he complete his sentence naina places her hand on his lips..
n :raj ye bahot acchi hai.....ye mere zindagi ki sabse acchi gift hai
( arre yaar diamond ring kise acchi nahi lagagi.!!!!!!!!!!!!!)
r :thanks naina...
raj took naina's hand and slowly kissed it and moved ring in her finger.....and he pulled her close...his hands were around her waist....naina ki aanken zukhi hue hai....vo raj ke bahot kareeb hai...
raj takes her face in his hands and he first kiss her forehead ans says...
r :ye uss ke liye jisse sabse jyada mere parvah hai
them he kiss her eyes
r :jisski aankome mai kud ko dekh sakta hoon...

and finally he places his lips on her soft lips.....slowly her hands moves around him she holds him tightly her hands and he was kissing her with all love...and she responded him as well
after some time they separate to take breath...naina has got cut on her lip....
n :ahh....yeh kya kiya.........
r :sorry........dard ho raha hai...........and he again started kissing her
n :hmmm....chodo ye bus karo na ..........
r :arre maine suna hai kiss karne se dard kum hota hai...to mai tumhara dard kum kar raha hoon...
n :ye accha tarika hai flirt karne ka...
n :accha aub chodo muhje....
raj ne naina ko chod diya
n :arre tumne to such me chod dia...
raj laughs........
r ne usse phirse pakad liya....
r :aub me kabhi nahi chodunga.....
and he start kiss her neck......
n :ye kya kar rahe ho koi dekh lega...
r :naina...pehli baat...mai aub kisi se nahi darta...aur dusari yaha koun aayega...
n :agar bhaya aa gaye to..
r :arre yaar abhi uss ka naam lena zaruri hai kya....
n :tum bhaya se itna darte kyon ho...
r :mai mai nahi darta.......maii kyon daru......bus vo...
naina is laughing...
r :aub hasna band karo...
par naina se control he nahi ho raha
r :naina......
n :ok...chalo whaha chalte hai...
she points at the place were they stood last time and shouted each others name....
they both move to tat place and
r :nainaaaaaaaaa ...i love uuuuuuuuuuuuu
it echo's loudly.....
n :i love u tooooooo.....rajjjjjjjjj
they have great time there....
after some time..
r :humme aub chalna chahiye....
n :ok
they get down and are in ground....
n :raj tum ne ye sab intazam kaise kiya....i mean its not tat easy to carry table and all tat stuff there(pt 1857)
n :but i loved tat............thank u veryyyyyyyy much for every thing.........
r :vo sab arrangement maine akele ne nahi liya....
n :vo mai janti hoon....gunny ne help kiya hoga...
r :nahi....
n :to phir kisne...
r :aalekh....sara arrangement aalekh ne liya tha....vo petals aur candles ka idea bhi ussi ka tha...
n :mujhe nahi pata tha ke aalekh itna romantic hai...neelu ko jab pata chalaga isske baremai to vo bahot kush hogi...
r :wait a min... kya tum neelu ko batane wali hp humare baremai....
n :nahi vo to asse he bol diya...
n :par pooja ko pata chal gaya ....and i think she will be waiting for me...to know all the stuff..i mean when u proposed me and how u proposed me ...and all other stuff...
r :aur gunny aur shalini bhi mera wait kar rahe honge.....aub vo mera dimag khayenge...
r :ok....good bye then...... i am going to miss u....
n :ruko ye lo aur vo lipstick poch lo...
r :smiles...
n :good night...
r :good night.............sweet dreams.......and i vll meet u in ur dream
bye....................
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iam waiting for ur comments..........
love
ashu 😊

awwwwwwwwwwwww.....soooo cute it was a wonderful update...keep it up 😉

awesome too good very nice waitingggggggggg for next asap.

hehehehe...bhaut hi funny aur romantic update tha...soo sweet update...love it...thanks for this beautiful part... 👏 👏 👏

Too good!!!Awesome!!!Mindblowing!!!!

I just loved this!!!It was so romantic!!! 😳

Aur Raj ne diamond ring diya......how sweet 😛 !!!!!!

And this time they said I love you shouting...yeh toh pichli baar hi bolna tha...but finally!!!!!

Point 1857....unke pyaar ki gawah hai woh jagah 😊 😳 !!!!!

Aalekh itna romantic hai 😛 !!!Mujhe toh laga tha yeh sab Raj ka idea hoga!!!Aalekh is really sweet!!!! 😊 😛

Bas aise hi romance dikhati rehna!!!!

Thanks for the update.....it was beautifull....a PERFECT PROPOSAL....one that suites Raj. 👏 ......

waiting for the next part.....update soon.

superb 👏 .cont soon..............