Hina’sAddictiveLast Pt21(Barsaat !)pg140 - Page 105

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hinu di kya bheegta hua part tha 👏

luved all d songs u used....they were perfect 4 each situation 👏

anjie ws so cute lyk a kid dancing in d rain😳 nd atul usko dekh k mazee loot raha tha 😉

Shub to mashallah umbrella bhi yellow rakhta hai 😆😆wonder if his car is also yellow 😆uska bas chale to water bhi yellow ho grass bhi yellow doc ka lab coat bhi yellow....fir roz kirti yellow mein hogi 😉😆

di ab AR ko sinners bolna bas bhi karo....bechare bina sin kiye(i know they were on d verge of commiting d sin) hi sinners ke tag se introduce kiye jaate hai 😆😆 haye bt tht ws sooooo hot.....mujhe to ac mein bhi garmi lag rahi thi 😳😳😉.....freezer mein ghusna parha 😆😆

awww armi is chooo sweet....i luved d way he sd sorry nd i luv u 2 ridz in d show wen ridz ws seeing him frm her window 😳 aapne uss scene ki yaad dila di 😳

hehe lightening bhi kya sahi tym par hui 😉 bahar wale toofan se zada dangerous andar wala toofan hai 😆

awwww RM bike ride in d rain ws so cute.....luved d masti wali muski 😆 ab to muski ko rahul ko ghar mein coffee k liye bulana hi parega....bechara bheega hoga na...thand lag gayi to??beemar ho jayega fir sanjeevani mein uska kaam kaun karega 😆😆😆

budape mein jiwani 😆😆😆 di u crack me up 😆 hey bhagwan wo baccha tha ya bada 😉 sab pata hai usko to 😉 inhe abhi tak manzil ka pata nahi chala 😡 nani-anjie team ko jaldi jaldi kam karna parega 😆

awww luved NL....pehli barish to unhone ek saath enjoy nahi kari bt i hope by d end of d monsoons they will b together.....aakhri baarish ka hi mazaa utha lenge 😳

chalo ab jaldi se naya thread start karo 😆😆 warna hum update kahan maangenge 😉

Originally posted by: pari0706

wow this was really nice.. hmmm so one more hillarious line .. bhudhape me javani 😆 There's more coming up soon u crack me up... i just hope armi goes before shashank comes ... lets see Shashank is not gonna come home altogether(now don't have any dodgy thought of him having coffee at paddy's but he's a top surgeon,so emergeny surgery hai unke liye planned,par AR to mat batana,warna wo to rukengey hi nahi) waiting for next part 😳

Originally posted by: Jodubai

reserved love that,everytime

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Hina di, awesome part, I love rains, but sadly it hardly rains in dubai, loved all the couples....Yaha to har time bina maangey hi baarish hoti hai yar,iromane ki to watt lag gayi

Coming to the sinners 1st, you wrote it so wonderfully, no vulgarity, no indesency, nothing, pure love,Oooo,u made me blush there lololol! loved the fact that Ridz is infact more scared of giving herself in, rather than Arman taking advantage of her (lack of words, so used advantage)Chalta hai man,faida uthaya sale ney, 😡Arman is so cute, as usual, feeling sorry for his actions....toooooo cute...He is really sweet ain't he?lekin shayad agey jakey aisa na socho tum, may be?

Atul/Angie, Angie badi badmaash hai apki FF mein, loved them romancing in the rain Mai khud badmaash ho,to sabko notti bana diya ff me

You summed up all the couples in the rain so well, I did have an idea of how you would get Arman/Ridz closer & Muskan/Rahul, kyun ki woh dono to bike pe the, to of course they are already close enough...hmmm

Subh/Keerti was very adorable, can't beleive Subh keeps a yellow chata in his car ab usko to yellow fever hai na,arey shubh ki agey ki story sunegi na to tu has has ke paagal ho jayegi

Shashank/Paddy was the most unexpected, I didn't think you would give them much footage, but you did them complete justice,ab unke zamane ka gana to gana hi tha,aur jab tak ye dono ek nahi hongey to phir inki aulad ka kya hoga? isliye Shashank typical himself keeps a black large chata, & that song pyar huwa suits them completely purane zamane ke hero hai na apne Shashank babu

Thanks so much for making my day...I have still couple of more hours to spend at work....hopefully I will see you around the weekends, if not you have a great time & yes we shall meet in the new thread, if this will be closed by then....

U sure will,I know,kaam ka bahana karke ek baar to ayegi net pe,wwekend me,if not then take care and have a great one

Originally posted by: hiba786

luved it 2 bits plssssssssssssssss
continue sooooooooon, luved 2 see AR so passionate abt each other 😃 ,
plssssssssss continue sooooooooooon, 😊

U shud seriously think abt making ur career in story writing, ur amazing 👏 👏 👏

luv hiba

Hey aren't u Heena's sis

How is my Heenu doing?

Hope she's having fun

Tell her I miss her if u speak to her

and thanks for liking the update

and btw are u filling in for Heena?

if so,thanks

Originally posted by: Jodubai

Sure, mein kaam ja bahana karke aaogi, aap aapke chanewalo koi kitna accha janti hai, actually aapki hi galati hai, aapne hum sab koi bigat kar rakha hai... Ab kya karey,u guys are so lovely is liye

your lines, that I may not think of Arman in the same manner scares me...pls usse kuck aaisa waisse mat karvana! ab uski niyyat kabhi to kharraab hogi,aur upar se ye paapi barish

Barrish mein tho romance ka maaza ahi phir kyu aapne likha 'romance ki to watt lag gayi' London ki barish itni unpredictable and persistent hai ki maza hi nata ata,romance to door,i get annoyed with it

mein abhi bhi kaam pe hoo 😭 , how is the episode, kuch huwa?it was okay,not much progress with AR,they keep going into flashbacks abrubptly and it was kinda known about today,woi daku story dragged only Atul was funny a bit,the others were lame trying to be funny