RM&AA ! Prt 6b updated 05/09pg30 NEW Promo pg1 - Page 11

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Posted: 17 years ago
Next update finally tommorow 😳
sorry for the delay been busy this half term 😛 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey Muskaan!!

I was bored... and i started checking out new FF's... n i normally dnt read RM FF's (even though I love their jodi)... 😳 but woow.. this is awesome.. 😆 😆 Can't wait for more!

🤗 🤗 🤗
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Posted: 17 years ago


Heres the next part everyone hope you like it sorry if i dissapointed anyone 🤗

Part 3


The bidaai time was coming near infact it was only 45 minutes away till that moment would come that rahul and Muskaan would be husband and wife....Everryone had already arrived including the boys family who had been welcomed in with a lot of affection...!Everyone was waitting for Muskaan to bring her feet down those stairs. Rahul couldnt sit or stand still amusingly he was waiting for the angel of his life to finally enter his life and fill up all the emptiness he had in his heart just for her...He wanted to give her all the attention and affection he could. He closed his eyes and promised to got that he would love her unconditionally....

-Upstairs in the room-

Anjali and a few other girls finished arranging the last few perices of jewellery on Muksaan. Anjali requested the other girls to leave the room as she saw Muskaans eyes swell up.Trying to calm her down she started a conversation with her!
A: Muski yourr looking so beautiful Rahul will faint over you! I'm smaller than you but will still say this sis god bless you. I pray to babaji that you have all the happiness in the world and always keep smiling and always remeber im always her for you sis and please dont let your past take over your future.
M: (holding her tears back) You know what your the best lil sis a person could have. Thanks for everything Sis even though the whole world well atleast it seemed like that...turned away from me you and Mum always stood there like my wall protecting me. I dont care about what happens to me but i want all the best for you in your life and just because im getting into a so called marriage dont mean im leaving you im only going Mumbai!
A:(feeling her tears) Ofcouse you cant leave me Muski and most impostant please give this relation and Rahul a chance you never know he might be the one belive in me(crying) i will get mum...
M:(closing the door to be alone sobbing) Babaji kehende hain on her wedding day a bride is overwhelmed with joy and then thiers me whos sitting locked in a room so she can cry alone. Im never going to be able to join a bond with Rahul beacuse im being forced into this emotional blackmailing how could it get better? I wont ever love him, everyone i have ever loved i only brang unhappiness into thier lives they are never really mine he was right thats all i do!!! I dont do bad to anyone so why is this happening to me? (tears flew from her cheek rapidly) Just then someone knocked on the door ending the cold atmesphere in the room which was shattering Muskaan inside her. Wiping her tears she went to the door with a smile......

- Final Conversation with her Mum-

MJ: Putaar ji mummy is here give me a hug (chuckling)
M: (hugging her tight) Puttar was here waiting mum already forgot her bachi kya?
MJ: Choup, Muskaan dont talk rubbish ok? I can never forget my bachi (breaking the hug) Aww your looking so pretty kissi ki nazhar na lageh. Always stay smiling and make me proud ok just give everything a chance it will all fall in place...
M: (smiling) Hmm me and not talk rubbish its hard na? Dont worry Mum i will make you proud dont take too much tension just look after yourself and we will see about that and also...(crying) take care of papa ji
MJ: (crying) I dont want to send you away like this please forgive me im helpless bachi but i know Rahul will atke care of you and keep you happy.Come downstairs now its time for the shaadi everyones been waiting. Rahul is getting desperate for you (laughing)
M:(sobbing) Yep i dont want to go myslef but life is making me do this...Rahul...Mum im coming you go down just 2 mins ok?
MJ: (smiling) Ok stop crying now Muskaan am sending the other girls come down with them ok?...(turning back)...also hurry up ok?
M:Vahai guru bles my family with all the happiness they deserve and also give me strenggth to cope with Rahul im really scared what did you think before sending him? Hai Rabba!
Muskaan did a touch up on her makeup as all the crying had mucked a lot of it up. She felt her cold tears against her eyes as she left the room. Her stomach started chruning thinking about what happened between her and Rahul earlier that day she felt special and yet she was tensed around him......Consoling herself she stepped out of the room ready for everything that would come her way.As soon as she stepped out of the room in her wedding dreass she left all the girls outside the room in envy her beauty stood out even more tonight! All the girls just stood silent for 5 minute only when Muskaan spoke the room broke from its utter silence...
M: i think we need to go downstairs right umm i believe Rahul and his family is waiting (there was concern in her eyes).
G: Yeah we do actually come lets go....
M:(tense) ok
Finally the girls started to move down those stairs a few were in front of Muskaan with Anjali just behnd Muskaan followed by more behind Anjali. Muskaan was in the middle TRAPPED!!! Muskaan took a deep breath in and sighed but no luck she was still as tense as she was 10 seconds ago.

- The Wedding -

The whole room turned to the direction of the stairs as they heard the little chit-chat of the girls coming down the stairs. Everyone saw Muskaan and looked at her admiring her beauty. Muskaan was just blushing but not beauce of everyone else looking at her but beacuse she found Rahuls penetrating gaze upon her she sat down next to him whispering to him
M:everyone is looking at us stop it.
R: oh ok then your looking gorgeous babes. Seeing a small smile spread across her lips he felt happy.
The preiest did all the rituals just llike a typical indian weddding. Rahul and Muskaan completed the 7 rounds around the fire. When Rahul filled Muskaans mang with sinddor she closed her eyes thinking that she had now bonded into a relation with no emaning. Rahul looked at her he knew she was fighting with herself and her tears all along this killed him inside his heart.

-Final Few Moments-

Everyone had eaten and all the dances and everything was done.Muskaan and Rahul were both tense but for different reasons. Rahul was scared whether he would be able to do everything the way he promised but he knew he would put in a 100% no matter what. muskaan was worried for several reasons maybe too many to for anyone to ever have feared...Finally the bidaai time came Muskaan cried along with her fanily even Rahul let out a few tears seeing her cry. Rahul and his family spoke to Muskaans parents doing a family talk. While Muskaan hugged Anjali and told her to take care. Muskaan sat into the car gathering all the memories she could with her.....She was welcomed into her new house with a lot of care and love she was slowly developing a soft corner for Rahuls family. Eberything was going moothly till Atul said...
At: Bhabs Bro y dont u go upstairs am sure you want to(grinning)
R: (killer look to Atul) Umm Muskaan hes just dumb....
M: (tensed) Wheres the room?
R: (worried) Come this way...
Everyone said goodnight to them also telling them that everyone will be going somewhere tommorow so in the morning the house will be alone apart from them two...

-Wedding Night-

As they walked in Muskaan felt her tears coming her stomach was churning she was feeling a million things at the same time surely he wouldnt force her would her? That question span around in her head... When Rahul opened the door Muskaan broke off her trance she walked in not glaring at Rahul or the room and just sat at the edge of the end with tears running down her cheeks....Rahul saw this and went to her...with eyes full of concern
R: muskaan what happened why you crying if its beacuese of this whole night then dont be tense
M: Sobbing
R: Im not going to force you into anything ok i havent married you for your body understand?
M: stopping crying
R: hugging her and then breaking the hug quickly, Why dont you go and change i already changed na?
M: Smiling Thanks Rahul
R: For what u silly? Now go you must be boiling in all that
M: umm well yessh!
Muskaan came out in a beautiful pink nightdress looking like an angel to her suprise Rahul was already sleeping. She went near him and touched his face and said
M: Hai he looks hot thanks for understanding me Rahul...
She closed the lights and the door and arranged herself in a comfy postition on the bed sleeping...
Rahul got up he had never fallen asleep...
R: Hmm so she does feel something well babes we will play this the way i like too wait till tommorow morning....

precap:

Romantic date with Rahul and Muskaan 😳 Rahul and Muskaan both angry? A hug.....How does rahul convince muskaan 😳 Keep reading

Comment/Critisice

Take Care

love Muskaan

Edited by muskaan_2008 - 17 years ago
-Mansi- thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hayee..Muskaan..u knw I hate u so much!!! 😆 😆 😆 U made me wait a weeeeek!!!! But i think its all worth it..It was jus beautiful!!! 👏 👏 👏 Im n luv wid ur FF completely..
I luved d way..u xpressed d first & second part..also Muskaan's inner feelings..nd d sisters realtionship..its jus so amazing...Hmmm..So Rahul came 2 knw d truth.. 😳 😳 Cant wait fr d nxt part! 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: *mansibhatia*

Hayee..Muskaan..u knw I hate u so much!!! 😆 😆 😆 U made me wait a weeeeek!!!! But i think its all worth it..It was jus beautiful!!! 👏 👏 👏 Im n luv wid ur FF completely..
I luved d way..u xpressed d first & second part..also Muskaan's inner feelings..nd d sisters realtionship..its jus so amazing...Hmmm..So Rahul came 2 knw d truth.. 😳 😳 Cant wait fr d nxt part! 😛

Mansi thanks soo much 🤗 hmm i know that 😆 Awww thanks am glad u liked it 😳 means alot coming from a great writer like you thanks for all your support your seriosuly awesome. Thanks next part i will try my best to get it up by Sunday 😳

take care

love muskaan

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Posted: 17 years ago
awww muski 🤗 ...it was amazing.....i feel so bad for muskaan......poor her forced into the marriage....gosh yaar.......it was so emotional......and anjali...awww she is such a cute lil sister.....and atul 😆 ...naughty guy.......and muskaan was blushing cuz of rahul 😳 .......and d last scene 👏 .....muskaan actually likes him a bit....well who wudnt?????
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: muskaan_2008

Mansi thanks soo much 🤗 hmm i know that 😆 Awww thanks am glad u liked it 😳 means alot coming from a great writer like you thanks for all your support your seriosuly awesome. Thanks next part i will try my best to get it up by Sunday 😳

take care

love muskaan

Aww..tats so sweet of ya..😳 thanks .😳Ok..Sunday..means Tuesday ull update na?😆

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: ammyfan_pragati

awww muski 🤗 ...it was amazing.....i feel so bad for muskaan......poor her forced into the marriage....gosh yaar.......it was so emotional......and anjali...awww she is such a cute lil sister.....and atul 😆 ...naughty guy.......and muskaan was blushing cuz of rahul 😳 .......and d last scene 👏 .....muskaan actually likes him a bit....well who wudnt?????

Thanks Pragzie 🤗 but its all for the good right? 😳 Yep angi is and Atul 😆 Hmm i agree who doesnt? Thanks again thats really sweet of you😳

Take care

Love Muskaan

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: *mansibhatia*

Aww..tats so sweet of ya..😳 thanks .😳Ok..Sunday..means Tuesday ull update na?😆

aww bless you 🤗 nope it means sunday this time 😆 you get the rule now 😆 but bcos its half term i will try and be super quick also i was thinking of that new FF na but im tensed aout it 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: ammyfan_pragati

awww muski 🤗 ...it was amazing.....i feel so bad for muskaan......poor her forced into the marriage....gosh yaar.......it was so emotional......and anjali...awww she is such a cute lil sister.....and atul 😆 ...naughty guy.......and muskaan was blushing cuz of rahul 😳 .......and d last scene 👏 .....muskaan actually likes him a bit....well who wudnt?????

Exactly!😆😉

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