Destiny’s Salute- Epilogue p10 - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awesome sketch yaar, plz do continue soon!! 😃 😳 👏
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The music of her payals came to end, the soft, lovely and soothing music produced as she moved elegantly as a ballerina. It was all over, as the song came to an end so did her dreams of becoming a professional dancer, dancing among thousands with joy and smiles in doing the one thing her heart desired the most of. She sighed, and wiped the tear trickling down her eyes, "anything for dadu"

She walked away, taking off her payals with grief and placing them in a trunk along with all her other memories, as she grabbed her bag and headed for her new destination.

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"I'll miss you mom, but don't worry I will be fine" she sighed and turned towards her dadu, "I'll succeed dadu, fulfilling not only your dream but papa's as well."

"Manya beta you do not have to do this, I can't force you into doing something against your will and I don't want for you to end your dreams to complete mine."

"Dadu, you know I could have said the same, but the joy that I saw on your face during the years as you worked as a police officer makes me smile, and when papa joined as a police officer, im sure you couldn't have been happier and now I guess its my turn to fulfill your dream, that's the least I can do for all the love you have given me"

"I love you, Manya" I looked towards mom and smiled.

"I love both of you, don't take any tension, I'll be fine and I promise to call you once I get there and every other day, promise" I said as I pulled both of them into a hug and bid goodbye, heading for a new destination, my heart didn't desire but I was willing to go through with it as long as my family was happy.

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Boarding the bus and heading to camp was the hardest part for me, yes there were so many people, I ended up being on top of the bus. I groaned inwardly, I should have left earlier, I sigh and start climbing on to the top of the bus. Until I feel my feet sleep and someone grab my hand pulling me up. Unfortunately due to my clumsiness I landed on him.

His topaz color eyes took my heart away, so filled with care and love. For moments we stood in the awkward position with me on top forgetting about the rest of the passengers. Realization dawned upon me when I heard others whisper. I blushed slightly and moved away quickly, pulling my chunni (scarf) back up.

I looked away crimson red and turned slightly. "Thank you!" I smiled awkwardly and looked away once again until I heard him speak melodically. "Well that was awfully rude, I helped you up and you didn't even ask my name!" Shock overcomes me, that was ummm, how do I put it indescribable, since when did people begin introducing themselves like such.

I come out of my thoughts as I hear him say, "Although your still not asking or introducing yourself, I'll go first, Hi, I am Akash, nice to meet you." he said pulling his hand out, I gaze into his eyes and only find comfort and respect, a slight smile begins playing on my lips as my favorite smile took place crookedly. I chuckle slightly catching him off guard, and introduce myself shaking his hand, "Nice meeting you as well and thanx again for helping me up, I'm Manya, Manya Sharma!"

The ride to Camp was interesting, as I caught him staring at me a few times as I still had not left as the bus came to a halt, and as I found myself unknowingly lost in his innocent looking face. Oh for goodness sake what in the world was happening. Every time his gaze turned towards me, I turned crimson red, since when did I become so ….so….blushie? Was that even a word, I sighed this was not good.

"By the way, I am joining to become a police officer at camp, so I'll be leaving and then you can stop blushing." Akash said. I turn around shocked, "CAMP?" He gazed at me confused.

"Don't tell me, your going to camp just outside of Mumbai?" He chuckles inwardly and rolls his eyes, "what you think I'm not good enough?"

"ummm no" an understatement for sure, since I barely knew the guy sitting next to me for the past hour or so.

"Then why is it so surprising for you that I'm going to become a police officer?" he asked.

"looks like destiny has other plans" he tilts his head slightly, "Im going there as well!" I say finally letting it out awkwardly.

His eyes literally flew from their sockets as his jaw flew open. "You of all people are going to camp to join as a police officer. No offense, but have you seen yourself, the height, what you like 5'2"? Your clumsiness, no offense but are you sure your not going to the wrong place?"

I feel my face heat up and my eyes flare with anger, he notices the anger and quickly apologizes. I look away but hear him murmur, "she's good enough, damn never seen a girl with anger before, girl got pride."

I smile slightly but refuse to turn towards him for his rude behavior and of the mocking tone in his voice. I sighed this was going to be one journey of a life time….

Next Part: Introduction of other members

Thanx everyone for all the comments will update every other day….

Edited by Mimi_Rani - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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good start but can you make this fanfiction a akanya fanfiction aswell coz i dont like anyother jodi except them they are just tooooooooooooooooooooooo cuuuuuuutttttteeeeee 😳 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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^^yes plzz make it a Akanya ff..its my favorite jodi..and luved the beginning..plzz continue soon 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow ur writing takes me away! love it! n yesss can u plzzz make this an akanya ff, thank u.
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whenn will u do da nxt update?!?!?!?!??!?!? dying here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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The bus comes to a halt as my groans get louder. For goodness sake, why in the world did I decide to this again? And then it hits me, of course this was for dadu, no matter how much this bored me, I would learn to love this new concept in my life even if it meant dealing with judgmental people at first meets.

I sigh and walk towards the campus, outlined with black, iron gates with a small sign saying, "Camp Mission." Oh, bummer whoever made up this camp certainly had a horrible time deciding a name, I chuckle slightly, forgetting about Akash standing next to me.

"Ahem. Ahem." Akash tries getting my attention by faking to clear his throat. I sigh, when would the guy bring out the new tricks; what an awkward way to get a girl's attention and to flirt with her, not that I'm trying to say is that he was flirting with me, but you know what I mean. It just shows he isn't so "good" in that matter.

"Hello, mad-am! Earth to Manya, will you please move to the side so that I can get through! Goodness, whatever happened to manners!" I roll my eyes and feel my cheeks get hot as I realize his words were double minded. One, I wouldn't move to the side so he would pass by; two, that meant I was fat; and three, well I'm still deciding on that.

I finally walk ahead towards camp heading towards my bunk while murmuring under my breath whatever I could think to get my mind off the very rude comment that that that… Akash kid had just passed me. Well, I suppose I will find something or someone far better off to interact with, but who was I kidding, I was at CAMP! I suddenly felt worse then being a part of Girl's Scout, whom I had always pitied, now I wish I had decided to take part in those when I had the chance.

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Walking into my room was a disaster, I couldn't see where to step and where exactly the floor was. Oh my goodness, I seriously thought I ended up in college dorms again. Boy, were those the 'fun' days, but then again I could be lying. By the way, why am I exactly talking to myself. Oh boy, was coming here a bad mistake, one, I tend to gain boredom, two, I totally lost why I was here in the first place and three, I feared I would regret…

I jump out of my thoughts to find a young woman in her early twenties gawking at my attire. I smirk but then again is she bi? I shudder which goes unnoticed by the young lady. I look up again and find the room spotless, I blink confused and find the girl turning red.

"Sorry ma'am, I…I had lost my favorite shirt and some badges, I was looking for them and made a mess, sorry." she says in a blink of an eye.

"Excuse me, ummm, it, well I think it is, nice to meet you, BUT I am not who you think I am!"

I feel her eyes check me out, as I shudder, she closes her eyes and says, "I will just pretend like I didn't hear anything, ma'am."

I groan, "listen chick, I am Manya, Manya Sharma, here joining to train as an officer and I believe it is the same thing you are trying to do, since well, you're here. And please I prefer manya rather than ma'am, I suddenly feel like an elder person."

I turn slightly but stop dead in my tracks, "excuse me" I turn. "I'm sorry about that, I just thought you were you know, it's because of your clothes, well actually because I had heard, that Madam Heer prefers dressing like you, so you can understand."

I smile at her, head towards my bunk and unload my belongings, setting aside my pictures from perfume, which I believe I will need a lot of, and my clothes in the drawer. This was going to be a long journey, and after I ate a bit I would be back to my normal self. Sometimes, I think I have a personality disorder because I tend to forget everything, but then again that always happens.


Next Part: Introduction of other members continues

I will be updating on Friday with a longer part, I just had a lot of homework the last few days…and thank you for all the comments....but about manya-akash, lets see what i can do....because that just completely changes the storyline

Edited by Mimi_Rani - 17 years ago
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I walk out of my room heading down the corridor and waiting, just waiting to hear the Generals and Camp Owners to call us for a meeting. But no, they were too busy chatting with themselves. Hmmmm, I sigh and walk towards the window, letting the cool air hit my face softly as I take in the beautiful landscape around me. I smile and finally hear our names being called. I turn around quietly and stand next in line between two tall men. Everyone turns towards their partners on the right and I feel the man next to me, who kinda looked from bihar laugh at me.

I glare back at him and turn to my other side to find Aakash chuckling slightly at me, after winking. Well one thing I knew for sure was, they would always bow down to me and my head would be held up high. I look straight and raise my head in honor. I see the bihari dude frown at me and look at Aakash nodding negatively.

"Welcome fellow cadets, It is a pleasure to have you here and seeing you represent your country, may you all bring pride to our home and keep it pure as it can ever be….now starting tomorrow is your training for today you will just walk around and enjoy the scenery along with getting used to your new home for these six months. And we hope that through these courses you will face in the upcoming years that you not only make yours physically strong but emotionally as well, especially you women, we are glad to have you here but we want for you to grow emotionally strong so that you can not be manipulated by anyone." General Shashank said in one breath.

I looked up at him and suddenly realized me and him were never going to get along if he believed us women were weak….I turn towards ma'am Heer who stood their quite upset with his comment, completely giving me the idea that he too had said something highly rude.

I take a deep breath walk two steps forward and speak, catching General Shashank off guard who stared at me with furious eyes as I spoke, "sir, im sorry to say this, but I think its for your benefit if you think women are weak, then take a look around we are much stronger than you can ever be…I do not know what you have been taught as a young child by your mother, but im sure you have seen how strong of a person she is as well you may want to look around there are MANY women officers today and we can do all that you men can do…so next time during a new year make sure you choose your words correctly before you mock the opposite gender, because I can tell you right now there will always be someone to speak up and argue about the words you chose to mock our society. That's all!"

I turn on my heals and walk into my bedroom while all the others stared at me shocked and speechless. I hear Aakash and the bihari dude mutter something under their mouth in awe or was it anger, whatever it was I really didn't give a damn at the moment, I mean do they seriously expect for me to hear myself being mocked when I decide to take this action. What the heck, what century were these men living in?

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I stare at nothing in particular, my eyes wandering in every direction in hopes to avoid Rupa whose constant gaze on me was very how do I explain, CREEPY much? I mean all I had said was the truth no need to ogle me, I know yesh yesh im pretty and all but seriously not a lesbian. I chuckle slightly and wait until I finally hear her speak.

"Wow Manya, I think if I were you I would have walked outta here by now, I mean you completely talked back to General Shashank and on top of that your tone was very….awesome, if you ask me but others will take it as disrespect for elders."

"hey Rupa, don't worry about me, all I did was stand up for the truth, now lets go look around, wanna come?" She nodded. "Or should I go by myself?"

"I'll come" I smile at her as we both outside linked arm in arm like sisters. I smile at her and give her a side hug for being with me.

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My walk outside was dreadful all the new cadets glared at me for disrespecting sir and then others smiled at me, oh well I just stood up for the truth, one thing sir and ma'am must have noticed by now is that I can't take disrespect for women and im sure from now on we will be treated as an equal human being.

I keep walking lost in my thoughts when I find some cute looking guy with glasses on, I stare at him as he smiles back, "hi im gul, very nice speech earlier I was going to say the same." I smile at him and understood quickly our friendship would blossom. I shake my hands not noticing someone else glaring at me.


Next part: Training

Will update on Wednesday maybe

Edited by Mimi_Rani - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow!!!! that was sooooo goood!!! 👏 👏
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wowowwowowowow nice chapters 123 reallyy amazinggggggggg plzzzzzzzz contuied chapters soon

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