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Posted: 17 years ago
omg!it was so romantic 👏 !!!!
this is 1 of my fav ffs 😳 ,plz update soon 😃 😳 !
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sorry i couldnt updat.. but will do... ome time later...
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey vini,
thanx for all the pms nd i'm extremely sorry for not replying my laptop crashed...........now i'll read it all and then will comment.......
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Originally posted by: yachna

hey soooo srrrrry fr later eplyng actuly iws nt feelng wll tdy thts why nd wow yaar ths dnce prt rckd it yaar it ws sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo gooooooooooooood wow ridz to kitni besabre ho gayi thi 2 meet hm nd whn he saw her wow yaar beautiful jst lvd 👏 soooooooooo romantic yaar wow thy wre sooooo close nd armaan alwys gud...........hmmmmmmmm nd she ws blushng awwwwwww choooooooooooooooooooo chweeeeeeeeeeet..........now i am dyng 2 read nxt prt do update sooooooooooon............
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thankz a lot yachu!!!!!! hope u are feeling better.....

i love reading ur comments.. coz they tend to encourage me completely!!!

love you loads...and take care

vini

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Originally posted by: sweet=me

OMG Viniiiiiii!!!!! That was da BEST part so far!!! Honestly....It was just tooooooooooo adorable!!! Gosh I loved it sooooooo much!!!! Can't wait for u to continue...Ugh now I really really really want to read the next part!!!! U did complete justice to the dance...Keep it up!!! 👏 Btw,thanks alot for the pm....
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thank you sooooooo much!!!! im soooooooooooooooooooo happy tht u liked my dance scene.... but the dance scene isnt over...

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Originally posted by: muzic_chick247

thankz a lot yachu!!!!!! hope u are feeling better.....

i love reading ur comments.. coz they tend to encourage me completely!!!

love you loads...and take care

vini


hey vini thnks fr replyng yaar now i am fne thnks fr askng.......
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di plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soooon

just gonna start updatin... gimme some time....

ill PM just incase..

love vini!

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😳 Really need to read ur update seeing as the whole forum is worried bout Shilpa leaving
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helooo..please update sooonn!!! cant wait !!! 😛
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Part 29

Armaan slowly lifted up her face making riddhima look at him.... she was completely captivated.. everythin seemed so perfect...

just then.."ummm Riddima?? do u mind if i dance wid Armaan???" Rids broke out of armaans arms almost instantly..as she came back to the real world..

"oh hey Preeti..." Armaan said giving her a wide smile

"hey.... Armaan.. can i dance wid you??"

"ask the lady ..." armaan said winking..

"oh..no... i mean.. shure shure.. go ahead.." rids said nervously..

"oh thankZ!!" preeti said grabbing his hand and pulling him deep into the crowd..

Oh God!!! preeti ke pass ek date already hai!!!! Armaan ko chraliya!!!! UGHH!!!! Rids mumbled as she stormed away angrily.. seating herself at a table to get a good view of them.

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"thankz preeti!!! dekh rahi hai ???" Armaan whispeed...

"haan,... very jealous... Mujhe mar daalne wali hai!!"

"Armaan chuckled.." dont worry... she wont do a thing..."
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Riddhima was sitting at a table galring at them as she watched armaan hold her waist... her eyes narrowed as she watched armaan laugh.... the way his hair bounced as he nodded ... he had he at the palm of her hands..

Mujhe dance par lata hai!! aur khud kisi aur ke saath dacne karta hai... sharam nahi hai ladkiyon ko aise pakad ta hai.... suddenly she stopped,she felt like a complete hypocryte...as she thought about the way armaan held her.. which was much more tighter.. she looked down at her palms which had become really sweaty..
ufff!! yeh armaan bhi!!dimag kha raha hai!! rids thought trying to wipe him off from her mind..

"hmmm.. since preeti aur armaan ek dusre ke saath dance kar rahe hai.. kyon na hum dono bhi??" rids looked behind to see chirag.

""umm i donno" rids said very hesitantly..

"oh come on... just ONE dance?? wouldnt hurt anyone.."

"oh alright" rids said giving in to his puppy dog look..

rids took his hand taking one last look at preeti and armaan standing togetehr..

chirag and rids began to dance as she put her hands on his shoulder..she felt much different than wat armaan had made her feel.. she missed tht warm touch of his tht gave her goosebumps all over.

"so?? college ke baad?? doctor.. ya basketball star??" chirag said trying to make a converstation

"surgeon actually...aur tum??"

"cardiologist.... mere papa bh hai... uncle bhi... so i guess i wanna take up the family occupation.." chirag said wid a smile

"thts nice..." rids said as she realised tht armaan and her had been ten times closer... she looked down to see the floor.. which was somethin armaan would have probably never have let her do... since he held her so close ofcourse 😉

"somethin down there??" chirag asked very wearily..

"oh no.. no.. " rids giggled.. looking straight bck up.

" wait a minute..ur Dr sashank gupta's daughter ryte??" chirag said suddenly

"oh haan... my dad..."

"excuse me... may i???" Suddenly She heard a familiar but stern voice coming from behind her..

"shure"chirag said

before rids could turn around and face him... chirag spun her around.. as armaan caught hold of her..

She felt soo much better and much warmer than before.. she couldnt see the floor anymore either... 😳

"i thougt we made a deal sweetheart.." armaan said in the same stern and unimpressed voice..

"kya wat deal?" rids as she smiled within herself again..

"u dance wid me.. and only me!!"

"hey thats not fair... tum to koi bhi ladki ke saath dance kar sakte ho... aur mein kisi aur ke saath nahi??"

"u could have stopped me you no..." Armaan said as a naughty grin appeared back on his face 😳

Strike one! rids couldnt say anythin... he just knew wat to say...

"aur waise bhi... i saw you watching us...dont worry preeti aur mein kaphi dur the ek dosre se.." armaan said as h pulled her even closer...

Strike two.... Rids looked back into his eyes.. astonished tht he mentioned tht he saw her looking at him..

"kaphi jal rahi thi na??" Armaan said as he closed in on her..

Strike three... ur out!!
Rids couldnt say anythin... her face said it all.. she pulled her hands back and was ready to run away... she definetly could not face him after tht...

just as she was about to... Armaan caught her hand and pulled her back.. holding her tightly... forcing her to put her own around his neck she was to embarresed to say anythin...

"aaJ nahi...deals a deal!!aaj tum meri ho..sirf meri" Armaan said whispering in her ears...

Riddhima's heart sank... she couldnt belive wat she heard..She closed her eyes as she felt armaan kiss her cheecks very softly..Armaan just couldnt let her go..

After a few moments.. Rids began to feel very comfortable in his arms again..no use fighting it.. all her anger and jealousy had disappeared... without realisin wat she was doin she leaned over and rested her head on his shoulders...
just when she thoght the song was about to get over.. she felt armaan put his hand in his pocket and take out a note (money)and hand it over to the DJ...
Rids smiled to herself.. she didnt mind dancing wid him all night.
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Ater dancing fer a really long time.... they headed back to the main table .. where atul, rahul, muskaan and a whole lot of other people gathered around... suddenly everyone stopped dancing adn turned to face them... riddhima and armaan looked at one another completely baffled by the sudden silence....

"SURPRISE!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Everyone shouted... a they placed an enormous basketall orage cake infront of them..
"yeh kya hai???" armaan asked almost falling backwards by the sudden exxcitment..

"Tumhare basketball ki jeet ke liye....!! basket ball jeet aur no cake??? cmon armaan!!"

"hamare nahi... hum sab ke!!!!" rids smiled

"oh don be so modest rids!!! .. cake kato....mmm looks delicious.." Muskaan cried..

Rids held the knife as armaan placed his hands on top of hers... Rids looked at him as he direted her hands... His touch always left her gazing at him..

Rids took the first peice and fed it to Armaan who licked her fingers as he took it in.everyone else dived into the cake as well..Armaan saved a peice and quietly fed rids when no one noticed.. a lil bit got caugt near the side of her mouth...

" umm rids..." armaan said poinin to the wrong side of her mouth.. 😳

"gaya?" armaan shook his head and leaned over kissing crumb off her mouth...

rids blushed.."mujhe laga... ki.. dosre side par hai.." she aded hesitantly..

"lets just say...im misleading.. especially when i gt an opportunity to kiss" 😳 Armaan whispered as he held her hand ...but rids pulled her hand away.. and ran to muskaan..blushing even more..

Armaan smiled... licking the rest of the cream tht was still on his finger..
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Armaan, Rahul and Atul met seperately..
"rahul... this isnt workin... She isnt gonna admit it!! anjali ka plan isnt workin..Aur anjali bhi aaj nahi aa sakti hai!..

"haan.. aise hi lagta hai.."

"aur mein apne aap ko rok nahi pa raha hun... sochegi ki mein ek ladki ke saath hote hue bhi doosri ladkiyon ke saath flirt karta hun.... she'll lose trust...!

"meine pehle bhi yah kaha tha!! rids aise nahi hi!!!! Atul said giving a 'i-told-you-so-look'

"haan haan.. you were ryte champ... sorry... should have listened.." Armaan said regretting the sentence..

"kya kaha??? phir se kaho.."

"don push it...." armaan said smiling..obviously having somethin in mind

"oh crap.... ab kya plan hai.. Armaan malik??"atul said nrvously..

"armaan???" rahul asked..

"hehe... just wait n watch... but heres wat i want you to do.." Armaan said as he pulled them over to say soemthin..

plzzz do comment.... i hope tht u guys still like it...

love vini



Edited by muzic_chick247 - 17 years ago

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