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@yogzz

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Posted: 17 years ago

#241

19th part was very romantic waiting for next part 👏
this time i didn't get pm 😭 😭 😭

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revna

@revna

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Posted: 17 years ago

#242

hey...mindbloowinnn ....awsume..stunnin n very romantic part!!! 👏 👏 👏
i fu dont mind...how old r u ??
lol n thnks for the pm!! 😛
update soonn...

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kumpal12

@kumpal12

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Posted: 17 years ago

#243

hello dear... waiting for the next part yaar .....continue sooooooooooooonnnnnnnn

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Shania

@x-Ridzzie-x

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Posted: 17 years ago

#244

heyy ....
dat was an awsome and hot romantic part.......
.awwwwww ridz is sooo shweeet...
she loves him buh den again she h8 him....

plzzzzzz continu sooon

can u continu today....if u r den plzzzzzzzz pm wen u do

thnx .......

luv ya
ridz,
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vini

@muzic_chick247

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Posted: 17 years ago

#245

PART 20

"Armaan kiska msg hai??" Rids asked... as he saw him looking at her cellphone.

"muskaan ki.. pooch rahi hai ki kya aap uske saath ghar ja rahi ho ya nahi.... Ill tell her tht ill drop you..." armaan said kissing her on her cheeks.

Rids pushed him back and armaan gave rids a confused face as if to say.. 'What gives'.

" nahi armaan.. this is wrong.. im sorry... mujhe aise nahi karna chahiye tha... mujhe jaana hoga.. " Rids said taking her cell phone from his hands... but armaan refused to let her go.

"rids .. wat the hell are you sayin? tumhe abhi bhi vishwas nahi hai?? Armaan said very angrily..

"nahi armaan... we are too different.. mein tumhari type ki ladki thodi hun... aur... " rids was about to continue.. but armaan leaned over and and kissed her deeply.

"do u still feel nothin after this?? kya is kiss ka koi matleab nahi hai??? Armaan said as he pulld out..

Riddhima's eyes filled up wid tears...
"bolo rids... jawab kyon nahi deti???" Armaan said shaking her wildly.

"n-nahi armaan... iska koi matlab nahi hai..." rids said as sheshed fresh drops of tears..

"meri aakon mein dekh kar kaho..." armaan said raising his voice.
rids slowly looked into his eyes.. she couldnt say it..slowly she pushed him aside.. and ran away...as she ran.. she heard armaan punch the wall..

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Back at Armaan's houe.. rahul and Atul were also there.
"Armaan .. what happened!!! 2 ghante se aap ne kuch kaha nahi!! hum cricket dekh rahe hai.. and ur favorite tems are playing agisnt one another!! kolkata vs mumbai!!
Rahul said.. very concerned.

" rids... bloody gurl..u no wat guys.. im done wid her... pyaar vyaar sub bullsh*t hai!!"

"arre Armaan.. dont say tht... cmon... ab batao kya hua.." atul said putting his handsover armaan's shoulders.

"she kisses me one second.. and the next she tells me she feels nothing for me.. " im through wid love.... hate tht gurl... shes ouuta ma life..This is why i said gurls shouldnt be taken seriously.. waste of time! " armaan said hiding his face in his hands.
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Next day near the lockers.
"Muskaan woh aa raha hai... kya karoo??? " rids said watching the boys come near them.

"agar aap chahti ho.. to abhi aap yahan se jaa sakti ho.." muskaan said..

"nahi yaar.. Armaan koi scene bana dega..!!"
"theek hai.. tumhari marzi" Muskaan said blushing as Rahul came over.

"hey muskaan... very beautiful... " he said checking her out..and giving her a kiss on her cheeks..muskaan gave a shy laug.

"hey... aap aaj rahoooool.. ke saath bahar jaane wali ho ryte??" armaan asked..

"oh yeah.. hey rids.. its ok wid yo ryte??" muskaan asked suddenly remembering.

' no.. no probs.. enjoy urselves." Rids said smiling.

" ok.. thankz.. bye... hum chale... rahul??" muskaan sad grabbing hi hands.the two of them leave.

" oh by the ay.. atul... aaj mein college se aate hue.. yeh dekha.. " Rids said taking out a small flowering rose plant from her locker." and i got it for you..here."

" wow rids... kitna sunder hai!!! .. thank you soo much!! i love it.. aap ek itni sweet dost ho!!! thank you soo much!1" atul said kissing the pot.

Rids giggled... but on noticng armaan... she stopped.

bas... just watch out for those thorns... they can really hurt.." rids said.. showing him a cut on her fingr.

"just like ur words.." armaan muttered.. looking down.

"excuse me..?? " rids said though she had heard him very well!.

'nothin... atul... can we go now?? i dont like the air around here... " Armaan said very coldly.. staring at her.. emotioonless.

" kya?? wat air?? kya keh rahe ho?? pata hai... plants oxygen dete hai... so.. we are getting fresh air.. " Atul said looking at his new plant.

"aare Atul.. just come here..." Armaan said pulling Atul.

"accha theek hai.. bye rids.. aur thankz agaiN!!"

'bye atul.." Rids said.. sounding very hurt.
Bye armaan... rids thought..as she thought about those kisses armaan had showered on her.. the way he kissed her on her lips.. the way he held her.. as if he would bever let her go..
But rids knew tht armaan wasnt the type who would stay wid a gurl forver...

"excuse.. me...... helloo.. " rids wiped her tears.. to see a girl in a short skirt looking at her..
"yeah..??" rids asked..
"have u seen ma boy??"
"ur boy??what?"
"oops.. sowwie.. i meant.. armaan.. seen him??"
"sorry anjali.. havent seen him"
HIS BOY???? anjali armaan ko her boy kyon keh rahi hogi??

Introduction of new character..
Anjali: sweet smart.. and very ambitious.. but a total flirt.. almost like like a femle version of armaan... except sweeter and less of a flirt..rids's class mate..
ambiton..cardiologist

Edited by muzic_chick247 - 17 years ago

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saira

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Posted: 17 years ago

#246

v.romantic part 19 👏
but part 20's a bit sad 😭 😳 !!!
update soon 😳 !

Edited by saira_1 - 17 years ago

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Kiara

@perfectpiscean

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Posted: 17 years ago

#247

OMG...anoder brilliant part!!

Beautifully written wid so much of emotion! luved it!

do continue soon!!

Marisha

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sweet=me

@sweet=me

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Posted: 17 years ago

#248

Hey!! OMG this part was soooo well written but really really sad....Yaar I don't like the sound of Anjali...hope she doesn't become a kabab mein haddi....gr8 update though....Do update soon n thanks for the pm.....
Love,
Ananya

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Natasha

@Ladoo645

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Posted: 17 years ago

#249

Hey, muzic_chick247

I just caught with your fanfic, and i'm just lllloovviiinngg it!!

Ommggg u soo can't doo this, poor armann, a pretty complicated case, plus don't make angie n armaan a serious case

Cud you PM Once u updated ur FF
Thks!
-Natasha

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gari14

@gari14

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Posted: 17 years ago

#250

ohh wow!!... completely loveddddd the starting of this part...soo romantic!!.. 😳 😳 ...plus the locker room part..really well written!!..keep it up 👏 👏 👏 ...doo contd sooooon 😳 😳 😳
waitinn...............