*.*ONE DAY*.* FF P14 Pg 71 NEW* Note 76

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coolmimz

@coolmimz

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Posted: 17 years ago

#311

IT WAS A G8 PART...IT WAS SO GOOD THAT I DIDNT HAVE WORDZ 2 DESCRIBE IT.......

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--Princess--

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Posted: 17 years ago

#312

[quote]"Ooooo , Tut Tut" Armaan picked ritu up as ridhima walked in front embarrassed.

"What happened" kriti walked towards ridhima as subhankar came behind dragging the language.

"Mommy , I saw chachu gave chachi a kissie here" kriti laughed as ritu pointed on her lips.
"Beta , you shouldn't of been looking" ridhima went in shades of red.
"Sorry mommy , ritu was just looking for you when I saw chachu pull chachi towards him and then-" armaan took her in his arms.

"Ssshhhhh , you talk to much" he smiled as she pinched his cheek.
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I LOVE this part...lol !

"I saw chachu pull chachi towards him and then-"..hahhaa !...NICE !

Thanx for the pm and do it again when you update it.

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Anita Malik

@anitamalik

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#313

That was too good...so romantic 😳 ..really loved it..do continue soon! 😊

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jhanvimooni

@jhanvimooni

Beginner

Posted: 17 years ago

#314

HELLO MISS ASTHU,
gosh two updates and i didnt even know ...where was my pm 😡 huh..neways thats that..mind blowing parts..so finally Dr Armaan has got back hhis senses and now he's being a total sweetheart to ridz...coool..very beautiful..updae soon..
Cheers

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Nruti

@arshluver_15

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+ 4

Posted: 17 years ago

#315

Hi i m Nruti i read ur FF n its awsom never read anyting like this loved every part of it but part 9 is the best u rock this u r very gud riter keep up the gud work

luv
~Nruti

Edited by arluver15 - 17 years ago

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Nidha

@nidha1983

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#316

please update it soon pleaseeee

"Friendship is like a glass, A scratch on any side wil reflect on d other side too, so always handle feelings carefully, coz the scratch cant b removed!! "

Edited by kvn1983 - 17 years ago

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Dia Rai

@Heyybabyydolll

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#317

I thot diz pt waz da best pt in ur ff...seriouzly 👏 dont rili hav any mor wrdz 2 describe it!!!!!!!!!

plz plz plz cont sun...w8in iz hard!!!!!! 😭 😆

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sonia

@dmg_sonia

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#318

u made my day indeed...it was a gr8

*WHISTLE*
phooo!!!!!!!

that was .....that was....umm....i dotn have a word...except HOOOTTTT!!!!!

i was nearly blushing in some parts of it!!!!!

mindblowing!!!....so their attraction did get the better of them..i mean..aakhir divorce cancell ho hi gaya, n she forgive him

beautiful update....the way u rote it was tooooooooo goodddddddd u did a gr8 job yaar just keep doing this amazing work...well just cant wait for the next update

luv, sonia