*.*ONE DAY*.* FF P14 Pg 71 NEW* Note 76 - Page 31

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Posted: 17 years ago

OMG

Oh wow astha didi tooooo gooood

I loved every bit of hit 😃👏

The romance was off the hook😳😳😳

I felt like i was on the 9th cloud it was so amazing 👏

Ur one of the best writers ever, u've got the touch of a writer😳

I love this part the best from every other part 👏

U gave it everything u had 👏

Which i loved the most😳

U deserve a standing obviation

👏

Ur the best ever didi 🤗

😊Luv swancy aka ur little sis 😊

Edited by swansea - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow gr8 yaar...it was jst too good..i am so happy..they bth r together...i jst
love it..u r a gr8 writer..i mean the way u described the scenes ..all the
minute details it was jst beautiful....and ya thnk u for such a long update...it
was worth w8ing so many days....hey ya plss try and update soon nxt
time...thodaaaaaaa saaaaaa time nikaal lena humare liye...plsss 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
astha...luv u so much for wrting such a non-describable part...(i dont think das even a word)...
lol....
seriously, the best part ever.....
full of emotion...
sad happy romantic .....
OMG luv this part like hell....
and yh it was worth waiting for...
and finally get well soon,
how cum u dont cum online anymore, i miss ya nd yh i know wa u mean bout homeworks ish well annoying...godd....
anywez cant w8 for the next part

contiu soon
and thnx 4 da pm
luv ya
.x.
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Posted: 17 years ago


OMG ASTHA!!😲😲😲

Rite now...im 2tally speechless! 😳

Mind u....im jus gawping at da screen n trying my best 2 get bak in2 my senses! 😆 😆

But it was amazing! 👏

i luved reading it....have read it liek 50 times by now! 😆 😳

I always thought u were an awesome writer....but now...i consider u as one of the best writers on IF!

Mindblowing work! 👏... Luved it loadz hun! 😳

Keep posting awesum parts liek dis 😳 ...Im 2tally addicted 2 ur ff...a Krazy fan now! 😆 😳

Dont worry abt ur ff....we crazy fans wud neva dream of leaving ur ff 😆 😳 ...concentr8 on ur hw etc 😳 ...even if u only post 1 part liek dis in a week or so... 😳 !

Continue wenever u hv time hun! 😳

Bdw....da word Shona has really grown on me now! 😳 😳 ...Im so fond of it dat im planning 2 get and name my puppy shona! 😆 😆

Luv u loadz! 😳

*~*Marisha*~* 😳


PS:Sorry 4 dis extremely long and crappy message....im still kinda speechless!Lol! 😆
PPS: Hope ur feeling much better now! Even i hv a horrible cold!😭...Get well soon 2 u 2!😃
Edited by perfectpiscean - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
OMG OMG OMG Thank you sooooooooooooooo much for getting ridz and armaan bck awwwwww. Lol Ritu has seen abit too much 😳 . Awwwwwwww hope their honeymoon goes well. PM me when da nxt part is up

x...Aneesa...x
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Posted: 17 years ago
OMG,i cam across dis FF 2day n i mst say its simply ammazin.......

n d last part,oh god...cant tell how was it...lol... 😆

m jst tryin 2 get back 2 my senses n not imaginin AR all over... 😆 😆 😆

yaar,u left me speechless👏 n senseless .... 😆 😆

N ritu was choooo chweet kid...spoke out everythin...
I wish she doesnt remain with AR in dere room...else armaan ll b left torturd .... 😆 😆

Newaz,i luvd ur FF to bits...its AWSUM......

plzzzz continue soon.....do pm me...dnt wanna miss it...

❤️ vini ❤️
Edited by coolvini4u - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey

wowwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

dat was ouch!!!!!

too hot hot 😉

juz MAST 😆

222222222 guddddddddddd 😳

juz luved it 👏
cont super soooooooooonnnnnnnnnn
luv ya n tak care
mahru
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Posted: 17 years ago

OMG hunni im sppechess luved it al it as soooooooooo romantic n dey confessed luved dis part 😳 😃
uvin it as alwys n da last part poor ridz ridu sw dem kisin lool awww luved evrybit bit 4 a momemtn der i fought it was ogna goo to court n al sorts bt u surprised me yet again wiv a mindblwoin updte lke alwys

LLUUUVVVINN IT n luv u 4 givn us such a lng part made ma day n hope ur feelin ber
tr n al loool yh badluck wiv da h/w aswel lool feelin sori 4 ya lool

luv niz
xxx
👏 😉

Edited by sweet-niz - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
um wat a wonder full part plzz pm wen uy cum online need 2 chat 2 u thanku
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Posted: 17 years ago
great part! 👏 im so glad theyre together now! 😳 please continue soon! 😛

Avanti

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