Zindagi Bus Yu Hi updated pg. 150/ 22.12.09

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 16 years ago

#881

Very beautiful part wid sum beautiful moments n convos of Sarthak n Muskaan. It felt nice to c Sarthak opening up to Muskaan abt his lyf. And of course she was there 4 him. I liked the way she was trying to get Sarthak closer to his family. But Sarthak is also ryt that he cant leave her just like that. He will always be by her side.

So wid sum mixed emotions this part was totally rocking. I really luved it. Pls continue soon.

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desaiprachi07

@desaiprachi07

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Posted: 16 years ago

#882

Hey mai to right time par aa gayi, dekh liya ki madam ne ud kiya hua hai.

sweet one, i loved the RN scenes 😊means Muski n Sarthaak scenes. Musk😉i is trying to make Sarthak closer to his family 👏. He did a nice thing by telling her that his dad is hard nut to be crack.😊

Loved their chemistry n Sarthak's naughtiness.😉 He is getting too much naughty day by day i think it's not his fault Muski ka jadoo hi kuch aisa hai us par ki vo bechara kaise roke apne aap ko.😳

Edited by desaiprachi07 - 16 years ago

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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

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Posted: 16 years ago

#883

Hi Vertika..

How r u??? Thanx for d pm..I really loved this update?.All RN n no1 else gr8!!!!!!!

Sarthak wants to live in Solan till his marriage with Muskaan coz he cant live without her..So cute😊😊😊

Sarthak knows dat his dad wont accept Muskaan's proposal coz she doesn't belong to a rich family?Muskaan is so depressed to know dis..😭😭😭

Sarthak ka past kaafi sad hai..He never shared a gud relationship with his dad..

His mother died n his father married his maasi..😭😭😭

Who maasi ko kabhi maa nahi bol saka..

Hota hai aisa ..Rishtey aise hi hote hain..kabhi kabhi hum wo sab aacept hi nahin kar pate kyunki humara dil is baat ko nahin manta..Sarthak is in turmoil..

Sarthak kitna caring brother hai..Usne Mauli n Vatsal ko milane mein kya kya nahin kiya..He really loves his sis a lot...Muskaan understand dis n she knows him well..They make a really cute pair.😛😛😛

Sarthak is really very naughty..Woh Muskaan ko bahut tease karta hai..😆😆

Aur vaise bhi tum romance itni acchi tarah se likh leti ho?Sarthak bahut hi besharam hai.😉😉😉

Usko romance ke alawa kuch aata hi kahan hai?.Bechari Muskaan!!

uska kya hoga shadi ke baad.......😆

Bye

Do Update soon

Edited by suhana_dixit - 16 years ago

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Rituka

@rituka7

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Posted: 16 years ago

#884

damn cool
awesome
superb
update was too romantic
update soon

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shafia Akhtar

@IISHAFS

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+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#885

wowowow tht was nice part Sarthak was something always want to love muski

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varshita

@varshita

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Posted: 16 years ago

#886

A wonderful n nice update. 👏

I believe personaly that u r a nice writer who can handel aal the parts of the fic so wonderfully. 👏 I personally love all the updates of ur fics.😊

Sarthak is so naughty n getting more n more now.😉 I liked the way he teased Muski about that besharam talk.😳

But the thing a love the most was his clearity that he loves Muski so much n he knows that his father would not accept her so easily and his relationship with his father was never so good. Massi ko kabhi maa nahi keh paaya vo that's sad.😭

Par mujhe umeed hai ki jaldi hi sab theek ho jaayega.😊

update soon.

Edited by varshita - 16 years ago

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

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Posted: 16 years ago

#887

nyc update

continue soon😊

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375400

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Posted: 16 years ago

#888

hi vartika how r u ?
ud was too good👏
fantastic👏
sarthak really loves muski❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
this whole part is superb👏
full of romance❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
scenes were really mindblowing👏
waiting for the next part

love❤️
deepa

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fanatic 21

@fanatic 21

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#889

totally awesome.....

n thnk u for keepin it totall updt for sarthak n muskaan....

totally romantic n beautiful...also very cute....

emotional in bits n nice dialogues der....

cont soon

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

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Posted: 16 years ago

#890

hi dear... 😃

arre vaah...is baar toh is ud me RN ko chod kar koi aur tha hi nahin. matlab sabhi achhe hain...par pura ud agar sirf RN k upar ho aur voh bhi romantic toh maza aa hi jata hai...!!!😉

toh sarthak ko lagta hai ki us k dad un dono ki shaadi k lie razi nahin honge....!!! par sarthak aise nahin hone dega na us k sath...voh jarur muskaan se shaadi karega...chahe us k dad sath de...ya na de...!!!😃

sarthak ka past kafi sad tha. bachpan me hi un dono ki mom ki death ho chuki thi...aur us k dad ne un ki aunty se shaadi kar li. jinhe sarthak kabhi apni maa ki jagah nahin de pya...par... voh is baat se inkaar bhi nahin kar raha hai ki us ki aunty us se pyar nahin karti. i think use apni aunty ko ek mauka dena chahiye tha...!!! hala ki voh us ki maa ki jagah nahin le payengi...par ek rishta toh hai.

ab besharmi k part k bare me main kuch nahin likhungi...!!! arre yaar sarthak ko sharam nahin aati hai toh kya...main toh Sharmila Tagore se inspire ho kar...sharma rahi hun.😆

mushkan ko baht tung karta hai sarthak......😃

chalo koi baat nahin...!!! ud baht baht achha tha...!!! aur ab jaldi se aage likh...!!!😃

Edited by Lion_Priya - 16 years ago