Zindagi Bus Yu Hi updated pg. 150/ 22.12.09 - Page 21

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Posted: 17 years ago
Hii vartika dear kaisi ho?
bahut hi achcha ud tha, mujhe bahut hi pasand aaya, kaafi emotional bhi tha dear, magar sarthak aur muskaan ka part tumne adhura kyun chod diya beech mein, koi baat nahin main next part ke liye wait karungi ok.
WITH LOTS OF LOVE PRITI.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: ashu20

hi sweety..

Hi darling😊
kya yaar muskaan ka part adhura kyun chod diya.. ...
aaj likhte hoon na.😆
sakshi poor girl really felt bad for that..
haan yaar par us k paas 2 mom hain na.😃
really enjoyed the ud
thanks 😊😊
plz ud soon
haan aaj karoongi.😊😊
love
ashu
with lots of love
Mahak😉😉

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: vvdn

Update is as always too good.

thanks dear😊😊
but yaar MUSKAN ka part pura ku nahi kiya i am really waiting for Muskan n Sarthak , i hope it's better luck next time😕
haan are suna hai na Milon ka jaise tha fasla, Hum ko to milna hi tha.😉
(sorry yaar beech ki ek line mujhe nahi aati hai)😆
but i like kitchen scene , poor sakshi. pata nahi bhagwanji aisa kyu karte hai acche logon ke saath.but lagta hai uski jindagi mein bahut jaldi hi bohot saari khushiya aane wali hai offcouse Sahil ke rup mein.
haan bilkul aayengi.😃
kyounki sab ko kushi paane ka adhikaar hai na; us ko bhi milegi khusiyaan.😊
so plzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon.
haan dear aaj karoongi na update.😛😛
Witl lots of love
Mahak

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

bahut hi maza aaya.........too good

thanks darling😊😊
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: rituka7

good one
update soon.............

thanks sweety😊😊
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: KRIZZY

perfect ud

superb....mindblowing......awesome
thanks sweety 😊😊
with lots of love😊😊
Mahak

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

yaar aunties ki conversation was really senti....

Haan yaar mom log humesha hi senti baatein karti hain na.😆
i'm waiting for Muskaan n Sarthak 's meeting.
Haan bus milne hi jaa rahe hain dono.😉
Thanks n With lots of love
Mahak

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: riyaa_1985

very nice update dear!!!sorry for being late😭

Koi baat nahi bus reply aa gaya na accha sa enough for me.😃
great one👏
Thanks n with lots of love😉😉
Mahak

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: pritib0

Hii vartika dear kaisi ho?

Hi Preeti mai theek hoon .😊
bahut hi achcha ud tha, mujhe bahut hi pasand aaya, kaafi emotional bhi tha dear,
Haan mom log jahan rahengi vahan emotions to honge hi.😆
magar sarthak aur muskaan ka part tumne adhura kyun chod diya beech mein, koi baat nahin main next part ke liye wait karungi ok.
Haan ye baat to hai ki aaj k update me dono milenge.😉
WITH LOTS OF LOVE PRITI.
With lots of love for u too.
Mahak

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Posted: 17 years ago

Here's the 25th part guys:-

Ankhon me teri ajab si ajab se adayien hai,

Ho ho ho Ankhon me teri ajab si ajab se adayien hai;

Dil ko bana de jo patang ye saanse teri,

Vo hawayein hain.

Ankhon me teri ajab si ajab se adayien hai-2

Tere saath saath aisa koi noor aaya hai,

Chand teri roshini ka halka sa ek saaya hai;

Tere najaron ka dil ka kiya jo hashar

Asar ye huaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aa aa;

Ab inme hi doob k ho jaaoo paar,

Yahi hai armaaaaaaaaaa

Ho ho ho''..Ankhon me teri ajab si ajab se adayien hai-2

"Tu yahan kyoun khada hai?" Vatsal asked.

No reply from both.

He saw Muskaan at the door n understood everything very well.

"Hmmmmmmmmm to ye baat hai." He coughed.

Par koi fayda nahi hua. Ab kya kare Mauli k aane k pehle kuch to karna hoga he thought.

"Maam kya hum andar jaa sakte hain ki aaj bahar se hi bhookhe jaana hoga." Vatsal said to Muskaan mischievously.

Par phir bhi kuch nahi hua. Ab kya kare bechara tabhi us ne dekha ki Mauli aa rahi hai n he screamed

"Mauli".

Their eye contact broke n both of them came back in real world.

Mauli aa chuki thi. "Are bhaiya aaj yahin khada rehna hai kya?" she asked her brother.

"Haan'''haan chalo andar."Sarthak said.

She looked at Muskaan n tried to recall something. "Are tum to vahi ho na." Mauli said.

Vatsal n Sarthak gave each other a confused look at her this statement. It's is so wired Muskaan thought.

"Excuse me do v know each other?" Muskaan asked confusingly.

"Shayad tum mujhe nahi jaanti but I know u very well." Mauli said.

"Can I know how?" Muskaan asked again.

"Mai tumhare bare me bahut kuch achi tarah se jaanti hoon. Mujhe ye bhi pata hai ki aaj tumne kya kiya tha?" She said.

Sarthak n Vatsal frowned at her this statement. Sarthak they started watching her face suspiciously. They were unable to find out that wat's going on.

"Jaise mai ye jaanti hoon ki tumne aaj college function me prize win kiya hai." She said smiling.

"Oh ok", she thought n said, "it means u watched it".

To which Mauli nodded. Sarthak n Vatsal took a sigh of relief n a deep breath. They were satisfied now.

"Pls. come in", she brought them inside.

"Chalo is ko yaad to aaya ki hum ko andar bhi jaana hai." Vatsal said at which Sarthak hit him.

Andar jaate waqt Muskaan ka right hand Sarthak k left hand ko touch kar gaya .It sent a sensation in both of them's bodies. Muskaan felt herself blushing.

They met with all ppl there. Vedant ko dekhte hi Sarthak ko yaad aa gaya ki ye vohi hai jis ko un logon ne raaste me lift di thi.

"Muskaan jara yahan aana", Mrs. Sinha called her.

She went in and brought some snacks with coffee. She gave it to all and when it came to Sarthak ,Vedant introduced properly both of them n told Sarthak that she is his younger sis studying in B.Sc.(I.T.). Sarthak smiled at it n shook his hand with hers.

It sent shivers in both of them's bodies. Muskaan was feeling goose bumps in her stomach n Sathak was really pressing her hand hard. Their eyes were locked. Soon Vatsal saw both of them in this condition n hit his elbow to Sarthak to leave her hand. He immediately left it. Muskaan left the place n went in Poorvi's room.

Someone was watching it from her corner of eyes for long time. She was Sakshi, she went towards Muskaan who has just entered in Poorvi's room.

"Kya ho raha tha abhi wahan?" she asked turning her face in her direction.

Muskaan was shocked to listen it but controlling her fear she replied, "Kahan kya ho raha tha ;aur kya pooch rahi hai tu?"

"Dekh mai dekh bhi sakti hoon aur samajh bhi sakti hoon par agar tu khud hi bata de ki tera aur Sarthak ka kya chakkar hai to jyada clear ho jaayega ." she sighed n said further, " Itna bharosa to hai na mujh par tujhe."

"Ye kya bole jaa rahi hai tu, mai tujh par apne aap se bhi jyada bharosa karti hoon. Agar dubara tune ye baat kahi na to theek nahi hoga samjhi." She said in anger.

"Ok baba sorry galti ho gayi ab nahi kahoongi ok", she said holding her eares. "Ab bata baat kya hai."

"Vo''.." n she told Sakshi all happened today.

"Hmmm to ye baat hai." She said thoughtfully.

"Mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha hai ki achanak kya ho gaya hai mujhe mai to jaise aaj se pehle to aise nahi thi jaisa aaj lag raha hai mujhe." She was confused totally n it was clear from her face.

"Ye to hoga hi agar tum log mujh se kuch chipaoge". Nikki said entering in room.

They both gave her a hopeless expression n Muskaan said, "Kuch pata lage to batoo na aise kya bol doon."

"Pata lag gaya hai darling I think u r in love. Pehli nazar ka pyaar." Nikki said winking.

"Kya bole jaa rahi hai tu? Paagal to nahi ho gayi hai na.Mai aur pyaar". Muskaan gave a puzzled expression.

"Yeah darling I am agree with Nikki that u r in love but mai shure nahi hoon ki ye love hi hai ya bus infatuation." Sakshi replied confusingly.

"Y rn't u shure yaar?" Nikki asked.

"Dekh abhi humari age ki ladkyion me love se jyada infatuation hota hai. Ho sakta hai Muskaan k case me bhi aisa hi ho." Sakshi was thinking deeply about this.

"Par mujhe to poora confidence hai ki she is in love." Nikki said in a teasing way while Muskaan blushed.

"Oye hoye sharmati bhi hai apni Muskaan mere ko to pata hi nahi tha." Sakshi said in a commenting tone.

"Chup karo tum dono" Muskaan said blushing hard.

"Sakshi beta yahan aana to", Mrs. Sinha called.

"Abhi aayi aunty, ok mai baad me milti hoon." She said n left.

"Hmmm to kya socha aapne." Nikki asked.

"Kya sochna hai aur kis bare me?" Muskaan asked smiling.

"Haan vaise bhi shuru me thoda time lagega tum ko us ko pehle acchi tarah se jaan lo fir kuch karna." She said sweetly.

"Accha mai chalti hoon Sakshi ki thodi help kar doon. Tu aa jaana." Nikki said n left.

Muskaan was constantly thinking that is she really in love with Sartahk the person with whom she never met before. Who is new to his life and he looks different to her.Kya yahi pyaar hai ki bus attraction hai ya kuch aur.Lekin agar ye attraction hai to aisa pehle kyoun nahi hua kabhi, kyoun hua aisa isi ladke k liye.

Kyoun vo us k bare me lagataar soche jaa rahe hai bina ye jaane ki vo kya sochta hai us k bare me pata nahi us ki zindagi me koi aur na ho."Are kya kya soch rahi hoon mai.Chalo chal k dekhte hain ki bhaiya aur Sahil bhaiya kahan hain." She left.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago

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