Zindagi Bus Yu Hi updated pg. 150/ 22.12.09 - Page 23

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

loved the update yaar..it was too goddn Sarthak n Muskaan were really cute 2gether..

thanks a lot darling.😊
How can they get lost each time in front of so many people............??????????tooooooooooooooooooooooooo guuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuud
are yahi to khaas baat hai humare RN ki ki vo kahin bhi gum ho jaate hain ek doosre ko dekh kar.😆
waiting for the next.
ur wait is going to b over very soon.😃

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: rituka7

too good
update soon................

thanks ritu dear.😉
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: riyaa_1985

Great absolutely superb👏.
as rocking as usual.
too Good.

thank u mam.😊
continue soon.;😊
yeah shure.😃

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Posted: 17 years ago

Part 26

She goes straight to the garden but finds no one there."Are kahan chale gaye dono abhi thodi der pehle to yahin the." She thought n was about to enter in the home when her foot slipped because of mud n she was about to fall on the floor but some one hold her hands firmly.

He was none other than our darling Sarthak. He saw her falling and held her hand tightly .He lost himself completely in her eyes. He was drowning in her simple but dazzling beauty. He was feeling a sudden urge in him to kiss her n to touch her passionately. He was unable to control his desire but what can he do he has met her only a few hours ago.

Aaye kaise raat hai jo badi khushnaseeb hai,

Chahe jise door se duniya vo mere kareeb hain:

Itna kuch kehan hai fir bhi hai dil me sawaal kai,

Sapno me jo roj kaha hai vo fir se kahoon ya nahi:

Ankhon me teri ajab se ajab se adaayen hain'

Ho ooooooo aankhon me teri ajab se ajab se adayien hain;

Dil ko bana de jo patang ye saanse teri iiiiiiii

Vo hawaayen hain.

Vahan Muskaan k dil ki bhi haalat kuch aise hi thi. Her heart beats were getting faster n faster by every passing second. She wanted to remain in his arms like this forever. She was feeling a lump in her throat. Pata nahi kya hai us me jo Muskaan ko pal pal apni or kheeche jaa raha hai apne aap par kaboo rakhna mushkil ho raha hai.

But some one broke their thoughts.He was Vedant.

Vedant said, "Are Muskaan tu yahan kya kar rah hai Sakshi tujhe kab se dhoondh rahi hai."

Sarthak leaves her hand immediately. He doesn't say anything.

"Kya hua?" Vedant asked confusingly.

"Vo kuch nahi bhaiya bus yahan thoda gili mitti thi jis me mera pair fuss gaya tha aur inhone mujhe girne se bacha liya." Muskaan told indicating in Sarthak's direction.

"Maine kai baar kaha hai tujh se ki dhyaan se chala kar. Kahin chot to nahi aayi na?" Vedant asked in a concerned tone.

"It's fine bhaiya.I think I should move in." Muskaan said n left the place.

"I am sorry par kya hai na meri sis kuch pagal hai thodi careless bhi hai bus isiliye mujhe bhi us ki jyada chinta hoti hai." Vedant said.

"I understand meri bhi ek natkhat behan hai na to mai samjhta hoon." Sarthak said smiling.

"Kya burai kar rahe the aap meri?" kahin se Mauli wahan pahuch gayi aur us ne thodi bahut baat sun li Sarthak ki.

"Teri burai my god mere paas aur bhi kaam hain is khaas kaam k alawa." Sarthak commented.

"Accha haan vo to mai aaj shaam se hi dekh rahi hoon ki aap kaun kaun se jaroori kaam kar lete hain." Mauli teased him.

"Kya matlab mai samjha nahi." Sarthak asked in a confusing tone.

"Haan baithe baithe gum ho jaate hain pata nahi dhyaan kahan hai aaj kal aap ka?" Mauli said with a big grin.

Vedant coughed at her such statement while Sarthak felt embarrass.

Idhar bechara Vatsal in dono bhai behan ko dhoondh raha hai aur badbad kar raha hai, "Pata nahi kahan hai ye dono .Vaat laga rakhi hai apun k dimaag ki in dono ne. Kabhi koi gayab kabhi koi. Mai kya CBI ka aadmi hoon jo in dono ko din bhar dhoondhta hi rahoonga."

Finally he saw both of them here he was almost fuming but when he saw Vedant also standing there he didn't say anything.

"Kab se dhoondh raha hoon yaar chalo sab log dinner k liye bula rahe hain." He told them.

"Yeah let's move." Vedant said.

"Andar chalo tum logon ko to mai abhi batata hoon". Vatsal said.

They all sat on the dinning table n food was served. Muskaan was also helping Sakshi and Nikki .

"To aap logon ka kab tak rukne ka irada hai yahan?" Vedant asked while eating parathas.

"Hum logon ko parson hi nikalna hai actually office k kaam ki wajah se hum log jyada dino tak bahar nahi reh sakte hain." Vatsal replied while looking Sarthak who was watching Muskaan.

"Are ye bhi kya baat hai? Itne khoobsurat sehar aaye hain aap log aisa mauka roj roj to milta nahi hai kam se kam one week ruk kar jaaye hum aap ko apna sehar bhi to dikhaye." Sahil said.

"Nahi vo actually dad akele pad jaate hain na." Mauli told now.

"Oh common Mauli bus ek hi hafte ki to baat hai us k baad hum log bhi yahan se chale jaayenge." Poorvi said trying to convince her.

"Bhaiya kuch bataiye na." she hit her bro on his shoulder.

"Mai haan'''haan vo," Sarthak couldn't complete .He saw a unsaid request in Muskaan's eyes jo us se keh rahi thi pls. ruk jaao na.

"To hume kya karna chahiye?" Vatsal asked Sarthak .Vo is mauke ka fayda uthana chahta tha poori tarah se Sarthak ki leg pulling karne k liye.

"Haan to theek hai na ruk jaate hain". Sarthak said with a littlie hesitation "Par ek promise kijiye roj mujhe aisa hi khana khilayenge aap log". He gave a big smile.

Vatsal knew it very well ki kuch aisa hi hoga .Kushi to us ko bhi hue kyounki us ko Mauli k saath kuch time aur spend karne ka muka mil jaayega .Isi tarah Mauli bhi kush thi kyounki vo bhi kuch time Vatsal k saath betana chahti thi.

"Hurrrrrrrray aur y not saath me roj khana khayenge to maza hi maza aayega." Sahil said in excitement.

"Aap logon k rehne ka inteezaam mai apne dost k ek cottege me karva deta hoon bahut acchi jagah hai. I hope aap log kaafi enjoy karenge." Vedant said smiling.

Muskaan n Sarthak's eyes met again as if Sarthak's eyes were saying dekho tum jo chahti thi vahi kiya maine.Muskaan shayad samjah gayi thi us ki aankhon ki bhasa to us ne apni nazaren jhuka li.

After the dinner they all get ready to leave. Sarthak's eyes were constantly searching for her but she was nowhere to be seen.

"I think ab hume chalna chahiye,kyoun Sarthak?"Vatsal teased him.

"Hmmm" he just nodded.

"Kaafi accha laga aaj aap sab k saath." Vedant said in a formal lingo.

"Are ab to kuch din hum sab aate jaate rahenge." Mauli replied smiling.

"Aur haan aap logon ka kal ka dinner mere ghar par hai." Sakshi replied looking in the direction where Muskaan was peeping from the window.

"Us k baad mere ghar par." Vedant added n asked, "Are ye Muskaan kahan reh gaye guest jaa rahe hain is ko aana chahiye na."

"Mai abhi us ko bula k laati hoon .Aur haan is k baad fourth ghar mera bhi hai aap logon k liye." Nikki said sweetly n went straight to Muskaan.

Us ko dhoondhte dhondhte vo Poorvi k room me pahuchi jahan Muskaan khidki par khadi thi.

"Kahan khadi hai tu yahan? Bhaiya kab se bula rahe hai tujhe . Vo log jaa rahe hain bye to kar de." Nikki said.

Muskaan jaana to nahi chahti thi par bhaiya ne bulaya hai to kaise nahi jaati.To gayi vo Nikki k saath vahan.

Muskaan ko vahan dekh kar Sarthak ko chain aa gaya. He smiled to see her and sat into the car.

"I think ab hum chal sakte hain. Tujhe see off karne bhi vo aa gayi hai" Vatsal murmured in his ear.

"Shut up", he hit Vatsal on his back. They bid good bye to all n left. Sarthak car k back mirror se tab tak khadi Muskaan ko dekha raha jab tak car turn nahi ho gayi.

"Kal vo log Sakshi k yahan aane waale hai dinner par to vahan bhi un ko dekh sakti hai I think." Nikki teased her.

"Dhattttttttttttttttttt" Muskaan blushed.

"Ab hum bhi chalte hain yaar.kal milenge ok." Vedant said n sat into his car.

"Theek hai yaar." Sahil said watching Sakshi who was also sitting in his car.

"Bye Sakshi n good night", he wished her.

"U too ", she wished him back.

"Ye sab tu kal bhi kar sakta hai", Vedant teased him.

"Ok jaa mere baap, bye." Sahil said n soon all of them left.
Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome👏.cont soon.......
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey Mahak,
really Owsome update!!!👏
am sorry for last update actually i wrote my comment n when i try to post it it just not posting aur sara comment bhi delete ho gaya😕 n then i just can't able to login donno y😕😕😕 this new IF making me crazy😡
well let's talk about today's update it was just Rocking one as always.
Sarthak n Muskan are too much ye aise baar baar ankhon mein kho jana...
yeh situation pe ek gana yad aa gaya........
Ankhon hi ankhon mein eshara ho gaya,
baithe baithe jine ka sahara ho gaya.........
ab muskan Vedant ko kaise bataye ke chot to lagi hai par dil pe aur woh bhi bohot gehari...😳😳😳
good that they are not leaving the place, toh aur batein hongi but hope isbaar ek dusre se baat karle hamara sweet couple.😉
Vastal is toooo smart. how much he teased Sarthak uff..😆 aur usiki kandhe pe bandook rakhkar chala raha hai apne nishane par i mean Mauli par 😉
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soooon. waiting to know what next
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Posted: 17 years ago
so sweet to the power 1000 ..It was just perfectly romantic dear..How do u come up with such ideas?????????????
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Posted: 17 years ago

Hii vartika dear kaisi ho?

tumhara ud mujhe bahut hi zyaada pasand aaya,
bahut hi romantic aur khubsurat part tha dear,
aur tumhari song ki choice bhi bahut achchi thi,
aur situation par ek dum sahi baith rahi thi,
i really loved it, this is for u 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏.
will be waiting eagerly for the next part.
with lots of love,
and good wishes.
priti.
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Posted: 17 years ago
it was romantic n beautiful
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Posted: 17 years ago
The update was superb.
It was very romantic.
thank u for such a nice update.😊

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