FF- Kuch to Hua Hai- *p.39*update 30/05 - Page 13

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Posted: 17 years ago
omg that ayan 😡 😡 so my only question is: where is kanya hidin cuz as far as i noe the bathrooms are quite small in all the classes 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: ZaraCZaara

omg that ayan 😡 😡 so my only question is: where is kanya hidin cuz as far as i noe the bathrooms are quite small in all the classes 😆

Lol yeah the washrooms are really small. But you know the door slides open from one end only so she is standing on the other end and bending down in the corner. Plus she is really small and Ranbir's big so he's blocking most of the way so Ayan can't really see inside. I hope that helps 😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
omg omg hey yaar plz continue..yaar as soon as possible..cant wait for the next part
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Posted: 17 years ago

Thanks for the comments everyone!
I'll update right now 😊

Edited by punjabi.princes - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Part 11:

Recap: Ranbir and kanya are both in the bathroom in the plane and Ayan knocks on the door

R: Ayan?

Kanya gets scared and tries to hide even more

Ay: oh hey Ranbir. I thought it might be kanya

R: no its just me

Ay: did you see her? Shes not in her seat

R: umm no. actually when I was coming to the washroom I think I saw her walking towards the washrooms in the back. You should go check there.

Ay: alright thanks buddy

He turns around and walks towards the back of the plane

Ranbir shuts the door and turns to kanya. He grabs her arm and opens the door.

R: get out!

He pushes her out and then leaves himself. Kanya watches to see what seat he goes to sit in.

SHes about to go their but then sees Ayan talking to her Dad

K: oh shit I wonder what he's saying

She walks over and Ayan pretends to be all worried for her.

Kanya is annoyed as ever and just sits down next to her Dad and sleeps on his arm. She tries to hold back her tears but can't.

They arrive and Mumbai shortly and Kanya rushes to get out of the plane. She tries to look for Ranbir but he's no where.

When she gets home she calls his cell a few times.

He ignores her calls the first few times but then picks up and hangs up

Kanya feels really hurt and is just sitting in her room crying.

Her phone rings and she gets excited that maybe its him calling back

K: hello?

S: hey Kanya. Its shanaya

K: oh hey!

S: you alright hun? You sound miserable

K: no it's nothing

S: is it that jerk Ayan again? Come on kanya you have to leave him

K: anyways lets not talk about that. So whats up with you?

S: OMG kanya I have so much to tell you. Guess what

K: what?

S: Aditya proposed to me!!

K: Oh SHanaya I'm so happy for you. Congrats hun! I wish you all the best.

S: thanks so much

K: wow this happened all so fast

S: yeah I know. But we're getting married really soon. Within 3 weeks

K: what? That's soo soon

S: I know. Its just that some of his close relatives are leaving within a month to go the States so we have to get married before they go

K: well that's soo good. Congrats again. I cant wait for your wedding

S: kanya can I ask you for a favour

K: anything for you

S: well none of my family is here in Mumbai and they won't be coming until the day before the engagement. But I have to go shopping with his family. So will you come with me?

Kanya really doesn't feel like going but Shanaya has been there so much for her

K: sure I will

S: thanks so much. Be ready tomorrow at noon

K: okay

So the next day Shanaya picked up Kanya and they went to one of the biggest shops in Mumbai.

S: Aditya should already be there. He said that with him will be his mom and his Malika chachi. Oh you know Malika Chachi, shes Ranbir's Mom.

Right that second Kanya felt everything just freeze around her and the word Ranbir echoed through her ears. How had she forgotten that Ranbir and Aditya were cousins.

She didn't know if she should be happy because she would get to see Ranbir or sad because he wouldn't talk to her.

They went in the store and Aditya, his mom, and Malika were already there.

Shanaya introduced Kanya to all of them.

S: Malika Chachi, Ranbir also knows Kanya

M: oh really. My son is just crazy. He said he would be here but he's so late. I wanted to get Aditya's and Ranbir's shopping done with first and then do Shanaya's

K: its okay aunty. We'll go over there and start looking at clothes for Shanaya

M: thanks beta. Your really sweet

Kanya, Shanaya, and Aditya's mom went to where all the wedding lehngas were. The workers at the store began showing them lehngas but Kanya's eyes were just on the door, waiting for Ranbir to enter.

Another hour past by but he never came. They had picked out many outfits for Shanaya to wear for all the wedding functions and some for her to wear after the wedding. But they still needed to find something for to wear at the wedding.

Aditya and Malika now came and wanted to see Shanaya try on all of the clothes (except the wedding lehnga which is a surprise for the guy!Lol)

Shanaya went in and tried on the first outfit. They all loved it and she was posing for all of them and then she stopped

S: Hey ranbir we're over here!!

Kanya immediately turned around and saw Ranbir coming up to them.

He had a straight face on but when he saw kanya it changed to an angry face.

She smiled at him but he just turned his face and went to his mom.

R: sorry I'm late

M: its okay beta. Better not be late next time

R: I'll go pick some outfits for myself. Mom, come with me

M: no beta I was there for more than an hour with Adi

R: Adi come with me

A: no I wanna see Shanaya's clothes. So then I can pick more outfits to match with hers

They all laugh at how cute he is (remember its Harshad Chopra from KDMHMD)

R: fine I'll go myself

Adi's Mom: wait Ranbir, take Kanya with you. She has great choice, she chose most of Shanaya's outfits

M: yeah beta go with him

R: no its okay

M: Ranbir!

R: no I meant to say that she probably wants to see shanaya try on clothes

M: kanya can you go with him PLEASE!

K: sure aunty

She gets up and he just walks away towards the mens clolthes

K: ranbir please wait for me

He keeps on walking and then pulls her to the side when none of his can see them anymore

R: what the hell are you doing here?

K: Shanaya brought me here with her

R: so why did you come?

K: Ranbir stop being like this. I'm really sorry but you have to listen to me

R: I don't think theres anything you could say to fix this. Your married. You should act like it. Would your husband like to see you with me.

K: ranbir please listen to me. Remember those times we spent together. The first time we met, in the taxi to the hotel, our suitcases getting exchanged, how we danced, when we were in the rain and almost kissed, how we went clubbing and I chose to dance with you

Ranbir starts to remember all those moments

K: and then the first time we kissed by the lake and then (she looks down and holds his hand) when we made love

Ranbir remembers that moment

R: kanya…

K: yes

R: its best if you forget those. I don't know why you did it but it was wrong. I feel horrible. I did something that is someones right, not mine. I wish I never see your husband again because I won't be able to look him in the eye.

His eyes get a little watery and he speaks more softly

R: Kanya look its best if we forget everything and move on with our lives

K: but my life is incomplete without you

R: mine is too but ….

All of a sudden he sees Malika getting up

R: shh stop crying. My moms coming

They walk over to the clothes and start picking stuff out for him. Soon after they leave the store. Kanya and Shanaya walk the other way to their car.

Kanya looks back and she sees Ranbir looking back as well.

K: will he ever be mine again?


Please comment and I think the next update will be more romantic than this one 😛

Edited by punjabi.princes - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
oooo me first ! gr8 update yaar! continue soon!
Edited by ZaraCZaara - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
dat was a great update plzzz continue soon!!!!!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
I read all the parts...just now...wow...I'm soo impressed. It was the best Fanfic i read...and I want you to continue RIGHT NOW. 😊
Keep up the good work.. 👍🏼
Edited by iLuvU_1 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
I hope you are working on the 12th part. 😃 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow... it just gets better and better....
pls update soon...

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