NEW FF '' FLAVOURS'' discont note

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😳hello guyss this is my first ff though i have updated a few parts in the ff named OUR VERY OWN FANFICK thought i just just give it a short plssssss excuse me for any mistakess n thsi is the 2nd time m typing this as i type dteh entire part n it just vanished from the screen😭😆.

all the characters in my ff r the same butt instead of holding operational instruments for operations they will be holding knifes to operate vegetabless lol yes all my characters r junior chefsss n not doctors .so here it is

"" FLAVOURS""

IHM MUMBAI is proud to announce the 2 first year students who have being selected by r committe to complete their hotel managemnet degree in MUSCAT SHERETON ...it gives me great pleasure to call on stage ARMAAN MALIK n ATUL JOSHI to collect their scholorship money n thier airtickets (everyones clapping 👏) armann n atull once again their names r announced n everyone slooking forthem finallly everyone hears sumone raising his hand n saying sirrrrrrrrr sirrrrr main armaan main yahaan hoon per main stage per nahi aa sakta kynki atull yahaan meri godd main kushi ke mare behoosh .hahhahaha 😆fine jab apke dost is khushi se bahar aajaen toh mere office main aa jana

in the principals office

hummm toh armaan aur atulll muje bohot khushi hai ki mere do students apni degree complete karne ke liye ja rahehain pur haan armaaan apko toh college ki sari ladkiyaan our female teachers bohot miss karengi muje pata hai ki apke kitneee deewaniyaan hain.armaaans blushinggg as usual.sirrr main bhi toh unhe bohot miss karoongs akhir unhi ko toh impress karne ke chakar may main itna accha khana bananelaga aur sirrr actually mere 100% attendence ka raaj bhi woh ladkiyaan hi hain😆.atul interupts sirrr iske college main anne ki inspiration hi ladkiyaan hain.Haaan aur atul apko bhi ladkiyaan toh nahi per college ke saree jaad aur pudhe jarror miss karenge .sirrr uski tension app biilkul mat lijeye main ek bohot hi talanted professional malli appoint kar diya hai. Accha maine app dono ko apki tickets dene ke liye bulaya hai aur haaan apse yeh bhi khena hai ki app dono ko kuch aur log bhi join karne wale haain.armaan interupts sir wohhh ..... ji armaaaan ladkiyaan bhi hain .nahi sir woh toh main bus ....armaan muje pata hai app kya kehna chahtehain anyways toh airport per apko 2 aur juniors join karenge jo punjab se hain aur 2 ladkiyaan armaan eyes widened AFRICA se hainn .....AFFFRICAAAAA NAHIIIII both atul n armaan yelled dono hi indians hain bus kuch saloon se africa main rehti hain.thankgod yaar atul main toh sooch raha tha ki ab menuuu african language toh aandi nahi hai toh unhe pataungo kaise. pagal armaan main toh khushi se chilaya ,, woh kyun dhek yaar africa main kitne jungle hain aur jitne jayada jungle utne hi jayada jaad aur poudhe toh muje un ladkiyoon se kitne information mil jaegii.yaar atul muje toh teri bohot tension hai aur doubt bhi, dhekk yaar tuje koi ladki pasand hi nahi atii aur jise tu byy chance pasand karta hai woh mere fantasy land main hoti hai aur puraa din tu mere saath hota hai toh tere irrada toh neek hai na mere dost yaan fir ab tuje ladkee...... okayy boyss ab bohot hogaya apke pass time bohot kum hai yeh hain apki tickets or apke rehne ka intizaam hoja e ga .all teh best boys now gayab hojaooo jaldi muje bohot kaam hai.ARMAAN N ATULL in the coridoor .bol na yaar atul sab fine hai na ya fir.... dhek yaar armaan woh ekdin aaegii ,hahahha kaun aaegii teri jadoon ki mallika yaan poudhoon ki raaniiii oyeee hoyeeeeee .... chal yaar armaaan time bohot kam hai aur muje mere poudhon ke saath bhi thoda waqt bitana hai haaan haan theek hai muje bhi kitni ladkiyon ke asson ponchne hain.....

(ok guys plssssss tell me if i shuld continue n plsssssssss do comment.thanks in advance to all u guys who read my ff)

cheers!!!

hey guys b4 starting my first part i wuld like to thank everyone who replied and also i wuld like to thank everyone who read but were little lazyyyy to comment😉

PART 1

a : namaste aunty ji armaan ready hogaya hume airport jaane ke liye late hojaega. ar's mom : 😭 namaste beta ... main aur armaan ke papaji usee bohot miss karenge a: aunty app tension matlejiye app humse kabhi bhi milne aaa sakti hain ar'mom : haan beta jaroor ,woh armaan toh kaal raat se hi gayab hai hoga apni honey ke saath a: wah aunty app in sab batoon main kitni koool hain ar'mom : kya ?? a: nahi aunty woh kuch nahi waise app airport toh arhehain na ar'mom: zarror kaise nahi aaoongi a: ok aunty toh main apse milta hoon ( phele is armaan ko toh dhondo pata nahi kitni honeys hain iske abb kis kis ko phone karke poochoon ) ar: 😭😭 main tumhe phele baar chod ke ja raho hoon maine usue kaha hai tumhara dhyaan rakhe dheko tum jyada mat chalna waise haan main nahi hoon toh tum waise hi nahi jaogi ...dheko jyada dhoop main mat nikalna tumwaise hi itni hot ho aur hot hojaogi waise haan main anhi hoon to tum waise hi nahi jaoogi ... muje maff karna main tumhe nahi leja sakta (heyyyyyyy bhagwann itna bada anarth kyon) a: armaaan yaar tu yahaan hai aur tuje sharam nahi aati puri raat ghar se gayab tha aur ab yahaan iske samne apne aakhoon ki tank khali kar rahai hai ar: dhek atull izat se baat kar yeh koi iske uske nahi hai yeh meri baby hai a: hahahahhah yeh gadi teri honey hai aur tu puri raat garage main soya tha tu great hai ab chal bol apni honey ko jaldi airport lechale ar: haaan haan jayda hus matt chalo honey lechalo is tarzan ke bache ko apne saat .....

MUMBAI INTERNATIONAL AIRPORT

ar: oho mummji yeh kya hai haar , aarti app band nahi leke aaii hain ?? meenu embaress mat karo tusii papaji bolna inko papaji: beta maine to teri mumyji se behas karna to bohot phele se chod diya hai ar'mom : mumnda pheli baar ja raha hai aur tusiii ..... ar: oho mummyji munda pheli baar muscat ja raha hai india ke border per jang ladne nahi ...tusi menu embaress matkaro dheko ab woh airhostess bhi has rahi hai ar'mom: dhek ammy je tu menu milne nahi aya har do mahinoon main to main ajaoongi ar: haan baba ajana app peripona mummji papji ab toh piolet ka phone bhi agaya hai ... chal yaar atull pura impression toh wiase hi kharab hogay hai airhostess ke samne ab mere 4 gante timepaass kaise hoga. a: per sir ne kaha tha ki do aur log punjab se aaenge ar: toh dhek na aageyee woh dhek unhe pura punjab seeoff karne aya hai mu: mumji papajiii jab mera hero mere hum dil de chuke ka ajaydevgan chal raha hai toh muje daar ki juhi chawla banne ki kya zaroorat hai tusii fikar na karoo ra: oyeee picturain dhekna band kar main tera koi hero wero nahi hunn samjiii chal abbb mu: hero nahi hai toh tuje main dil toh pagal hai ka shahrukh banakke hi chodonngi .

IN THE FLIGHT

a: yaar yeh toh puri bollywood apne saath leaaihai 😆 ar: woh toh sirf bollywood lai hai aur tuuu har ek jaad aur poodhe har ek pate phool ki photos lekar aya hai 😆 a: haan haan aur tu jo us honey ke samne apne bichadne ka matam mana raha tha ar: yaar atul yeh punjab wali toh booked hai airhostess bhi acha nahi lagrahi hai ab yaar apni aakhri umeed woh 2 african wali ladkiyaan hain a: armaan dhek ab bhi samay hai sudharja hum jahan ja rahe hain woh ek bohot hi strict country hai ar: dhek atul main un sabbb ladkiyoon koooo sabkooooo, date............ nahi karsakta toh kya hua main unhe sirf dhekoonga mu: helllo ji app koi model hain yaaan hotel management ke student ar: hello ji ab main khudki tarifff😳 waise apke dost kaffi ghambhir dikhte hain ra: hi i am rahull mu : rahulll namm toh suna hoga 😳 ar: hi armaaaan mu: wah ji tuse kiske armaaan ho 😳 ar: main wohhhh a: hello ji muskaan ji rahulji m atul .(finally they all reach the muscat shereton)

OUTSIDE THE HOTEL:

everyone together wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

mu: kya baat hai yaar yeh toh shahjhan ke tajmehel jaise hi khoobsoorat hai ra: yahan kaam karne aur seekne ka maja aaega a: woww armaaan dhekkkk kya baat hai yaaar ar: dhek hi toh raha hoon kya figur hai kya baal hai a: kyaaaaa baaal hotel ........ main hotel ki baat karraha hoon tu kya dhek raha hai ar: woh dhekkkk pariiii an: dhekkkkoo ridzsssss kitna sweeeeeetttt aur cuute haiiii ri: haaan di dhek rahi hoon neeli neeli aankheen an : hmmmmm ri: itne shiny baal an: hmmmmmmmm ri: koi model lagta hai an: kyaaaaa model tum kise dhek rahi ho ri : di woh jo muje dhek raha hai an: arrray kaun tum kya bol rahi ho main is chote se puppy ki baat karrahi hoon ........

cheers ( do comment i need atleast 10comments after each part to continue cummon guys even i shuld no na if u guys enjoying or m just writing for me😆)

PART 2

ri: accha woh puppy haan woh bhi cute hi hai .

an: woh bhi matlab tum aur kise dhek rahi ho

ri: di samne dheko woh jo red shirt aur blue jeans main khada hai

a: tu kisko dheke itna blush kar raha hai , dhek armaan sudhar ja yeh apni country nahi hai jhahan inspectors tere pappaji ke dost hain

ar: kya yaar atul main kya use kiss karne jha raha hoon jo muje arrest kar lengay ,meri aakheen hain yaar ab bor mat kar

a: woh dono yahhan hi aa rahi hai lagta hai ajj toh tere saath saath muje bhi galiyaan aur mar milne wali hai

ridzz cums close to atul n forwards her hand for a hand shake

a: nahiiiiiiiiii main kuh nahi kar raha tha yeh hi

ri : confused😕 wat is he saying

ar: yeh tuje marne ke liye nahi hand shake karne ke liye haath agge kar rahi hai (laughing sercastically😆😕) tera toh pata nahi mere thhodi bohaut izaat abhi baki hai .

a: oh sorry woh muje laga hii m atul

ri: hi i am ridhima u can call me ridzz

anjeli introduced her self to atul n armaan

an: shes my sis ridzzz

ar goe snear ridzz : hello😳 m ur desireee

ri: excuse me ???

ar: mera matlab hai m armaaan

ri:ohhh nice namee😳

mu: welcome shelocome hai jiii hume toh ap logon ne hindi movie ke ramu kaka ki tarah side trach kar diya

everyone slooking at each other in confusion

ra: hi m rahul n shes muskannn aur yeh aise hi ulti seedhi bateen karti hai .... i think hume andar jana chahi yeh

everyone walks towards the reception area

ar: hello we all r the new 1st year students

manager: oh yes welcome u guyss we were waiting for u guys, hope u had a safe flight plss be seated n u will be escoted to the breifing room in few minutes till then u can enjoy sum refreshments

ar: wow hotel ka embiance toh amazing hai

ri: hummmm impressing

mu: yeh toh sanjya leela bhansali ke sets se bhi zayda khoobsoorat hai

a: haaaaan hotel ka lawnnn toh bohot hi acha hai

HELLO everyone, everyone turns at once this way plsss n everyone follows her

a: lagti toh strict hai

an: 😕

a: armaaan oye armaaaan tu sun bhi raha hai yan rizds ke sapne bhi dhekna chalu kar diye

ar: hmmmmmmmmmm sapne , kya sapne main chal toh raha hoon na aur haan lagta hai yeh hamrai senior hai aur band bajane wali hai

PLSS BE SEATED HERE

kr: hello everyone shereton welcomes u all hope ap sabki flight acchi rahi main apki senior huun aur yeh hain mere husband shubhankar jo yahan ke head chef bhi hain

shu: hello everyone main promise karta hoon ki main kisi gabar ki tarah strict nahi hoon ap muje apna senior kam aur dost jyada man sakete hai par haan main apka senior hoon toh apko mere instructions mane padengay😉

kr: thanku shubhankar .apke aur 3 faculty members hain jinme main bhi hoon aur mujse bhi apko darne ki zaroorat nahi hai par haan muje har kaam main perfection chahi yeh, apke 3rd faculty member leave par hain toh jab woh aaenge aps sab se milenge .ab yeh kuch forms hain jo appko fill karne hain .is forms main apke sab ko apne bare main kuch information bharni hai jaise apko kis cheez sa allergies hain aur app kiss cusiene main sabse confident hain aur bhi kuch sawal hain .ill be back in 5mins

a: hmmmmmm kitna bolti hai

ar: woh bolti hai tabhi toh uske husband ki bolti band hai😆

ri: shhhhhhhhhhhhhh plsss form bharooo

ar: haaan atul shhhhhhhhhhhh kitni baat kartha hai logon ko disturb kar raha hai

ri: 😳 thankss armaan

a: saleee tu apni seeting karne ke liye mera impression bigad raha hai

ar: haa n haan chal abhi bhar form pata wiase bhi sow sawal bharne hain😕😡

AFTER 10MINS

kr: hmmm toh i hope apke forms ready hain

ar: jiii mam

kr: okay toh yeh kiska form hai hmmmmmm rahulll

ra: yes mam

kr: app punja se hain aur apko kise bhi cheez se allery nahi hai aur ap indian cusiene main khudd ko sabse zayda confident samjte hain veryy good

kr: ok yeh hain muskann chadda ka form welll app bhi kise cheez se allergic nahi hain aur ab bhii indian cusiene main khud ko confident manti hain very gud aur apko filmain dhek ne ka bohot shooonk hai ok

mu: ji mam woh punjab main logon ko khane ka aur movies dhekne ka bohot shoonk hai aur sada fav toh shahrunk khan hai aur yeh rahul hai na ......

kr: ok muskan muje pata chal gaya ki apko filmain dhek na ka shoonk hai ab agge badenn😡

mu: ji ji sorry mam

kr: ok yeh hai atul joshi ka form

at: yes yes mam

kr: toh ap sirf vegetarian khana banate hain kyunki apko enviornment ko protect karne ka bohot shoonk hai aur app ko kise bhi janwar ko marna gavara nahi hai okkkk.ok agge badte hain yeh hai ridhima gupta ka form well app ko kise cheez se allergy nahi hai aur abb continental cusiene main specialize karti hain greattttt m impreseed

ri: thanks mammm😳

ar: wah wah kya baat hai yeh toh multitalented bhi hai mumji ko boloonga ghar ka chef nikalde😃

kr: apne kuch kaha armaan mallik

ar: nahi mam nahi sorry

kr: toh ap hi ke bare main pad lete hain well app bakery products aur itilian cusiene main specialize karte haiin aur apne cocktails banane main bhi diploma kiya hai hmmm greattt lekin apko khoon se bohot dar lagta hai itna dar lagta hai ki app apna khoon dhek kar bhi behooz ho jate hain isliye app knifes se door rehte han aur isliye app sirf cleaned pouletry aur fish bansakte hain wellll okk .

everyon giggles😆

kr: hmmm silenence plsss ok toh ab akhri form hai anjeli gupta ka ohhh toh app ridhima gupta ki behan hain ok aur app bhi specialize karti hain italian aur chinese cusiene main greattt .toh mmm very impressed is baar hame bohot hi talented batch meli ha.paar main ap sabko bata doon jin fields main app specialize katre hain apko woh sare cusiene banane padenge hum saaree faculty members woh sab taste karengay aur dhekengay ke woh hamre standards se match karte hain yaan nahi. aur ek baat jisme app specialize karte woh cusiene apse nahi banwaa jaenge apko duusre cusine banae pagengay .

ar: oh god oh god argar muje punkabhi khana banana padda toh mar gaya itnaaaa gheeee dalna padega muje kitne logon ki badduaaen lagengi unki calories increase karne ke liye

kr: welll mr armaaan apko koi choise bhi nahi hai ..... aur atulll apko bh nonverg banana toh padega kyunki hamare yahaan sirf vegetarian log nahi aate hain

a: nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

kr: welll haaaan aur ek baat jo bohot important hai yeh rule apko hamesha yaad rakh na hai ki humare guests hamesha sahi hain app unse kabhi argue nahi karengay .

an: mam kya hame ajj se hi classees attain karne hongay

kr: nahi ajjj app rest kar sakte hain apke liya 2 apartments booked hain ek main ladkiyaan rahengi aur opposite walle apartment main ladke aur apke liye do gadiyaan bhi hain agar ap chahain toh fresh hokar ghoomne ja sakte hain ab aplogon ko hamare manager apke partments main le jaenge .Thank u ab app ja sakte hain meet u guys tomm at 8am. aur haan muje late comers pasand nahi hai .bye

ar: wowwwwww hum itna najdeek rahengay

a: chal armaaan sab agge chlegaye haan aur teri mummyji ko phone karley ki hum pohonch gaye

ar: arry haaaan mummyjiiiiii ......

ar,s mom: hello ammmy tu theek hai na

ar: ji mummiji meroi honey kaise hai

ar,mom: haaan kitni honeyaan hain jabse tu gaya hai yahan akar ro rahi hain

ar: oh ho mummyji main apne gadi ki baat karraha hoon

ar'mom: haan haan baba woh khadi hai garage main aur tu bata sab theek hai na

ar: mummy ji maine apke liye bahu dhoond li hai

ar'mom: dhek ammy tune kitni baar aisa bola hai aur main khushi main kitne bar unki ghar chali jati hoon rishte ke liye itna baar alag alag size ke kade bhi banwa hain ki ab jewellers bhi muje doubt ki nazar se dhekte hain aur mere un ladkiyoon ke ghar poohonchne ke pehle hi tu unse breakup kar deta hai isbar jab kuch final hoga tab bolna

ar: mummji is baar tusi card chap walo

ar'mom: theek hai theek main ab tu padaeee main dhyan laga main aaongi tab dhekengay

ar: saastriakall mummyji papaji ko bol de na maine phone kiya tha.

manager: toh yeh hai apke apartments

everyone together wowwwwwwwwwwwwwww (except armaan n anjeli)

cheers!

promo : armaaan hears a knock at the door at 12.30 am in the night the door to see his ladylove dressed in a white satin nightyyy looking like a princess next scene both r siting with on the couch sipping their cup of coffeee ...............

PART 3

armaaan : main is pink aur purple wall wale ghar main nahin rahoonga

anjeli: aur main is grey walls aur boring black furniture wale ghar main nahi rahoongi .

atul: tu yahhan dhek aur anjeli ji app wahan dekiyee

armaan: ooohhhh toh yeh hamara ghar hai not badd ajdust karllonga

everyone entered their respective houses

in the guys house :

armaaan: dheko yeh toh hua mera room ab tum dono decide karlo kisko kaunsa room chahiyeh haan bhai abb itne bade hogaye ho jada ladna matt haan todaloo (n shut his door)

atul: bada ayya lado mat huhhh!!!😡.dheko rahull muje toh woh gallery wala hi room lena padega nahitoh mere paudhe kahaan rahenge na chalo milta huun thodi dher main (he too shut his door)

as rahulw as left with nochoice he went quietly picked up his bags n went in his room.

IN TEH GIRLS APARTMENT:

ri : di kitna accha apartment hai na

an: haan ridzi bohot hi spaceious aur comfortable hai aur in candles ki aroma muje baoht achi lagrahi hai

ri: muskaan yeh tum har ek kidki khol ke kya dhek rahi ho

mu: oyee main yeh dhekrahi hoon ki mere shahrukh khan ka kamra kaun si khidi ke dhikta hai .

ri: arry muskaan tum aisehi time waste kar rahi hoo hamra ghar guya ke ghar ke bilkul opposite hai koi kamra kis bhi khidki se nahi dhikhe ga (kaashhh dhikjata😳)

an: ok girls bohot hogaya chalo ab apne rooms select karlete hain

ri: :muje koi bhi kamra chalega

mu: muje bhi jab koi khidki koi darwaja muje apne hero ki a chehra nahi dhikha raha hai toh ki farak pendaa hai.

an: fine toh main jake fresh hojati hoon fir hum kisi local mall main chaltehainn ok girls

ri and mu: haaaan ok

armaaan hears a knock on his door

ar: kya haiiii yaar main soo raha hoon

at: armaan chal na yaar bahar chalte hain kal se toh kaam shuru hojaega

ar: atul dhekk tuje jana hai toh ja muje kuch nahi dhekna hai ja us punjab de putar ko leja

at: ab itna discussion karne se accha hai tu hi chal

ar: tu ab mere 3 ginne tak nahi gaya toh tere paudhoon ke saath tuje bhi bahar phenk dunga

ar: 1........................ 2........................

atul hears the housebell ring

ar:........................ 3

atul: ab kaun aagaya

ar: helllo tu hai yaan gaya hehahhahhah 😈 lagta hai dar gaya

at: ohh ridhima tum aao aaao

ri: hi atull hum log soch rahe the ki kisi mall main ghoom aainnn

at: haan haan chalo main toh reday hoon par ( he raises his voice) PAR KYA HAI NA RI DHI MA ARMAAN BECHARA BOHOT TIRED HAI USE DISTURB NAHI KARTE HAIN OK

ri:😕 ok tum toh chalo

ra: main bhi ready hoon

ar: ( kya ridhima maal jarahi hai muje chodkee nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii)

ar: haan haan chalo chalo main bhi ready hooonnn chalo kya yaar atul tuje kaha tha na agar muje need aa ja ee toh bhi utta lena chalo ab jaldi time mat waste karoo kal se toh training shuru ho ja agi

ri: haan chalo😳

at : (hmmmmmmmmmmmm kya baat hai kuch toh gadbad jarrooor hai lagta hai armaan ko fir ek baarr uske type wala pyaar hogya hai)

an: so guys kahan jana hai

ar: malll

an: tum kya yahaan saloon se rehte ho jo tumhe yahan ke mall patahain

ri: okok chalo us manager ko poochte hain

at: haan ridhima yeh best idea hai dheko woh raha manager.. hello sir hame yahan ghoomne jana hai hosake toh kisi mall main

manager: ok yahan paas main hi ek bohot famous mall hai app logon ke liye 2 gadiyaan khadihain drivers appko lejaeenge

ar: ok kool thanku sir

an: toh boys tumlog us gadi main chalo hum sab is gadi main atte hain

ri: ooooooooo no diii main mera mobile uppar hi bhool aaaii hoon

an: o no ridzz ab rehne do tumhe kaun phone karega

ri: nahi di woh dad ka phone aane wala tha

an: oh god ridzss muje bohot bhook lagihai

ra and muskaan: hamee bhiiiiiii

at: koi problem nahi main rukta hoon ridzz

ar:: aise akise hosakta hai atulll yaar abhi toh tuuu ghar main bhook se behoosh horaha tha na ja tu bhi ja ............😊 main rukta hoon aaaaa ofcourseee ifff iff u dnt mind ridzz i means ridhima

at: haan haan muje chakar 😉 bohot charkar aa rahe hainn chalo chalo

an: fine then armaan tum yahan ruka hum sab chalte hain tum dono hame join karlena bye ridzz ( they all leave)

ri: 😳 di di ruko

ar: ab di toh chalegaiii main hoon bolo kya kaam hai

ri: nahi kuch nahi main mobile leke atti hoon

ar: jaldi anna

ri: 😳 hmmmm

ar to himslef : badi sonii kudi haii is baar tohh final kada iskeleyeh hi banwaoonga buss

ri: lets go armaaan

ar: after u mam

they both walk towards the car n armaan opens the door for ridhima .ridhima is so lost in his eyes tht she fails to notice a stone n trips over it n lands in armaans armss. both get lost in their dream land .armaaan had never seen a girl as beautifull as this one he left lucky to have the girl of his dreams in his armss .ridzs felt tht she had afllen in the hands of a greekgod and she still felt very secured as she knew he wuld never let her slip.

ar: tum theek hona

ri:hmmmmmm😳

driver: sir chaleen ar: haaan haan chaloo

ar: sambhalkar okay

ri: thanks armaaan

after 15mins drive they both reach the mall

ar: wow this is beautifull

ri:haan mall ka embiance kafi accha hai par di aur baki sab log kahaan hain

ar: ab un sabko toh bhook se chakar a rahethe toh sab food court main hi honnge

ri: haan chalo

ar: toh kya tumhe main pasand matalab tumhe kya pasand hai

ri: kya pasand hai matlab

ar: matlab generally

ri: generallly matlab hmmmmmmmmm accha chodo woh dheko wolog wahaan hain

ar: (ooooo no armaan itna jaldi naho poonchna hai yeh sab god bach gaya nahi toh woh muje desperate samajti thi) haan haan chaloo

ri: hiiiiiiii diiiiiii wow sab kha rahe hain ab mujebhi bhook lag rahi hai

at: arrayy yaar armaannnnnnn itni dher laggaii bohot traffic tha kya😆😉

ar stuffing a french frie in his mouth : array yaar tu kha na itna sooch mat aur yeh kya mere liye kuch order nahi kiya 😡

at: arry yaar badakta kyuun hai ridzz hain na tum dono kuch khalo

ar: haan haan thek hai main french fries aur coldcoffee leke atta hoon .ridhima tumhe kya chahiyee

ri: main bhi wohi same

ar: (oye hoye kya baat hai abhi se choise bhi itni same hai ) ok lata hoon

after an hour everyone heads back to the apartment

IN THE LIFT

mu: tu kabhi kabhi muje dhek lega na toh tuje eye problem naho hojaega

ra: tu try karti reh ok ...itni baar bola hai yeh filmain chod de dhekna jo film dhekti hai sab aakar mujpe ajjmati hai

ar: kya rahul itna kya bhaw karaha hai

ra : tuje bada bura lag raha hai toh tu use dhek lena

at: ab kya woh kissi aur ko dhekhega

ar: tu atul tu beta ghar chal tere paudhoon main pani bhi dalna haina ( ruk aaj itna pani daaloonga ki jaad bina swimming costume ke swimming karte huae nazar aangay)

an: ok guy tum log ladlo main ja rahi hoon muje sona hai

ra: haan chalo gudnight everyone kal first day hai

ar: bye gn everyone ( n he winks at ridhima )

ri: gudnight😳

an: ab chalo ridz door band karna hai tum dono kya poori raat gn or sweetdreams hi bolte rahogay

at: an chal yaar tu darwaza band karega tabhi hi uski night gud hogi aur woh sweetwale dreams thekhegi

both forcefully shut the door ... after an hour

ridhima tried everything but kept tossing n turning on her bed she kept thinking abt her prince charming she knew she had fallen head over heels for him but wasnnt yet sure as she thought it was too soon to decide anything .his thoughts unwantedly kept her awake she finally woke up to drink a cup of warm milk

ri: dood pi leti hoon fir shayad neend aajaeegi mom toh hamesha sone se pehle dhood deti thi shayad neend aaja eee. onoooo fridge main to dhood hi nahi hai ab kya karrooon .... armaan se poochoon😳 nahi yeh kya hraha hai armman se hi kyunnn ... sleeping pills leleti hoon .. par fir kall tho first day hai late hojaoongi armaan sehi poonch leti hoon ..... par armman se hii kyooon .unable to avoid the battle between her heart n her brain she finally got up from the couch......... ok armaan se hi kyoon atul yaah rahul bhi toh darwaja kol sakte hain na hmm....

after gathering lots of courage she rings their door bell n closing her eyes she turns around facing her back on theirdoor .

ri: oh god armma hi door kholee plsss

ar: yeh itni rraaat ko kaun aya hai

at: yeh kaun aya hai ab

ARMAANNNNNNN darwaja khol main nahi ootoonga

ar: atulll ajjj toh tuje jaan se mar daloonga phele bhi tune muje sone nahi diya hai

at: toh theek hai jo bhi hai wapas chala jaaegaa ya jaaeeegiii .... jane de soojaa

ar: jaaegiiii ridhima hui toh ... nahi nahi raat ko kyoon aaegi par agar aaihotoh...........

ri: shayad sooo gaye honge sab main bhi jati hoon ...... n she walks towards her door just then sumone opens the door n calls RIDHIMA her eyes widens heart skips a beat n she stops.........................

hello guys,

i just wanna apologise for discontinuing my ff as i just cant write or imagine anymore n everyone verywelll nos the reason😭

thankss for reading

n sorrryy once again😭

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Posted: 17 years ago
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itna bura likha kya no comment at all 😭 anyways thanks to ppl who read 😊
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hey dont think its bad........
its nice hatke hai 😉 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
continue soon
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hey its not bad its nice
n atul faints in armaan's lap 😆
that was good
n africa thing good yaar
do updateeeeeeeeeeeee
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hey, do continue, sounds really interesting
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hey thankss a lot shalika,ash n sea_ nyx m realllyyyy gladdd 😳
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hey ur ff sounds really interesting.
I just loved it 👏 👏 👏
Do continue soon
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Wooow, Pls continue Soon! 👏
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Originally posted by: cutesam

hey ur ff sounds really interesting.
I just loved it 👏 👏 👏
Do continue soon

thank u soooo much m really glad u liked it😛

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Originally posted by: rockin_humz

ohh please cont!! 😃 😃

thanks for reading will continue sooonnn😃

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