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Posted: 19 years ago
suspense opened

😆 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey gr8 part ....see i was half right in thnking that it might be somone else......

anyway gr8 part....cont soon....

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: ritu29

hey gr8 part ....see i was half right in thnking that it might be somone else......

anyway gr8 part....cont soon....

<RITU>

our thoughts resembles a lot 😆😆

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: touchmenot

main maartii bhi bohat achaa hoon.......



😆 Ritu Ji , it seems Saniya tume maregi --

Just kiddin gals
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Posted: 19 years ago
awesome...pls continue soon. i want to know how kripa takes to mishti.
touchmenot thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
i ll post next part soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
great work
contiue soon 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago

Mishti and angad ended their talk and they drive to angad's house. Angad enters the house and called kripa…. Kripa reached after few minutes. Angad got angry to keep him waiting….

A: kripa, itni der kyun lagi ane mein, main tumhein bula raha tha na……..

K: main tumhari nokar nahi hoon, ke tum bullao gi aur main dori chali aoon gi…

Angad noticed that the sindoor is not in her maang and she isn't wearing mangalsutar and was dressed in a white saari… (Symbol of sadness)

A: angad fine… meet my SPECIAL FRIEND mishti….

M: hi kripa……. How r u?

K: upset…. And regretting….

Angad was hurt by her words… while mishti remain silent.

A: (gave a revolting look to kripa) main fresh ho kar aata hoon….

Mishti and kripa were alone…. And though they start chatting…

M: angad ne bataya ke tum aur wo…….

K: mishti plz……. I don't wanna share my personal life's matters with u….

M: well it's ok…….. ok tell me something about u……….

K: mere baare main jaan kar kia karo gi……..

M: times pass ho jaye ga aur we cud be friends…..

K: friends??? Friends ke maamle main meri kismet bohat buri hai. Angad ko bhi Kabhi friend banaya tha…….. Dekho rishta hi badal gaya….

Angad was listening this and was his hearts gets wound after kripa's each word.

A: mishti… main bahar ja raha hoon…. Tum bhi chalo… coffee piyein Ge…


Kripa was kinda jealous when angad hugged mishti.

Angad and mishti went to a coffee shop and was upset…..

M: ab kia hua, itne upset kyon ho…..

A: mishti mujhe nahi lagta kripa ko Koi pare ga…..

M: wat rubbish…… jab tum ne mujhe hug kia tha to kripa ki ankhon main jealousness saaf, saaf dekh rahi thi…. And u know wat I think that she loves u…….

A: jhooti taslee mat do….

M: leave that topic and aaj tum kissi bhi tarah kripa ko meri party mein zaroor le aana …..

A: party???

M: actually mere anne ki khushi main humare college ke group neek party rakhi hai aur jo ke Xings clib main hai….

A: I will try to convince her to come….

M: u have to……. By hook or by crook.

Angad leaves mishti her home and drives back to his home….. And start convincing kripa to go…..

A: kripa plz …..

K: no main nahi jaana chahti. And that's final……

A:mere parivaar ki beizzati karne ka ek moka jo mil gaya hai tumhein………

K: beizzati ?????????

A: agar main tumhare saath nahi gaya to mere friends and un mein se kuch papa kekareebi friends aur humare relatives ko ajeeb lage ga aur papa ko ye baat pata chal gayee to….

Angad knows that his reason was stupid but had a gr8 effect

K: theek hai theek hai…. Main chaloon gi…

Kripa start leaving when angad called her

A: aur haan…. Dress like a married woman. 4 god sake………….


PREVIEW: kripa is jealous and angad is happy to get his plan successful.

Edited by touchmenot - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
awesome part
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👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
i neede more and longer.. 😆 keep it up!

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