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Posted: 19 years ago
shary kripa iz not stupid 😡 shez maha stupid 😡
anywayz mine blowing cont soon 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: ~Angel~

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saniya pllz don't touch me aunty her bf'z will die

jaldi cont karo yaar

koi baat nahi bf mar jaye ga to main ekta k0 bulla kar usse zinda kar loon gi.........

ritu don't u worry....

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Posted: 19 years ago

It is small part coz I m just back from school and I m very tired. I will try to write bigger part later.

IN THE BEDROOM

Kripa took bath and changed into a red sari with glitters and beadwork on it. She wears jhumkas 4 inches long. And a necklace of white gold… some matching bangles wid it. She was about to leave the room when angad stopped her. He moved forward and applied sindoor in her maang. And tied mangalsutar.

A: main jaanta hoon ke tum mujhse pyaar nahi karti…. Par main nahi chahta ke mere parents ko is baat ki zara si bhi kabr ho……. So plz apni bhaawnaoon ke saath saath kissi ki armaanon ki bhi qadar kar lena……

Kripa was speechless. And that she didn't utter a word.

Kripa and angad got ready and went down to have breakfast…… they touches feet of naina & dilip

N: aa gaye tum log ab chalo nashta kar lo.

D: beta! Aaj hum New York ja rahe hain. 4 a year

A: dad aaj hi aur pooray saal ke liye……… why…………

D: beta- new york main humare niya project hai aur ek saal to lag hi jaye ga……..

N: aur waise bhi hum ne yeh soch ke delay kia ke tu akela ho jaye ga……… par ab kripa hai na tere saath…… ab chal gaari nikal aur humein airport par chor.

Angad was upset that his mom dad are leaving him with kripa. But it was gud 2 coz the won't got to now that wat relation kripa and angad are sharing…..

Angad went to the airport wid kripa and his parents of course and his parents left sadly………….. angad went back to home and ask kripa that she shud go home and he have to go coz of some work…… he left and kripa was alone at home.

Angad went to the beach that his cud share his sadness wid the waves the wind….. the shore the pebbles the silence there the loneliness there….

a song was played:

(Sach keh raha hai deewana dil
Dil na kisi se lagaana) - 2
Jhoothe hai yaar ke vaade saare
Jhoothi hai pyaar ki kasmein
Maine har lamha jisse chaaha, jisse pooja
Ussi ne yaaron mera dil
Toda toda, tanha tanha chhoda
Sach keh raha hai deewana dil
Dil na kisi se lagaana
Jhoothe hai yaar ke vaade saare
Jhoothi hai pyaar ki kasmein
Maine har lamha jisse chaaha, jisse pooja
Ussi ne yaaron mera dil
Toda toda, tanha tanha chhoda
Mausam mausam tha suhaana bada
Mausam mausam maine dekha usse
Hua main paagal bas pal bhar mein, aah
Mausam mausam tha suhaana bada
Mausam mausam maine dekha usse
Hua main paagal bas pal bhar mein
Aake basi hai voh mere mann mein
Uski kami hai ab jeevan mein
Voh door hai meri nazron se
Kyoon usse main chaahoon
Oh, sach keh raha hai deewana dil
Dil na kisi se lagaana
Jhoothe hai yaar ke vaade saare
Jhoothi hai pyaar ki kasmein
Maine har lamha jisse chaaha, jisse pooja
Ussi ne yaaron mera dil
Toda toda, tanha tanha chhoda
Sundar sundar voh haseena badi
Sundar sundar main to khone laga
Uske nashe mein bin piye baheka, aah
Sundar sundar voh haseena badi
Sundar sundar main to khone laga
Uske nashe mein bin piye baheka
Ek din usse bhoola doonga main
Uske nishaan mita doonga main
Chaahoonga na main us patthar ko
Jaa usse bata de
(La lai lai lai lai la le
La lai lai lai lai la) - 2
Maine har lamha jisse chaaha, jisse pooja
Ussi ne yaaron mera dil
Toda toda, tanha tanha chhoda

Suddenly a hand was kept on his shoulders…………….

WHO IS THAT PERSON…….????

Edited by touchmenot - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
post ur answer that
who's hand is on angad's shoulder?

HINT: a lady.......
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey gr8 part and offcourse its gonna be kripa's or r u making some one else come in this fanfic like angads ex gf??????????

ANYWAY PLZ CONTINUE SOON

<RITU>
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: ritu29

hey gr8 part and offcourse its gonna be kripa's or r u making some one else come in this fanfic like angads ex gf??????????

ANYWAY PLZ CONTINUE SOON

<RITU>

well ritu

its a secret

and u will find out in next part

Mrs.Fr.. thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
oh bechara angad .............. 😭 😭 😭
nottyangel thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
i think its kripaz mom 😕
cont soon 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
gr8888888888888888 con soon i think its karipa she might relize sth 4 him
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Posted: 19 years ago
very nice
I think its kripas mom
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