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Posted: 19 years ago
that was excellent
😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
wonderful 👏 👏 👏
please contiue soon 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: ~Angel~

that was reallly good
if ur not a pro writer then become one 😆 😆 😆

plz cont soon

professional writer🤢 😕

na baba na........

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Posted: 19 years ago
The day of pheras was there after the lovely couple of aaliyah and Prithvi got married. Kripa was brought to mandap and was settled down. She was looking very gorgeous and she was wearing a light violet lehenga with embroidery on it. And angad was looking as hot as usual. Angad sat down besides her (going to be wife- wait for last rasam) and smiled kripa also smiled back. But her smile was wicked and she thinks.

K: aaj ke raat tumhari khushiyon ki aakiri raat hai. I m sorry

They took pheras and looking to fire angad thought.

A: yeh aag meri Zindagi roshan karde gi.

Kripa thinks: issi aag ne hi meri khushiyaan jala deen ab yeh tumhari khushiyaan jalae gi angad.

SUHAAGRAAT or SACHAI KI RAAT.

Angad comes into the room and saw that kripa was standing. He locks the door. And moves forward he puts off her dupatta and hugs her. Kripa puts her hand on angad's back and…………………………… pushes him. She was having anger in her eyes.

K: dur raho mujhe se samjhte kia ho apne aap ko….. aur mujhe….. ke main tumse pyaar karti hoon. Nahi main tum se pyaar nahi karti…….. nahi karti main tumse pyaar……..

A: kripa yeh kia behudda mazak hai.

K: mazak…. Mazak to Zindagi ne mere saath kia hai…………..

A: agar tum Mujh se pyaar nahi karti thi to shaadi ke liye haan kyon ki Mujh se (screams) agar tum mujh se kehti to main khud shaadi ke liye mana…..

K: angad farz karo agar tumhari shaadi aise kissi insaan ke saath nahi hoti jis se tum pyaar karte ho balke tumhare parivaar ki pasand Koi aur hai to tum kia karte.

A: main ussi se shaadi karta jis se main pyaar karta hoon aur agar usse nahi to kissi se nahi.

K: aur agar tumhari maa tumhare samne apne haath jore to…. Mana kar pao Ge….. Same was happened to me….. galti tumhai bhi hai…. If u have asked me and I have refused so the matter will b ended… but now u have to suffer and stay away from me.

A: theek hai…. Meri galti thi tumhein nahi batana ke main tumse pyaar karta hoon. Par it's a request mere aur tumhare ilawa yeh baat kisi ko maaloom na ho….. plz…..

Kripa was sad and sorry but was angry on him too….. Angad took the pillow and went to sleep on the couch…..

K: yeh ghar tumhara hai aur bed pe tum jao main couch pe so jaoon gi…..

Angad was in anger and let her sleep on couch.

Next morning angad got up wid the knock on the door she was afraid and ran to kripa and tried to wake her up. She was still sleeping he picked her up and put her on the bed and put some stain of lipstick. And the knocking was non-stop. He finally opened the door. Her mother was outside.

N: angad…….. darvaasa kholne main itni der, thoda sudhar jao shaadi ho gayee hai tumhari……… waise kripa kahan hai…….

A: mom, so rahi hai…..

N: (comes inside) wow…. Ab to tumhare bigarne ke chance ziada lag rahe hain…. Naha dho kar nashte ke liye aa jao.

Naina leaves, angad takes a sigh of relief.

A: baap re…. baal baal bacha…. Aur yeh maha rani chain ki neend le rahi hai….

He gets to her and was about to awake her when he saw her innocent face. He kisses her head…..

A: itna sab kuch kia tumne mere saath phir bhi main tum se pyaar karta hoon.

He then makes kripa awake.

A: kripa utho. Utho………

K: mom… sone do na……..

A: mom nahi hai…. Aur agar bhool gayee ho to yaad dila dun ke tumhari shaadi ho chuki hai……

Hearing this kripa awakes and sees herself on bed….. and then notices lipstick on angad's shirt……….

K: angad main bed pe kaise… yeh lipstick ka daagh…. Kia hua tha kal…..

A: kripa kuch nahi hua tha…..

K: (becomes mad and gets down from bed...) angad sach bolo main sach bardaast kar sakti hoon par jhoot nahi….

Angad holds her from shoulder

A: kal kuch nahi hua infact main tumhein 15 min pehle hi yahan bed pe laya hoon aur lipstick ke nishaan main ne mom ke saamne yeh zaahir karne ke liye lagaye ke hum dono ke beech sab normal hai….. aur main itna bura nahi hoon…

He goes to bathroom to take bath and kripa takes a sigh of relief after that……………….

K to herself: angad tum bilkul bure nahi ho, buri to meri kismet hai. Jis ke jaal main tum bhi phas gaye ho….
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Posted: 19 years ago
how sweet ..but plz let kripa fall in love wt angad .cut fights .....hmmmmmmmmmm never seprate them !!!!!!!!!!!!!plz
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: touchmenot

professional writer🤢 😕

na baba na........


Kyun na baba
U write really well
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: cute_face86

how sweet ..but plz let kripa fall in love wt angad .cut fights .....hmmmmmmmmmm never seprate them !!!!!!!!!!!!!plz



Yeas dear PLzzz let her fall in love with Angad

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Posted: 19 years ago
kripa wicked 😕
keep up the good work 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
u have options

- kripa will fall in love wid angad (early) = fan fic's end.

- kripa and angad will fight and will be seprated 4 sometime = ending delayed.
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Posted: 19 years ago
option 1 is better bcoz ....angad loves her so much so she should also fall for him!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😃

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