SS:RK HS prt17pg30 7/21 - Page 13

awesome as usual! 👏😊 pleasee update soon. like ASAP. 😃 can't wait till kanya helps him get better.

hey guys...im back...so sorry for the delay but had midterms 😉...here is the next part 😃😃...dont know if i will update until the end of this week...i have a term paper due on thursday and i havent even started 😕😕😕...its 1/3 of my entire grade 😭😭😭...wishe me luck...and hope u all enjoy this part...looking forward to comments 😛

Note: I'm not at all pleased with how this turned out...hope it didnt disappoint you all too much 😕😕...sorry in advance.

Part 9

Dr- I'm sorry to say, but Mr. Nanda is in a coma.

The next thing Kanya heard was someone yelling out "Kya!?" (What?!)from behind them. Kanya didn't even look to see who it was that said it. Kanya didn't hear anything else, or feel anything else; the only thing she felt was her knees becoming weaker and weaker with each passing second. Kanya's knees felt like they were made of jello and were about to turn into mush at any second, causing her to fall to the ground. Her arm shot out and grabbed the first stable thing it came in contact with. Thankfully for Kanya, it was a chair that she quickly sank into.

Kanya was dazed and just staring at the floor. A coma, Ranbir was in a coma? How was that possible? He had been in an accident, a simple car accident. Yes, she knew that he was hurt, and pretty banged up, but it was a car accident. How could a car accident be so serious that it had caused him to go into a coma? He was supposed to be alright, he was supposed to be like the hundreds of other people that were involved in car accidents everyday. He was supposed to just be checked out, given a few stitches, a few pain pills and then sent home. He wasn't supposed to have surgery, IV medications, oxygen tanks or monitors attached to him. He sure as hell wasn't supposed to be in a coma.

Kanya could hear mixed voices over her head, but she couldn't understand what they were saying. She knew that doctor had to be talking to someone about Ranbir because that was the only thing that was registering in her mind. She finally head someone call out to her, and the next thing she knew someone was shaking her, from the sound of the voice it was Ranbir's mom.

M- Kanya! Kanya yeh kya hogaya?! Yeh kya hogaya?! Ranbir… (Kanya! Kanya, what happened?! How did this happed?!)

Malika kept shaking Kanya by the shoulders trying to get her to say something. Kanya was still some what lost in her own thoughts.

Dr- Aap log yahi rukiyeh, hum abhi Ranbir ko room mein settle kaar rahe hai. Jaab saab tayar hojayega, main aake aapko bula lunga. Lekin haan, ek baath hai…room mein Ranbir ke saath zyada se zyada doh log ruk sakte hai, usse zyada nahin, hospital ki policy hai…I'm sorry. (You guys wait here, we are getting Ranbir settled into his new room. There is one more thing...at the most we can have two people stay in the room with him, no more, it's hospital policey...I'm sorry.)

Saying that the doctor left to check up on Ranbir, leaving Kanya and the Nanda's in the hall. Malika was crying hysterically as Aditya and Aayan tried to comfort her. Kanya could hear them whispering how they couldn't tell Big D about Ranbir condition. Her blood pressure had already spiked once after she heard that Ranbir had been in a accident had to have an operation. If Big D heard that Ranbir was in a coma, they would end up with her in the hospital too, probably due to a heart attack. Big D was a strong woman but there was no way she would be able to handle Ranbir's situation. Kanya was brought out of her trance-like state when she heard Malika say a prayer for Ranbir.

M- Hay Bagwan, Ranbir mera saab kuch hai, usse mujhse alag maat ki jiyeh. Pehle se hi meri zindagi mein kushiyaan nahin tha. Main Ranbir ke binna marjaungi…marjaungi uske bina! (God, Ranbir is my everything, don't take him away from me. My life hasn't seen happiness much. I will die without Ranbir...I'll die!)

Kanya watched her mother like mother-in-law break down in a sobbing pile of flesh. Kanya had not knows Malika Nanda as anything but strong, independent, confident and loving; she had to be, she raised Ranbir. But here she was, weeping for her son. The woman who had not so much as said 'uff' when things got tough was no bawling her eyes out for her son's life. If a mother's love was heart warming, then a mother's tears were heart breaking.

K- I'm sorry Mummy-ji. (Malika and the rest of the Nanda's looked at her) Mujhe maaf kaar dijiyeh. (I'm sorry Mom. Please forgive me.)

M- Kya? (wiping the tears) (What?)

K- Mujhe maaf kaar dijiyeh, main Ranbir ka khayal nahin rak payi. (Please forgive me, I couldn't take care of Ranbir.)

M- Nahin Kanya, iss mein teri kya ghalti hai? Yeh toh saab kismet ki khel hai. (No Kanya, how is this your fault? This is all a game of fate.)

K- Nahin Mummy-ji aap nahin jaante, yeh saab…saab mere vaje se hua hai. Iss saab ke liyeh main zimedar hoon. (she got up) (No Mom, you don't know, all this...all this happened because of me, I am responsible.)

M- Kanya…?

K- Main zimedar hoon, main… (I'm responsible, I'm....)

Kanya found herself doing something that she had been doing since the day before, running away. Once again it was all too much for her, so she ran away from the problem. She heard everyone calling out to her but she didn't stop. As Kanya ran out of the hospital she ran into her family, she literally ran right into her brother.

P- Kanya puttar, tu kahaan jaa rahi hai? Kya hua? Aab jamai raja kaise hai? (Kanya honey, where are you going? What happened? How is jamai raja now?)

(Kanya kept quite)

A- Aare kya hua? Baata naa. (What happened? Tell us.)

K- Woh…achanak Ranbir ki tabiyat bigad gayi thi aur… (Umm...suddenly Ranbir took a turn for the worse and...)

A- Aur…kya? (And...what?)

K- Doctor ne kahaa ke…Ranbir…coma mein hai. (The doctor said that...Ranbir...is in a coma.)

"Kya!?" (What!?) everyone yelled.

H- Jiju coma mein hai…lekin…hua kya? (He is in a coma...but...what happened?)

K- Mujhe kuch nahin paata, main vahaan nahin reh sakti…main…woh Mummy-ji hai andar. (I don't know anything, I can't stay here...I...umm Mom is inside.)

Pooja saw the state that Kanya was in and she knew what was going on in Kanya's head. Pooja knew her baby sister, she had to do something so that Kanya would go to see Ranbir, she would regret it if she didn't.

Pooja- Mamma, papa aap log andar jaiyeh, hum abhi aate hai. (she put an arm around Kanya's shoulder) (Mom, Dad you go inside, we will be right in.)

P- Tum kahaan chali? (Where are you going?)

Pooja- Baas paas mein ek mandir hai, hum ho ke aate hai. (There is a temple near by, we will go there.)

A- Tik hai jaao, lekin sambal ke jaana. (Okay fine, but be careful.)

Pooja- Ji papa. (Yes Dad.)

Anand and Pammi entered the hospital with Harpal behind them. They quickly found Malika sitting on a chair, still waiting for the doctor to come out. They great each other and tried to give some encouraging words to the family, but at this point, it wasn't going to do any good.

Mean while, Pooja guided Kanya by the hand to a mandir that was a few blocks away. They both went and prayed to God for Ranbir's well being and safe recovery. It was on the way back that Pooja decided to talk to Kanya.

Pooja- Kanya, tujhe kya hua hai? Jaab se Ranbir ka accident hua hai, tu itni khoye khoye kyun rehti hai? (Kanya was silent) Dekh Kanya, main jaanti hoon ke kuch toh hai jo tu mujhse chupa rahi hai. Kya baath hai? You know you can tell me anything. (Kanya what happened to you? Ever since Ranbir's accident, why do you seem so distant and lost? Look Kanya, I know that you are hiding something from me. What's the matter? You know you can tell me anything.)

K- Woh Di, Ranbir ka accident, uska coma…saab mere vaje se hua hai. (Di, Ranbir's accident, his coma...everything happened because of me.)

Pooja- Tu aaisa kyun keh rahi hai? Iss mein teri kya ghalti hai? (Why are you saying that? How is this your fault?)

K- Aapko yaad hai, uss officer ne kya kahaa tha? Ke Ranbir shayad dhiyan se gari nahin chale rahe the. (Do you remember what that officer said? That maybe Ranbir wasn't pay attention while he was driving.)

Pooja- Haan toh? (Yeah, so?)

K- Di, accident se pehle, jaab main uske office gayi thi, toh…hum dono ka jhagra hua tha. (Di, before the accident, when I went to his office...we had a fight.)

Pooja- Haan toh, tum dono toh humesha ladte rehte ho. (Yea h so, you two are always fighting.)

K- Nahin, phir jaab woh ghaar aaye the, taab maine… (No, but then when he came home, I...)

Pooja- Ghaar, woh ghaar kaab aaye? Ranbir toh ghaar nahin aaye the. (Home, when did he come home? Ranbir didn't come home.)

K- Nahin Di, woh aaye the, lekin darvaje ke paas hi khada tha, andar nahin aaye. Jaab maine usse dekha, maine…maine…Chunnu ke ek dum paas bait gayi thi. (No Di, he did come, but he only stood by the door, he didn't come inside. When i saw him, I...I...I sat snuggled up to Chunnu.)

Pooja- Toh… (So...)

K- Toh, office mein humne Chunnu ke barein mein lade the. (So, at the office we fought over Chunnu.)

Pooja- Chunnu kyun? (Why Chunnu?)

K- Kyun ke Ranbir bohot sare anaj shanab bake jaa rahe the. Keh rahe the ke main Chunnu ke saath din bhar rehti hoon. Achanak Chunnu ko lekar mujh pe chila raha tha. Mujhse raha nahin gaya toh maine…dikhaya ke main Chunnu ke saath flirt kaar rahi thi. Issi liyeh woh naraaz hokar chagaya. (Because Ranbir was saying all these things about him. He was saying that I spend 24/7 with Chunnu. All of a sudden he began yelling at me over Chunnu. I couldn't take it so...I showed him that I was flirting with Chunnu. That is why he got upset and left.)

Pooja- Kanya! Tune aaisa kyun kiya? Tujhe nahin paata ke Ranbir tere liyeh kya feel karta hai? (Kanya! Why did you do that? Don't you know how he feel about you?)

K- Woh mere liyeh kya feel karega? Humara toh contract marriage hai. (What is he going to feel about me? We have a contract marriage.)

Pooja- Toh kya hua, yeh bhi toh hosakta hai ke iss contract marriage ke dohran, Ranbir saach mein tere liyeh care karta ho. (So what, it is possible that during this 'contract marriage' facade, Ranbir really began to care for you.)

K- Di…

Pooja- Maine dekha ke Ranbir kitna badal gaya hai…lekin chalo…hum maan bhi lete ke uske dil mein tere liyeh koi feelings nahin hai. Phir bhi, woh tera paati hai. (I have noticed how much Ranbir has changed...but fine...let's say that he has no feelings for you in his heart. Still, he is your husband.)

K- Toh? (So?)

Pooja- Toh Kanya zaara sooch, rishta tum dono ka jaisa bhi ho, tu uski biwi hai. Koi bhi mard yeh bardast nahin karega ke uski biwi kissi aur mard ke saath ghume, maaza karein. (So Kanya, think, how ever your real relationship may be, you are his wife. No man will tolerate his wife going out and having fun with another man.)

K- Woh mera dost hai… (He is my friend...)

Pooja- Haan lekin jitna khayal tu Chunnu ka rakhti hai, aur jitna samay tu usse deti hai, uska hissa bhi tu Ranbir ko nahin dete. Tu zaara sooch, aagar Ranbir kissi ladki ke saath yeh saab karta hota, joh tu Chunnu ke saath karti hai, toh tujhe kaisa lagta? (Yes, but the attention/care that you give Chunnu, if you don't even give 1/4 of that to Ranbir. Think, if Ranbir did the same things that you do with Chunnu, with another girl, how would you feel?)

Kanya fell quite because she had no answer to give; Pooja was right. No matter what kind of relationship she and Ranbir shared, they were still husband and wife. By doing what Kanya had done, she had disrespected Ranbir and their marriage. Even if it was a contract marriage, it was a marriage nonetheless.

K- Di, main kya karoon…main kya karoon? (Di, what should I do...what should I do?)

Pooja- Pehle toh tu jaake Ranbir se mil le. Main jaanti hoon ke tune abhi tak usse milne nahin gaya. (First you have to see Ranbir. I know that you haven't been in to see him yet.)

K- Lekin Di… (But Di...)

Pooja- Dekh, tu jaa aur usse mil le, usse batein kaar. Kehte hai ke jo admi coma mein hai, usse bahar ke awaz sunai deta hai. Kya paata, tere awaz sunke shayad kuch assar ho uss par. (Look, go and meet with him, talk to him. They say that when a person is in a coma, he can hear when people talk to him. Who knows, maybe your voice will have an effect on him. )

K- Main kya kahoongi Di? (What should I say Di?)

Pooja- Baas dil se baath kar, dil se dua mang…dekhna…saab kuch tik hojayega. (Just speak from you heart, pray from your heart...you will see...everything will be fine.)

Without realizing it they had both returned to the hospital. Pooja watched as Kanya went to the small mandir in the hospital to say one more prayer for Ranbir before she went up. Pooja secretly hoped that it would be Kanya's heart talking to Ranbir's heart. She had seen the both of them around each other and they both loved each other, only thing was, they were both too stubborn to admit they cared for the other one. Pooja prayed that it wasn't too late for them.

When Kanya reached Ranbir's room she peered in to see that it was empty. Glancing around for family members she saw that Aditya as on the phone someone saying something or other. Seeing Kanya, Aditya quickly let Kanya know that Malika had gone home with Aayan because Big D was freaking out, and that her family had gone home because Adita was getting very anxious and was having small stomach cramps; they went to look after her. He told her to go in and sit with Ranbir at least until he was able to settle matters over the phone and come back.

Still on the outside looking in, Kanya saw more machines attached to Ranbir. It scared her just to look at him with so many tubes attached to his body. She said a small prayer, took a deep breath and then slowly and nervously, she took one step inside. Walking like a snail Kanya inched her way deeper into the room. She saw Ranbir just laying on the bed; she watched as his chest rose and fell as he breathed. For a few minutes she stood by the foot of the bed, not going any closer. After a while, she found her voice.

K- R…Ranbir? Tum tik toh ho naa? Maine bagwan se prathna ki hai ke tumhe kuch nahin hua hai. (she inched a bit closer) Dekho, main…main janti hoon ke tum yeh saab mujeh saatene ke liyeh kaar rahe ho. Kitne paise diyeh hai tumne doctor ko? Look, this is not fair. Maanti hoon ke maine tumhe gussa dilaya, lekin… Tumhe nahin lagta ke yeh kuch zyada ho raha hai? (R..Ranbir? Are you okay? I prayed to God that nothing will happen to you. Look, I...I know that you are doing all this to bug me. How much money have you given the doctors. Look, this is not fair. I admit that I made you mad, but... Don't you think you have taken this too far?)

Kanya slowly began moving closer and closer to Ranbir. There was a small stool by the bed side so she sat down in it. She reached out a shaking hand to touch him but hesitated for a second. Taking a deep breath Kanya took Ranbir's hand into her own. Hey eyes began to tear for the hundredth time since the accident, but like all the other times, she didn't let them fall.

K- Dekho, main jaanti hoon ke tum Ranbir Nanda, business tycoon ho, issi liyeh…I have a deal for you. Tum ut jaao, kehdo ke yeh saab ek natak hai, aur main vada karti hoon ke main gussa nahin karungi. Vaada, paaka vada! Come on Ranbir, bohot hogaya! (I know that you are business tycoon Ranbir Nanda, that is why...I have a deal for you. Wake up, tell me that this was all a set up and I promise I won't get mad at you. Promise, pinky swear. Come on Ranbir, enough is enough!)

Kanya for some reason felt angry, so she let go of his hand and stood up pushing the stool back.

K- Bohot hogaya! Tum mere saath aaisa kyun kaar rahe ho? Maine tumhara kya bigada hai, ke tum mere saat aaisa kaar rahe ho? I'm sorry tik hai. I'm sorry for everything. Aab baas, ut jaao. (her anger was disappearing) Tumhe utna hi hai. Aagar tum nahin ute toh…toh mujhe kaun satayega? Mere saath jhagda kaun karega? (she sat down next to him again) Mujeh two-by-two kaun bulayega? Mujhe chipkali kaun bulayega? (That's it! Why are you doing this to me? What have I done to you, that you are doing this to me? I'm sorry, okay. I'm sorry for everything. Now, just wake up. You have to wake up. If you don't wake up then...then who will bug me? Who will fight with me? Who will call me chipkali and two-by-two?)

Kanya then daringly took her left hand and gingerly ran it over Ranbir's head, caressing him with a gentle touch.

K- Please Ranbir, mere liyeh…tum ut jaao. Please…mere paas vapas aajao. (Please Ranbir, for me...wake up. Please...come back to me.)

Kanya rested her head on the bed where Ranbir's arm was; her forehead just barely touching him. Then Kanya did something that she hadn't allowed herself to do in the past few days; she cried. The tears that she had fought to hold back finally began to flow; it was as if a dam had burst. All of her worry, her tension, her apprehension, and most of all, all of her fear were finally being expressed.

JAZ

aw that was so sweet...
it was good
i loved it...
ps continue after ur exams or midterms...

Jazzu that was awsome...it didn't disappoint at all... very well expressed...best of luck with the exams!!

awww that was sooo te plz wrie more sooon =)

wow jaz i luvd dat part
update soon!!!

wow yaar claps 4 u 👏
Good luck on your exams continue soon!

great update. plz make ranbir better soon!
good luck on your exams and paper
continue sooon 😊

hey that was soooo touching,, i love your FFs 😊 Good luck in school! And I hope you bring RanKan back together now 😃 and give us some romantic RanKan scenes. 😳😆

dat was an awesome update!!!!!!!!!!!!!! plzzzzz continue can'y wait 2 read more 😊