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Posted: 17 years ago
are srry yaar i hd nt comentd on ur 16th prt oh god i forgt nd i ws thnkng tht i hv commentd don't wrry i'll jst commet nd u keep wrkng on it muje ready chahiye okkkkkkk i'll jst comment okkkk
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Posted: 17 years ago
waiting fr ur comment!!!! 😃 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey pragati meri jaan kaisi hai tu fst i am realyyyyyyyyyyy vryyyy srrrrrrrrry fr commentng again soooo late bt kya karu muje laga i hv commentd bt nywys i missd u soooooo mch yaar i am seeing u aftr 5days yaar omg...................
pragati as lke alwys ur prt ws vryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy vryyyyyyyyyyyyy cute yaar absolutly jst lvd it i am alwys speechless specially yaar i lvd ur sngs wch u wrote realy nd thnkng its realy true jst perfct mtch wth ech jodi wow armaan e sonia or tina ko ikaldiya how sweet yaar😃chalo isi baat pe kuch meetha ho jaye........he cnt evn stand who evr insult hs jaan aftrall wo uski lfe hai uski hone wali wfe hai wow how romantic yaar nd AA also confessd wow jst wonderful👏
RM ki patri lne pe aa rahi hai nt to far ...........gooooooood nd shub keerti wow lvly couple i mst say nd thy wre so happppy tht their interns gonna be sooooooooon married wow mindblowng nd shashank nd padma chori chori chupke chupke hmmmmmmmmmmmm......vry nce yaar nd lvd d sng soooo romantic evry wre so happpppppppy.................
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now jaldi se cont karo i am waitng......................
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yachna
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: yachna

hey pragati meri jaan kaisi hai tu fst i am realyyyyyyyyyyy vryyyy srrrrrrrrry fr commentng again soooo late bt kya karu muje laga i hv commentd bt nywys i missd u soooooo mch yaar i am seeing u aftr 5days yaar omg...................
pragati as lke alwys ur prt ws vryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy vryyyyyyyyyyyyy cute yaar absolutly jst lvd it i am alwys speechless specially yaar i lvd ur sngs wch u wrote realy nd thnkng its realy true jst perfct mtch wth ech jodi wow armaan e sonia or tina ko ikaldiya how sweet yaar😃chalo isi baat pe kuch meetha ho jaye........he cnt evn stand who evr insult hs jaan aftrall wo uski lfe hai uski hone wali wfe hai wow how romantic yaar nd AA also confessd wow jst wonderful👏
RM ki patri lne pe aa rahi hai nt to far ...........gooooooood nd shub keerti wow lvly couple i mst say nd thy wre so happppy tht their interns gonna be sooooooooon married wow mindblowng nd shashank nd padma chori chori chupke chupke hmmmmmmmmmmmm......vry nce yaar nd lvd d sng soooo romantic evry wre so happpppppppy.................
👏
now jaldi se cont karo i am waitng......................
luv u loadzzzzzzzzzzzz
yachna

yach na i am absolutely speechless after reading ur comments..i will surely cont it for you...cnt tell u hw much u all encourage me by the wondeful comments.....so are u ready for part 17???becuz it is gonna be up soon!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago

errmmmmmmm guyss......i am really really realllllllyyyyyyyyyyyyy very sorry for the late update....i will make this part as long as possible

PART 17:

recap-dj playing romantic songs but the couples(KS,AR,AA,RM)are more romantic....AA confess....RM start to have feelings for each other...AR talk to each toher by the language of the eyes and feelings,KS feel happy for the other interns....

AFTER THE PARTY:

THE PARKING LOT:

arm-chalo champ mein tumhe chod deta hoon

an-nahiin...

arm-huh??

an-mera matlab mujhe pataa hai tumhe ridzy ke paas rehna hai...toh mein atul ko chod deti hoon

at-smile

AR look at each other and smile mischievously

armi-nahiin anjali.....mein champ ko chodna chahta hoon

at-tujhe meri chinta kyun hai??tu apni riddhima ke saath jaa na

armi-riddhima,chale??

AA are happy

rid-sure!!!

IN AR'S CAR:

armi-i think champ aur anjali kibeech mein kuch hua hai

ridz-hmm....ur right......

armi-magar vo sab chodo.....aur batao tumhe mera gaana kaisa laga??

ridz-barkhoob

ar-bar wat?

ridz-(laughing)mera matlab bahut accha!!

ar-oyyeee hooyyeee

ridz-armaan

ar-haan??

ridz-please tum bhi mere saath andar chalo na

ar-kahaan andar..jaan mujhe tumhare iraade kuch theek nahiin lag rahe

rid-armaan tum kabhi nahiin

ar- i noe i noe mein kabhi nahiin sudhroonga....but ab yeh meri galti nahiin hai....mein tumhare liye aisa h rahooanga

riddhima-(smiles)mera matlaab tha mere saath ghar chalo

ar-ohh.ook

AA'S CAR:

at-uhh anjali

an-haan atul

at-meri sonia kaisi hai??

an-haann???

at-meri gulaab sonia joh maine tumhe diya tha

an-(laughing)theek hai.,,,seriously atul...tumhe aapne plants ki sivaa aur kuch soojhta bhi hai kya???

at-haan...tum

an(blushes)

at-i luv u anjali

an-i luv u 2 atul!!!

at-toh phir mein chalta hoon..ohk??

an-hmmm.....

at-byee

an-byee....

BACK TO AR:

GUPTA'S REIDENCE:

armi is sitting with padma,shashank and nani...ridz has gone to change

armi-dr.shas

shash-papa ya dad bete

ar-(smiles)mein soch rahaa tha ki ridz ka birthday hai thursday ko....toh kyun na uss din hum meri aur riddhima ki engagement uss hi din rakhe

shash-gud idea armaan beta

padma-kyun na hum riddhima ko suprise de??

ar-wah wah wah!!!!Kya dimaag hai aapka!!

everyone laughs

riddhima enters and so does anjali

rid-toh aap log kya bateein kar rahe the?

armi-kuch nahiin

an-arrey jiju..aap yahaan??

ar-(blushes)haan

an-oyyee....sharmiya mat jija ji

armaan blushes even more

shashank and padma laugh

nani-mere bete ko parishaan mat karo..

armi hugs nani...

an-kya nani...damaad milgaya to beti ko bhul gayi..not fair!!...kyun riddhima

rid-haan di

nani-arrey yeh kya bat hui...tum log sab mere bacche ho

ridz and anjali also hugs her

padma and shashank smile at the cute moment

ar-toh mujhe chalna chahiye

shash-arrey magar beta tum abhi to aye the na

ar-haan magar phir kal sanjeevani jaana hai

shash-ohk beta

padma-mein bhi chalti hoon

ridz-nahiin ma aaj aap mere aur anjali di ki saath humare kamre mein rahngi

anj-haan ridz ki shaadi ke baare me bahut bateein karni hai

AR blush

ridz-haan woh to karni hai magar aur kuch bhi bateein karni hai..kyun di?

an-(confused)huh??

armi-aacha mein toh chalta hoon...byee

everyone-bye!!

ARMAAN'S CAR:

a tear rolls down armi cheeks....he picks up his cell phone and calls sum1

TRING TRIING!!TRING TRIIIINGG!!

stranger-ammy ka phone itne raat ko??kya baat hai(the person gets tensed)kya hua ammy????tu theek toh hai na

armi-haan...bi

shenaz bi-kya hua ammy??toh ro kyun raha hai?

arman-aa mujhe phirse mom and dad milgaye

bi-kaise??

armi-he tells of how shashank and padma told him to call them mom and dad and what nani said...

bi-yeh log hai kaun??

armi-yeh toh aapko tab hi pataa chalega na jab aap yahaan ayegi

bi-magar armaan

armi-nahiin bi aap yahaan aa rahii hain

bi(understands dat he is really missing her)-theek hai..toh kal milte hain

armi-haan!!

they both keep down the phone...

GUPTA RESIDENCE

AR(ANJIE-RIDZY)ROOM:

ridz-di aaj aap itni kush kyun hai

(no padma......she had night duty.....)

an-ridz aaj atul aur maine

ridz-diiii.....ridz jumps up and rushes towards anjali and hug her

ridz-mein apke liye bahut kush hoon

an-aur main tumhare liye

the sister's hug each other

RECAP-sonia and tina are talking...tina tells a shocking thing...every1 congratulates AR...the interns cum to noe abt AA..muskaan visits sanjeevani!!

GUYS I HOPE THIS WAS LONG!!!!

DID YOU ALL LIKE IT
?????????????

Edited by ammyfan_pragati - 17 years ago
yachna thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
jaldi se wow i am dyng 2 read yaar thnku so mch
choo sweeeeeet of u.....
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Posted: 17 years ago
UPDATED!!!I HAVE TRIED TO PM EVERYONE...IF I HAVE FORGOTTEN TO PM ANYONE PLEASE EXCUSE ME!!!!
yachna thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
pragati yaar bahut acha prt tha or bahut lng bhi koi baat nahi hu hd nt continued snce lng tme no probs u hv coverd it in ths prt yaar nd realy it ws wonderful prt realy lvd it choooooooooooooooo mch .................
muje tumhare iraade thik nahi lag rahe omg it ws dammmmmmmmmmmmm goooooooooooood ......................nd wow thy all wre planning engangmnt prty on ridz birtday nd it wwould be surprise fr her omggggggggggggggg he's soooooooooooooooooooo lvng yaar ...............ridz would be sooooo happppppppppppy..........................nd wow he ws cryng d clld bi nd ridz mom dad his mo dad vryyyyyyyyyyyy nce😛
sooooooooooooooo happpppppppppy.........................
wow nd bi also cmng fr is sake lvd it nd preacp ws dammmmmmmmmm gooooooooooood yaar.............sonia nd tidz shockd nd all wre gvng their wishs 2 bth couples......... nd muski also cmng again in sanjeevani woww fir se wohi mohol wow cnt wait thnku sooooooooooooo mch .............
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see dis tme i hv commentd jaldi
luv u loadzzzzzzzzzz
yachu.......
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: yachna

pragati yaar bahut acha prt tha or bahut lng bhi koi baat nahi hu hd nt continued snce lng tme no probs u hv coverd it in ths prt yaar nd realy it ws wonderful prt realy lvd it choooooooooooooooo mch .................
muje tumhare iraade thik nahi lag rahe omg it ws dammmmmmmmmmmmm goooooooooooood ......................nd wow thy all wre planning engangmnt prty on ridz birtday nd it wwould be surprise fr her omggggggggggggggg he's soooooooooooooooooooo lvng yaar ...............ridz would be sooooo happppppppppppy..........................nd wow he ws cryng d clld bi nd ridz mom dad his mo dad vryyyyyyyyyyyy nce😛
sooooooooooooooo happpppppppppy.........................
wow nd bi also cmng fr is sake lvd it nd preacp ws dammmmmmmmmm gooooooooooood yaar.............sonia nd tidz shockd nd all wre gvng their wishs 2 bth couples......... nd muski also cmng again in sanjeevani woww fir se wohi mohol wow cnt wait thnku sooooooooooooo mch .............
👏
see dis tme i hv commentd jaldi
luv u loadzzzzzzzzzz
yachu.......

awwwww thanku so much yachna di......muski is only umng to visit sanjeevani for an hour or so...

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Posted: 17 years ago
Heyy!!! It was a gr8 part...2 2 sweet...Awwww...Atul n his plants!!! Can't wait for the surprise engagement on Riddhima's b'day!! Do cont. soon...
Love,
Ananya

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