ISHQ VISHQ AR NOTE PG 63 - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sabm786

hey really like your intro do continue

thanks a lot i will continue tommorow

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Posted: 17 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: nix nd soni

nyc intro urmila
havent read ur other ff but wud luv to read dis one
do pm me when u uodate d 1xst part
luv sonia

thanks a lot sonia . i will definetely try to pm u .

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: 14dilmilgaye

luv it yaar.. i think u should continue writing..

thanks a lot i will continue

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Posted: 17 years ago
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i like it pleaseeeeeeeeee continue writing. i can't wait.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: cutelove1111

i like it pleaseeeeeeeeee continue writing. i can't wait.

thanks a lot cutiee i will continue soon

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Posted: 17 years ago
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ok friends here is part 1 hope u enjoy

part 1 A [ introduction]

it is early morning we can see a beautiful bed room in which some one is sleeping holding teady bear and covering the face with total blanket and now a beautiful girl goes and sits beside her

girl :ridzie utho ridzie

ridz[in sleeping voice]: sone dho na sapna plssssss

sa: ridzie i have a surprise for u

r[ suddenly takes off her blanket from her face and we can see a beautiful face with a beautiful smile]: surprise!!!!!!! sapna bathao na kya surprise hai

s: guess

r: hmmmmmmmmmmmm teady bear

s[laughing]: u r not kid ok another last chance if u guess corectly i will give u teady bear

r: sapna mujhe teady bear chahiye acha give me a clue

s: hmmm ok u like that person very much and u r missing.......

r[interrupts]: diiiiiiiiiiiiii sapna di aagayi

s: ha she is going to come in 10 min now u get ready

ridz gets up immediately and spins around sapna and she runs to bathroom

sapna[to herslf]: pagal

after some time ridz comes out and calls sapna

r: sapna what should i wear

s: arey ha i forget to say u something after meeting anjali we all will go to mandir so wear some traditional

r: ok par

s: par war kuch nahi waise bhi hum log kal los angels jaarehe na

r: kya??? me tho ab thak admission bhi nahi liyi

s[laughing]: arey wo me ha ha ha

r[interrupts]: so u got me admission there

s: and ur di also helped

ridz runs after her but sapna closes the door and shouts from out side get ready first

r: me tume baad me dhekloongi

and she wears this

she is looking really great .

mean while we will peep into other house

we can see a messy room covered with clothes and a person sleeping on a bed and the bed is totally covered with some magazines and hot girls pictures and another person with perfect muscles and looking extremely hot comes to the room and yells

person: yo arman utho

ar[still covered with blanket]: arey sone dho na angad ab itni jaldhi bhi kyaa hai

angad: arey arman bool gaya aaj hum mandir jaana he aur tum apna g.f ko good bye bhi bolna he

then we can see a guy with beautiful eyes and with his dimple smile a beautiful face

ar: arey angad ye tum kya bak rahe ho me kyu mera g.f ko good bye kahuunga.

an: lagtha he raath ka beer abhi tak nikli nahi arey yaar hum kal los angels jaana he

ar: omg i forgot i will get ready in 5 min and he will run into bath room and shouts from inside

ar: arey ye mandir ka program kya he

ang: arey yaar hummara sentiment he na pls yaar jaldhi karo

ar: theek he

and after some time he comes out looking extremely hot with cream colour shirt

precap: arman holding a ear ring and shouting for some girl and that girl doesnt notice and we can see angad flirting with sapna.

this is part one A iam very sorry if it bores u plsss tell me frankly to continue or not

Edited by urmila_17 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i loveee it loveeee it loveee itt...angad was my favorite during kyph days and now armaan is my favoritee so i can just imagine the 2 hotties in the same frame ... ahhh...hehe...pleaseee continuee...its greatt 😉

~Janki~
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Posted: 17 years ago
#18
nice ff.....nice starting....i liked it...continue sooon..... do pm me when u update ur ff.....
Rani
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great FF!! 👏 👏 👏 so looks like AR are kind of going to meet!! 😛 please continue soon! 😳

Avanti
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Posted: 17 years ago
#20
its awesome............i love it.........R u planning to show AR fights in this ff??????I would still love to read it.........plzzzzzzz continue sooooooooon & do pm me.............. 😛

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