Tujhe Yaad Na Meri Aayi Prt 6-Pg 1 (13/07

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123abc123

@123abc123

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#31

ooooooooooo
really lkin ur story
great concpt
really nce updte
cnt wait 2 read da nxt part
updte soon 👏

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Sania Khan

@ArmiandRidz4eva

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#32

hiya, just caught up with ur ff, really nice update keep it going looking forward to the next update,

Sania 😃

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sea_nyx

@sea_nyx

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#33

hey tht was really differant and interesting, can't wait to find out wht happns nxt, r the two ppl armi-ridz, r they married? does she have alzhimer's? god so many questions, can't wait 4 the nxt part

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Mariam

@Naina123

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Posted: 17 years ago

#34

Hey guys

Prt 3 is up....sorry for not sending PM's last time....but please read and leave a comment

Luv
Nainu
XXX

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Zainab

@Veiledbeauty

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#35

Reserveddddd!! Whoopiiee, I'm first!

*EDIT*

Omgggggggg!! 🤣

The shower scene was HILARIOUSSSSS!!! Omg 🤣

I can't stop laughing... Hmm... and the part where Ridz goes into the men's changing room 😆😆 Personal experiences, huh? 🤣

But You hadddd to stop right when I was getting lost in the story, Bakri is so mean 😭😭 I want lamba part. Otherwise, I'll stalk you! And kidnap you.. and bring u down here and tie you to the seat and make you write 😈

Okies, well, jaldi update karna!!

Luv
XxX
Bandarya

Edited by Veiledbeauty - 17 years ago

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sea_nyx

@sea_nyx

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#36

tht was just wonderful, i love ur writing style, its so sensitive, and i love the way the story cuts frm the present to the past and vise-versa. of course loved the nok-jhok b/w araan and ridz, do update soon and if pssible make ur posts a bit longer, this is not enough to satisfy our appetites 😆

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Kiara

@perfectpiscean

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+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#37

U know i have a feeling if i comment on dis ff...da effect is gonna get ruined...bt i cant control myself...so here goes:

OMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*JUMPS UP N DOWN....LEFT N RIGHT!*

It was soooo well written!!!!!!

i cant believe u stopeed at such a cliffhanger!!*pouts*

LOL...da towel scene was hilarious!!cudnt stop laffing jus imagining it!! 😆

Also...i luv da way da Old man is telling the Old lady the story...it makes me soooo curious 2 know whu dey r!!

neways...plz plz plz continue soon!! *begging literally!!*

Luv ur ff!!
Marisha

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Kanchan

@kdrs

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#38

Hey, That was fantastic! I wanna know what happened that night!! Plz continue soon.

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123abc123

@123abc123

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#39

wooooooooooooooooow
dat was sooooooo amazingly fantastically great lol
luved ever bit
especailly wen rids strted swearin "You moron! You saala ullu ka patha! Kamina kahi ka!" lol 😆 😆 luved hw u explain everthing in detail
it was great luv it
gd job
updte soon plzzzzz
luv nizma 👏

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Super.woman

@Super.woman

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Posted: 17 years ago

#40

woowwwwwwww............tht was so cute..........plz continue soon...jus read the whole thing cant wait for the next ppart...plz continue soon....i beg u......
luv ur ff
ishiqa