Hina’sFFpt 41(last part)pg145Promopg147 - Page 91

Originally posted by: hinanaziri

Missed u too Yachna

R u done with your exams now?

Hope u did well and thanks for liking the updates

yaar kaha yaar preparations chal rahi hai in 1 mnth yaar abhi to main apni idi ki shaadi mein ho kar ayi hu it ws grt yaar bt realy missd u.........jaldi se update kardo.......i am dyng 2 read ur prt now.........luv uuuuu

hey di
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dat was relllllllllyyyyyyyy like AWESOME 👏
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cont super soooooooooonnnn
luv ya n tak care
mahru

hi hina!! got to read ur fan fic just a few days bac..n whoooaaa!!!m sweeped off..u r a wonderful writer must say..
i met wid an accident last year n m still recoverin frm it..readin ur ff has given me days of joyful readin..thanks a lot!! keep writin.. 😊

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kya antakshari thi, loved each and every song, the songs suited them lot perfectly. 😳
amazing work di 👏 👏
loved it soooooooooooooooo much 😛
plz update soon
love heena 😊

Originally posted by: lookwhoshere

hi hina!! got to read ur fan fic just a few days bac..n whoooaaa!!!m sweeped off..u r a wonderful writer must say..
i met wid an accident last year n m still recoverin frm it..readin ur ff has given me days of joyful readin..thanks a lot!! keep writin.. 😊

Hey thanks for choosing my FF ,now I'll make sure I cheer u up with every update and hope u have super speedy recovery and I wish the very best of everything for u,Can u tell me your name if its not a problem

awesoem hina! really liked it it's just great 👏

Part 34:

While the couples are still dancing

Bua gets all the kids together to go inside as the party is almost done

The boys notice that the kids don't look too happy

Atul goes to Armaan
Arey yaar,ye sab bachey itne udaas kyu lag rahe hai?

Humne itne burey gaaney gaye ?
aur shayad bohot bakwaas dance kiya nai?

Gappu stops by and says
Nahi Armaan bhayya
Aap logo ne to sab acha kiya
Bas hamey kuch karney ka mauka nahi mila

Armaan says Oh!to ye baat hai

He says Thik hai!
Ab is baare me kuch to karna padega!

He then whispers something in Atul's ear and Rahul tries to butt in and hear the secret too

Gappu sees some hope for their fun now

Atul goes and gets the girls and passes on the message to them while Armaan has gone somewhere

Bua,Nani,Shashank and Paddy start walking towards the house with the kids

Atul and the gang turn the kids around and

The oldies turn around when the kids start shouting

and the song plays

Bum bum bole
Masti me dole
Bum bum bole masti me tu dol re

and the kids get all happy and dance with Armaan , Atul and Rahul dressed as clowns

They have a blast with the kids and dance on

Nachle ve Nachle Ve
and other kiddies songs

The girls make sure the kids are thoroughly entertained and have no complains

Shashank and the oldies turn back and sit down to watch the kids loving the dance

Bua goes
Ye Armaan to jadugar hai!
Bacho ko kaise ek pal me hasa deta hai
Nani goes
Atul bhi bacho me kaisa bacha ban gaya dekho?
Kitna hasmukh aur susheel ladka hai!

Paddy listens to them from a distance and smiles to herself and thinks how lucky Anjali and Riddhima are to have chosen Atul and Armaan to share their life with

Shashank goes to Padma?

Aap itni khush kyu laga rahi hai?
Humey bhi bataiye

Paddy goes,

Apne bacho ko khush dekh har maa baap ko khushi hoti hai
Bas isliye!

Shashank agrees and smiles

Bua and Nani look at them smiling and say
Bas ab in dono ko shadi kar leni chahiye!
Phir hamara parivar poora ho jayega!

Shubh and Keerti say to Nani

Bohot sahi socha aapne
Hum bhi soch rahe they ki is baare me kissey baat karey
Sister Padma aur Shashank sir ek doosre ko pasand bhi karte hai,aur sath me bohot ache lagtey hai
Aap in dono ka kuch kijiye Nani!

Bua says
Mai Shashank se baat karoongi
Kab tak wo Smriti ki yaadon ke sahare jiyega
Padma me usko ek bohot acha jeevan sathi mil jayega

They all smile and agree

Bua then says after a lot of dance and masti

Ab bohot ho gaya bacho
Armaan ,ab bas bhi karo
Chalo Riddhima bacho ko andar leke jao

Nani says
Haan ,der ho gayi
Tum sab ko kal subah nikalna bhi hai Mumbai ke liye
Shashank goes Tum matlab?
Aap nahi chal rahi wapas?

Nani says
Beta mai yaha kuch din rehna chahti hoo
Tum teeno doctors apne kaam pe chale jaate ho
Mai ghar me akeli bore ho jaati hoo
Yaha rahoongi kuch din to man behel jayega

Bua insists
Haa Shashank
Maa ji ko kuch din ke liye yaha chod jao
Waise bhi Padma hai na waha
Agar kuch kaam ho to ussey keh dena

Padma knows what they planning at and says
Jee,aap ruk jaiye maa jee
Mai waha sambhaal loongi

Nani and Bua say
Aur hamey yaha kuch plan bhi karna hai

Shahshank and Padma ask
Kya?
Nani says
Wo tum dono ko nahi bata saktey abhi
Anjali kaha ho tum beta
Mujhe kuch zaroori baat karni hai tumse she says
and leaves in search of Anjali

Shashank and Padma
Kya baat ho sakti hai?

Then forget about it

Nani grabs Anjali and takes her in to discuss her action plan

Riddhima and Armaan take all the kids in with Atul

Shubhankar and Keerti help Bua with the kitchen

Muskaan and Rahul clear up outside after the kids leave

While clearing up ,they bump their backs

turn to see each other and

Go into a stare lock

Rahul then says lovingly

Muskaan !

Thanks!

Muskaan goes kisliye?

Mujhe pyaar karney ke liye!

Muskaan looks into his eyes and stares at him in a very romantic way

Rahul then takes her hand and brings it up to his chest

and places her hand on his heart and says

Yaha!

Yaha rehti ho tum aur hamesha rahogi!

Muskaan looks at him with moist eyes and says

Rahul! in a passionate voice

Ye kab aur kaise hua mai nahi jaanti

Par ab tum bhi meri dhadkan banne lagey ho!

They say many things with their eyes

and Atul comes to disturb them

and says

Anjali kaha hai yaar?

Rahul Muskaan ,tum dono ne Anjali ko kahi dekha?

They say nahi!

and Rahul goes,kya timing hai yaar teri!

Atul then says

Shayad andar gayi hogi
Mai dekhta hoo and walks away

and comes back to ask

Waise tum dono yaha kya kar rahe ho?

Rahul smiles at Atul's question and says

Taare gin rahey they! in a sraccastic tone

Atul goes innocently

Oh Acha!
Thik hai,tum log taarey dhoondo,mai Anjali ,mere chand ko dhoondta hoo

Muskaan smiles and says

Rahul,tum taare kaha dhoond rahe they?

Meri aankhon me?

Rahul smiles and Muskaan blushes

They both laugh and get back to the clearing up

All four girls get changed and think of all the happenings at the party

Muskaan thinks of the confession and smiles to herself

Keerti recollects the 'Labon ko Labon se' song and Shubhankar getting freaky and gets all shy

Anjali is planning her dad and Paddy's realtion strategy and then all of a sudden thinks of how Atul cheered for him in the Fashion show
and laughs and says quietly
Atul! Tum
Tum kitne
Kitne paaagal ho!

Riddhima in one corner thinks of many things at a time
and looks at the door and thinks of how Armaan had hijacked her the night before and wishes he could do the same tonite

Armaan in the boys room thinks of the same thing and their cute and romantic night they spent together

Rahul sits in the window and promises himself of
keeping Muskaan happy always and to never let sorrow touch her

Shubh in his pyajamas thinks of
Keerti getting hot in the Husn ke lakho rang song
and goes into fantasy mode

Atul comes and says

Yaar tum sab kya soch rahe ho!

Lagta hai,sab ko kuch na kuch hua hai

Guys,
Itna acha mauka hai yaar
Lets give the girls a surprise!
Raat ka waqt hai aur baki sab so gaye hai!
What say? Chalein ladkiyon ki chutti karne ?

Armaan,Rahul and Shubh first say no!

Then Armaan says,waise idea to acha hai champ
Rahul agrees reluctantly and says
Ha,Mauka bhi hai aur dastoor bhi

Shubhankar says
Guys,nahi
Sab ko pata chal jayega
Mujeh ye thik nahi lag raha!

Atul goes
Kya sir!

Kuch baaki choda hai aapne batane ko abhi?
Har ada and sab jalwe to dikha dale sab ke saamne
Ab bhi koi item baki hai kya?

Shubhankar gets thinking if he really was very open with his dance

The boys then go dramatically

Isshhq Hai!

Shubhankar then says
Guys!
Please!
Mai senior doctor hoo!.....................




Hey guys,
I hope u liked this part
It didn't have much of AR,I know
But the story had to move on with the others too
Paddy and Shash are soon gonna get hitched I guess by the sound of Nani's plans
So watch out for more fun and hungama when the girls give the guys a tit for tat on their prank
All this and much more only in
Hina's FF
Stay tuned
Love u all
and take very good care of yourselves
I'll see u soon
Hina

Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!

I am the 1000th reply on this post

Wohooooooooooooo!👏

Thank you so much everyone to make it so successful and addictive

I love u all from the core of my heart

But sadly we have to finish this FF soon!😭

Ask me why?

hayeeeee hinajeeeeeee mar hi dala apne... hmm me back with my comments

well i agree story has to move on n here all are AR addicts (including me ofcourse 😉 ) n we don't get too happy if we don't have a single AR scene... but i think u did this part very well.. now i m waiting for the prank time 😆 n atul suggesting pranks 😛 wah kya baat hai 😆

-Pari 😳

hi hina di waht a gr8 part loved it as always
and why to finish this ff? 😕