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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome part di!!! is the song 'humko hami se chura lo' from mohobatein???
cont soon
Nikki
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey di
awwwwwwwwwwww...........
dat was MASTprt relllllllllllllllllyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy cuteeeeee 😳
juz luved it 👏
n da song is............tu tu hai wahi dil nay jisay apna kaha............is it 😆
cont super sooooooonnnnnnnnn
luv ya n tak care
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Posted: 17 years ago
amzin prt! cho chweet n cute! so bua noes abt AR! dey r jst cho cute! cntd sn!
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Posted: 17 years ago
Ok guys

I am here now
I'll be updating before the usual time
Matlab in about a couple of hours now
Get ready for the football match!
Edited by hinanaziri - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Super cute part
Plz continue soon!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
Part 28:

Bua shouts out to the nut cases playing with water like crazy

Arey Arey!

Tum log ye kya kar rahe ho?

Riddhima,Armaan tum dono phir se pani ke sath shuru ho gaye

Aur in sab ko bhi apne sath mila liya?

All see Bua shouting at them and gather together to greet her

Bua says

Kya haal bana liya tum logo ne?

Anjali hugs Bua to calm her down and Rahul follows her

Then Anjali introduces Atul

Says Bua Ye Atul hai

Mere , I mean hamare saath hai

Atul feels honoured and says Hello to Bua

Then Rahul pulls Muskaan and says

Bua,

Ye Muskaan hai!

Ye bhi hamare sath Sanjeevani me kaam karti hai

Muskaan feels as if Rahul's introducing her as his girlfriend/partner and keeps looking at him

Rahul knows what Muskaan's thinking and wanted to see her reaction

Then Riddhima says

Bua!

Ye Dr.Shubhankar aur Dr.Keerti,hamare senior doctors

They meet Bua and she notices everyone is in pairs,she then goes

Acha ab chalo , sab andar chalke kapde badal lo

Thand lag jayegi

Tum sab doctors ho ya badmasho ki toli

Badey ajeeb ho,atey hi bheegne lagey

Mujhe to laga tha ki Armaan aur Riddhima hi paagal hai,

Lekin lagta hai poora Sanjeevani masti karne wale doctors se bhara pada hai!

They all laugh and go into the house listening to Bua's sweet caring scolding

One couple at a time walks in hand in hand , drenched in water and love

With Mohabbatein music playing in the background



Early afternoon:

All come out with the kids for a football match, which is a part of the celebration

The boys look hot in their super cool sports gear

The girls look cute and pretty as cheerleaders

And Bua is the referee

They start thinking on the teams and Bua finally decides

Armaan,Atul vs Shubhankar,Rahul she announces

With equal number of little boys with them

After the teams are decided,the girls go opposite ways to support their partners

Riddhima and Anjali sit on one side

And Keerti and Muskaan on the other

The boys show thumbs up to their supporters –the girls

The girls look at each other and show Thumbs down to challengers

The game starts beeeeeeeeep!

Armaan's team scores first within the first few minutes

with Atul hitting the goal

Anjali jumps and runs to hug Atul

Atul is shocked at this unexpected expression of love and goes

Ab to bohot acha khelna padega yaar mujhe!

Anjali smiles and goes back to sit next to Riddhima!

They resume the game

Riddhima notices the glow on her di's face and goes

Di, Kya baat hai?

Aaj bohot khush lag rahi ho?

Aur Atul ko hug,wow!

Anjali blushes and hugs Riddhima and says

Oh Ridzie! I'm in love

Ridz goes

Really!

Di, I am so happy for u!

Tumhari aur Atul ki jodi kitni chweeeeet hai!

Oh di, mujhe to yakeen hi nahi ho raha!

Atul ,ek bohot acha insaan hai,aur tumse bohot pyaar karta hai!

Anjali goes I know

I am really lucky, Ridzie!

They hug again to share their happiness

Atul and Armaan both notice this sisterly hug and look at them and ask whats going on

Ridz winks at Armaan and signals towards Atul and Anjali together!

Armaan goes to Atul,

Abey champ tune mujhe bataya nahi!

Atul shys innocently

Champ,Anjie ko tuney propose kar diya?

Aur wo maan bhi gayi?

Atul goes,

Haan Yaar!

Wo bhi mujhse pyaar karti hai! Armaan!

Hamare pyaar ka iqraar abhi abhi hua hai!

Armaan goes Yayyyyyyy !

And picks Atul up and dances to celebrate their confession

Anjali and Riddhima look at them and smile

And on the other side

Rahul doesn't waste time while Armaan and Atul were busy chatting and scores

Muskaan and Keerti jump to cheer them

Rahul looks at Muskaan cheering and smiles

Muskaan blushes and Keerti notices her blush

While the boys get back to play

Keerti says to Muskaan

Acha laga!

Muskaan goes,Kya ma'm ?innocently

Keerti goes

Yahi ke aapne apne ek tarfa pyar ko bhula kar apni zindagi ko ek naye tarah se shuru karne ka irada kiya!

Muskaan is confused of how Keerti knows all this and goes

Ma'm aap kiski baat kar rahi hai?

Keerti goes

Dr.Muskaan,mai jaanti hoo ki aap kisi se ek tarfa pyar karti thi

Aur jaisa maine socha tha,wo pyar tarfa tha

Aur shayad jissey aap pyaar karti hai ya thi,
wo kisi aur ko pyar karta hai

Dr.Muskaan ,ye zindagi badi ajeeb hai

Hamey hamesha aise mod par lakar chod deti hai,jaha kuch faisley karna zaroori hota hai aur wo faisley bohot mushkil hotey hai

Mujhe khushi hai ki aapne Dr.Rahul ko chunke sahi faisla kiya hai!

Muskaan listens to each word carefully

and analyses Keerti's philosphical view on life

Then

Shubhankar scores the next goal

And Keerti jumps to cheer him and pulls Muskaan to join her

Muskaan is in a confused but relieved state

She thinks to herself

Baato baato me Dr.Keerti ne mujhe ek baat to samjha di

Ki mai Rahul se pyaar karney lagi hoo

Shyad mujhe pehle ehsaas nahi hua,lekin ab

Ab bas mujhe usey batana baaki hai!

And looks at Rahul and smiles in anticipation

Its Half time!

The scores are 1-2

The boys come to freshen up and chat to their partners

Armaan comes and hugs Anjali on her confession

Atul follows and says

Armaan ,ab to Anjali to chod de yaar
Wo teri bhabi hai bhabi!

Armaan goes

Yaar champ,tujhe kitni baar kahoo!

Sali ho ya bhabi,how does it matter?

Anjali goes Sali?

Riddhima looks at Armaan and thinks Sali?

Atul goes Chod na yaar ye Sali bhabi!

And takes Anjali away from there
Anjali goes with him, still thinking about the Sali relation and forgets about it when Atul starts chatting to her about something else

Riddhima says to Armaan

Bach gaye! and sighs

Di chodti nahi warna!

Armaan comes close to her and goes

Di ne chod diya

To ao mai tumhe pakad leta hoo and tries to grab her

Riddhima runs away saying

Armaan ,tum pagal ho

Armaan goes

Ha hoo,tumhara deewana!.........

On the other side

Rahul and Muskaan are having an eye convo

Muskaan is ready to confess now after Keerti made it easy for her , but is not sure how to approach

Rahul senses Muskaan's hesitation and is hints to plenty of ways she cud confess

Muskaan is a bit embarrassed with the awkwardness

While

Keerti goes to Shubh

Bohot acha goal kiya tumne!

Mujhe pata nahi tha ki tum football itna acha khel lete ho!

Shubh goes looking at her sweetly

Mai itna cha khelta to nahi,

Lekin aaj mere sath tum ho to shayad isliye!

Keerti blushes and

Muskaan and Rahul look at them giggle


Bua blows the whistle

Time for second half

Both the teams come on to the field singing

Hum bhi hai josh me,baatein kar hosh me

Sailaro,sailarey,kya bola phir bol rey!

The girls cheer for their teams

Match resumes

Both teams trying real hard

But not able to score a goal till the last 3 minute left

Armaan plans a trick,

While snatching the ball from Rahul ,he goes

Arey Muskaan ke papa yaha Lonavla me kya kar rahe hai

Rahul turns and gives away the ball to Armaan like a fool

Armaan scores with ease and Bua blows the whistle to announce a tie!

Rahul goes

Lekin Bua Armaan ne cheating ki

Bua goes beta its all fair!

Tum bhi kar letey!

Armaan smiles and goes Boooo!

The girls join them on the field and think who will get to score the winning goal


Bua goes

Kyuki mai referee hoo

Aur ye ek friendly match tha

I declare that both teams as winners!

All go Yayyyyyyyyyyy! and start dancing and jumping to celebrate the universal victory

They then play many other games with the kids all afternoon

and have loads of fun with each other and the kids

Then Bua asks all of them to get ready for the main event

All the kids get ready and gather in the marquee with Bua

The boys come out looking dashing in their smart/casual wear

and they wait for the girls to make an entry

Their eyes watch out for them desperately

Finally the girls make an apprearance and the boys are blown away by their super fly looks

They all look very elegant in their party wear

The boys and girls interact and praise each other

Bua goes

Ab hamara pehla item shuru karey?

They go item?

Bua goes ha!

Fashion show!

All smile and love the idea

'coz all think of it as a practice to walk together to the alter on their wedding day

All go into a dream sequence with them dressed as bride and groom and walking up the aisle

Bua goes ready?

They come back to reality and

The boys offer their hands and the girls put their arms round their partners arms and walk up to the ramp to diplay their love,more than their fashion

Bua goes

Is game me ek ladka aur ek ladki jeetegi
Is game me jodiya nahi,individual talent dikhana hai

They all are a bit disappointed but agree for the fun of it

and go up to the stage kind of area

The boys on one side and the girls on the other

Bua goes lets start with the girls

The watchman guy plays the music

The catwalk commences and the boys drool over the girls beauty and talent

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Hope u liked this new idea of a fashion show
I thot its different and its cool to imagine them catwalking nai?
Ok guys,after this extrememly long update,
I won't be able to update on Sunday,since I'm flying back to London,so I'll try and give u 2 updates after this
And will plan a super update on the plane
Ab mera kaam yehi hai
Sara time DMG ke bare me sochti hoo aur updates plan karti hoo,mera kya hoga?
Love u all
Please comment,I will read them and reply individually when I 'm back to my noraml routine
Reply and can u guess ,who the winners of this fashion show wud be?
Lemme know
Take care
Hina


Edited by hinanaziri - 17 years ago
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Of course Armaan && Riddhima are going to win!!!...LOL..Cant wait for the next part...
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Posted: 17 years ago
that was awsommmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm ... superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb........plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
awesoem part
luved it
plzzzzzzzz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
wonderful di
awesome
catwalk 😆 😆
boys will surely faint now 😆 😆
but i feel pity for bua, itne paagalon ke saath 😆
well continue soon huh
good tht muski is abt to confess, n i am super happy for atul anjie 😆
ar rocked as always 👏
sweet update

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