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Posted: 17 years ago
di plz jaldi update karo
mujhe to aapka pura update bahut accha laga
aur mere dimag chalna band ho gaya hai, so can't think of whoz gonna win the show 😕 plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon 😛

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Posted: 17 years ago
Part 29:


Bua is the judge for the fashion show and takes the front seat to assess them

The enigma + sting desrert rose music plays for the girls

The ramp is set ablaze with the girls looking extra hot and sexy and the boys looking mindblowing

The girls let Keerti lead the gang 'coz she's senior

Keerti looks fascinating wearing a light yellow saree with a halter neck blouse and light orange sequence on the borders

Shubhankar cheers her up big time
like a little kid

The boys look at his sweet excitement and go

Ishqqqq Hai!

Shubh gets embarrased and goes,

Boys!Dr.Keerti hamari senior doctor hai!

Aap log bhi un ke liye cheer kijiye

The boys go,sure sir!

and Go

Go Keerti ma'm!

Shubha joins them with a louder cheering tone


Then comes Muskaan

She looks very cute in a black kurti with silver design on the waist and sleeves
With cropped jeans and silver pointed heel sandals

She looks like a baby doll and walks very well till she reaches the edge of the stage

She slips accidently and makes a complete fool of herself

Rahul runs to help her to get up after the fall

While the boys notice this Rahul-Muski attraction

Muskaan holds onto Rahul and struggles to get up and then sits near Bua to rest her aching sprained ankle and is disqualified from the competition

Rahul is upset due to this and doesn't feel like participating himself

But Bua says

Rahul jao wapis stage par,baki ladkiyo ko aney do

Muskaan asks Rahul to go and he leaves reluctantly

Now comes Riddhima looking very gorgeous in a baby pink/cream anarkali dress
Her accesories go really well with her dress
She looks the most elegant of of the girls and sugar sweet

She walks up the ramp really well and gets lots of bigging up from the crowd

Armaan is just spellbound by her beauty and hidden talent
and shouts like crazy for her
Atul looks at him and has a slight thought

Is Armaan falling for Riddhima?

He then says to himself
Shayad Ridz itni achi lag rahi hai ki Armaan usko dekhke dang reh gaya
Warna wo dono,nai!.....

Riddhima is done now and its
Finally Anjali 's turn

She rocks the ramp right from the moment she steps on it

She looks absolutely stunning in a white sleeveless dress and the perfect handbag to go with it

She looks like a supermodel!
with the looks,the fashion and the best style and a very curvy body to carry it off

Atul nearly faints after watching her catwalk

Armaan holds onto him and goes

Sach me Anjie bohot hot lag rahi hai na? to tease Atul

Atul gathers some energy and goes

Abey saley ,Teri bhabi hai.......... and passes out!


All the kids, boys and Bua give the girls a huge round of applause


It's the boys now to exhibit their physique and fashion

The music flips between Tere jiha hor disda and
Mauja hi Mauja for the boys

Its Atul's turn first, but he can't go on stage and has weakened with the Anjali effect struck on him

Anjali's immense beauty has taken away the power from him to think straight, forget walking on the ramp

He goes
I withdraw,mujhe thoda time chahiye apne aap par kaaboo karne ke liye!

Anjali loves his humour and goes Atul!

Tum bohot pagal ho!

And goes to sit next to him,to pacify him

Everyone laughs at Atul and Bua says next contestant please

Armaan goes ok rahul ,tu jaa

Rahul goes,mai kyu?

Tu jaa!

Bua goes Armaan tum ajao,yaha cheating nahi chalegi

Armaan smiles and goes okay!

Armaan walks up
He just looks so Armaan!
Hot, Sexy, and lethal!
He looks awesome in a white short sleeved shirt with dark blue denims

Riddhima looks at him and blushes
Tries to hide behind Bua to control her Armania

Bua feels Riddhima's excitement to see Armaan looking so good
And goes Acha lag raha hai na Armaan?

Riddhima smiles and shys away

Armaan winks at Riddhma teasingly from the stage

Anjali gets suspicious at the two


Shubhankar comes up next

He looks sweet and dynamic in a grey blazer and walks up
with a very unique style

Keerti smiles at him from the audience and he gets all happy to have impressed Keerti

Last but not the least

It's Dr.Rahul's turn

Rahul looks amazingly well dressed for the occasion

He looks like a style icon and walks superbly displaying his excellent sense of fashion

He looks very smart and damn handsome

Muskaan looks at him with eyes wide open and goes

Ye to dikhta bhi acha hai yaar!

Anjali and Riddhima go Kya?

Muskaan goes

Kuch nahi ,kuch nahi!

and says to herself

Ab to koi bhi wajah nahi inkaar ki,mujhe isko batana hi hoga ki mai ispar lattoo ho gayi hoo!



Bua then has the results

She goes up to the stage and says

Thank you !

Aap sab ne ye surprise fashion show ko itna special banaya aur bade dil se isme hissa liya
Sab ne bohot acha kiya aur sab lag bhi bohot ache rahey hai,lekin winner to ek hi ho sakta hai

So
Ladkiyo me winner hai

Any guesses?

Atul shouts

Meri Anjali!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And falls down again

Bua says bilkul sahi

Ladkiyo me Anjali ne sab ki chutti kar di

Atul jumps up in joy and starts dancing like crazy

Anjali goes up to hug Bua and Bua gives her a little box as the winning present and says

Thanks Atul!

Atul gets happy and gives her a sweet smile

Armaan goes Bua

Ladko me?

Of course Mai! and pulls his collar up in arrogance and goes towards the stage

Rahul goes over confident mat ban ,samjha?

Armaan goes,mai nahi to aur kon jeet sakta hai Raoool?

Aur koi itna fit aur handsome hai?

Aur tu to rehne hi de daddu,pata nahi tujhe is show me part leney kisne diya

Rahul smirks and

Bua says

Sorry Armaan!

Lekin is baar Rahul ne tumhe hara diya

Ladko me jeet tey hai

Dr.Rahul!

Muskaan jumps with her sprained leg and shouts

Mujhe pata tha tum hi jeetogey Rahul!

Rahul laughs and goes to the stage to get his present from Bua

Armaan goes Rahul? and looks at Muskaan

Ye kabse tujhe itna acha lagney laga?

Muskaan goes,jabse...,jabse!

Chaddo!

Armaan is annoyed with Rahul winning

Riddhima comes and tells him to be happy for Rahul

Armaan says,

Rahul ke liye,mai khush hoo?

You must be joking!

Riddhima says,ab wo tumse acha lag raha tha,
to usme jhoot kya hai

Wo sach me bohot handsome lag raha tha Armaan!

Armaan makes a weird sad face and goes

Matlab? Mujhse bi acha?

Riddhima goes Haan! in a naughty teasing way

Armaan goes

Mujhse bhi?

Riddhima laughs

Dekhloonga basket tumhe!Armaan says

Rahul,mujhse acha lagta hai tumhe? And makes a 'not fair' upset face

Riddhima giggles ,goes behind him and whispers in his ear

Tum to mere liye duniya me sabse pyaare ho Armaan
Koi tumsa nahin and smiles

Armaan turns to her and says lovingly

Really?

Riddhima nods to say Yes!

Armaan goes

Waise ek baat bataoo?

Tum mere liye is duniya ki sabse khoobsurat ladki ho
Aur

Riddhima says aur?

Mai is duniya ki sabse khoobsurat ladki ka sabse pyaara aashiq! And winks

They both laugh and hug very lightly without the others knowing

The audience congratulate Anjali and Rahul and give them a loud round of applause

Bua then announces the next item

It's a new game of songs

Where the boys get to choose a song for their partner and

When the songs are played

The girls have to guess which boy would have chosen the song

And if they get the name right

They get to dance with that boy on that particular song

All ready and set to start the game

The boys give their choice of songs to play and wish thier partners get it right

Boys and Girls sit opposite each other with space in the middle to dance if their guess is correct


The first song to play is

She's a rockstar- from Humko deewana kar gaye

Anjali goes Atul?

Atul almost faints again

And goes Of course Anjali
U're a rockstar!

They dance in a very sweet and cute way to this song perfect for them

Atul loves praising her
And Anjali loves getting praised
They then sit together,holding hands after dancing

The next song is

I'm in love –from Neal n Nikki

And its from Shubankar

Keerti thinks it might be him,but is not sure

Shubh keeps looking at her giving hints to say his name

Keerti is shy and is She says Shubhankar when the song finishes

She's too late to say his name

Bua says sorry, itna time nahi le saktey! And they are out



Next song is

Tumse hi from Jab We Met

The moment the song begins

Riddhima goes Armaan!

Armaan smiles and is proud that Riddhima knows him so well

They have a cute and romantic dance

Atul and Anjali get suspicious with their closeness and secret romance and look at each other with the same doubt

And give the Sali relation a second thought

Bua smiles to Armaan Riddhima in love.....


Its Rahul and Muskaan left now

The last song to play is

Zara si dil me jaga tu from Jannat

Muskaan goes Rahul! Shyly

Rahul pulls her up to dance boldly and

Rahul sings the whole song to Muskaan passionately

And the song tells her how much he loves her and needs her to love him back

All the others just watch them dance with eyes open wide

Armaan is happy to see Rahul so much in love with Muskaan
and doesn't mind Rahul anymore

Riddhima is happy to see Armaan convinced

Keerti and Shubh smile at them expressing their love openly

And finally when the song ends

And everybody claps loud

Muskaan looks deep into Rahul's eyes

And says the three magical words

Rahul!

I Love You!

Rahul is over the moon and

They both hug very lovingly.......................................


Sorry I'm late,Was busy packing
I liked this part so much,hope u did too
It was cute,don't u think?
Please comment,please plz
I have kept my promise of the 2 updates
And will give you the next part very soon which is quite funny and sweet
See u all
Love u
Take care
Hina
Edited by hinanaziri - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow wow wow hina dii.....i fell head over heels....after this part...it was too cute..anjie n atul suspicious...great baap...loved it... 👏 nad loved the part whr she immidiately understands itz armaan.....presently in ure story the best song that suits AR is "khullam khulla pyar karenge hum dono" hehehehehehheeh lovin it di....i dont knw if ul believe me but sumtyms i mistake ure story for the actual dmg but itz sooo much like dmg epi's....loved every bit of it....n also that scene whr she says haan rahul tumse acha lag raha tha😆😆...that reminded me of an old dmg scene....plz plz plz cont sooon....lovin it👏
Edited by komalsirwani - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey di
awwwwwwwwww.............
dat was cho cho sweeeeeetttttttttt n cuteeeeeeeeeeee 😳
juz luved it 👏
cont super sooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnn
luv ya n tak care
mahru
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: komalsirwani

wow wow wow hina dii.....i fell head over heels....after this part...it was too cute....loved it... 👏 ...i dont knw if ul believe me but sumtyms i mistake ure story for the actual dmg but itz sooo much like dmg epi's....loved every bit of it....n also that scene whr she says haan rahul tumse acha lag raha tha😆😆...that reminded me of an old dmg scene....plz plz plz cont sooon....lovin it👏



Oh Komal ,how sweet
I know,even I do that
I forget of whats going on in the real DMG,I get so into my FF
Ok gotto go
Edited by hinanaziri - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
wah wah wah kya kar diya aapne ... huh?? raita faila diya 👏 👏 *whistles*

gr8 awesome part jee 😳

-Pari 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow di!!!! kya zabardast, mast aur jhakaas update diya hai!!!!continue sooon
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Posted: 17 years ago
Thank you
Thank you
Thank you!!!!!!! Muskaan style

I'm glad I made u all happy
Love it when u all like the update

Raita faila diya?
I know it sounds like a compliment
but what does it actually mean?

Thanks anyway Pari
and Nikki and Swansea
Edited by hinanaziri - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
really a nice one
very nice update please continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
i hadnt read the last 3 parts so finally i did

n i must say total wow
water fight n all...very cute!!!
esp shubh ke liye pani khatam ho gaya 😆 😆 😆

really hina..
uve got magic happenin
luv ur updates n luv wher the story is goin
we hav RM as a couple now..
how sweet 😳

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