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Posted: 17 years ago
#91
Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!! Here is ur big huggie...as promised...🤗...update soon...and cud u post the pg u updated in ur topic box so its easier to navigate?? thnx...by the way...in the promo...u said that the promo may contain misleading info...hmmm...dats interesting...eagerly waiting 4 ur update...
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Posted: 17 years ago
#92
Hiii!! Hina di I just read the first part of your ff!!! It was awesome!! 👏 I'm glad u started it!! Pls update soon!!
Love,
Ananya
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Posted: 17 years ago
#93
cudnt hav been more happier to get a promo..
cant wait for the update
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Posted: 17 years ago
#94
wooooowwwwwwwwwww.......but u really scared me wen u said finale....tht was great........plz continue soon
luv ur ff
ishiqa
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Posted: 17 years ago
#95

Second Part 05/04:

Hum hamesha aise hi rahengey.....

says Armaan with his eyes closed

Riddhima goes sach?

Armaan goes much!

They both smile

Open their eyes and

Riddhima says terrace par chalein?

Armaan goes really? in a very naughty way

Armaan says

Kyu Basket?

Tum aisa kya karne wali ho?

He covers his chest with his hands crossed

and says

Plz mujhe dar lag raha hai tumse!

Tumhare iradey kuch thik nahi lag rahe!

And shouts Arey koi bachao !

Riddhima mujhe attack karne terrace par leke jaa rahi hai!

Riddhima says Shhhhhhhhhhh!

and laughs and says

Armaan chup raho

Ye sab to mujhe kehna chahiye! and shys

Armaan says

Oye Hoye!

Riddhima, mai tum par attack karoonga?

He gives a fake intense look and says

Tum aisa soch bhi kaise sakti ho Basket?

Then smiles cheekily and says

Waise tumhari galti nahi hai

Mai hoo hi!

Riddhima goes kya?

Naughty by nature! and winks

Both laugh again and go

Chalo chalo ,
Isse pehle ke sab hame disturb karne aa jaye!

and go towards the terrace secretly


Meanwhile,while AR were romancing


Rahul comes and goes to the nurse station and everywhere else looking for Muskaan

He bumps into Lovely jee in the corridor

Lovely jee gets all happy
and says
Oji Rahul jee,

Goodmorning and
Thank you !
Mujhe kal ghar chodne ke liye ji!

Rahul goes its ok,sister Lovely in a haste
He's looking for Muskaan like crazy and thinks Lovely might know and asks her
Lovely ji,aapne Dr.Muskaan ko kahi dekha hai?

Lovely goes

Ha ji wo to kabse aa gayi hai
Maine unhe terrace ki taraf jaate hue dekha!

Rahul goes

Thank you,sister Lovely
and goes to himself

Ye Muskaan terrace par kya kar rahi hogi?
and runs to the terrace

Muskaan is standing near the edge of the terrace wall overlooking the road
and is crying like mad
with this song in the background

Dil judey bina hi tutgaye.....
Hath miley bina hi chutgaye.....
Ki likhe ne lekh kismat ne.....
Baar baar rone akhiya.....
Tenu jo na vekhe sakhiya......
Ko le aye aaj kudrat ne.....
.......................

and when the male part of the song plays

Rahul comes to the terrace and sees Muskaan
and the song continues while he is walking towards her as if he is singing the song to her

Chan se jo tootey koi sapna
Jag soona soona laagey
Jag soona soona laagey
Koi rahe na jab apna
Jag soona soona laagey........
jag soona soona laagey.........


and when he reaches Muskaan with moist eyes
She sees him and and just

Hugs him tight..........

Rahul holds Muskaan very close and tries his best to take her pain away

The song plays in the background with all the revolving fast music and when it finshes

Muskaan realises that Rahul is sobbing too

Muskaan slowly loosens her grip on Rahul and says

Sorry Rahul!
Mai sirf apna dard baatna chahti thi

Rahul says sorry mat bol

Aur tu yaha kya kar rahi hai ?
Pata mai tujhe poori Sanjeevani me dhoond raha tha mai!

Muskaan says

Wo mai .....
Mai jab locker room gayi
To maine Armaan aur Riddhima ko sath dekha
Mujh se raha nahi gaya
Aur mai yaha aa gayi !

Rahul goes
Roney ke liye?

Muskaan goes
Mai kya karoo Rahul
Mujhse nahi dekha jaata!
Unka pyar mujhe baar baar apni bebasi ki yaad dilata hai
Mai unka bura nahi chahti
Lekin mai apne dil ke haathon majboor hoo
Mai apne aap ko rok nahi pati
Aur rona khud se aa jata hai

Rahul goes with a very sad face
Muskaan idhar dekh
and holds her face in his hands-Armaan style
and goes

Dekh Muskaan mai jaanta hoo ke
Dil par kisi ka bas nahi chalta
Aur mai ye bhi jaanta hoo ki tu
Armaan aur Riddhima ka kabhi bura nahi chahegi
To ab meri ek baat maanegi?

Muskaan sobbing still and says
Konsi baat?

Rahul says
Ok sun
Armaan ne tujhe kabhi aisa to nahi kaha ki wo tujhse pyaar karta hai?

Muskaan says nahi!

I knew it,he says
Wo hai hi aisa
Muskaan ,wo sab ladkiyo se aise hi flirt ya jo bhi karta hai
Uska nature hi aisa hai
Aur tu usey pyaar samjhne lagi
Isliye maine tujhse pehle hi kaha tha ke uske paas na jana


Lekin lagta hai is baar

he calms down and says

Is baar wo Riddhima se seriously sach me pyaar karta hai!

Muskaan,

Wo Patiala sirf teri help karne gaya tha
Aur tujhe usse pyar ho gaya?

Muskaan ,tujhe pichley kuch dino ko bhulake
Ek nayi tarah se zindagi shuru karni chahiye
Mai jaanta ho ke un dono ko hamesha apne aas paas dekh kar tujhe bura lagta hai
To tu aisa soch ke kabhi Armaan tere saath Punjab gaya hi nahi
Aur us sab ko ek burey sapne ki tarah bhool ja

Muskaan ,agar tu aise hi roti rahi to sab ko shak honey lagega aur tere liye is baat ko bhulana aur muskhil ho jayega

Bas !
Ab tu kuch der shanti se soch
Aur Armaan tujhe kabhi wo pyar nahi de payega jiski tu hakdaar hai
Kyuki wo Riddhima se pyaar karta hai
Is baat ko rab ki marzee samajh kar
jitni jaldi tu accept kar le utna hi acha hai tere aur mere.......
mera matlab sab ke liye

Muskaan says Thanks Rahul
Tumne mera itna sath diya is burey waqt me
Mai tumahare bare me bohot galat sochti thi
Tum itne burey nahi ho and she smiles

Rahul goes
Ab lag rahi hai tu
Wo pehle wali Muskaan jisko .....

Jisko tumse jhagda karne me bohot maza ata tha?
says Muskaan and smiles

Rahul says Ha!
Wohi wali , Jungli Billi !

They share a cute smile then

Muskaan says
Thanks again Rahul !

Mujhe sahi raasta dikhane ke liye
and hugs him again

Rahul is very happy now that Muskaan has sorted out
all the misconceptions she had

And says still hugging

Bas ab tu Armaan ko bhoolja
Wo tere pyaar ke kaabil nahi hai!

Muskaan says
Wo nahi hai ,to phir kon hai?
Rahul says hmm
sochna padega
Tere liye Punjaab da koi munda dhoond lengey!

They both laugh and come out of the hug and turn to the terrace door

Armaan and Riddhima are standing at the door
with a shocked look on Riddhima's face
and Armaan trying to tell Riddhima that
what she heard and saw just now is not his fault!.........


Guys
I know I've left a suspense
but the mystery will be solved in tomorrow's update
I hope u liked this part
now that RM are together although not in love yet but even that shud happen in the near future
Hope u liked the AR romantic and funny moments in this part
Tomorrow will be much happier
and very very funny ,


Love u all
Hina



Edited by hinanaziri - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#96
hey hina omgggggggggggg yaar armaan ws tooooooooooooooooooooo fnny yaar muje tumhare irad ethik nahi lag rahe it ws dammmmmmmmmmmmm goooooooooood yaar terrace par attack nd ridz said ye muje kehna chahiye wow she ws blushng omg yaar nd rahooooooool ws so helpful nd caryng chalo ab sab kuch thik hai bt ye kya fir suspense yaar ek baat batao aap sabko bahut maza ata hai kya suspense suspense khelte rehte ho humare sath nt fair don't hit me............ 👏 ............ 👏 ............ 👏 superb prt...............waise pata hai ridz samaj jayegi ..........armaan ki sangad ka asar......
cont soooooooooon
luv yachna
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Posted: 17 years ago
#97
wonderfull 👏 👏 👏 and funny 😆 😆
and really cute 😳 😳
Hope everything will be fine hope R doesn't mind what M said it wasn't A 's fault afterall
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Posted: 17 years ago
#98
Plz let me know if u liked this part guys and hope were not too bored with more focus on RM
I just did that to stop Muskaan crying and joining in the humour gang in the future
Sorry if this is not what u wanted
But like I said before
All the pain and sorrow today will vanish with Nana's most hilarious act ever tomorrow

Love
Hina
Edited by hinanaziri - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#99
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG how can u leave it as a suspence 😡 😡 😡 n armi poor him he is still trying to say that it is not his fault areeeeeeeeeee it is so clear that muski's love is one sided and hte way they spoke clearly states that it is not armi's fault, poor him although he should be shocked he came out of it n is making ridz understand........


i cna't wait for tom when u'll update again 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
woow di wat an emotional part, just loved it 👏
gr8 scenes of AR and RM. keep up the good work
waiting to know wat ridhima does now, hope she doesn't get angry again 😕
Love heena 😊

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