' Sawaal Zindagi Se 'Part IV (last part) - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Nice one bhoomi dear...this one has quite a twist na.....sorry dear for not com on u're fan-fics..its been so crazy at my end ..will catch up with the other one too..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: seasplash

awwwww wht is uday hiding???
cant wait continue soon..... 😳 😳 😳

Hi Khubu.... Hmmm Uday is hidign an what u will get to know soon..😉

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: togepe30

Was he involved in some way in Aditya's death 😕

hmmm u to ekdam close tot he point.. lets see u like the next part.. yanahi..

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sumitwadhwa

nice story bhoomika..what's the mystery?.. 😳

Hi... thanks for appreicatin g my work.. am glad u liked the story.. about mystery .. as its short story ..mystery will be out soon..😉

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: binidoshi

Nice one bhoomi dear...this one has quite a twist na.....sorry dear for not com on u're fan-fics..its been so crazy at my end ..will catch up with the other one too..

Hi Bini jaanu... tum bhi na.. U must have already read this story na.. readin it again.. dotn know if it has any taste left to read again... .. Its fine u have been busy... even i .. but as i get free I will post a brand new story for sure... 😆.. am also eager to post anew one. with a new headache for u all.... read jo karna hi padega.. atleast tum ko to...😆tc..

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part III
Sanavi: Uday kya hua? Kyun nahi bhagey..(with a certain anguish)Tumhare pass acha mauka tha…chale jatey, meri zindagi ki tabahi kahin na kahin tumse judi hai!
Uday: Tumhe is haal mey dekh kaise jata…(looking straight into her eyes.)
Ajhoba takes Pihu out of the room…Sanavi just doesn't know how to start
Uday: Poocho kya poochna hai…(with a certain softness in his voice)
Sanavi: Before Aditya died , he had called u thrice , & u too had called him a day before that. Aditya never told me he was in touch with u daily. U had been away from our family for long. What had happened, Why after talking to u, Aditya died….My Aditya…died……(her tears pouring endlessly…)..My My Aditya..committed Suicide!!!…(her face turned dull, she felt blank in front..she wiped out her tears, looked at Uday)…Kya hua tha, ? We didn't have financial problems, he was doing fine, our baby was to come into the world, then why did he commit suicide?
Uday's face was still, His eyes filled with tears and a tear drop fell..
Sanavi was silently looking now, she had never seen him cry. They were neighbours & so childhood friends, even when he had proposed her and that time she rejected it saying she doesn't love him, but happily expressed she loved Aditya. He had just congratualted & wished her with a smile… In her entire life she never saw tears in his eyes…
Sanavi : What happen…Uday …Sach batao?
Uday: Sanavi, U knew I loved u. The day when u told me u don't love me, my heart was broken, but when I saw u happily telling me about Aditya & u , I didn't show u my pain but wished u good luck.
After that I had told about u & Aditya to my sister Priyanka. She was very upset, but not for me. She herself was in love with Aditya. I had enquired about this with Aditya, but he told me it was a one sided affair, He loves only u Sanavi.
Sanavi: Aditya never told me this (thinking)…then …?
Uday: Priyanka has been very independent, she was alright & everything seemed normal.
U were also very happy in ur married life. After few months I saw Aditya & Priyanka in a restaurant. I was surprised but Priyanka said it was coincidence. I kept a watch on her from then…aur mera shak sahi nikala..Aditya was going around with Priyanka even after marriage. I argued with Priyanka, but she was sure Aditya loved her truly & she didn't care for anybody else.
Sanavi (in a state of shock): Why didn't u tell me…?
Uday: I had already admitted that I loved u, how would u believe me? Also u were glowing with happiness as u were carrying Aditya 's child..
Sanavi: What did u do after that?
Uday: I was angry with Priyanka, She wouldn't listen, so packed her to shift to Nagpur. I thought now she will be away from all this. But on that day when we met, u told me Aditya has gone to Nagpur for some work. I was shocked. That was also the time when u had told me about the name Pihu..u all have decided.
Sanavi: Ya, I remember…(her heart beating faster)
Uday: The same day I went to Nagpur, Aditya had left till I reached there. I had a big fight with Priyanka. While making her understand I said that now Aditya is going to be father, with Pihu coming in their life. She was shocked. She cried, Pihu was the name with which Aditya fondly called her. She was unaware about ur pregnancy.
Sanavi was Shell Shocked..She remembered how one day she had found a note ,Lots of luv ..My Pihu..and she had asked about it to Aditya, Aditya had then told her..Pihu is the name he has thought for their yet to be born daughter. She felt cheated….She didn't want to hear anymore…but Uday continued..
Uday: She told me Aditya had promised her, he will marry her, he had even told her to abort their child, that's why she did it. Aditya had advised her it will take few months for him to open it to u. Priyanka was totally broken to hear how Aditya had cheated her too. How he had used her. She broke down and went into depression…
Sanavi: So u called him ..after that…right!!
Uday: Yes, I called him, How could he cheat both of u …I was unable to decide what to do. I was unable to break this bitter truth to u. I also felt guilty of not been able to control my sister. Priyanka had to face the consequence, of her doings, she went against her family and now she had lost trust on herself, Aditya was such a respected person in society. She had threatened Aditya …..that's when Aditya called me, I said I will never help him out. I didn't knew what I should do now!
(Sanavi now understood, why Aditya kept on talking good about Uday's family.)
Uday: Priyanka cursed him, she called me up asking for forgivness. Aditya called me, saying Priyanka has said her soul is not happy so even after she dies she will never forgive him and make him pay for his mistakes. She told him she will ruin his name & image in the society, she had proofs. She will malign his so called respectful image. She will write all this in her suicide note for the whole world to know.
Sanavi: That's why Aditya got those nightmares…(thinking into her past)
Uday: Aditya out of fear, committed Suicide. People say strange things happen, he died here, Priyanka was battling for life there. Later she was out of danger.
Sanavi: Ya, u didn't come here, u said she was unwell.(her tears had dried out)
Uday: After his death, I didn't find any reason to hurt u with all this. U respected him more than u loved him, how could I tarnish that image after his death?
A silence with a gripping heat wave seemed to surround them…….Uday went away without saying anything further …Ajhoba came in, he had heard everything…
Sanavi: Ajhoba, …..Aditya….cant do this to me…
Ajhoba: Sorry Sanavi, Thoda isme ka sach main janta tha, Aditya ko Priyanka Shaadi se pehley se pasand thi. Magar phir kya hua, main nahi janpaya. Sanavi, Uday was doing the right thing, not telling u truth! What have we derived, we cant live in peace with Aditya beautiful memories nor can we forget to the extent he cheated u …It surely has been helpful for u to carry on life along with the treasured memories of Aditya, which gave u the needed strength.
Sanavi: Yes Ajhoba..
(Sanavi has a grim look , she feels a pain which she cant express in words atleast to Ajhoba , who's also father to Aditya.)Sanavi respected & loved Aditya before marriage and after marriage she could die for him. After his death she worshipped him as her guide who gave her the strength.... She knew now the real truth was in front of her....


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Posted: 17 years ago
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shocking revelation! gosh!! acha hua pata chal gaya 😡
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi bhoomi just now i finish all 3 parts what a truth god , great wow its too good , i am sorry i am late again. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: togepe30

shocking revelation! gosh!! acha hua pata chal gaya 😡

yup.. ab lets see what is in store with the next last part..😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: monikaseth

Hi bhoomi just now i finish all 3 parts what a truth god , great wow its too good , i am sorry i am late again. 😊

Hi Monika... 😭 why u always say sorry... dosti mey no sorry na...😉.. so its fine .. late reply se no problem.. u appreciate and like am glad ... i also get busy.. and u too r a writer.. who must be loaded with so any thoguhts.. so its fine. take ur time.. and enjoy.. hoep to read ur story with ease.. someday.. there r many parts and i need some time.. i did read the intro duction of the various charcters..😃nice cast

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