FF: Pyar To Hona Hi Tha, NOTE pg15 - Page 4

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Posted: 17 years ago
#31
Why'd u stop writing!!!! continue please...man u got me hooked now and u stopped...not fair!!! continue nishat please!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#32
Amazing part 2 Nishat! 😳 Please continue soon! 😳 And write a longer part! 😃

Love,

Sanyaa ❤️
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Posted: 17 years ago
#33
hey nishat yaar why u hv stop writtn plz cont yaar i ws realy enjoyng it yaar realy ab ayga maza wow cnt wait yaar plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soooooooooooon
luv yachna
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Posted: 17 years ago
#34
fantastic prt! i cnt w8 2 read d nxt prt n noe ridz's reaction!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#35
i jus read both the ps...it was very good...well written...nana is wonderful n very smart hehe...coninue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#36
Lol thanx guys...i did it cos i wanted it to stop at a shocking and interesting moment!
I will probably update the next part today
And Sanya i'll try to make it long! 😆

Komzi...i'm not Atma!...i'm Nishat! 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#37
Awesum part!!
cant wait 2 knoe wat Ridz does nw! 😉

continue soon n IF possible...do pm me (thanx in advance)n if u cnt npz!


Marisha
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Posted: 17 years ago
#38
Thanx Marisha..guys i won't have time to update today or tommorow! i will try on Sunday!

Promo
Riddhima goes high on bhang dancing around like a maniac
Armaan tries to talk to her..
Something will happen while Ridz is dancing....
Dun dun duuuun!!! 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#39
Thanx for the comments guys!

Part 3

Riddhima ran into the middle of the basketball court and sang loudly
'JAI JAI SHIV SHANKAR!!!!!'
Everyone looked around to see Riddhima dancing like mad!
But since they were all drunk they didn't care and started dancing too!
'Haaa Jai jai shiv shankar! kaata lage na kankar!'
She sang stumbling around and making silly faces
'Ke pyala tere naam ka piyaaaa!'
'main gir joungi main mar jaungi'
She started to fall
'Jo tune mujhe taam na liya'
Armaan saw her falling and caught her at the last minute
'Ho..sau..rabh di....'
They stood there for a few minutes staring at eachother
The music had stopped and everyone was staring at Armaan and Riddhima
Armaan realised and let go of Ridz
and started to walk away
'Kya kareheho Armaan?...mujhe chod kar mat jau!'
Armaan was shocked as well as everyone else! He turned around and Riddhima ran up to him an hugged him as tight as she could
'Armaan mujhe kabhi mat chod ke jau...mujhe maaf kardo..'
Armaan was really shocked right now! everyone was staring at them and he didn't know what to do! Riddhima wasn't in her full senses so she didn't really know what was going on
'Riddhima..mujhe kuch samaj me nahin arahahe..tum kya kehrahe ho?'
'Armaan..mujhe maaf kardo please..i..I LOVE YOU!!!'
Now Armaan was really REALLY shocked!!
But he was soooo happy that finally Riddhima confessed her true feelings for him! He slowly wrapped his arms around Riddhima and said into her ears
'I love you too'
And he kissed her forehead
Everyone stood there staring at them two...Anjali thought they always hated each other..Atul thought Armaan didn't like Riddhima...Rahul was heartbroken...Muskaan was just plain shocked!
But most important of all...Padma had heard this...Shashank wasn't there...but Padma was...
Suddenly Nana started shouting with happiness and started playing the drums!
He walked up to AR and said
'Dekha..maine tum dono ke setting karwaiya hai!'
'Nana? aap ne..'Said Riddhima
'Ha!Mujhe chautis natak aur petis film ka experience hai mujko! Kajol aur Ajay ka setting maine karwaithi! Maine!'
Riddhima just blushed and dug her face into Armaans chest
'Mujhe maaf kardo Armaan...main..i don't know what came over me!'
'It's ok...mistakes happen, the most important thing is that you still love me..'
Everyone ran up to AR and started throwing colours at them! Armaan ran up to the water bucket and started loading up his pichkari! He then splashed Riddhima...just like in lonavala except this time with real colours!
They were all dancing madly, but AR couldn't get their eyes off of each other the whole time!
Rahul was extremely mad seeing them two madly in love..
'Riddhima..Armaan! Mujhe laga ki tu...UGHHH!!'
Muskaan saw him really upset and walked over to him
'Oye Rahul beta?...kya hua?'
'Kuch nahi Muskaan...tu kelna!'
'first come with me!'
'Nahi Muskaan..i'm hungry!'
'Tik hai..suit yourself!'
And she skipped away!

'Dekha Anjali? Riddhima ne Armaan ko apni pyaar ka izhaar kardiya hai...tum bhi karo na!'
'Atul!'
'Kya Anjali? maine kuch galat kaha?'
She stormed off and Atul started following her
'Anjali!!!!'
She kept on walking, but she started smiling now..

Armaan was still staring at Riddhima
'Armaan...tum mujhe aise kyun dekrahe ho?..'
She blushed
'Kyunki tum itni beautiful ho...bilkul Aishwariya Rai ki tara!'
'Armaan!'
'Kya?'
She started play hitting him and then ran away
Armaan started following
She ran into a little store room
Armaan went inside there to and closed the door
'Armaan! mere paas mat aana'
She said smiling
'Kyun?'
'Kyunki...'
She stopped at the wall and Armaan was standing so close to her that she couldn't move
They could feel eachothers breath they were so close..
Armaan started running his fingers down her cheek
'Armaan...'
She said melting
'Riddhima...'
He leaned into kiss her when the door opened
They both separated and saw the figure come in
Once they realised who it was they were shocked!


Edited by nishat_1995 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Next part done! Please comment critisize!
Now please don't kill me for stopping at this part! 😆 😆 😆

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