FF: Pyar To Hona Hi Tha, NOTE pg15 - Page 3

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yachna thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#21
hey wow yaar u hv strtd ur new ff it ws damm gooodyaar
now ridz wll gt him bck in her lfe bt whoze tht frm kasauli wow yaar cnt wait cont soon keep goi
lts see wht ridz gonna do .......
luv yachna
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Posted: 17 years ago
#22
Next part coming in about...1 hour and a half!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#23
really gud start 👏
do continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#24
Sorry! it's been more than an hour and a half! My bad! 😆 😆

Thanx for the lovely comments guys!

Part 2
Armaan started walking up to the phone thinking about Riddhima
He picked up the phone
'Hello?'
'Ammy beta?' said a voice
'Mama? kaise ho tum? papa kaise hai? aur Nimmy kaise?
'Haha, hum sab bilkul tik hai! ab batou..woh lirki? jo tumne bhataiyatha?...kya naam hai usska? uhh..ha Riddhima!
Kitni sundar naam hai...kuch hua?'
'Ha mama...bahaut kuch hua..dosti, pyar aur phir takraar..'
'Kya? Armaan betha main kuch samji nahi...tum shaadi ki bare main..'
'Mama...ab humare bheech kuch nahi hai'
'KYA?! par...'
But before she could finish her sentence Muskaan accidently, while dancing, tripped over the phone wire and broke it!
'Sorry Armaan!'
And she danced away

Armaan started walking up to the food table, depressed...Riddhima was there setting out the food
He tried making no eye contact, but couldn't stop himself...he had to talk to her properly
'Armaan'
'Riddhima'
They both chorused together
But only Riddhima had the guts to say something
'Armaan..woh main'
Before she could finish Rahul came up
'Riddhima, aap kuch lenge?'
Armaan started walking away
'Armaan!'
He turned around and looked at her
'Uhh..Rahul ha main kalungi tum jao? ok sab ke saath Holi khelo! main arahi hu!'
'Uh..ok..'
Rahul walked away leaving Armaan and Riddhima alone
'Bolo Riddhima' Said Armaan
'Armaan..main..'
Anjali came up to Armaan and pulled his arm
'Chalo na Armaan! Holi ke din hai aur tum yaha? chalooo!'
She pulled him over away from the food stand
'Di!'
Riddhima got really angry and banged the table!
'Main kya karu? kaise Armaan se bathaau...'
Nana came up
'Bulbul!'
'Kya?' Riddhima replied
'Uh..mera matlab Riddhima, tu yaha kya karaha hai? Apple ke saath kyun nahi kel rahe hai?'
'Nana..main yaha..I'm setting up the food'
'Oh! So have some yourself then!'
He grabbed a ladoo and tried to force it into Riddhima's mouth
'Nahi!! it's ok, main ka lungi'
'Ladoo nahi ka rahi ho tho...'
He picked up a glass of bhang and gave it to her
'Yeh pilo na!'
'Nahi Nana it's ok' she replied
'Nahi! pina tho parega!'
He made her drink it until Riddhima lost her balance and was drunk
Nana thought in his head
'Ab mazaa ayega!...'

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Posted: 17 years ago
#25
awesome nish!

ab to maza hi maza hai 😆
im glad u liked that name 😳

cant wait 4 the nxt part
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Posted: 17 years ago
#26
nishat great job..i luv it..i cant wait for the next part..both parts were beyond excellent..do do contiue.. 😉
TwilightLovee. thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#27
Thanx guys!
What should i call my fanfic?
kdrs thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#28
Hey, Write the next part soon. Plzz Wonder what Ridhima does.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#29
Atma I love you! continue soon!


komzie
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Posted: 17 years ago
#30
😆
😆

wow yaar shai mein abh ayega mazz chalo continue sooon
we r waiting eagerly 😳

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