new ff *Jab Dil Miley*... Part 6 Updated. - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey
dat was interestin yaar
do continue
luv ya n tak care
mahru
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey guys here is part 2.....hope u like it.

Armaan stared wide eyed......no.....no.....he kept on saying to himself.He had to call atul again.he needs to noe what has happened to riddhima.While the phone rang....each new ring made his heart beat faster an faster.........he had the urge to hug riddz right now......urge to brea down in tears and confess to her how she had been in his every breath and every heartbeat in this painful 3 mths.finally Atul picks up.....armaan can no longer hear angi's voice.

At:Hello
A:CHAMP!!
At:Armaan......armaan tu kaisa hai yaar.(he sounder choked like after a cry or smtg)
A:Cahmp riddhimz kaisi hai....?(armaan blurted)
At:woh....woh......riddz.....woh
A:DHEKO CHAMP MERI JAAN JAA RAHI HAI RIDDHIMA KAISI HAI (armaan shouted)
At:(starts to sob)......armaan hamere riddz ko goli lagi hai armaan.....woh....woh apni ahkri saasen gin rahi hai.
Armaan cld not belief his ears......he flet weak.....he flet in this split second,he had lost everything....his soul....his heart ......his world.......he flet empty.A tear rolled down his cheek.He closed his eyes and swallowed hard.It was like he was trying to swallow poison...Oh! indeed he was swallowing the dreadful poison called truth.Just then Atul spoke..
At:armaan......armaan u there.
A:(Stammering)go...go......goli??
At:Ha armaan......riddz ko pata chal gaya that ke tum kasauli mein ho......woh kudh ko rokh nahin saki....yeh teen mahine riddz ke liye kaise beete hai yeh mein hi jaanta hoon ......pal pal mari hai vo.Aur armaan tumhe ridz ki yaad bahi aayi......

Atul felt the anger raising in him and started to speak rudely.

At:haan armaan.....tumhe kyu yaad ayegi....riddz ko sabak jo sikana that tumko.....ek jagre ke liye tumne riddz se....chal chor na yaar.....tumhe kya.

A:(FEELING THE GULIT SHOUTED) ATL RIDDHIMA KO KYA HUA?????

At:(feeling armaans pain)riddz tumhe milne kasauli aa rahi thi .....raste mein uski bus ko goondo ne kabza kar liya ......riddz ek bache ki jaan bachane ki koshish mein bandook ke samne aa gayi aur ussse goli lag gayi.

Armaan heart flet like it had stop breathing.He had ti see riddz now.......hold her ......touch her.
A:ab riddz kaha hai
At:kasauli ke sanjeevani brance mein.

Armaan set there stumped......he thanked god endlessly.....riddz was in his hospital
At: (crying) Armaan ....riddz ko .....
A:meri ridddima ko kuch nahi ho sakta. Mein usse kuch hone hi nahin doonga.

Saying the is her put phone down and speed his car all the way to sanjeevani (kasauli)


Sanjeevani (kasauli)

Armaan ran to the information counter

a:(shivering) yahan riddhima naam ki patient kis ward mein hai.......

Nurse: doctor woh ICU mein hai.....bohot critical hai


Hearing this armaan ran for his life.........riddhima
he reached the ICU.When in.He saw riddz laying on the bed.So peaceful.Eyes closed.........just like an angle.......
Armaan when to her and held her hand.

Precap....riddz open her eyes.....AR talk........Riddz become critical.......

Hey guys i hope u enjoyed it......ill post the next part by tonight or latest by tmw........thks ......plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do comment. 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thks you guys next update will be tmw i promise. 😊 😊 .
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow.tht was kool.....atleast d stupid realizes tht he did such a big mistake..well precap was 22 gud.hope shell be well again....plz continue soon.........
luv ur ff
ishiqa
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Wow that was AWESOME. 👏 👏
👏 👏 Do continue soon plzzzzzzzzzzz.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow yaar armaan ko ab samaj aa gaya hoga
ki ridz cnt lve wthout hm ridz ko goli
plzz cotn soon armaan chappad fad ke royga poor
kaise rahega cont soon
luv yachna
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey im bak her is part 3.

Riddhima hands were as cold as ice.......she was looking so pale
Armaan knew riddz did not deserve this....
He looked at her.

A:Riddhima......riddhima....aakein kolo dheko tumhara armaan tumare samne hai .....riddhima...plz mujhe maaf kardo......plz plz plz(he starts to cry badly)

Armaan is in the ward for almost 4 hours now its in the middle of the night......the hospital has pin drop silence.
Armaan earlier talked ti the doctor in charged of riddz and he told him that if riddz does not wake up by morning she will not survive.......hearing this armaan has hold riddz hand and not blinked or moved for her side was the last 4 hrs....
A:(Thinking)....bagwan meri jaan lelo....par meri riddz ko theek kar do.....woh meri zindagi.....mein uske bhina nahi reh sakta.Agar tumne riddz ko nahi uthaiya to mein bhi nahi bachuga......riddz ke saath satth tumhe mujhe bhi apne pass bulana hoga.
Just as he was thinking this he hard riddz say

R:Armaan (she wispered)
Armaan immidiatly looked up.......came closer to her.....his hand are on her sholders and he is very close toher face
A:Riddhima.....riddhima...mein yahan hoon aakhein kolo....plz riddhima

Riddhima slowly opened her eyes .....she just kept on looking into the pair of eyes in front of her........she had been longing to see these eyes for the past 3 months .......there has not been a moment where she had not missed this scent......she flet a mixture of emotion in her raising at one time.......anger as for leaving her.........undying love that has been buried in her for the pass 3 mths........lust as to hold him close to her an never let him go......not even when the end of the world arrives......sadness as to see tears in his eyes.....and releif as to finally see armaan her armaan.

R:(Starts to cry)......armaan in sorry....mujhe maaf kardo....plz mujhe choor ke khabhi mat jana.....yeh teen mahine .....kaise guzare.....(she cries and cries)

She tries to get up to hug his but she is still too weak.

R:Armaan nein bohot dar gayi thi .......pheli baar mujhe par koi musibaat aayi aur tum nahi the.....aur mein....armaan mein marna nahi chati.....mujhe dar lag raha hai armaan........mein.....

A:Shhhhhhhh (he said softly placing a finger on her soft lips.)

He flet her pain ........he just stared at her....with tears in his eyes
All of a sudden a tear ran down her cheek and stop at her cheek bone.....he knew words could not explain how her flet but action could....he kissed the tear on her cheek softly......kissing the tear was like drinking the pain out of his riddz

She wispered armaan again.....

A:Mein tumse kabhi door nahi jaoga......mein tumhara that hoon aur hamesha rahoonga.......agar aaj tumhe kuch ho jata toh mein bhi zinda nahi bachta......tumhare saasein meri saason se judi hai......jabtak armaan jee rah ahi uski riddhima ko kuch nahi hon sakta.

saying this...riddhima said
R:I LOVE U ARMAAN
A:I LOVE U TOO..

armaan put his head on riddhima chest.Hearing her heartbeat every second and hearing his name in every heartbeat.....riddhima just closed her eyes.
Both of them woke up the next.....they did not noe when they fall asleep......both of them had the best sleep of their life.......armaan woke up...

A:good Morning he wispered in her ear....and kissed her cheek
R:good morning.

The doctor came in ...
D:Hello dr riddhima kaisi hai aap aaj.
R:Looking at armaan never been better Dr'
D:Noticing armaan said...arre dr Armaan aap yahan kya kar rahe hai?Aap riddhima ko kaise jaante hai....
Before armaan cld say anything riddhima spoke.....
R:Dr yeh woh insaan hai jisse mein duniya mein sabse ziada pyaar karti hoon.
The doctor understood what she meant...
Armaan blushed on hearing this and was so releifed to noe that riddhima was ready to accept their relationship in front of the whole world.

Dr: Thabhi toh aapki shehat mein kafi improvement aayi hai.......Aap doh teen din mein hi ghar ja sakti hai....bas humhe kuch test lene hai aur uski reports aate hi aap ghar ja sakti hai.

Riddhima and armaan rejoced in that moment.

The test results came...and riddhima was fine.....she knew her medicine was armaan as long as he was with her she will be safe and ntg cld happen to her.

Three days later riddhima got discharged. 😊

PRECAP
riddhima goes to armaan house after dischaged.......AR Kiss.......lots of AR Scenes..... 😳


Okie guys thatw as the end of part 3 hope u liekd it okie.......part 4 will be posted latest by tmw or most to most wednesday.....dun worry i wont make u all wait too long.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey this part was chooooooo chweet
plz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: cute_unknown_fr

hey this part was chooooooo chweet
plz continue soon

Thanks alot.........😊...all try to make it even better the next time

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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow atleast our mind will satisfied with ur upcoming scenes as we all know its difficult expect those type of scenes now a days in DMG.

Okay yaar u were fabulous , well described the whole scene. 👏

😳 The Most Fav part Was

armaan put his head on riddhima chest.Hearing her heartbeat every second and hearing his name in every heartbeat.....riddhima just closed her eyes.
Both of them woke up the next.....they did not noe when they fall asleep......both of them had the best sleep of their life.......armaan woke up...

😳

really u know how much a person finds solace when he's in deep pain and his loved one consoles him/her in that position.
well written. 😊

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