new ff *Jab Dil Miley*... Part 6 Updated. - Page 5

Originally posted by: *K@nik@*

WOW!!!..So wonderfully expressed 👏 👏 👏 ...U did owesome work....Plzz continue soon..! and try to pm me if u can..! 😉

yeah dun worry i will pm u

love

payal

Originally posted by: ammyfan_pragati

really nyc...i cud feel my cheeks burning..m speechless really nyc..do pm me wen the next prt is update..awesum job.. 👏

hey pragati dun worry i will surely pm u by tmw.....

love payal

mind blowin!.... i am still smilin.....i jst loved d prt!.......rite nw i love ure ff mre den i lke a new track of dmg...........i jst love ure ff........... its so romantic.......its jst....... mind blowin!... cntd sn! .... i am already dyin... 2 read d nxt prt...!

yaar,
Payal muaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh
really cute and u have defined the pure love mixed with passion beautifully 😳 😉

omggggggggggggggg 😳 😳 WOW!!!!!!! that was AMAZING! 😳 I cant waiit for your update 👏

hi..i jus read ur fic n its lovely
👏
cont soon

Okie guys im back with part 5 sorry for the deley.....enjoy!


Armaan broke apart from riddz.....riddz eyes was still closed.....
A:Aakein kolo riddhima (he wispered)
R:(opening her eyes slowly)Armaan....
A:(Armaan does not want to take advantage of her knowing her values and he respects her for that)Bohot dar hogayi hai soo jao......
Riddz knows why armaan said that....he must be thinking she did not like what he just did to her....but that was not the case....she nevr fletlike this before....it was the most beautiful feeling.......so pure.....so wonderful..she knew armaan thought he was wrong......she knew it was time she gave herself to him.....he was the one....the man of her dreams......her soulmate......and she knew that tonight was the rite time to do it.....
Armaan turned back to leave.....
Ridds quickly hugged armaan from the back to stop him.......armaan was completely shocked......

R:Armaan aaj mujhe choor ke mat jao......bohot intezar kar liya meine.....ab aur nahi....
A:(turned ard he saw tears in her eyes.....)
armaan was glad that she flet the same fire he flet....
R:ARMA....
A:Shhhhhhhhhhh(putting a figer on her lips)

Riddz closed her eyes......armaan hold her waist and brought her closer to him.....a few strains of her hair was bothering her cheek.The used his fingers to put the strains behind her ears ........every touch of armaans was driving riddz crazy.......armaan kissed riddz cheek.......the he slowly started kissing her neck........leaving his imprints there....then he kissed her lips.....again and agian...the kiss grew fierce....so fierce that armaan cld not take the agony any more......

The carried riddz in his arms and walked to the bed.......riddz wet body was making armaan more and more weak.....he lied her down on the bed......
he started to kiss he from her lips to her neck.....her caressed her whole body.....a lightning broke out in riddz and she hugged armaan tighter.......
R:Armaan ....she moaned....
A:Riddhima .....armaan said....

he slit down the loose night gown riddz was wearing.......he took of his shirt......they both merged as one under the witness of the moonlight.......that night two bodies became one soul.....

THE NEXT MORNING>>

Armaan did not sleep the whole night....when riddz fell asleep he just hold her in his arms and stared at her the whole night....
Armaan's thoughts: How can someone love me so much.....all my life i thought love was a waste of time....till i met you.....u thought me how to love....u thought me how to live...no one has ever trusted me so much.....i noe hw much last night meant for.....it was not smtg u cld easily do......but u still did it....for me.....u trust me so much......no one has ever given me so much trust...not even my parents......u gave me ur everything so easily.....i cant do that....that is because u are my everything.....i promise riddhima.....i promise u today.....ill be by ur side forever......ill protect you...if death came u way.....it will find me instead.....if trouble heads towards you it wll have to past me first....no one will seperate u from me again.......not even death...if death wans u it has to take along to......u are my soul...i can never imagine life without you.....you are mine...only mine.....i love u jaan ....i love u..
Ridds was breathing like a baby in his arms..he face facing his chest......she opened her eyes slowly........and saw armaan looking at her.

R:good morning armaan
A:good morning jaan
R:Aise kya dhek rahe hoo...
A:tumhe....
R:armaan....kal raat tumne mujhe jo diya...woh meri zindagi ka sabse haseen toufa hai......thanks...
A:toufa toh tumne bhi mujhe diya hai....
R: meine kya diya....
A:woh haak jise mein keh sako keh aaj se tum sirf aur sirf meri ho....
R:Aur tum.....
A:(Kissing her on her forehead..)Mein tumhara tha.....tumahra hoon aur hamesha rahoonga....
R:I love u armaan
A:I love you ridddhima.....

RIddz got up to have a shower.....
A:Kahan ja rahi ho....
R:Dr Armaan Malik...subha ke 10 baj chuke hai.....Mujhe bahoon mein lene ke elava aur bhi zaroori kaam hai....
Armaan hugged her from her waist.....
A:Isse zaroori kaam tho meri zindagi mein aur kuch nahi....
R:Choro na armaan( she said giggling)
A:(he let go....)Accha sirf abhi ke liye.....
Riddz walked to the door of the bathroom....
A:tumhe nahne mein kuch madat chahiye....i mean....mein madat kar sakta hoon...mein to bohot free hoon...
R:....JEE NAHIN.....(SHowing fake anger).....armaan tum bilkul pagal ho..
A:Sirf tumhare liye......he gave her a flying kiss.....
Ridds smiled and when in the bathroom...

PRECAP....
Armaan get a mysterious call.....more AR SCENES....ridds tells armaan to go back to mumbai....


okie guys that the end of part 5...hope u liked it...

payal i must say u r a superb writer
i just read ur FF from da starting and its just awessomee.mindblowing
plzzzz cont soon

hey,

very nice ff....
i read it for the first time 2day....
u r fab, mindblowing....u described the emotions very well....

gr8 part....

cont sooooon.

luv,
shivani 😊

payal yaar main kya kahu yaar it ws sooooooooooooooooo
soooooooooooooooo romantic prt yaar ur sch a brilliant writer yaar realy it ws so touchd tht how thy gv thm 2 ech othr their soul wow it ws vryyyyyyyyyyyyy vryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
goooooooooooooooood ...........................amazng........................... superb yaar bt precap is quite confusng aisa kya ho gaya ...........plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont sooooooooooooooon
luv yachna