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Posted: 17 years ago
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I am gonna be updating soon now,thanks each and everyone for liking it,it really makes me and inspires me,tell me if I shud include any particular moment I missed
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Posted: 17 years ago
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that was great plezzzzzzzzz do continue sooon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#83
wow! i really love ur FF! i hope this is what happens!! 😳

Avanti
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Posted: 17 years ago
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next part right here!

Ridz with her eyes closed and limping for no reason is thinking what do I do now?
Armaan to mujhe di ke sath ghar bhejdega ,mai Armaan ko apne dil ki baat kaise bataoongi?
Then God sends Nana yet gain to her rescue
Nana says E hero!Bulbul ko nashe me bhaga ke kaha leke jaa raha hai?
Armaan gets annoyed with his remark and says nana aap ye kya bol rahe ho?
Aapko yaha nahi hona chahiye,chaliye jaaiye aur bed par araam kijiye,
Ridz makes a funny face and requests nana to stay
Nana is making a confused face and thinking ye mujhe kya bolna chah rahi hai?
Nana asks Armaan waise is Dr.Riddima ko kya hua hai?
Armaan says pata nahi isne shayad bhaang bohot pi li aur uska nasha iske sar me chad gaya hai
acha nana aapne Dr.Anjali ko kahi dekha kya?

Armaan makes Riddhima sit on the bench and rest against the wall in the locker room

Ridz is trying to tell nana in her sign language to say Anjali is not around

Nana is totally confused of what Ridz wants of him
and hesitantly says Nahi maine to usko nahi dekha!
then he understands the scenario and says arey haa maine usko doosre doctors ke sath kahi bahar jaate hue dekha,shayad wo ghar chali gayi


Armaan thinks are yaar ab kya karoo?
Ridddhima ki to halat buri hai usko yaha akele chod bhi nahi sakta?
Ab mai kya karoo iske sath?
Nana and Ridz are cheekily smiling on their little victory and then Armaan says isko taxi me bitha deta hoo
aur taxi wale ko address samjha doonga!
yehi thik rahega!
Nana goes are hero iski halat dekh,
tujhe kya lagta hai isko taxi me bhejna sahi hoga?
isko to lagta hai kuch hosh bhi nahi hai ke ye kaha hai aur kya kar rahi hai!
Armaan says phir kya karoo mai?
Nana says tu isko chod de na ghar pe?
Armaan says nahi,mujhe iske ghar nahi jana,
phir ye kahegi ki maine situation ka faida uthaya
isko waise bhi mujhpar bharosa nahi hai
mujhe to sahi aur galat ka farak bhi nahi maloom ye bolti hai!
Armaan repeats everything Ridz told him off about
Ye to mujhe junglee kehti hai
aur kehti hai ke mujhe sirf khud ke ilawa kisi ki parwa nahi!
Ridz hears all this and thinks to herself that woteva she said to Armaan really hurt him so much,that Armaan is so heartbroken!
She starts crying quietly.
Nana sees this and thinks ke is hero ko kaise manaaoo isko ghar leke jane ke liye
Armaan still going on with his painful comments of Riddhima that broke him greatly
Then he says ye to hamare relationship ke bare me bhi sure nahi hai,isko lagta hai hum sirf dost hai!

Armaan lets all his frustration out and is almost crying with his heart ache


Then Nana jumps and says arey to dost hi banke iski madad karde aaj
Meri baat maan aur tu isko ghar chod de!
kal sochenge hum in sab baato ke bare me
Armaan not giving in
Ridz pretends her headache is getting worse
and she's still effected by the hangover
and starts crying in pain
Nana says dekh iski tabiyet aur kharaab ho rahi hai
maan ja ab
isko leke jaa
then Armaan says thik hai!
ab jab isey lagta hai ki hum pehle dost hai
to dost hi sahi
He tells nana aap yehi ruko mai iske liye kuch dawai leke ata hoo,jisse iska dard kam ho aur achi neend aa jaye!
Nana goes ha tu ja mai yaha rukta hoo iske paas !



Edited by hinanaziri - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#85
wowww awesome chalo atleast armi got his pain out and ridz realised how much she hurted him 😳

continue soon just can't get over reading it 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#86
This is absolutely fantastic........helping us to smile over this long weekend, waiting for next weeks episodes.

I hope the creatives are taking notes on your ideas, if not for next week, then may be future episodes. You have written some really good scenes.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: jabeenuk

This is absolutely fantastic........helping us to smile over this long weekend, waiting for next weeks episodes.

I hope the creatives are taking notes on your ideas, if not for next week, then may be future episodes. You have written some really good scenes.

Thanks very much

I am so happy now,even I am lost in AR's thots and really hoping all this happens next week ,or may be in the future,

No wishful thinking ,even if they show one scene of my FF I will feel so on top the world!

Thanks again all and I will be updating one more scene before packing up tonite!,I 'll try and make it super duper romantic

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Posted: 17 years ago
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that was awsome plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue sooon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey u all ,
I am having second thoughts now ,since not many r replying I am not sure if I shud update,do u really want me to continue?
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Posted: 17 years ago
#90
loved it again
u r awesome at writing 👏 👏
plz cont soon

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