FF Just Once...pt 14/pg 2...8/11...END

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sonia

@dmg_sonia

Dazzler

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Posted: 17 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: Natalienaz
wow SOnia di
i love the way u express the emotions of love
i loved it so much it was simply marvelous
the first part rocked
i cant wait for the next

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Natty

hey natty....wow my 1st comment from u wow...im glad u liked it...thanks 4 ur encouraging comments..i will try 2 continue soon

luv, sonia

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shalini jain

@yachna

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#52

hey sonia wow yaar it
ws marvelous prt i lvd
d way u hv describe their
relation,emotions nd all
lvd it bt atul no way......
cnt wait fr nxt prt cont soon
ur 1st prt rckd yaar
cont soon
luv yachna

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sonia

@dmg_sonia

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: yachna
hey sonia wow yaar it
ws marvelous prt i lvd
d way u hv describe their
relation,emotions nd all
lvd it bt atul no way......
cnt wait fr nxt prt cont soon
ur 1st prt rckd yaar
cont soon
luv yachna

hey yachna.....im glad u liked it....well this part had the 1st shock...2nd part weill hav 2nd shock lolz....anyways thanks 4 commenting

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-SH-

@-Facetious-

Sparkler

Posted: 17 years ago

#54

hey di,

WONDERFUL!!! 👏
you know exactly how to captivate sumone's mind,heart n soul.....this part is truly amazing..... 😳
i wonder wat u have in store for all ur ff fans if the beginning is so amazing...... 😊

For the part,.....was it Atul dat Ridz says she loves?? 😕
then i guess its Armaan who she's gonna marry sooooon... 😳 ...right?? 😉
luved it..

cont soooooooooooooooooooon.......

luv,
shivani 😊

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maha

@faiza_elahi202

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#55

great part sonia but atul!!!!!no way yaar
but very well written n everything is fantestic to gud 👏

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Jia

@jia..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#56

Wat a truly brilliant start Sonia 👏

Never read emotions described soooooooo beautifully and naturally as excellently as this dear!!!!!!!!!!

OMG so let me confirm .........it was the guy that ridz loves is atul rite??????????? And he was supposed to be married off and now ridz also is gonna get married off rite???????? But the so called jerk according to her with whom her marriage is fixed has a filmy name rite???????? aaaahhhhhh tooooooo much killing suspence yaar!!!!!!!!!!!!
But u deserve a standing ovation for the entire diary concept..........i mean i am just loving the way u r penning it down............just outstanding and out of the world.........

Gosh u hav as usual made me so damn impatient now with this one tooooooo 😆
plssssss cont rilli soon........am waiting specially for armaan's entry now 😳

thanx for the pm and do pm wen uupdate 😳 😳

P.S: Plssssss update shades one too......and ur updating dosti one tonite rite?????? gosh i am pestering u sooooooo much..sorry

Love u
Jia 😳

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123abc123

@123abc123

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#57

hey sonia
updte was really nce
bt ridz n atul???
cnt picture it at all lol
luved da way u describd evything
really nce
updte soon
👏

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Zainab

@Veiledbeauty

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#58

aweeeesomeeeeeeee...
so different.. 😳 😳
So.. she loves armaan..
but hes getting married?
or is she getting married?
😕 😕 😕
and atul.. is the jerk??
😆 😆 😆
Woowww, 😳 😳
Can't wait for moree!!