RUSIM FF - Ek Duuje Ke Liyee *FINAL PART* - pg 14

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Nazmien aka Naz

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Posted: 17 years ago

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ChaitanysFan

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Thnx Naz well done keep it up can't wait for the next part i hope ru comes and saves her i hope SC plan fails post the next part soon. thnx once again. i liked the part where Ru picks Simi and takes her in their room. 😛 😛 😛 i aslo like where sim says i love you Ru and where Ru Says i love u too sim 😛

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Nazmien aka Naz

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Posted: 17 years ago

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aaawww thnks Annie..glad u like it...

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Sano

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Posted: 17 years ago

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nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiin.. simrna stop nahin jaao..
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anyways.. just completed rading ur part.. omg .. the sad once was so well amde.. adn the breakfast eating omg.. fab..
phir.. yeh khush khbari..
lol.. mmujhe petaah tha
leikin usise pehle.. arpita ka betaana saach good..
omg it was so cute ..
buhat acha..
waiting for the next part...

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Nazmien aka Naz

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Thanks San...for loving it...and ya khush kabhri to hona hi tha...thnks for loving the parts... 😃

i thought no one was reading my fanfic...maine kal post kiya tha aur aaj koi comments nahin tha to maine socha maybe the part is too long so no one wanted to read it so long ..but after your and annie's comment..i'm happy again..glad that my fanfic did not went boring...anyways thanks.. 😃

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Nur

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Posted: 17 years ago

#96

Naz!!Fantabulous Job!!!! 👏
Although the part was long but it is worth reading,Yaar!
Main bahut khush hoon... 😉
I was smiling all the way!!! 😊
I like all the Ru-Sim part...From beginning to end... 😳
Right now,I am just worried about Simran... 😕
When I was reading the last part,I was like shouting " Arre,koi Simran ko bachaao!!!" 😭
Can't wait for the next part... 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
Hopefully,Simran ko kuch nahin huwa... 😃
I am so worried...
Jhaaldi Karo for the next part!!!! 😆 👏

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Nazmien aka Naz

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Posted: 17 years ago

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OMG Thanks Nur..for ur lovely comments..i will try to post the next part as soon as possible..i'm working on it at the moment...i'm happy u guys love the part 😃

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mysticbubbles

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Nostalgic episode for me, since lot of dialogues were based on actual ones in the serial... 😊

Kinda guessed RuSim's baby was coming up in this episode and it did happen, very nice... 😉 😛

I am guessing Sim will be fine, and it will be SC who has a fall on her own spill this time???? 😆

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Nazmien aka Naz

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Posted: 17 years ago

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mysticbubbles

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Posted: 17 years ago

#100

Very nice narration, naz, the flow in the story was very smooth and every scene was very meaningful!! Awesome! 👏

Like the way you've explained Ru's inner turmoil on seeing Adi, and his thoughts, very logical, realistic, and comical...😆👍🏼 not sure how much more creative you can continue to be with it, but if possible, would love to read more of it... 😛