~*Kahiin Pyaar Na Ho Jaye*~-Fan Fic (pg8) - Page 4

Created

Last reply

Replies

68

Views

10.3k

Users

22

Frequent Posters

dilkeroshni thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#31
meee fiiiirst yaaaaaaay
omg poor kanya.. ranbir hurry up and come save her =] it was great the
describing of the emotion was great i absolutely loved it update soon.. u
sure do leave us hanging and wanting the next part to be put up soon =]
Edited by dilkeroshni - 17 years ago
punjabi.princes thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 17 years ago
#32
omg stupid Amit 😡 lol great update! plzz continue soon 😳
Maan-Diwani thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 17 years ago
#33
thansk so much guys, lol i leave them on cliffhangers wanting leaving you guys wanting more, i'll try to update tomorrow i work this weekend
Maan-Diwani thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 17 years ago
#34
2 updates in one day wow lol i've never done that before

Kiran_1 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#35
that was awesome
Plzzz continue soon
Anjali-K thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#36

That was great! 👏
Yayyyy!! Ranbir to the rescue.
Looks like Ranbir has started to develop feeling for Kanya. 😛

And Shanaya is not stupid and annoying in this ff and Ayaan loves her!!!! 😆

Please update soon di. Really wanna know how he kicks that guy Amit's Bu*

Anji 😊

Edited by *angel94* - 17 years ago
KC294 thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 17 years ago
#37
cliff hanger again... it was brill... pls update soon
rainshine_11 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#38
omg i cant wait
he's gonna rescue her
and i wanna read the part when she hugs him and he hugs her
ohhhhhhhh cant wait!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😆
Edited by rainshine_11 - 17 years ago
Maan-Diwani thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 17 years ago
#39
lol thanks guys i'm working on the next part it will be up tonight or tomorrow after i come back from work, i'm so gald you guys liked it

Maan-Diwani thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 17 years ago
#40

Part 4

Kanya: RANBIR

Shanya: omg kanya

Ranbir: eh who are you and what where you trying to do to my wife

Amit was about to answer him but he didn't want to hear anything, all ranbir felt like doing was kicking his a**. So who cares if he doesn't love kanya or think of her in that way she is still a woman, and no man should do that. Ranbir was pounding his good now, amit was on the floor not able to get up

Shanya ran ove to kanya and gave her a hug and tried to comforte her

Kanya: sh..an..ya..

Kanya tried to say but she couldn't breath through her tears

Shanya: don't worry kanya I'm here, shhh everything is going to be ok. Look I'm not even mad at you anymore I want to be your friend shhh don't worry aayan went to go call the police and until they come ranbir chachu will kick this guys a** shhh

Ranbir: how dare you try that with my wife, what did you think you would try to kiss her and no one would stop you what's wrong with you, can't you find your own woman, you have to try and step up on mine, your going to have to pay for this

Ranbir gave amit another punch in the face. All his anger that he was feeling for the past couple of days was finally coming out. Finally the police came, and by now amit was all bloody on the grass

Aayan: officer arrest this man

The police took amit away. Kanya was still sitting on the floor in shayna's arms crying. She still couldn't believe what had happened

Shayna: kanya your blouse it's all ripped in the back

Kanya: haan, when I was trying to get away he grapped my back and ripped it and….

Kanya couldn't control her tears anymore they wouldn't stop coming out.

Ranbir and Aayan ran over after dealing with the police and tried to calm kanya down, ranbir noticed kanyas's bluse and was getting even angrier, he also noticed the scratch marks on kanya's arms and waist. Ranbir grabbed kanya made her stand up and wrapped his jacket around her.

Ranbir: kanya why didn't you tell me that guy was bothering you at the party

Kanya: because….i….

Kanya couldn't talk anymore and just wanted to feel safe, she ran into ranbirs arms and hugged him not wanting to let go.

Aayan: kanya are you alright now? Kanya

Aayan looked at kanya and noticed she passed out on ranbirs chest

Aayan: chacu kanya passed out

Ranbir looked at kanya and saw the she indeed did pass out, he grabbed her in his arms and walked up stairs to his bedroom

Ranbir: shayna can you please sleep her tonight by kanya

Shayna: chachu sure but I think she would need to even more

Ranbir: shayna please

Aayan: Shanya I think it would be best if you stayed

Shanya: ok

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~~ ~ ~ ~ ~

The next morning Shayna woke up before kanya and thought that she had gone through such a horrible experience yesterday and thought that she would surprise her by making her breafast in bed. By no the whole family had come to known what had happened to kanya and malika and big d thought of the perfect idea to get everybodies mind off this.

Malika: shayna beta can you please go geab kanya, ranbir, and aayan I need to talk to you four me and big d will be outside waiting for you

Shayna: sure aunty

What did they want to talk about shayna thought I hope they don't bring up last night poor kanya has been through enough already.

Shayna: aayan ranbir chachu malika aunty and big d are calling us outside please come meet us I'm going to grab kanya

Ranbir and aayan looked confused but knew that it must be important or else mom would of come to them

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~~ ~ ~~

malika: kanya beta how are you feeling now?

Kanya: I'm fine mom thanks

Big D: thank god ranbir came out there at that moment, I guess my grandson isn't that much of a chota

Ranbir: BIG D

Big D: oye chote, shut up. Malika and me have decided to send all four of you on your honeymoon, and you will be leaving today.

Shayan: really but don't you think….

Malika: I know that it's sudden but I think that is the perfect time to send you all away for your honeymoon plus after marriage you have to go anyways

Ranbir: mom where are you planning to send us?

Ranbir didn't want to go on the honeymoon but at least aayan would be there and his mom was right this was a good thing for kanya. But kanya on the other hand was glad to be going this is exactly what she wanted to be out of mumbai for a few day.

Kanya: haan mam where are we going and for how long

Malika: for 7 days to SWITERLAND

Aayan: oh wow thanks

Big D: now hurry up you have to leave in 2 hours

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~~

Shayna: oh wow I can't believe it where finally herre, 8 hours ina plane was worth it wow it's so beautiful, isn't it kanya….kanya

Kanya: huh?….what?….yah it is

Ranbir had noticed since the plane ride kanya was out of it, and he knew he had to do something to cheer her up.

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

ranbir: aayan that is your's and shayna's room and our room is just beside it

aayna: ok thanks chacu we're going to go unpack

kanya entered the honeymoon room and it was so beautiful. This is bigger than my living room she thought to herself she walked over to the balcony and decided that she had to get over what had happened last night, she was just glad that ranbir came there before anything happened.

Kanya: ranbir

Ranbir: what is it

Kanya: thaks for last night that was….thanks

Ranbir: eh madam don't think that I've changed I only came out because some you are a women and no women should be treated that way, but if you think that this has changed anything or that I'm starting to like you than you are wrong. After all I a m RANBIR NANDA

Kanya: eh hello I was being nice. But sorry it's my mistake I forgot that I'm talking to a janwar my mistake I'm sorry. And eh I don't like you either I rather jump from a cliff than ever like you.

I did it ranbir thought to himself finally got the old chipkule back

Kanya: oh and the bed is mine you can sleep on the couch saand

Ranbir: thank you so much that is so kind of you, but that blanket is mine.

Ranbir walked over the bed. Kanya was standing in front of the bed with her arms crossed looking the other way. Ranbit thought to himself how is it that he will last 7 days with this chipkule, oh god only you can help me. While walking over to the bed ranbir didn't notice the suitcase in the middle of the room and tripped on it, whiling falling on the bed he also hit kanya on the way down.

Ranbir was now planted on top of kanya and both where gazing into each others eyes.

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~~ ~

Related Topics

Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47 · 3 months ago

Intro: Rudra fakes a relationship with his best friend Soumya to impress glamorous Bhavya-but ends up falling for the one girl who truly knew...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse · 5 months ago

ArShi OS : Pyaar Ka Naghma {Completed}

[NOCOPY] P Y A A R. K A. N A G H M A. "Friends?" a little boy extended his hand towards a girl which she responded. They smiled and embraced...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: heavenlybliss · 6 months ago

Hello everyone! I will be posting my 5 one-shots over here which I sent in for the Pyaar Ka Trope-fest contest. They are all standalones and...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".