~*Kahiin Pyaar Na Ho Jaye*~-Fan Fic (pg8) - Page 3

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Posted: 17 years ago
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cute!
wonder what he does!?!?!?! 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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lolll hes gonna say whatt pls continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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aww u ended it at the wrong time
Plzz continue cant wait 2 see what he will say
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Posted: 17 years ago
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lol thanks guys, don't worry i'll try to update more, left it here, becasue it leaves you wanting more lol thanks though, glad you all like it 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks 😳 😳 😳 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi Rajni di, 😊
That was so cute. 😊
Specially their little tiffs. 😆
Don't just leave a cliffhanger like that, now I am eager 2 know what he's gonna do next.
Please update soon.

Anjali
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey all thanks or the couraging comments, i'm working on the 3rd aprt right now, may have it up by tonight or tomorrow morning
Edited by kuch kuch hota - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awww!! Kanya tum kya??? tsk tsk bad bad! you can't end at such cute part. lol.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Perfangel5655

awww!! Kanya tum kya??? tsk tsk bad bad! you can't end at such cute part. lol.



lol don't worry next part is coming up in 2 mins
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Part 3

Ranbir: tum….tum….tum….tum…..

Kanya: main kya

Ranbir: You take forever in the washroom to get dressed lets go already I can feel a beard growing already, another 5 mins and I would be dead.

Kanya: hey you don't hear me complaining do you want me to go back into the washroom for another 5 mins

Ranbir: wow look at this only married for a day and you already want to kill your husband, what did I marry death

Kanya: oh shut up and let's go

Kanya walked out of the room in frustration still not able to believe that she had to be married for him for another 6 days; this will be a long week she thought to herself

Ranbir: oh man I'm seriously going to die, but she does look beautiful today. Hey Ranbir budy what's happening to you she's only a girl, cholo let's go drink your depression away, just call me DEVDAS

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Shanta Ti: Kanya beti I know that you miss your mom and dad but don't worry them and Pooja will be coming to the party so don't feel that depressed and as for balon ki dukan don't worry about him when I get back I'll set him straight

Kanya: Shant Ti you're leaving me here all alone with him? But why?

Shanta Ti: oh bacha I don't want to leave but something really important came back, don't worry I'll be back in a few days, ok aap I need to go bye tell sand I'll see him when I get back oh ho he's right behind you let me do it. Oye sand,

Ranbir: kya hai? Jaab dekho you never shut up

Shanta Ti: oye shut up, I'm just hear to inform you that for a few days I'm going to be gone out of town, so don't try anything with my Kanya varna

Ranbir: ewww gross me do anything to this chipkule in her dreams, but thank you so much for giving me this good news thank you I'll miss you

Sarcastically Ranbir walked to the bar while waving at Shanta Ti, but all Shanta Ti could think about was running over there and hurting him

Shanta Ti: ok I got to go now bye Kanya I love you

Kanya: bye I love you too, I'll miss you

Now what am I going to do, I don't want to stay in this house alone and with sand on top of that trying to find the washroom Kanya quickly ran there trying not to cry

Malika: Kanya beta why are you crying did Ranbir say something to you?

Kanya: No mom shanta ti is gone I'm going to miss her

Malika: oh bachu don't worry you have us and Ranbir, ek minute

Wiping Kanya's tears malika brang Kanya to the middle of the dance floor

Malika: ladies and gentlemen I would now like you to introduce you to my bahu Kanya, Ranbirs wife, and if you can all join me, let's have the couple in the middle of the dance floor dance for us, Ranbir beta where are you?

Ranbir: mom I'm right behind you, but dancing me? No no you no I hate to dance

Big D: oye chote shut up and dance with my bahu

Walking over to kanya both having the most hateful and disgusting look on their faces they walked over to the dance floor while the music played for them.

You can tell both where uncomfortable neither one of them have ever done something like this and that too with each other, all they could pray for was the song to finish quickly or some one to cut in

Big D: dj please play my favorite song

Tere Naam was playing, Ranbir thinking ever since your name came into my life, my life has been hell, and I'm never going to forgive you for this

Shanya: Aayan look how romantic they are please come dance

Aayan knew that Shanya was a sweet girl but he still couldn't get himself to start trusting someone after what Kanya did to him, but he was willing to give it a try, he actually had started falling in love with Shayna and thought that this is the perfect opportunity to start everything from fresh, even Shayna was willing to start fresh with Kanya, she realized that is was her moms fault that this misunderstanding all started.

Aayan: Chalo

Shayna: aayan I'm really sorry about everything all the stuff that I have said to you and everything that I have said to Kanya. I do feel bad and I'm sorry and I want to get to know Kanya better she seems like a very nice girl

Aayan: shanya that's all I wanted to her. Thank you

Shayna: don't worry starting tomorrow I'll start to know kanya better besides me and her are the bahu's of this house we need to support one another not hate one another

Aayan: I love you….

Shayna: KYA!!!!

Aayna: haan shayna I love you

Shanya: omg I love you too

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All the couples where now coming on the dance floor to join the newlyweds, everyone was so in love why can't I bethis happy kanya thought, as she realized how cruel her life is

Kanya: why is it that I never get what I want when I was in love I never got my pyaar, and now I'm married to a man that doesn't believe in all this and whom I hate the most in the world

Ranbir: oh how romantic your in my arms married to me but yet your still talking about your old lover that too my newphew, wow what a romantic wife I have I'm so lucky

Kanya: hey it's your fault that I'm not with him, and accept that I made a mistake, and that I should have been punished, but marrying you is worse than any punishment ever

Ranbir: oh like I was dying to marry you, I rather kill you than have thought of making you my wife, and now since you are my wife I think I must be getting punished for something that I must of done

Both started to gaze into eachothers eyes, burning isnde of them was all the hate that they had for one another

Ranbir: OUCH ok now your purposely stepping on my toes OUCH KANYA

Kanya: oops my bad

Kanya said innocently, but still couldn't help but stop laughing. Finally the song was over

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Through out the night everyone was coming up to kanya telling her how good she was looking. But there was this one guy in particular that wouldn't back off, kanya was getting a little uncomfortable he would always come up to her when she was alone telling her how beautiful she was. She knew that she had to do something.

Kanya: aayan that man over there is making me very uncomfortable can you please do something

Shanaya: kanya your husband is ranbir go tell him not my husband

Aayan: haan kanya shanya is right go tell ranbir, he's over there

That was the last thing that kanya wanted was to get his help on anything, forget it she thought if he bugs me again than I'll just go tell some one else, The part was still in full swing and Kanya was feeling very hot so she thought that she would ste outside for a while

Kanya: oh that's such a lovely bench I'm going to go sit there

Walking over to the bench kanya felt a slight tug on her palo, thinking that it might be stuck to a branch she tugged it, but it was still stuck, she turned around only to see that same man, now she was scared

Kanya: tum? Please leave me or else I'm going to shout

Stranger: go ahead no one will hear, the music is too loud inside. By the way my name is Amit, and I wanted to tell you that you are looking very lovely tonight, man how I wish you where single.

Kanya: eh hello behave yourself I'm a married woman and my husband is inside

Amit: really than call him, I'm sure he'll come save you, I've noticed all night today that all you guys do is yell at one another and try to avoid each other, what kind of marriage is that

Amit still wouldn't let her palu go and now he was slowly walking to her

Kanya: please let me please

Amit: don't worry I will after

He walked over to kanya and wrapped his arms around her, kanya was yelling as loud as she could, but it was no use, the music was too loud for anyone to hear her. She was thinking that she should of listened to aayan and shanya and told ranbir they where only telling her what was best for her.

Kanya: HELP SOMEBODY PLEASE HELP ME HELP

Amit put his hand around her mouth so she couldn't yell anymore. He let her palu go but there was no way for kanya to leave now. His arms where wrapped around her waist and he was slowly kissing her neck making his way to her face,

Amit: I've been wanting too kiss these lips all night and tonight I will get the chance to do so

Kanya: please I beg of you let me go please

Amit just laughed now and slowly leaned in for a kiss, he was almost there when he felt a kick to his leg

Kanya: RANBIR

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