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Posted: 20 years ago

All of them come back home. here kashish is still not able to tell piyush wat she feels for sujal.

Sujal in the night is thinking if he remains here he will come in way of everyone's happiness it would be better for him to go some where else. It would be also be good for Piyush and Kashish relationship. As even today sujal wasnt able to face kashish as he cld see pain in her eyes. He feels till he is here neither cld he forget kashish nor kashish will be able to forget him totally even though she has said yes for the marraige thinking sujal loves nandini.

Sujal decides to leave India and go to UK he also decides to take simran wiht him as he knows she will not be able to stay without him and neither could he without her. His only worry is how to convince his mom as he knows veena wont be happy with the decision.

Now 1 week is left for the engagements. Sujal tells akshat, varun and piyush not to ocme to office till there engagement and says he will takecare of the work at the office. As he want to wrap his work in the officce and make preperation for his depature and doesnt want anyone to know abt it.

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Posted: 20 years ago

Sujal takes into confidence mr. Shah his Personal assistant to for this work and tells him not to infrom anyone abt this. And tells him will tell everbody only after piyush's engagement. He asks him to make arrngement as he would also like to take simran wiht him.

Sujal comes back from office late. Simran is still playing in the house he takes her up to his room. As he doesnt want to sit down with everyoen as Kashish is also there.

Suajl: Aur gudiya aaj kya kiya tuna saara din.

Simran; kuch nahin.

Sujal: ek baat baata gudiya ko kaun zyaada acha lagta hai mumma ya bhaiya

Simran: (thinks) doono

Sujal: nahin zyaada kaun

Simran: Kisses sujal and says aap.

Sujal is convinced his decision of taking simran with him is right.

Sujal: agar gudiya mein yaahan se dur chala jaanon tu yahan rahegi sab ke saath ya mere saath chale gi.

Simran: mein aap ke saath hee jaaongi.

Sujal hugs simran and makes her lie down with him on his bed. He doesnt wnt her to go. He asks her will she sleep with her she says yes.

Sujal hasnt told anyone abt his decision to leave India. In the office he is wraping up his work. He has also written his resignation letter as the MD of the company and requested Piyush to take over the charge.

Everyone at home is really busy with the engagement arrangements. Sujal doesnt want anyone to know abt his decision as he knows all of them would be really disturbed. And Veena wont let him go. So he decides to talk to her after the engagement. He comes very late from office. Everyone thinks as he is alone so is busy with work. Veena also doesnt complain abt his coming late as she feels if he keeps himself busy in work it would be good for him as she knows the emotional turmoil sujal is going thru at this pt of his life. He hasnt even faced kashish much during these days.

Here kashish is in a dilema whether to tell pisyuh abt her feeling for sujal or not. She decides she will have to tell him as she shld hid anything from piyush as she will be married to him. Since she hasnt faced sujal much she thinks he doesnt have the same feelings for me as i have.

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Posted: 20 years ago

It is one day before engagement. Sujal has made all the arrangements to leave for UK. The place where he would be staying is also arrangeed. Only thing left is Simran's school admission.

It is the Day of the engagement. The previous whole night sujal didnt return from office he had called up home and told them he is really busy and would come home late. He returns early in the morning. Wen he returns home he is really tired as he hasnt slept for the past 2 days. He has decided to leave for UK alone at the moment till simran's school arrangements are made and after they are he wil come back and take her wiht her. As he enters Veena is sitting in the living room. Sujal sees Veena and there are tears in his eyes as he feels that how is he going to tell her his decision and how will his mom react to it and how difficult it would be for him to go leaving her behind. Veena comes to sujal sees his eyes are red and asks her wat is hte matter.

Veena: kya hua teri aankhenn itne laal kyon haan.

Sujal: kuch nahin bahut thaaka hua hu.

Veena : kal khana khaya tha raat mein

Sujal: WOh mumma thoda sa.

Veena: Aur din mein

Sujal: nahin mumma time nahin mila tha.

VEena: Teri haalat dekh apni tere ko koi fikar nahin hai apne. Chal upar tere liya khana lati hua.

Sujal goes up Simran comes to his room.

Sujal: aaj gudiya he kisses her. He is feeling how i am going to stay away from u for these few days. He has tears in his eyes.

Simran: kya hua bhaiya aap roon kyon rahe ho.

Sujal: gudiya agar mein kuch din ke liya bahaar jaaonga tho kya tu yahan Mumma ko tang tho nahin karegi.

Simran: Nahin. Kya aap kahin jaa rahe hoo.

Sujal: nahin kahin nahin jaa raha.

Veena comes with the food. He tells veena to keep it he will eat i after sometime.

Veena: Abhi khana parega.

Sujal: phir aap apne haath se khilaoon na.

Veena thinks aaj sujal ko kya hua hai then she thinks as he is really sad that is why as at times he behaves like this wen he feels low. Sujal is thinking mumma bahut miss karoonga aap ko. Pls mujhe maaf karna aap ko bataye bina yeh decision maine leli.

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Posted: 20 years ago

Veena is feeding him with her own hands. And sujal is feeding simran. Jst then Rishi, akshat and varun enter the room.

Akshat: haan aap tho bas apne laadle bete ko hee khilati hai humko kabhi nahin. Humein bhi khilaoon naa mumma.

Veena: tum sab bache ban gaye ho kya.

Sujal: mumma sirf mujhe khilangi tum sab ko nahin kyonki mein tho jaa...HE quickly changes the topic. kyonkoi mumma mujhe zyaada pyar karti hai.

Rishi: theek hai mumma aap ko khilaen aur aap hum sab ko.

They all sit down. Veena goes out to get everyones breakfast upstairs. Sujal is very sweetly feeding allof them. HE is thinking how much i am going to miss all these moments spend with u all. He has tears in his eyes.Rishi asks Arye yeh kya hua aap ko Big B.

Sujal: soch raha tha phir kab tum sabke saath aise baith kar khaana khaoonga.

Rishi: Why do say so big b

Sujal: Tum sab ki shaadi ho jageygi tho phir tum sab ek saath kab aaoge.

Rishi: we will always be together with u Big B that is a promise.

Sujal is really touched he hugs rishi.

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Posted: 20 years ago

It is 12:00 o'clock. Sujal is outside in the gardern. His phone is his room, it is ringing Piyush enters his room he calls for sujal but doesnt find thim there. Piyush picks up sujal's phone. It is from the agent who has made all the arrangement for Sujal to shift to UK.

Piyuhs; hello

Agent: Sir as per ur requirements all the arrangements for the house and the office have been made here. and Simran's admission will take another 15 days. Wen will u reach UK.

Piyush is shocked to hear this. He disconnects the phone. He goes straight to Veena's room to ask abt sujal decision to go to UK.

Piyush: Mumma sujal UK jaa raha aur kya shayad hamesha ke liya.

Veena is shocked to hear this

Veena: kya bol raha hai tu piyush, Kya sujal ne kaha hai. Mujhe tho kuch nahin pata

Piyush; Mumma mujhe sujal ne kuch nahin baataya woh tho galti se uska phone utha liya tha maine soch aap ko pata hoga iske baare mein.

Veena: mujhe tho kuch nahin baataya usne abhi poochti hua usko.

Piyuah: abhi tho apne kamre mein nahin hai wahi se aa raha hua.

Veena is really upset that sujal has taken such a big decision and she doesnt even know abt it. Why is he doing this. I wont let him go.

Veena after sometime goes to sujal's room. Sujal is there.

Veena: Tu London kyon jaa raha hai aur woh bhi hamesha ke liya. (She is very upset wiht sujal)

Sujal is surprised as to how does she knows abt his decision.

Sujal: mumma aap ko

Veena: Yeh sach hai kya

Sujal: jee mumma

Veena has tears in his eyes. - Tu kyon jaa raha hai.

Sujal makes her sit down.

Sujal: mumma pls meri baat suniya. Mera yahan se jaan hee theek hoga. Pls samjho mumma

Here piyush is outside sujal's room.

Veena: Jaanti hua tu kyon jaa raha hai. Kashish ki wajhe se. Tu jab usko itna pyar karta hai phir piyush ke saath uski shaadi ka waisla kyon liya. Mein jaa kar puiyush se baat karoongi. Par tu mat jaa.

Sujal: pls mumma aap janti hai naa ki piyush kashish ko pyar karta hai aur uska pyar mein kaise cheen loo. Muuma pls jaane dejiya mujhe. Dont stop me. It will be good for eveyone. Aur Phir mein aap ke paas aata jaata rahoonga. Aap bhi mujhe milna aayengi naa But pls let me go. Aur mumma thode din baad simran ko bhi le jaaonga. Pls mumma permission dedo.

Veena: kaise jaane doon tujhe simran tho baad ki baat hai.

Sujal: pls mujhe samjhiya mere jaane mein hee hum sab ki kushi hai. Aur aap hum sab ko kush dekhna chahti hai tho phir haan kar dejiya.

Veena is only crying. Sujal hugs her and says pls mumma let me go from here.

Outside Piyush has heard everyhting he is shocked to hear that sujal loves kashish.

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Posted: 20 years ago
genious raat bete gayi subaha ho gayi par tumahri story nahi post hui 😭 please post ur story i like it 👏 👏 please post it soon 😊
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Posted: 20 years ago
ill try my best to post it soon
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Posted: 20 years ago
amazing parts golu 👏 👏 👏 plz cont soon
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Posted: 20 years ago

Originally posted by: ambarinaaltaf

ya still u will be my di only becoz im 13 yaar kya karon iss forum mein koi below 13 or barabar 13 hai hee nahi so sad for me😭

ohhhhhhhhhh ur 13......then im yur diiiiiiiiiii😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
Wow Golu...gr8 part ...plz all of u continue ur stories !!!!!!!!!!! 👍🏼

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