Fan fiction for the week 12th-19th sep - Page 647

koi story kyun post nahe kar rahe ???????? 😭

yeh kia badtameezi hai.....story kyun nahe post karta koiiiii 😡

sorry 4 da late comments..

ana...da endin was awsum......i luved da whole story n really liked dat part how u had da title of da story in kash's dialogue...

kiran....tere liye was jus gr8....da way u described da house was jus 2 kewl....gud job...

nice job u guys
please post the next part to all stories
bye bye
Pooja

HEY GUYS ACTUALLY I WAS RECIEVING LIFE THREATS THATS WHY THIS KINDA PART........SOOO HERE IT GOES AN AWAITED PART OF MY STORY
RECAP:sujal gats to know abt the truth and crying and crying
akshat is sitting with sujal.......who is in a complete protensous disorder.akshat gathered courage and uttered there words
AK-sujal i can understand it....u r feeling guilty that it cud have all been avoided if u trusted kashish but buddy wat is destined will happen u cant change
S-yes thats true i know but akshat u were right i lost everything my love my baby everything
rishi was listening all this and suddenly bursted out
R-wow!!!!!! bhai u r pretending to be a new born baby who doesnt knwo anything the sole responsible for everything is u damit arre i toh think that kashish was an intelligent girl that she realized there is no futre with a person like u........haha u didnt trust your wife ??????shit
veena shouts on rishi
V-rishi just stop blaming sujal for everything it all happened just becoz of us we were the one......................................some one interupted with a knock on the door
it was charu...she lifelessly goes 2wards akshat and
CH-akshat where is kashish dii
AK-matalb????
CH-is...is she alrite........i was in the office when two constables came to check kashish's cabin when i asked why they r doing sooooooo they......they said that she has commited suicide
AK-(with tears in his eyes)yes she has done a fatal mistake
a tear rolls down from the eyes of charu
Ch-no....nooooo thats not possible akshat she....she hated those who didnt realize the prise of life and now she committed suicide no i cant believe this
akshat holds her from her shoulders
Ak-charu your sis laughed on us when we both said that love makes one complete...in return she said that love can only give tears and pain it can only end life not make it complete....then how did she fell for sujal.......
then suddenly akshat leaves her with a strike
AK-why r u asking abt her ???????
charu fell on her knees and and akshat and sujal got up
CH- ak..akshat yesternight i went into kashish dii's cabin for a file and searched every drawer for it but instead i got her personal dairy at 1st i hesitated but then to know every bit of my sister i opened it and then cudnt close it till the end.............and then i realized wat a big mistake i have done by doubting om sister.........dii whereever u r plz plz forgive me plz
akshat's cell rings and it was reva
R-akshat beta have u seen any news channel if not plz see it rite now
AK-any problem
R-u will understand and shuts the phone
akshat switches the tv on and the news reader was saying such things
welcome back today's biggest news is from shimla where a sudden accident of the chairperson of shina interprises miss kashish shina or rather we shud SAY mrs kashish grewal has taken place.....although the body hasnt been found but the trashed car has been found lying in the rig valley.....it is been said that her relation with (shows her picture in the background)her husband mr sujal grewal were not going sooo well infact in a recent party mr chetan grewal said that 4 days from now sujal's and archie shergill's engagement wud take place......the shimla police is mum on the whole issue and isnt ready to say anything.....when we tried to ask miss charu shina abt this she also opted not to comment and rushed from the office and............
she toh was continously saying but akshat in tendom closed the tv
CG-this was bound to happen............and now this press will not leave us
charu's cell rings and she in haste picks it up
CH-helo charu shina speaking
VOICE-well miss charu rite now on tv the picture of kashish shina is being showed is she your sister
CH-yes but who r u ?????
VOIC-well i am dr. trivedi from dharma hospital can u come here fast plz rite now
CH-but where it is ???
DR-it is on the shimla-kalka highway abt 30 km from shimla
CH-(hope's bright rays lighten up her watery eyes)yeah i am on my way.....i am coming and shuts down the phone
jiju kashish dii.........sujal gets up and then charu explains the whole thing
VEE- we shud go there
and the whole family rushes but thier cars are been stopped by a massive bunch of hungry dogs called the press in good words waiting as if the ppl who will come out are bones......sujal is buzzed offff and gets off the car and shouts--i dont want to give any comments dont u understand bloody hell and sits in the car and rushes down the road
now in the car a song is being played on the radio (well i cud have chosen any sad version of thoda sa but i thought this song wud do justice to the situation and it is my fav also when it cums to sad songs)
AE ajnabee tu bhi kabhi aawaz de kahin see
AE ajnabee tu bhi kabhi aawaz de kahin see.....
main yahan tukon mein jii raha hoon
main yahan tukon mein jii raha hoon
tu kahin tukon mein jii rahi haiiiiii
AE ajnabee tu bhi kabhi aawaz de kahin see
roz roz resham si hawa paas aake kehti hai bata resham si hawa kehti hai bata woh joh doodh dhuli maasoom kali woh hai kahan....kahan hai woh roshni kahan hai.....woh chand sii kahan hai
main adhura tu adhuri jiii rahe hainnn
AE ajnabee tu bhi kabhi aawaz de kahin see............
tu toh nahin hai lekin teri muskurahtein hain
chera kahin nahin hai par teri aahetian hain
tu hai kahan...kahan hai tera nishan kahan hai mera jahan kahan hai
main adhura tu adhuri jii rahe hainn.
AE ajnabee tu bhi kabhi aaw........sujal shuts the radio offfff and after half and hr the hospital comes
sujal rushes 2wards the reception
DR TRIVEDI....sujal mumbles
yeah rite there says the nurse pointing 2wards the right and sujal rushes towards that corridor and sees a man standing there
S-dr trivedi
the man turns
DR-yes u ???????
S-well i am sujal grewal kashish is my wife
DR-ohh hello young man well thank god u have come here we wanted to start the operation and now u wait as we prepare for the operation
S-ahh doctor can i just once see her plz
the whole family comes
DR-yeah sure but dont go inside icu is is behind u
sujal turns and from the glass pane sees kashish lying on the bed
sujal on one sida is relaxed but on the other side a tear falls from sujal's eyes as if it has gotten the freedom
S-doc...doctor woh theek toh hogayegi naa

WELL GUYS I HAVE WRITTEN MY STORY AND NOW I HOPE THAT SAM AND AMBY WUD LEAVE ME NOW AS KASHISH IS DAMN ALIVE OKKKKKKKK SOOOOOOOOOO PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZ COMMENT OK PLZ--SURBHI

ok surbhi the story is gr8 👏 tumne aakhir kar kashish ko jinda kar diya aur sab ki misunderstanding bhi door kar di good keep it up

wow i am the first one to comment on surabhi story

Ok lklk Good part & of course use theek toh karna hi padega..... 😉
Manu very nice 👏 begining plz write the 1st part of ur story soon....
Nice ending of Izhaar ki Haajat hai... well done.. 👏
Tere Liye is SIMPLY MINDBLOWING JUST LOVELY IT'S AMAZING... i mean i can go on & on... 👏 👏 👏 but plz cont soon widout unneccessary twists & turns....plzzzzz..
I hope i'm not forgetting anybody... All writers r doing gr8 job superb keep it up.... 👏 👏
& plz...plzz...plzzz... keep posting the stories soon..

hey fanx shruti and yes u r the 1st on to comment kafi achi speed hai padne ki and yaar kulbin sahi kaha nahin toh mere naam ke aage late lagne wala tha
THE LATE MISS SURBHI MAISHI 😆

Hey Shruti wer is Khwaish???? C'on u said u'll write it soon & still u have not posted it y??? 😡 plz yaar post it soon 😭 ... i'm waiting.... 😕