Fan fiction for the week 12th-19th sep - Page 404

Originally posted by: rmanu7382

Lo yeh Adi bhi darta hai aapne dad se ...Adi BKWL gp main hokar ...gandi baat..... darte nahin hain bacha ....

Maun dad darta nahi hoo...kuch kaam tha unkooo..isliye jana parha...i was back after tat...BKWL...darnay k liye join nahi kiya...waise bhii eek dad kii hii tu baat manta hooon😉.....anywayz...thanx 4 ur comments....Shruti kafi acha part tha...sukar hai tradey say kuch tu hati...jaldi next part bhii yahan post karo😳 Manu..kya end tha..i just loved it ab nayi story konsi likh rahay hoooo😛

Sun...the part..was just 2 gud..ab kya lkhoo mein uskay baaray mein...it was awesome..fantaic..word nahi mil rahay....thanx 4 liking my story 😊

Originally posted by: fakhra

ambrina mai wo story post nahi karo jo mai pehlay likhte thi "jaane haar baar" koi comments nahi dayta ...mujhay ghusa aata hai.....sirf sawera dayte thi...richa ne kaam diye.....mai kya karte aab new story likhne ka soch rahi hun...plzzz os per comments day dena........plzz...... 😡

Hii Fakra app apni story likhoo i will definately comment...i will wait 4 u to write..😊

hi friends how u all are doing ...........kiran janu kahan ho i m waiting for ur phone call ...........!its two days now ....we didn't talk ...so!

ok here is next part of

FASLAEY HEIN DARMIYAAN

sujal jerk his head as the flash back end....! he go to sleep as next day is some thing gonna happen thats hiering of case .!

but in night he keep tossing ...and thinking about what kashish said ....whether she i right or swayum .!

NEXT DAY

a bright sunny day ...start ppl start to leave at their destination ...every has his or her different motives ...but here two ppl have same motive thats to take side of truth to fight ...thats kashish and sujal .!

we see sujal getting ready ...for court ....and kashish getting ready too ..............! drums beat are as back ground music .kashish seems to be full of sprit ...! she wear red shalwar kameez with black embroided shawl ...she picks kask in her hands and move out of the room ....! rishi , charu , veena and cheten agarwal waiting for them ..! they all heads to court ...finally reach ther ..sujal already waitng there for kashish and her family ...he say hi to all ...then look at kashish ..who has brightness in eys ...showing that she is right ...........guess what the out come from last night's ...confussion and thinking of sujal ..he comes to kashish ...THEN BRING OUT SINDOOR BOX OUT OF HIS POCKET ....HE PUTS SINDOOR IN KASHISH'S MAANG AND TIE MANGAL SUTRA AROUND HER NECK .................! this shows that he now believes kashish .....! kashish hugs him tight ......and say again crying (harpy see she always cry 😆 )

kashish: kyun sujal itni deer kyun lagadi ...mujey samjney main kyun ..!

sujal: galti ho gai kashish agar main nay us din tumhari baat maani hoti to ajj ye din dekhna nahi perta

kashish: koi baat nahi tum merey saath ho ye hi merey liya kafi hai ........ab court chahey kuch bhi faisla sunnaye ....mujey fark nahi perta ...............bas !

saying this she hugs him again

sujal(thinking): magar mujey fark perta hai ye saab main nay saachai tak phoonchney ka natak kiya hai ...magar main ye hi dua maangta hoon ka jo bhi saach ho bas tum jeet jao or main galat saabit hojaon !

ok after this heavy part i need a break 😃

will post next part in 40 mins....cheers

sujal:

Amna nice part 👏 but it was 2 small..write next one soon....

thanx adil nida sun manu and ambrina for liking my story 😊

well manu and ambrina kya ab tum log mera murder karney ka soch rahe ho

well all story r going great and manu ur ending is nice 👏 👏 👏 marium ur story is also good 👏 👏 👏 and my dear suri tum to hamesha ki tarah chah gayi 👏 👏 👏

Originally posted by: shruti_gauri1

thanx adil nida sun manu and ambrina for liking my story 😊

Shruti app thanx mat keha karo...n wen r u planning to post da next part...

well adi main apni story jald hi post karungi 😊