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Posted: 19 years ago
kahan hoo sab..i am missing all of u alot...yaar koi tu story post karoo.... 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey guys sorry for the late posting actually my net wasn't working....... so i'll just post my story...... 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
Hey guys….
How are you all ?????
Well this time as I promised I'am back very early…thanku all very much for your reviews…
I know everybody will be very happy that Rajeev has won in the ita award for the best tv personality .wow man I'am so damn happy .

Now for the story :-

RECAP :- kashish & sujal sangeet ceremony is held .. all are over –joyed . the sangeet & the mehandi ceremony goes off well , without any scene created by piyush . in the end the villan piyush proposes to kashish , kashish slaps him & gives him a big lecture { kashish speciality } & leaves .

Zindagi   ;Ke Silsilay --- Part 15

Piyush is still standing there where kashish left him… he screams :- nahi main aisa hone nahi doonga , main itni jaldi haar nahi manuga , main us sujal garewal ko jeetne nahi doonga.. us kashish ko main barbad kar doonga…when suddenly some body speaks..
Aditya { I think u remember piyush's uncle } :- piyush , lekin tum tho keh rahe the ki tum us kashish se pyaar kar the ho..
Piyush { laughs scarcastically & says } :- pyaar aur main…. Aisa ho hi nahi saktha…. Maine zindagi main sirf ek hi shaks se pyaar kiya tha . aur wo thi maya …aur us sujal ne usi ko mujhse cheen liya { he yells }.. is liye maine maya ko sujal ki zindagi se nikaal diya .
Aditya :- { with a confused expression } lekin tumne abhi tho kaha ki tum kashish se…………… ?????
Piyush :- are uncle ap mujhe itna bhi nahi samaj paye . main apne maksad ko pane ke liye kuch bhi kar saktha hoon . maine kashish ko kaha ki main us se pyaar kartha hoon kyunki main sujal , kashish ki zindagi ki mushkhilo ko badana chahtha &nb sp; hoon….
Aditya :- piyush main kuch samjha nahi [ kitna bada bewakoof hain ]???
Piyush :- pehle maine socha ki agar kashish mujhse shaddi karne ke liye haan kar dethi hain tho main usse shaddi kar loonga aur use garewal house le jauga .. un garewals ke liye isse badi zillat ki baat kya hogi aur sujal wo tho chaine se jee hi nahi patha kyunki uski hone wali biwi ussi ke aankon ke saamne ussi ke ghar mein meri biwi banke rahegi…{ is piyush ke aasha bohat zyada hain } lekin us kashish ne …usne…………
Aditya :- lekin ab kya karoge ???? { gives a questioning stare }
Piyush :- uncle dekhiye kashish kabhi na kabhi ye baat sujal ko batayegi , aur sujal bechara mujhpe bohat barosa kartha hain , wo kabhi kashish ke bato ka vishwaas nahi karega..aur har tarah se jeet meri hogi…aur haar us sujal garewal kii… { ye piyush ke pass hamesha back up plans ready hothi hain }
Piyush & aditya laugh…….
Aditya :- theek piyush tum jo kar rahe ho wo karo lekin mujhe inform karthe rehna…
Piyush :- theek hain uncle…
Now both piyush & aditya bid good- bye's & leave for their respective destinations…..

Here kashish is in her room thinking about what just happened some time back..she decides to tell sujal but goes against it & then calls akshat..
Kashish :- hello akshat..
Akshat :- haan wud – be - bhabhi ji boliye , appne is nacheez ko kyun yaad kiya { he says jokingly }
Kashish { in a serious tone } :- aki mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hain….
Akshat { understanding that kashish is serious } :- haan kash bolo kya baat hain ????
Kashish now starts explaining everything to akshat…..akshat is shocked .
Kashish :- aki main jaanthi hoon piyush tumhara bhai hain , lekin main kya karu { she starts crying }
Akshat :- kash tum kuch mat socho kal tumhari shaddi , bas mujh per vishwaas karo . main tumhare aur sujal ke beech kisi ko bhi aane nahi aane doonga chahe woh mera bhai hi kyun na ho ……tum sujal se kuch mat kehna , main kuch kartha hoon……
Kashish :- thanku aki , thanku for being there….
Akshat :- bas ab zyada socho mat aur so jao kal tumhari shaddi hain bhai….
Kashish is convinced to an extent & then says good night & cuts the call.. kashish falls on the bed thinking about the events

Song In The Background :-

" Dil ka ghum dil hi jaane…..
Kya kahoon mai kisi sai…………..
Maine aansoon chupayai………….…..
Inn labon ki hasi say………….………..…….
Meri aankhon mai nami……………………..…….
Oh oh oh oh….……
Ismai hogi naa kami.……….
Chayee chehrai pe udaasi……..…
Thoda sa pyar hua hain……..….….
Thoda hain baki…………………………."
{ thinking about sujal }

kashish finally falls asleep waiting for a new tomorrow……
chalo ab raat tho guzar gayi…..

In the morning:---
Both houses are filled with happiness…preparations are in full swings…sujal sitting in the hall and seeing his mom, who is getting the house set up….. upstairs rishi , akshat , swayam , shlok and pratham are decorating sujals room …
downstairs, sneha & diya are helping sujal decide what to wear tonight…piyush is in his room, upset about things… doorbell rings at garewal mansion . the door opens & a cute handsome guy enters…
the guy :- are wah sujal tum mere beghair shaddi kar rahe
ho ???
sujal , sneha & diya turn around ..
sujal :- are kavya tu kab aaya , bataya bhi nahi….
Kavya :- are sujal bata detha tho surprise kaise detha…
Sujal & kavya hug… { basically kavya is sujal's cousin who was staying abroad he has no family when ever he comes to INDIA he stays with the garewals }
All the family members are very happy to see kavya & then all get back to work….
Slowly the time for the shaddi is getting near . sujal is getting ready . sujal is wearing a brown sherwani with silver embroidery [ like the one sharukh khan wore in kal ho na ho in the song mahi ve ]. he puts on his watch , combs his hair applies gel { set wet may be…} & then gives himself one final look in the mirror , smiles to himself & leaves ….. { so guys how does he look }

Here kashish is in her house all her helping her to get ready .
Sujal has come in with his family.. all are very excited that the baraat has come. Kashish is very damn nervous & her sisters start teasing her where as kashish feels embarrassed .
Sujal comes & sits in the mandap..the pandit starts the rituals & then says them to bring the bride . all the girls leave upstairs to get kashish . sujal hears a gush of noise & he looked up & he saw kashish was walking down the stairs.
Sujal was totally amazed to see kashish in the shaddi ka joda.
Kashish was wearing a reddish brown sharrara heavily
embroided with gold thread and sequins. Her head was covered with a netted duppatta with zardosi work along border, she was wearing matching jewellery and with a lot of red bangles on her hand & other accessories.Kashish is seated beside sujal on the mandap.. she looks straight at the agni…and thinks if shes dreaming, of whether its for real that her dream has come true…the rituals started . There was silence in the room as the pundit recited the rituals . the ghat bandhan is done & then the pandit asked for the bride's father to come and give the bride away{ I mean do the kanyadaan } . Sumeet came forward & gave kashish hand to sujal and did the kanyadaan. Now the pandit asked them to stand for the pheras.. the pheras start both sujal , kashish take silent vows to keep the other one happy at any cost…piyush is there just like a guest woh agni usse jal kar rhak bana rahi hain .. sujal & kashish again sit down after the pheras . sujal ties the mangal sutra around kashish's neck , then takes the sindoor & puts it on kashish's maang { fore head } { well guys every body claps they have got married }.
Now they get up & take aashirwad from all the elders . all are very over whelmed .
Now all the youngsters are sitting near the mandap along with sujal & kashish .
sujal is searching for his shoes { or what ever u call it }
sujal :- akki , pratham kisi ne mera joothe dekha&nb sp; hain kya ????
akshat:- are tere joothe ki zimmadari tho is sneha aur diya ki thi na ?????
sneha & diya together say :- akii bhai , who actually na
BIG B ka joothe…..{ they stop }
akshat :- haan sujal ka joothe kya ?????
{ charu interrupts }
charu :- akshat sujal jeeju ke joothe humare pass hain…..
all the brother's together say { except sujal } :- satyanas….
diya , sneha tum dono ko humne ek kaam diya tha woh bhi tum theek se nibha nahi paaye…
sneha & diya make a sorry face . while kashish's sisters laugh..
rishi :- achcha ab jaldi bolo kitne paise chahiye..
all the girls together say :- pachis hazaar..
pratham :- what , bilkul nahi milegi….
Archie :- { I think u know archie is played by kripa } :- tab tho joothe bhi bilkul nahi milegi…..
Swayam :- { I think u know swayam is played by angad } dekho ye tumhe nahi lagtha ki yeh amount kuch zyada hain…..
Gauri :- nahiiiiiii…………………….
Akshat :- dekho ladies ab tho kashish bhi humara hi saath degi . tho hum paanch hazaar denge usse kaam chala lo..
Mehak :- koi baat nahi akshat agar dii saath nahi dengi , tho bhi chalega kyunke ab humara saath koi aur denge…..
All the girls together shout :- Anjaliiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
Anjali comes running there { actually anjali is kashish & akshat friend in Paris who has come to attend the
wedding , well agar kavya aaya hain tho uski heroine ka entry bhi hona zaroori tha }
[ sujal & kashish are just enjoying the scene & smiling }
anjali :- kya hua….????
Akshat :- anjiiii , tu kab aayi….??????
Anjali :- are akki na koi hi na hello directly pooch rahe ho main kab aayi waise main ajj subah hi aayi hoon….
Akshat & anjali hug
After all the introduction of anjali is done , the saliyan again start demanding…
Anjali :- dekho chup chaap humme pachis hazaar dedo….warna bechara sujal bina joothe ke ghar jayega….
Kavya:- are ye kya baat hui thodi tho consation milni hi chahiye….
{ the girls discuss among themselves & then say }
Charu :- theek hain tho phir humme chaubis hazaar nau sau ninyanve rupees chahiye……
akshat :- are ye kya sirf ek rupaya kum kiya not fair…
they again start arguing ..
sujal finally intervents & says….
Sujal :- dekho agar tum log aise hi ladthe rahe tho kuch nahi hoga…. Meri pyaari saliyon main ghar wapas nange paun { foot } nahi jana chahtha . tho ye lo puts his hand in his pocket & hands over the total money to the girls…
The guys together tries to stop sujal , but sujal gives the money..
Sujal :- ab tho khush……
All the girls together say :- yessssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss &n bsp;

Now for the bidaai ceremony…..
Kashish is crying as she takes every step away from her house… she reaches outside and hugs her mom & dad …she then hugs all her sisters…

Then she leaves the place leaving behind her family…
Sujal , kashish reach home….
Garewal Mansion:
Kashish enters and as she enters she thinks to herself " ab yeh mere
ghar hai, isse mujhe apne pyaar se mehka na hai, ab yeh mere apne hain aur is ghar ka in sab ka such dukh sab ab mere hain…yeh vaada aaj main apnay aap se kurti hu, ke is ghar ke her insaan ko kush ruhk nay ki puri koshish karungi…main jaanthi hoon ki sujal mujhse pyaar nahi kartha , lekin ek na ek din main uska pyaar jeet jaugi…. Ye vadaa hain mera…..

Song In The Background :- { song for kashish }

" Maine socho nahi tha …
Hoge ho mera apna……
Pal main sach ho jayega….
Meri aankon ka sapna…..…
Ab na thadpe ga ye dil…..……
Aah lagke na aaye…………..…….
Main kabhi na rougi………………….
Chahe kuch bhi ho jaye………………….
Ab na hogi judaai……………………..………
Tumko dildar kaha hain…………………………..
Mere humrahi………………………………………
Thoda sa pyaar hua hain…………….……….…..….
Thoda hain baki…………………………….………………"


" veena does the aarti and then sujal and
kashish walk in together…the ched chad between the brothers continues & then all other rituals are done and its now
time to take the bride to her room… kashish and sujal reach the
stairs, when pratham says " aare sujal kashish ko utaa kur leker kamre main jao.. sujal turns around & all his brothers are standing & giggling …
shlok :- common BIG B…..
sujal is a awkward position & here kashish is feeling restless with the thought that whether s ujal will pick her up or not .. kashish is thinking when sujal lifts her in his godh…before kashish could realize sujal starts walking carrying her in his godhi..
all the people in the background shout & cheer sujal who is carrying kashish….
Sujal reaches his room puts kashish down & then both walk in the room together . sujal closes the door behind…
There is a sense of awkwardness in the room . sujal speaks up first..
Sujal :- kashish wo I'am sorry sabhi keh rahe the is liye….
Kashish :- koi baat nahi sujal , aur haan hum ajj bhi dost hain na ?? { she questions sujal }
Sujal :- haan kashish hum dost the , hain aur hamesha rahenge , lekin tumne ye baat kyun poocha ???
Kashish :- wo is liye Mr. Sujal garewal kyunke dosti main
No thanku aur no sorry…samjhe….
Sujal :- sorry , oops…… bhool gaya…
Both sujal & kashish smile….
Sujal says :- tho Mrs. Kashish sujal garewal aap jake change kar legiye…Kashish looks at him unable to believe that he addressed to her as kashish sujal garewal .. she is surprised as well as happy…….

Song In The Background :-{ song for kashish }

" wada raha pyaar say pyaar ka
ab hum na hongey juda......………….
wada raha pyaar say pyaar ka………..
ab hum na hongey juda.......………………..
yeh .....meri dhadkanein sun raha hai khuda..…….
chahey tumey kis qader mera dil tum ko nahi ha pata …….
yeh.... meri dhadkanein sun raha hai khuda.………………..
wada raha..........yeh wada raha......... ……
dono jahan ko bulaoon mey essi lagi hai ………..
tujh say lagan …………..
chahey kaho issey awargi chahey kaho issey deewanapan…….
dil ney kaha dil ney suna....
mey ney tumhey dilbar chuna……..
ab duriyan na rahi dermiyaan ………..
kya rang laye wafa........
yeh meri dhadkaneein sun raha hai khuda........
wada raha yah wada raha.....
dekha tumey to essa laga ………
mujh ko mila manzil ka pata…….
chalana hai hum ko ab sath mey….
tum say jura mera raasta .... ……….
mey ney li hai qasam …….
paoon tumey janum o junum ………….
sajdey kiya shaam o saher …………..
maanga hai tum ko sada. ……………..
yeh.meri dhadkanein sun raha hai khuda.………
wada raha pyaar say pyaar ka .…………….
ye wada raha………
ab hum na hongey juda.........
yeh .....meri dhadkanein sun raha hai khuda.....
wada raha yeh ……..
ye wada raha
pyaar say pyaar ka…………
wada raha yeh wada raha.……. "


Sujal realizes what he just said now & then tells kashish :- kashish kya kar rahi ho , jao jake change kar lo…
Kashish changes & then even sujal has changed….
Kashish are sujal both are quite , waiting for the other one to speak…. Finally kashish walks upto the window & then says
Kashish :- kitni ajeeb baat hain na sujal , hum jab dost the tab hum dono ke baathe kabhi khatam hone ka naam hi nahi lethi thi , lekin ajj….
Sujal walks over to her & says :- kal mein aur ajj mein bohat farq hotha kashish . koi bhi cheez is duniya mein hamesha ek jaisi nahi hothi , badal thi rehthi hain…us chand ki taraf dekho {he says pointing out to the moon } ye
wahi chand hain jo amavas ke raat ko andhera bikherthi
hain , lekin yahi chand poornima ka din sab se zyada roshni phailatha hain……
kashish smiles……
Kashish :- haan shayad tum theek keh rahe ho…….
Sujal :- haan , haan main jaantha hoon main hamesha hi sahi hotha hoon { he winks at her } achcha chalo ab bohat raat ho chuki hain , tum jao aur so jao….
Kashish :- says good night & goes to the bed
Sujal takes his pillow & duvet & goes towards the sofa & settles on it…{ typical kth }…
Sujal , kashish are very restless , both are not able to sleep.
Sujal gets up & sits on the sofa….
Sujal :- kashish tum so gayi ho kya ?? { he manages to say it very slowly because if kashish was asleep he din't want to disturb her }..
Kashish who was awake gets up after listening to sujal's voice..
Kashish :- kya baat hain sujal { she asks him walking over to the sofa }
Sujal :- kuch nahi , woh bas neend nahi aa rahi thi…….
Kashish sits beside sujal & both start talking to each other on various issues from family , to friends , to foes & to business.. after a long time both decide to go & sleep…This time both fall of asleep wait ing for a new bright tomorrow without kno wing what the future has in store for them….
The morning dawns & kashish gets up…she is very happy that she has sujal in her life.. kashish is walking towards the wash room to get freshen-up . when she sees sujal sleeping like a small kid on the sofa . she just walks over to him . she kneels down beside him & starts stroking his hair slowly without disturbing sujal . while seeing him kashish has a sudden urge of kissing sujal . she slowly kisses him on the fore – head & runs into the washroom . where as sujal groans in his sleep & continues sleeping…..
Kashish comes out after some time , sujal is awake by then he sees kashish coming out of the wash room & smiles..
Sujal :- morning kashish…..
Kashish :- good morning sujal…. [ she smiles thinking about what she just did some time back ]
Sujal now goes into the wash room to get ready for the office..
Mean while kashish sits in front of the mirror & starts getting ready.. kashish is wearing a red net saree , with bangles & other accessories . she puts on her mangal sutra & sindoor when she remembers the previous days events { I mean the shaddi } & she smiles to herself & thinks that finally she has got sujal in her life….
Sujal comes out of the wash room & is truly dumb struck to see kashish like that as it is the first time he is seeing her in a saree..& even he gets ready for the office…..

Sujal & kashish come down stairs , all the family members are waiting for them . kashish takes aashirwad from veena & cg & then all sat down for break fast..
Veena :- sujal tu office ja raha hain na , tho phir tu kashish ko phag phere ke liye uske ghar chodo…
Sujal agrees…..
After the break fast all leave . kashish goes upstairs to get her purse .. as she comes out she collides with , some body who is &nb sp; loitering near sujal's room , who can it be other than piyush…kashish looks up & is shocked…
Kashish :- tummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
Piyush :- haan main.. kaisi ho kashish ?? { he asks sarcastically }
Kashish :- lagtha hain , tum ab thak apne dost ke shaddi ka jashnnnnn mane rahe ho { even she asks sarcastically }
Piyush :- haan shayad tumne theek kaha…{ he says it going towards her }
Kashish { cuts him short } :- theek hain , tum jashn manathe raho ,main chalthi hoon , excuse me….{ kashish starts walking }
Piyush :- you are excused kashish…
Kashish turns around & says :- na , kashish nahi kashish sujal garewal…[ saying this kashish walks off ] leaving piyush again in irritated state.
Piyush tells himself :- mera bhi waqt aayega………
Here sujal & kashish are in the car . both are just quite .
Kashish is thinking about piyush where as sujal is thinking about how his life has changed . Inhi bato ko sochthe sochthe kashish ka ghar aa jatha hain . sujal tells kashish that he will pick her up in the evening & leaves the place & then kashish starts to walk towards inside… ..

Hey guys so this part ends here . I hope all of you liked it . plz tell me if u did not like it & give me your valuable comments & suggestions . I'll be waiting for them…….

From the next part there will kabhi takraar , kabhi pyaar , kabhi dosti between sujal & kashish . what will piyush do , will sujal realize his love for kashish ya phir usse pehle ki kuch ho jaye , kya sujal ,kashish hamesha saath rahege ya phir judaa ho jayege…ye sab jaane ke liye padthe rahiye……



Surya………..




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Posted: 19 years ago
nice part suriiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii 😊 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey nice story sun_423 but plz dont separate sujal n kashish. plzz ha.

aur yeh raste hai pyaar ke is also nice. iinfact allthe stories r amazing. n where is kiran and other have gone. plz cont soon. loving all the stories. bye..

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khawaish
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Recap:-kashish office join karti hai .unehe ek meeting kay liye out of station jaana parta hai jaha pe car kharab hone ki wajah se unhe night stay karna parta hai and raat ke 12clock sujal angad and kripa ko unki marriage aniversary pe wish karta hai and we came to know ki sujal and kashish are husband and wife or aaj unki bhi marriage aniversary hai
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sujal leave a disturb kashish behind him and kashish apni purani yaado mai chali jaati hai

Flashback:-teen saal pahle ki baat thi .

kashish ki duniya bhi kisi zannat se kam nahi thi uski zindagi mai bhi sirf khushiya hi khushiya thi .kehtay hai jab apka pyaar apkay pass ho to duniya bahut hi khoobsurat lagti hai .har jagah sirf pyaar hi pyaar nazar aata hai .yeahi sab kashish kay saath bhi tha .

uski zindagi mai sirf pyaar hi pyaar tha.pyaar uskay liye ek bahut khoobsurat eshaas ban kay sujal ke roop mai aaya tha

kashish ki duniya sirf sujal se shuru hoti thi aur sujal pe khatam.uskay liye pyaar ka matlab sujal tha ,khushiyo ka matlab sujal tha ,zindagi jeenay ka matlab sujal hi tha yeah tak uski muskhurat ki wajah bhi sirf sujal hi tha

zindagi kisi haseen sapnay se kam nahi thi har jagah sirf pyaar aur khushiya hi thi.dukh aur takleef kya hoti hai yeh to jaisay woh bhul hi gayi thi.sujal ney uski zindagi mai pyaar kai raang khol key jaisey uski zindagi hi badal dali thi.

sujal nai jab se us se apnay pyaar ka izhaar kiya tha uskay baad sai to jaisay they r unseprable.college mai yeh log love birds kai naam se hi famous ho gaye thai.woh jaada se jaada waqt ek dusray ke saath rehtay .

even sujal and kashish are working for a fashion project for sujal company. sujal nay us project mai kashish ki help mangi and kashish nai haa kar di thi .sujal ko ek acchay designer chahiya tha aur usay kashish sai accha designer kaha mil sakta tha .kashish nai kafi kaam samay is field mai kafi naam kamaya tha.

yeah un dono kai liye kafi alag experience tha . woh log saath saath kam kartay
huay ek dusray ko kafi kareeb se jaan rahe thay.

woh log ek dusray kay nai phelu se waqaif ho rahe thai.woh log yeah samaj chukay thay ki dono bahut hi proffesional hai . woh log ek dusray kai working style se kafi impress thay.

woh log kabhi kabhi kam karte kartay ek dusro se argument bhi karte thay .magar office khatam honay kai baad baad woh log phaley ki tarah ek saath ho jatay. woh apni professional and personal life ko kabhi bhi mix nahi kartay thai.

jab kabhi in dono mai koi argument hoti thi kisi project ko lai kar to angad or kripa apass mai bet kartay ki inka yeah heated argument khatam ho ga ki nahi
magar jaisay hi office time khatam hota yeah dono ek love birds ki tarah ho jata

udhar kripa ko angad nai prapose kar diya tha .aur yeah dono couples saath mai kafi aacha time spent kar rahe thai.

in charo nai kabhi bhi nahi socha tha ki inki zindagi mai koi bhi toofan aa sakta hai.yeh to sirf apni zindagi mai khushiya dekh rahe thay.

kashish ko aachay say yaad tha woh din jab usay sujal kay saath ek official tour pey jaana tha woh bahut hi excited thi ki ussay ek pura din sujal kai saath spent karnay ko milana tha.

woh log jis project pai kaam kar rahey thai uski final deal honi thi is liye un dono ko client se milna out of station jaana tha

sujal jab usay early morning pick karna tha hai to he is shocked kyunki kashish is looking really beautiful she is wearing a white chiffon churidaar and usney apnay hairs khula rakha thai without any jwellery and loooking really beautiful.kashish sujal kay pass jati hai magar sujal uski khoobsurati mai itna khoya hua tha ki usay kashish kai aanay ka pata nahi chala.

actually sujal pheli baar kashish ko indian outfit mai dekh raha tha

kashish-good morning sujal

sujal came into reallity

sujal-beautiful
kashish-what
sujal-i mean tum bahut jaada khoobsurat lag rahi ho
kashish-bas bas ab tum aisa hi tareef karte rahoge to hum meeting pay time se nahi pauch payegai .ab chalo bhi
sujal-haa chalo

sujal car mai beith ta hai and leave for the meeting sujal car drive kar raha hota hai and kashish window se bahaar dekh rahi hoti hai and felling bored and woh sujal se kheti hai.

kashish-kya sujal tum kitna bore kar rahe ho
sujal-kyun kya hua ?

kashish-yaar tum kab se chup chap baithay huay ho kuch to baat karo
sujal-ab is may mai kya kar sakta ho jab bhi tum meray saath hoti ho to kuch bhi baat karnay ka mann hi nahi hota hai bus tumehay dekhnay ka aur tumhari baat suney ka mann hota hai.
kashish-sujal tum baatai bahut bananna jantai ho.accha koi music suno gai
sujal-haa koi bhi acchi cd laga do

kashish music system on karti hai

song in background:-

chahay tum kuch na kaho
mainay sun liya
ki saathi pyaar ka
tujhe chun liya
sun liya
mainay chun liya

pahla nasha
pahla khuma
naya pyaar hai
naya intezar
kar lu mai
kya apna hal
e dile bekarar
meray dile bekarar
tu hi bata

phala nasha

sujal drive kartey huay kashish ka haath apnay haath mai pakhrta hai and kashish apna sir uskay shoulders pay rakhti hai and they drive on

sujal kashish ki meetings kafi sucessful thi and unehe woh project mila gaya tha
aur isi khushi mai 2din baad ek party thi

sujal kashish kay pass meeting kay baad bhi time tha so woh dono ghumnay jatay hai. kafi time un dono ney sirf shopping mai bita diya kashish ki to jaisay shopping list hi nahi khatam ho rahi thi.phir they have there romantic lunch

sujal is full of surprise u can never guess his mood he is childishly naughty at one instant, almost paternal at another...a passionate lover in one moment...and a detached workoholic in another...a great friend sometimes...and a moody, sulking individual in another...sarcastic and ruthless at times, and deeply vulnerable and soft inside....She was discovering delicious contradictions in him all the time...and loved him a little more everyday...

sujal-kya hua kya soch rahi ho?

kashish came out from her thought

kashish-kuch nahi
sujal-i think ab humay chalna chahiye
kashish-haa kafi late ho raha hai

woh log jaisay hi chalnay ko huay ki there was sound of thunder followed by lighting and rain aur kashish darr jati hai and sujal ko hug kar leti hai woh apna chera sujal kai jacket mai chupa leti hai .

sujal ko kuch pal kay liye samaj hi nahi aaya ki aakhir baat kiya hai

kashish-sujal mujhe bijli ki awaaz se bahut darr lagta hai
sujal-kashish meri taraf dekho

kashish uski aankho mai dekhti hai

sujal-kashish jab main tumahray saath hoon to tum kyun darr rahi ho
kashish-sujal yeah awaaz humay aanay wale toofan ka ishara karti hai.yeah humay pahle se agaah (warning) karni chahti hai magar hum hi log un ishro ko samaj nahi patay

sujal-kashish tumhey kya lagta hai yeah koi toofan laa saktay hai.nahi kashish yeah to apnay apnay manay par hai mery liye to yeah ek khoobsurat mausam lata hai.barish ka mausam aur dekho na isi mausam ki wajah se tum bhi meri baahon mai ho

kashish realizes ki woh usay abhi bhi hug kiye huey hai she feel shy and try to move away magar sujal useay rok leta hai

sujal-kabhi kabhi to aap humaray pass aati hai itni asani se thori na janay degay
kashish-sujal chordo naa dekho naa kitni tez baarish ho rahi hai aur hum dono kab se bheeg rahe hai.chalo ab wapis janay key liye late nahi ho rahi

sujal-tum lardkiya bhi naa kitna aacha romentic mood tha aur tumnay ney sab kharab kardiya.
kashish-agar hum isi tarah tumahray romentic mood ki parwah kartey rahegay to hum dono biwar ho jayeegay

woh log wapis car mai janay lagtay when sujal notice ki kashish ko thand lag rahi hai woh usay apna jaket deta hai aur usay car mai jaldi se bethnay ko kehta hai sujal start driving when kashish speaks in a serious mood

kashish-sujal ek baat poochu????????
sujal-huuuuu

kashish-sujal tum mujhey kabhi chord kay to nahi jaogay
sujal-kashish yeah kaisa sawal hai
kashish-batao n sujal

sujal-kashish tum sirf meray pyaar nahi balki meri zindagi ho,meray jeenay ka maksad kashish mai baki sab cheezo key bina reh sakta hu magar tumahray bagair nahi tumhari ek muskhuraht key liye mai khuch bhi kar sakta hoo phir tumney yeh kaisay soch liya ki mai tumehe kabhi akela chord sakta hoo .

kashish apna sir uskay khanday par rakhti hai

kashish-sujal pata nahi kyun mujhay bahut darr lag raha hai bahut burray burray khayal aa rahay aisa lag raha ki kahi sab kuch khatam na ho jaayey.mujhe pata hai ki tum one month kai baad india shift ho rahay ho mujhey pata nahi aisa kyun lag raha hai jaisay ki tum mujhse door ho jayoge.sujal tumehay khoney kai darr se hi meri saas ruk jaati hai agar kahi tum mujhey chord dogai to mai marr hi jaogi

sujal-mai hamesha tumahrey saath rahuga mai bhi tumahray bagair nahi rahe sakta aur raha hamaray beech mai faslay ki baat to mai us faslay ko hamesha kay liye mita dena chahta hoon.hum kal hi shadi karegay

kashish-sujal tum yeah kya kah rahe ho

sujal-kashish mai hamesha kai liye hamaray beech se yeah darr nikal dena chahta ho ki hum kabhi allag ho saktey hai aur uska sirf ek hi raasta hai ki hum apnay beech key saray faaslo ko meeta de apnay is rishtey ko ek naam de dai taki humay koi bhi alaag na kar sakay.aur waisay bhi tum meri family ko bahut pasand aayogi unehe koi objection nahi ho ga after all tum sujal garewal ki pasand ho

kashish-sujal par hum apni family ko kya baataegai
sujal-unkay liye yeh baat tum surprise rehnay do
kashish-sujal par
sujal-kashish tumehay mujh pai bharosa hai naa (she nods) to phir tum tension mat lo.mai sab theek kar dunga

they reach london and woh angad and kripa ko apnay decision key baray mai bataatey hai and yeah decide hota hai ki woh dono phelay court marriage karegay aur uskay baad se ek mandir mai tradional shaadi.angad sujal ki taraf se witness tha and kripa kashish ki taraf se un dono ki shaadi key baare mai angad aur kripa key alawa kisi ko nahi paata tha.

next day jab sujal and angad kashish ko pick karney aatay hai to to sujal is shocked kyunki khashish is wearing a red chiffon sari with a long earings and lots of bangles.sujal uskay pass jata hai aur uskay ears mai kheta hai ki

sujal-kashish tum bahut bahut khoobsurat lag rahi ho .aur agar tum isi tarah khoobsurat lagti rahogi to yaken mano bahut saray dil tum pe aayegay.magar becharay dil yeh nahi jantay ki aaj kashish ka dil sirf mera yeani sujal garewal ka honay ja raha hai

kashish-sujal tum bhi na .waisay tum bhi bahut handsome lag rahey ho

sujal-arey kashish kuch aisa kaho jo mai na janta hoo .i know ki mai bahut handsome hoon. sab yeahi kehtay hai .tumney khuch alag nahi kaha .tell me something jo mai na janta hoon.

sujal is wearing a red shirt with a black court and usney apney hairs geled kiye huye thay and looking really handsome

kashish-kya sujal aaj key din bhi tum shuru ho gaye.pata nahi shaadi kay baad kya karogey

sujal-tumehe is se bhi jaada pareshan karuga.
kashish-sujal i think mujhey backout kar lena chahiye

sujal-kashish kabhi aisa soch na bhi nahi.mai tumehey apney se durr nahi janey dunga i love u kashish
kashish-sujal i love u too

woh log ek dusrey ko hug karney hi ja rahey thai ki

angad-hmmmmmmmm

both look in angad direction

angad-tum dono ko shaadi karni hai ki nahi kyunki agar tum dono isi tarah romance kartey rahogey to to hum court court timings key baad pauchegey

kripa-bas thora sa aur wait kar lo phir to tum dono ko officially romance karney ka hak mil jayega

sujal feel embarrassed and kashish shy away

angad-ab chalo bhi lat ho rahi hai

all four of them sit in the car and drive away

woh log court mai shaadi kartey hai and sujal kashish ko gift mai ek wedding ring pehnata hai made of diamond and platinum woh ek heart shape ki ring hoti hai jismay k and s engrave hota hai

phir woh log mandir mai ja kar traditional shaadi kartey hai and sujal kashish ko mangalsutra phenata hai aur uski maang sindoor se bharta hai and they take blessing from god to start there new life .

song in background

wada raha ....

wada raha pyaar say pyaar ka

ab hum na hongey juda.........

wada raha pyaar say pyaar ka

ab hum na hongey juda.........

yeh .....meri dhadkanein sun raha hai khuda.....

chahey tumey kis qader mera dil tum ko nahi ha pata ...

yeh.... meri dhadkanein sun raha hai khuda.....

wada raha..........yeh wada raha.........

dono jahan ko bulaoon mey essi lagi hai
tujh say lagan

chahey kaho issey awargi chahey kaho issey deewanapan

dil ney kaha dil ney suna....

mey ney tumhey dilbar chuna..

ab duriyan na rahi dermiyaan

kya rang laye wafa........

yeh meri dhadkaneein sun raha hai khuda........


wada raha yah wada raha.....


dekha tumey to essa laga

mujh ko mila manzil ka pata

chalana hai hum ko ab sath mey

tum say jura mera raasta ....

mey ney li hai qasam

paoon tumey janum o junum ..

sajdey kiya shaam o saher

maanga hai tum ko sada.

yeh.meri dhadkanein sun raha hai khuda.....

haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan

wada raha pyaar say pyaar ka ...
wada raha ....

wada raha pyaar say pyaar ka

ab hum na hongey juda.........

wada raha pyaar say pyaar ka

ab hum na hongey juda.........

yeh .....meri dhadkanein sun raha hai khuda.....

wada raha yeh .

wada raha ....

pyaar say pyaar ka..

wada raha yeh wada raha....

sujal kashish ko hug karney ja raha tha ki angad interupt him

sujal-angad ab kashish meri wife hai to isko to mai hug kar hi sakta hoon
angad-sujal u r imposible

all of them laugh and sujal kashish ko hug karta hai

kripa-chalo lets celebrate ur weeding lets have a party only four of us
angad-nice idea

sujal-party meray ghar pey .mai chahta hoon ki kashish shaadi kay baad humarey ghar chaley magar isey apnay ghar janey ki bahut padi hai aaj hamari shaadi hui hai aur hum kuch samay bhi saath nahi beta payegay

kashish feel shy and smile

angad-tu fhikr kyun karta hai waisay bhi doo din baad kashish tu tumaharey saath hi rahay gi .sirf do din ki hi to baat hai
sujal- jab teri shaadi hogi tab mai pucho ga

angad-bahi mainey kripa nay to decide kar liya hai ki next year isi hi din hum bhi shaadi karegay taki hum charo apni life ka sabse special moment ek saath spent kar sakey aur celebrate kyun kripa
kripa-haan

sujal-aacha chalo party ki kitni arrangement karni hai

all of them reach garewal house

and sujal kashish ka haath pakhta hai aur dono ek saath ghar mai kadam rakhtey hai

sujal-welcome kashish welcome to ur new house kaisa laga
kashish-bahut aacha

angad-sujal mai aur kripa party ka arrangement kartey hai tu jaa kar kashish ko ghar dekh aa

sujal -haa yeh theek hai hum bas abhi aaye chale kashish

kashish nods and and sujal usko pura ghar dekhta hai at last they reach sujal bedroom and sujaluskey liye door kholta hai and kashish room key andar jati hai

sujal-aur kashish yeh hai hamara bedroom kaisa laga????????

sujal use peechey se aa key hug karta hai

kashish-bahut aacha hai

sujal-abhi to sirf aacha hai magar jab tum yeah pe shift ho jayogi to bahut aacha ho jayega.

kashish-how cute waise sujal tum apni family ko kab bataogey hamarey baare mai

sujal-chalo abhi bata detey hai

sujal apney ghar pe call karta hai

sujal-hello mama
sujal-ye mama i am fine
sujal-mama aap key liye ek surprise hai

sujal kashish ki taraf dekhta hai and smile

sujal-nahi mama mai abhi nahi bataoga ki surprise kya hai aap ko meray aanay tak wait karna hoga

sujal-yeah mama mai yeah pe bahut khush ho aur dad ko khaiye ga ki humey project mil gaya aur sab log kaisay hai sab ko mera hello bolna

sujal ok mama love u

sujal phone rakhta hai and kashish key saath ja kar bed pr bethta hai

kashish-tum to mama ko bataney walai thai phir kyun nahi bataya

sujal-woh is kiye kyunki jo khushi unehe hamay saath dekhkar hoti woh mai phone pe bata kar nahi dena chahta tha mai apni mama ki khushi apni aankho key samney dekhna chahta hoo .

kashish-tum apni mama se bahut pyaar karte ho na

sujal- haan mai unki khushi key liye kuch bhi kar sakta hoon.waisay ab sey woh tumahri bhi mama hai samjhi

kashish nods and give her cute smile

sujal-kashish tumehe kal ki party to yaad hai na jo humey contract milney ki khushi mai mili hai

kashish-haa yaad hai isi bahaney mujhe tumahre saath kuch time spent karney ko milega

sujal-tum chaho to hum aapna saara time ek saath spent kar saktey hai ab humey kisi bhi reason ki jaroorat nahi hai

sujal uskey kareeb jaata hai aur usko cheeks pe kiss karta hai tabhi door pe knock hoti hai

sujal-ab kaun aa gaya

kashish feel shy

kashish-dekho sujal door pe kaun aaya hai

sujal ja key door kholta hai and door pai angad khara hota hai

angad-kya sujal ghar dekhaney mai itna time lagta hai humey aisa lag raha tha ki tum log bhul hi gaye ho ki hum log bhi hai yeah pai hai aur humey tumahri wedding celebrate karni hai waisey kashish sujal tumehey itni der se room main kya kya dekha raha tha i hope tumehey ye room sabse jaada pasand aayega

kashish feel embarrassed

kashish-mai kripa ki help karney ja rahi

sujal-kya aangad tujhe kabab mai haadi bana tha .rukh ja ek baar teri shaadi ho jaye phir mai bhi dekhta ho tujhey

angad-mai is baat mai safe hu kyunki ab tujhe kashish se time milay ga tabhi to tu kisi aur ko dekha ga

both smile and join kashish and kripa downstairs

they four have lots of fun and they celebrate there happiness together at last at 10 clock in night the party came to end and both sujal goes to drop both kashish and kripa kyunki kashish do din kai baad sujal kai saath shift honey wali thi.car mai kripa feel like kabab mai haddi

at last un dono ko ghar aata haiand kripa said goodbye to sujal aur woh undono ko akela chord kai jati hai.sujal kripa kai jatey hi kashish ka haath pakhta hai and use hug karta hai

sujal-kashish tumehe pata hai shayaad mai aisa phela husband honga jo apni itni khoobsurat wife ko apni wedding night kai din akela chord kai ja raha hai.kashish meray paas ek idea hai kyun na tum abhi meray saath shift ho jao hum tumahri belongings baad mai collect karte rahenga.

kashish-kya sujal sirf do din hi ki to baat hai kab kat jayega tumehe pata bhi nahi chalega.
sujal-do din to ab do sal ki tarah kategay
kashish-sujal tum paagal ho
sujal-haa tumahrey liye
kashish-aacha sujal ab jao kripa bhi mera andar wait kar rahi hogi
sujal-jaana jaroori hai
kashish-haa bahut jaroori hai.
sujal-kya kashish mai itney romantic mood mai hoon aur tum sab mood kharab kar rahi ho
kashish-good night hubby

and she kisses sujal on his cheecks

sujal-good night sweet heart aur haa kal mai tumehey pick karney aaoga saath mai party mai chale gay

she nods and sujal usay forehead pai kiss karta hai and he leave


next day :-

shaam kai 5 baj rahe thai and sujal is restless woh kashish se apney janey key baad se nahi mil paaya tha even kashish ka cell bhi not reachable tha woh thora jaldi tayaar hota hai taki woh kashish kai saath kuch time spent kar sakay woh kashish kay ghar pauchta hai and kripa usay welcome karti hai and kheti hai ki kashish apney room mai hai sujal uske room mai jaata hai and dekhta hai kashish is wearing an offshoulder white gown and usney high pony thi and long earings phenay huay thai .sujal was speechless kashish uskey pass jati hai aur usko shake karti hai .sujal came into senses

kashish-kya hua
sujal-kuch nahi mai to yeah soch raha tha ki aaj kitney log mujhse jealous hogay kyunki meray saath itni khoobsurat lardki hai

kashish-aacha yeah sab chordo yeah batao tum yeah itni jaldi
sujal-yaar kal raat kai baad tumahray saath time spent karna ka time nahi mila yeah tak ki tumahra cell bhi nahi lag raha tha socha jaldi chal kay mai tumahray saath time sprnt kar lu

kashish kahi kho gayi thi and sujal shake him

sujal-kashish kya hua r u ok
kashish smile and she said she is ok

woh log party kai liye saath mai nikaltay hai in the party they pretend ki they r only friends but puri party mai kashish chahey kahi bhi ho sujal ki naazray sirf usi par hoti thi .

song in back ground:-

jadu hai nasha hai
madhoshiya
tujhko bhula key
ab jao kaha

jadu hai nasha hai
madhoshiya
tujhko bhula key
ab jao kaha

dekhti hai
jis tarah se
teri naazray mujhe
mai khud ko chupao kaha

jadu hai nasha hai
madhoshiya
tujhko bhula key
ab jao kaha

(sujal kashish key pass jata hai aur us ko dance kay liye pauchta hai and woh haan kar deti hai)

yeh pal hai apna
to is pal ko je ley
sholo ki tarah
jara jal kai je le
pal jhapaktey
khoy na jana
chuh kai
kar lu yakeen
najaney pal ye paye kha

(kashish apna head sujal kai shoulder pai rakhti hai and sujal apney haath kashish kai waist pai)

jadu hai nasha hai
madhoshiya
tujhko bhula key
ab jao kaha

baahon mai teri
yun kho gaye hai
armaan dabay se
jagney lagey hai
jo milaye ho
aaj humko
door jana nahi
mita do saari yeah duriya

(both of them look in each other eyes they bost r lost)

jadu hai nasha hai
madhoshiya
tujhko bhula key
ab jao kaha

dekhti hai
jis tarah se
teri naazray mujhe
mai khud ko chupao kaha

after the party sujal kashish ko uskay ghar pay drop karta hai or kehta hai ki woh kal office se off lega taki woh kashish ki help kar sakay shifting mai

next day:-

sujal angad and kripa kashish ki shifting mai help kartay hai and at night all four have dinner together baad mai angad kehta hai ki woh kripa ko uskay ghar drop kartey huay nikal jayega all of them agree and angad and kripa leave the two love bird alone

now sujal kashish r alone in the house

sujal-so madam finally u r here

kashish feel shy and sujal usay pick kar kay apnay room mai le jata hai

In Kashish and sujals room:

sujal-kashish tumehey pata hai aaj hum ek honey ja rahey is key baad koi bhi humay alag nahi kar payega na kismat na samaj kyunki aaj se tum sirf or sirf meri ho gi

kashish-sujal isi baat ka hi darr hai kahi hum alag na ho jaye

sujal-kashish aisa khuch bhi nahi ho ga waisay bhi ab se tumahri or meri kismat ek hi hogayi hai or is kismat ko koi bhi nahi badal sakta

phir sujal uskay forehead pai kiss karta hai than cheecks and kashish hug him...........................................

song in background

baahon ke darmiyaan



Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain
Jaane kya bole mann dole sunke badan
Dhadkan bani zubaan
Baahon ke darmiyaan



Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain
Jaane kya bole mann dole sunke badan
Dhadkan bani zubaan
Baahon ke darmiyaan

Khulte badn hote labhon ki ye ankahi
Khulte badn hote labhon ki ye ankahi
Mujhse keh rahi hai ki badhne de bekhudi
Mil yoon ki daud jaayein nas nas mein bijliyaan

Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain
Jaane kya bole mann dole sunke badan
Dhadkan bani zubaan
Baahon ke darmiyaan

Aasmaan ko bhi ye haseen raaz hai pasand
Aasmaan ko bhi ye haseen raaz hai pasand
Uljhi uljhi saanson ki aawaaz hai pasand
Moti luta rahi hai saawan ki badliyaan

Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain
Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain
Jaane kya bole mann dole sunke badan
Dhadkan bani zubaan
Baahon ke darmiyaan .


kashish realizes ki usay koi bula raha hai and she came into reallity sujal usay bula raha tha

sujal-kashish car theek ho gayi hai hum abhi nikle gay to din tak pauch jaye gay
main breakfast order kar deta hoon tum fresh ho jayo

kashish nods and sujal leave from there kashish nai poori raat apni beeti hui zindagi mai bita de thi uski aankho mai aansoo aa jatey hai aaj uski aur sujal ki 3 wedding anniversary thi aur unkey beech mai itna fasla ho gaya tha ki woh dono ek dusro se bhi ab sirf formally baat kartay tha

kashish apnay se kheti hai happy wedding anniversary sujal

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pls koi comment karo 😊 😆
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Kiran post plz ....jaldi karo yaar
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abhi padhti hoon Shruti ....
Mujh se bech ke rehna aabb tum ..gimme 15 minutes ... phir batati hoon .. 😆
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E Ac ki bachi main bhaghi nahin hoon ....meri cousin aagyi thi ....main uske saath gayi thi ...thoda gamm batne ...kal ki farewell ka na .... 😭
Dil ke aarmaan aansoon main beh gaye ..... 😭 😭 😭

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