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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: ambarinaaltaf

wow guys tum loogon ko ekta ki creative team mein hona chahiye tha

kya yaar ekta bai hi mili thi😕😆......inhe to apna khud ka production house kholna chahiye😳😳

naam mai suggest kar deti hoon......dadiji telefilms 😉😆

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Posted: 19 years ago
rajeevAC wrote:
yea affa di....m w/you


thanks a lot for ur support 😊 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: rajeevAC

dadi sardar.....welcome jee welcome !!
apki agya-anusaar maine patakho ke sath sath story bhi phaar di !!
ab jaldi se story likho warna.... ap ka 60 waat ka bulb khatre mein hai!!
& affa Diiii..........hello.... choti-choti , cutie , sweet si Diiii....

hiii so sweet sumbody called me di it sounds so good😊

Edited by aswa - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
lklk...gr88...agla kahaan hai?? u said jaldi aayega 😃 waise is ur real name lklk??no vowels 😆 😆 😆

lullu dadi....well done....acha twist tha 😳 see u after 1 week 😆 😆
btw agar natz dadii apko aunty bulati thi tab to mujhe aapko par-dadi bulana chahiye 😆 😆 after all ur da leader nahi....sardar 😆 wat say?? 😉

saweraa....kya yaar...ab jaldi se is dream ko sach karwa do 😳 😃
& ur dil ki batein is also too good....continue soooooon
plz 😳

kiran bua......permission granted.....u may write it 😆 😆 😆 hehehe........atleast mere liye..naaa...dadi ji ke liye...plzzzz 😃


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Posted: 19 years ago
OK GUYS HERE IS THE 5TH PART OF 'A LOVE STORY' AND THIS ONE IS A BIT ROMANTIC COZ OUR HERO PROPOSES
RECAP:kash gets the award and kash asks him for dance(well not exactly but yes now she is interested in sujal)
s and k are dancing,seeing each other without blinking their eyes,non stop,dancing without getting tired.meanwhile charu and akshat are also dancing charu is having the time of her life and akshat is also enjoying . but the centre of attraction is the science going on b/w s and k.cool sensuous and soft songs are being played sujal ka haath kash ki kamar par aur uska haath sujal ke kandhe par sujal pulls her close and says main tumse bahar milna chahta hoon and goes out kash also walks outside and then
S- toh aakhir aap aa hi gayi
K- no maine toh woh apni car .......
S- jaane dijiye mujhe aapse kuch kehna hai
K- finally kaho
S- brings her very very close and says kehdu
K- kaho
S- kehdu main tumse... charu interupts and says diiiiiii
aap wat's cooking!!!!!!!
S- kuch nahin main tumari di ko khicadi banana sikha raha tha tum thodi der mein nahi aa sakti thi meri dal pakne hi wali thi
C- relax main jaa rahi hoon
S- nahi main hi chala jata hoon
K- nahi aap rukiye main jaa rahi hoon
C- yaar yeh jaane-jaane ka khel hum baad main khelegain
and walks away
sujal sees kash with enormous amt of love in his eyes and walks away
NEXT MORNING KASH AND SUJAL ARE OFF TO WORK
they are very very happy,driving at a fast pace,listening romantic songs,smiling shying dreaming
and while cuming back kash is dreaming and as a result meets with an accident sujal was also cuming and sees kash and stops(i told u they share a same road )
sees her unconscious and lost all his brain and commansense and instead taking her to the hospital takes her to his house as it was very near
IN THE GREWAL HOUSE
sujal rushes 2wards his room upstairs holding kash in his arms but is stopped by veena who is a bit angry
V-sujal pheleto yeh sab bahar hota tha ab ghar ke andar bhi kya hai yeh
VASU_ aur accept bhi kya kiya jaa sakta hai
LALIT-vasundra!!!!!! but sujal yeh galat hai
S- bas chup kijiye main aur kash!.... aapne toh mujhe characterless bana diya yeh behosh hai kyonki iska accident ho gaya hai and now plz call the docter
every1 feels guilty and doc comes and says everything is fine and gives some medicine now s in his room sits beside kash who is sleeping holds her hand and kisses it and falls asleep
IN THE MORNING
kash wakes up and wakes up in horror to see sujal so close sujal also gets up and explins the whole thing to her kash says loads of thanks to him but rushes down and she was about to leave veenA INTERUPTS
V-arrey beta itni jaldi
K-nahin mrs grewal ab mujhe chalna chahiye
V-par aati rehna
vasu interupts
VASU- yeh bhi koi kehne ki baat hai sujal jaisa ladka upar se itni shano shukat (vasu didnt went to that party where kash was given the award so she doesnt know her)upar se miss kashish ne to ek raat bhi..........
K-(shocked) mrs vasu raheja mujhe aapke sujal main koi intrest nahin hai and jahan tak rahi paison ki baat to woh mere pass bahut hai
VASU- har ladki yeh hi kehti hai lekin uska peecha naihn chodti
K- main doosri ladkiyon ki tarah nahin hoo main chahu toh aise 100 sujal grewals ko khared loo aap shayad mujhe jaanti nahin shina interprises ka naam suna hai VASU SMILES kash continues i am the chair person of that company kashish shina isliye waqt aur insaan dekh kar baat kijiye
sujal interupts and says kash plz bahar aao kash walks away OUTSIDE
S-kash meri baat .......
K- nahin aaj tak meri itni insult kabhi nahin hui lekin galti meri hi hai jo main tum jaise ladke se rishta banaya
sujal is fed up and pulls kash 2wards him and says
S- ok kya lagti ho tum meri kaunsa rishta kaisa rishtea kabka rishta tumne to mere saath koi bhi rishta nahin joda par maine tumare saath 1 nahin 7 janmo ka rishta joda hai jabse tumhe dekha hai kisi aur ladki ki taraf aankh nahin uthti
K- to i dont care
S- ohhhhhh!!!!!!! u dont care but care for u and u know why coz I WANT U I NEED U I LOVE U YES I LOVE U DAMMIT
K-yeh kya she is just shocked
Sujal also realizes that wat he has said and walks away shyly

guys long part stay tuned coz kash ki izhare muhobbat abhi baaki hai PLZZZZZZZZZZZ COMMENT--LKLK
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Posted: 19 years ago
RAJEEVAC MY REAL NAME IS NIDHI AND LKLK IS JUST MY USRENAME
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: nida123

harpy dont cry warna farah dadi will get angry 😆

woooooww nida......well said......farah dadiiiii😆😆

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Posted: 19 years ago
nidhi...abhi par ke comment dooongi 😃 ....izhare mohabbat jaldi karwao 😆 😆 😆
u r 4rom india....right 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
affa dii...thanxx 😳
m overwhelmed 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
nidhi.... 👏 .....my god ur story is jus.....garam masala......all-in-one....too good.....ab jaldi likho....m already tuned 😆 😆 😆

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