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Posted: 17 years ago
#41
wow
dat was really nve
luved da way u expressed ridz
feelings very gd
update soon
👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#42
hi cheeky

sweety ihave read the update it was fantabulous ,will comment in detail later, as i have to rush for college 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: na2339

Sonia sweety i just read both parts... Firstly I'm sorry for commenting so late 😭 and secondly huge hug for this very well written FF... 🤗

I love the way you describe every small detail, key turning in lock... gently rubbing eyes... the whole sunset scene... superbly described 👍🏼

I have no idea what your first FF was like but if its anything like this one... i'm going back to read it 😆😆😆

Thank you so much for the PM
Lubna 😳


dabbu her first one is on mayka section called taren zameen par
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Posted: 17 years ago
#44
Hey Sonia!!
Wow dis part was ju superbbb...
n like i said b4.. i luv da way u describe everythin so well hun👏
bte Armaan ki entry kab hone wali hai...
cant wait to c it😳..
I realli enjoyed readi dis part..
plzz cont soon.

n thnx foe da Pm😊

Lotssa luv;Hira😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: jia..

wowwwwwwww soina thanks....
that was rilli aa awesome and a very touching part
u hav sooooooo brilliantly described all the emotions ridz is goin through 👏 thanks heaps... glad u enjoyed it

but let me just confirm this........shanshank is no more rite???????????? yes u r rite...but u will find out why and how soon...
and wer is armaan ????????? hope he makes an entry soon he will come soon..wait and c...

just loooooove the way ur shaping up this ff. already got me so hooked to it thanks heaps, its good ur hooked lol

do cont soooooooooooon will do
Jia 😳

Sonia

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Posted: 17 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: mahi4u

hey sonia hey mahru
wow that was such a beautifull prt so touching to da heart it was truly wonderful 2 read
n got a question is anjali ridz sis or not????? ur soo sweet... anjie is not ridz sis... they r just good friends from the start of their internship
cont sooooooooooooooooooooooonnnn
will be waitin 4 u
luv ya n tak care
mahru

Sonia

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Posted: 17 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: Veiledbeauty

Greatt part Soni (me going to call u that too 😃 ) hey zuzu....
You have us wrapped around in suspense 😆 lol is that good?/
Where is Armaan??? he will come soon...wait and c

Sonia

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Posted: 17 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: na2339

Sonia sweety i just read both parts... Firstly I'm sorry for commenting so late 😭 and secondly huge hug for this very well written FF... 🤗 hey Lubna, no need to be sorry u must have been busy, a hug back for such a lovely comment

I love the way you describe every small detail, key turning in lock... gently rubbing eyes... the whole sunset scene... superbly described 👍🏼 thanks soo much, i have tried my best....my eng tutor will be happy to see i can describe well lol.... always on ma bak... ha ha jst jkes

I have no idea what your first FF was like but if its anything like this one... i'm going back to read it 😆😆😆 have a read of it, just like kanu said its called Taare Zameen Par on the maayka forum...

Thank you so much for the PM no prob
Lubna 😳

Sonia

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Posted: 17 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: 4frenz

hi cheeky me and cheeky🤡lol........

sweety ihave read the update it was fantabulous ,will comment in detail later, as i have to rush for college 😊 thanks.. have fun... ha ha

Hey Sonia!! Hey Hira!!
Wow dis part was ju superbbb... thnx so much
n like i said b4.. i luv da way u describe everythin so well hun👏
bte Armaan ki entry kab hone wali hai... he will come have patience lol.. na he will come soon... in a couple of parts...
cant wait to c it😳..
I realli enjoyed readi dis part..
plzz cont soon. will dooo

n thnx foe da Pm😊 its k

Lotssa luv;Hira😛

Sonia

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Posted: 17 years ago
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lemme tell you from the beginning...after checking out this forum a couple times and flipping through all these pages...I came across your fanfic...I loved the movie Hum Tum so I thought'd I check it out...and I'm very happy that I did...because I have loved what you have written so far...I agree with Kajal that you are a beginning, but already seem like a pro! Agar shuruvat itna aacha hai tho aage tho bahut hi aacha hoga! you got me hooked Sonia! update soon! 😊

-Shweta

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