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RECAP:

- Ranbir gets jealous when he finds out kanya is in love with someone.

- They makeout.

:::Part 9:::

Ranbir gets off from Kanya. He runs his fingers through his hair.

K: Ranbir....? [no clue what is happening]

R: I am sorry. Mujhe aisa nahi karna chahiye tha.

K: Kya...?

R: It won't happen again. I promise. [he leaves]

K: [should she cry? Isn't it a good thing he stopped. She goes to her room]

Kanya's Room

She starts crying. She shouldn't. But she can't help it. She loves him. And she knows she will never fall for another guy, the way she keeps falling for him. It felt so good to be in his arms. Now she just feels so empty. But that is it. It will not happen again. She won't cry anymore.....just tonight.

She cries herself to sleep.

Ranbir's room

Why did he do that? He knew he can't stop himself from going close to her. It's been happening since the second they met. He should've stayed away from her. Now she probably hates him and doesn't feel safe around him. Aaaargh!! This has never happened before. he doesn't even like girls. he always stays away from them. Why is Kanya different? And what about that girl from that night. How can he forget her? She has been in his dream every single night. Maybe if she wasn't there, he could be with Kanya. No...he couldn;t. Kanya loves someone else...someone else...not him. Maybe the girl loves someone else too. But whatever happens he will stay away from Kanya.

He ends up spending a sleepless night

In the morning: Breakfast table

Ranbir is eating breakfast. He is ready to go to work.

Kanya comes down.

God, he can't even look at her It looks like she has been crying all night and it's all his fault.

R: Um...main kaam pein jaa raha hoon. I won;t be home till really late.

K: [he is trying to ignore her] Mujhe bhi kuch kehna hai tumse.

R: [looks at her]

K: Main wapas jaa rahi hoon.

R: wapas?

K: haan, aaj hi.

R: You can't go back....kanya don't go. I said sorry. I really am sorry.

K: Mujhe nahi rehna hai yaha.

R: Mom parso aajayenge. Stay till then.

K: Ranbir..main nahi reh sakti .

R: you are staying. Mujhe kaam ke liya nikalna hai. Bye. [he leaves]

He comes home really late at night. he goes straight to his room. And starts changing. The door flies open. It's Kanya and she is very mad.

K: How could you?

R: Kanya...?

K: Tumne mere upar watchmen laga rakhi hai?? Tum aise mujhe nahi rokh sakte. [so angry and frustrated]

R: So you did try to leave? Good, maine pehle se sabko batadi to make sure you don't leave.

K: Ranbir tum aisa nahi kar sakte ho. [she starts crying] mujhe nahi rehna hain yaha.

Ranbir comes close. god it hurts to see her cry.

R: itna nafrat karti ho mujhse?

K: [stops crying, looks up] Pyaar karti hoon.

R:......what?

K: Pyaar karti hoon...I love you. [starts crying again]

R: kanya...[comes close to her wiping her tears off]

K: [tries to pull away] choona maat. har baar aisa hota hai. Tum paas aate ho phir chale jate ho.

R: [tries to touch her face]

K: [slaps it away] Main yaha nahi rahoongi. yeh koi khel nahi hain. Aur tum meri jaazbaaton ki saath khel rahi ho. Do pal ke liye apni baahon mein le leti ho, phir chod deti ho. Is baar nahi.

she turns to leave, he grabs her hand. he turns her around and kisses her very hard. She loves him. Not someone else. It makes him happy.

K: [she shouldn't do this. But one last kiss can't hurt. She loves him. She has a right to kiss him]

R: [he deepens the kiss. His arms wrapped around her waist. he pulls her closer]

R: Not today. there is no stopping today.

he slowly pushes her onto the bed. Kissing every inch of her. he can't get enough of her. And then they.......obviously do it...you know "it".

In the morning.

Kanya wakes up wrapped in Ranbir's arms. he is so perfect, every inch of him is so perfect. This was the best night of her life. She can't stop smiling. But now she should leave. She tries to get up.

R: mMm..going somewhere? [burying his face in her hair]

K: nahi...woh!

R: [he starts kissing her throat]

K: Ranbir stop it.

R: Stop it?? yeh kaunsa shabd hai. Maine pehle kabhi nahi suna.

Kanya pushes him and gets up. Wrapping the sheet around her.

K: mere kapre kaha hai...[looks around]

R: Kapron ki kya zaroorat?

K: Mujhe mere kamre mein jana hai. Ranbir seriously bataonaa. Meri kapre kaha hai?

R: [comes over and wraps his arm around her waist from the back. he slowly moves her hair and kisses her on the shoulder.]

K: Ranbir......!!

R: mMm..you don't need clothes. Mere saath yaha raho.

he kisses her again and pushes her toward the bed.

K: servants kya sochenge.

R: Ke hum bimar hai.

K: Ek saath? [they are on the bed now]

R: [winks at her] main ek itna handsome ladka hoon...tum itni...nahi itni nahi but thori si khoobsurat ladki ho. Are they stupid? ofcourse something will happen.

K: Kitna rude ho tum. pata nahi main tumhari chakkar main kaisi phas gayi. pehli din hi mujhe pata chal gaye tha...

R: [kisses her to make her shut up. he wraps his arm around her waist and pulls her closer. And then they make love again........]

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Posted: 17 years ago
it was beautifual.

finally she said, she loves him.

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