`*`CHASE`*` {A-K} Chp 14/2!!!pg. 152 ❤️ - Page 12

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hey guyz thanx a ton...for yur cooperation...encouragement.. nd yur wonderful commentz...really liked it nd felt happy yu guyz liked my story....i will def cont..i cant disappoint yu guyz so STAY TUNE...i will post a short part of chp five...cuz den da Mystery man will be introduced so i dunt want 2 put it all in one....❤️ ❤️ ❤️
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Chapter Five- Part III


"Yeah," he said. "He's watched you SLEEP."
"No, I would have known," she cried out.
He tapped the cassette player and the note. "It's all there."
"What if I had opened my eyes…….what if I woke up and saw him?"
"That's what he wants you to do," he said. "But just not yet. He'd be upset if you forced him to hurt you now."
"Why?"
"You'd be speeding up his agenda."
"Go on. I'm not scared," she reiterated
"What I just told you…….that's what he wants us to know.
Here's what we're theorizing at this point. He lives in Des Moines, and he's someone you come into contact with all the time. Maybe even on a daily basis. You're friendly with him, but like I said before, he's reading all sorts of other messages. Josh said he's in the adoration stage. That means he thinks you're pretty damned perfect, and he wants to protect you. The guy's obsessing now, and he's clearly at war with himself. He wants us to believe he is anyway. He might genuinely like you, Kripa, and in that case he doesn't want to hurt you, but he knows he's going to because no matter what you do, you're going to disappoint him. In his mind, there's no way you can live up to his expectations---he'll make sure of that---and there's no way you can win."
"You said he's in the adoration stage but that's going to change. When do you think it will happen?"
"Are you asking me how soon? I don't know," he admitted. "But I don't think we'll have to wait long. You could already be……tarnishing…..in his mind. Look, he's got to find something wrong with you so he can feel betrayed. Maybe it will be the way you smile. All of a sudden, he's going to think you're mocking him, or maybe he'll believe you're coming on to some other man. That would definitely enrage him. He'd like us to think he's tormented. Remember, he promised Prithvi that if you ran away from him, he might not follow you. But he also boasted that he is brilliant and that he wants more of a challenge."
"Maybe he'll get tired of this…..obsession."
"He isn't going to go away." Angad's voice had a sharp edge now. "The fantasy's controlling him. He can't stop. It's a cat—and—mouse game to him and you're the mouse. He likes the hunt. The more challenging it is, the more fun. The game won't be over until you have begged for mercy."
He leaned forward and studied her closely."Well Kripa? Are you scared yet?"

Edited by ndnhottie110586 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: ndnhottie110586



thanx 4 da lovely commentz.....nd encouragin me 2 cont....yeh he haz watch her sleep...knwz everythin abt her...pretty gross...dunt yu think? welll i cant say nethin as of now...just stay tune...all yur questionz will be answered as da story goez on....thanx i wont stop writin it...since yu are really looking forward to it i cant disappoint yu..i will cont soon ❤️



No problem hun....you deserve the praise honestly....Your right....it is pretty gross....it makes me sick but I am so interested in finding out who exactly it is...and wht the heck he wants from Kripa and out of all WHY???....and of course the AK romance..lol....
Good you better not stop or else I will join the above user in finding your house and smacking you....lol........nahhh..jus kidding...😆
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"Well Kripa? Are you scared yet?"...lol......I would think angad was not supposed to say that....isnt his job to keep the victims calm and not freak them out like that??😆😆
If I were in Kripa's place and he had asked me that...i Would have said "DAMNED HELL I AM"....lol.....
This mystery man is nasty!!!! Ugh! I hate him already...lol........I have an Idea..how about I join Angad's FBI team and find that son of a gun (okay....dont laugh...trying to write clean here..)..lol...😆
Loved the part!!
Conti soon
Fabulous Work!👏
P.S: I love the way you structure your sentences...😳
Edited by love_iqbal_khan - 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: love_iqbal_khan



No problem hun....you deserve the praise honestly....Your right....it is pretty gross....it makes me sick but I am so interested in finding out who exactly it is...and wht the heck he wants from Kripa and out of all WHY???....and of course the AK romance..lol....
Good you better not stop or else I will join the above user in finding your house and smacking you....lol........nahhh..jus kidding...😆



WoW i must be one lucky one...got two people already after me...LOLwell every1 iz interested in letting da cat out of da bag..but dey da thrill haz just begun...sooo yu can't just spill da beanz can yu??? LOL....but i sure want yu 2 keep me updated on how yu like my story so far...😉 ❤️
Edited by ndnhottie110586 - 17 years ago
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HAHAHAHAH....yur one hell of a person.....def something i must say...LOL 😉 ❤️
Edited by ndnhottie110586 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: ndnhottie110586



WoW i must be one lucky one...got two people already after me...LOLwell every1 iz interested in letting da cat out of da bag..but dey da thrill haz just begun...sooo yu can't just spill da beanz can yu??? LOL....but i sure want yu 2 keep me updated on how yu like my story so far...😉 ❤️


lol.....yes....I will be after you if you stop and dont worry....i wont become like that freak in ur ff and go threaten to kill you or watch you sleep!🤣...
Yea....of course you cant spill the beans right now.....i was just saying which questions are in my mind about the story so far..lol......I'll make sure i keep you updated.....man...looking at my excitement on reading the next part..i can imagine how my readers wud feel when I dont update my ff for a day or two......lol....
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: ndnhottie110586



HAHAHAHAH....yur one hell of a person.....def something i must say...LOL 😉 ❤️



Lol.....yup.....i wanted to be the first to comment.!!!
Yes...I'll admit...IM CRAZY!!.........in a good way...lol....not a psycho...😆😆😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
grt part....dude that man is reallt creepy...and angad is asking her if she's scared...lol...who wouldn't be,,,,,please cont. soon
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: love_iqbal_khan

"Well Kripa? Are you scared yet?"...lol......I would think angad was not supposed to say that....isnt his job to keep the victims calm and not freak them out like that??😆😆
If I were in Kripa's place and he had asked me that...i Would have said "DAMNED HELL I AM"....lol.....
This mystery man is nasty!!!! Ugh! I hate him already...lol........I have an Idea..how about I join Angad's FBI team and find that son of a gun (okay....dont laugh...trying to write clean here..)..lol...😆
Loved the part!!
Conti soon
Fabulous Work!👏
P.S: I love the way you structure your sentences...😳



LOL welll yu haven't read wht kripa'z response is....of course yu re close...n i liked yur response tooo....sure sure....yur def wanted LOL i will give yu da credit.....yu have a way of gettin thinz done so yu might help angad sort out a lil...LOL wanna join in...i'll add yu lter on ❤️

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