`*`CHASE`*` {A-K} Chp 14/2!!!pg. 152 ❤️ - Page 10

Originally posted by: lovestorm

wow... the "fan's" such a creep... it made mi own skin crawl just thinking of her being stalked like dat 😡 great part 😊

he is a real creep yet diz iz nuttin wait til yu hear da rest...yu will def freak out..imagine wht will happen 2 kripa? ❤️

Originally posted by: chocolate p

who the heck is this creepy man?? ya he stole her undies..lol...hahah ..so gay, how stupid could a man be..ok i have had couple guys stalk me to my house but nobodys ever been so creepy..why would they be..cause i beat em up..lol...ok anyways this mans creepy hes an emo..ya..hes an emo..lol

sam.

welll da creepy man iz da Mystery Man which will be revealed in da end LOL so hang in der...long way 2 go...well since angad wazn't by ur side yu had 2 take da matterz in yur own hand...but kripa haz angad so no fear...LOL emo hahhahaa i like dat!!!! LOL 😉 ❤️

i knw yu guyz r pretty freaked out w/ da Mystery Man....i can make it less more scary if datz wht yu want..but den der will be no point of wht im tryin 2 get across....if yu guyz want me 2 i'll stop writin...i dunt want yu guyz 2 be scared or be disappointed becuz itz more abut suspense den romance which yu guyz r lookin forward to...der will be romance but just not yet!!!!!!Let me knw...i really dunt mind...i wud love yur opinions... ❤️

just cont. with what ur doing.....its just fab....cont. soon

i think the suspense adds a lot more character to your work 😛 keep up the great work 👏 n don't even think of stopping plz 😳

fab part
just loved it...
the man stalking kripa surely is a creepy but it adds suspence & makes it worth...
will just love AK together...
continue soon

Originally posted by: ndnhottie110586

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i knw yu guyz r pretty freaked out w/ da Mystery Man....i can make it less more scary if datz wht yu want..but den der will be no point of wht im tryin 2 get across....if yu guyz want me 2 i'll stop writin...i dunt want yu guyz 2 be scared or be disappointed becuz itz more abut suspense den romance which yu guyz r lookin forward to...der will be romance but just not yet!!!!!!Let me knw...i really dunt mind...i wud love yur opinions... ❤️

Dont u dare stop!!! its not a threat..its a promise..dont u dare to stop if u do..ill find ur house and samck u lol....i really like freaky stories and mystries too..a.nd i seem to fall in love with the emo guy..lol...no the victims of emo guy and the saviour of the viction of the emo guy..lol..complicated..i love the suspense+ they are getting closer..cause they dont know each other they need to get closer in which the emo guy is helping..i love him for that..unknowlingly hes helping them..hahah looser...ok so ya..they are getting closer and then the romance would be much more intresting..so hun if u stop...😭😭 and then u can Pm me the parts..lol

sam.

hey..i just the last 3 parts and they are simply awesome..really well written..its like something out of CSI..lol..please stick to your original plan..you don't have to make any alterations..continue soon

first of all: AWESOME CONCEPT!! I LOVE IT!! (Hershy thanks for letting me know about this ff)....

Now...i read the whole thing in one sitting.....a lot of question went through my mind as i read but they eventually got answered... 😆 .....and its so freaky!!!! The guys watched her sleep??? wth is that all about.....yeeshhh sum1 is crazily in love with kripa...or maybe not......but if the person is obsessed with Kripa......Angad has competition....lol...and since the guy has been through her stuff and watched her sleep....im guessing its a friend of Kripa's cuz im sure she wudnt let any stranger in the house like that....

And hun...a good ff doesnt HAVE TO HAVE romance in it...your fanfic is perfect..its got suspense which makes u wanna keep reading it...Angad and Kripa are already hitting it off the wall and we can sense some romance coming...lol.....but dont stop writing this ff.......im sure when the readers say its freaky they mean its so unusual and weird not scary....It wud suck if you stopped writing this ff...please conti soon......loved it....cant wait to read more! 👏👏👏

hie.
ure fanfic is so different..its nice..
continue the same way..