Kya Mujhe Pyar Hai? *AK Part 27;Page 23 - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 3

Recep:Kripa went to Angad's house to help copying the assignment 10 times

Kripa hands Angad back his cell phone after calling her house to inform her parents that she's at his house.
Kripa:Let's start now(gets some paper and pens)
Angad:Ok

Kripa is writing on the desk and Angad is writing on the bed. After about 2 hours both are finished 3 copies each.

Angad:My hand hurts (holding it with the other)
Kripa:We still need to do 4 more
Angad:Nahin no more
Kripa:What do you mean no more...we still have 4 left. It's your fault you even have to do this, Angad next time assignment karna ok.
Angad:Kripa, I promise. From now on I'll always do my assignments and if I ever forget I know you'll always remind me (smiles)Waise bhi mujhe abhi bohot bhook lagi hai, kuch kaya bhai nahin
Kripa:(smiles)Okay, I'll go make some food
Angad:Need help?
Kripa:Sure

Angad and Kripa go downstairs to the kitchen and make some pav bajji. Dadi wasn't there anymore, they thought that she was probably in her bedroom. Angad started cutting tomatoes while Kripa was cutting the onions. Suddenly Angad drops the knife on the table and holds his finger after screaming OUCH! Kripa stops cutting and looks at him, worried.

Kripa:Angad kya hua?

Angad had cut his finger and blood was coming out but before he could say anything, Kripa took his finger and put it in her mouth to suck out the blood. Angad just stared at her.

Kripa:Angad you should be more careful

Angad is still looking at her, and Kripa notices.

Kripa:Angad?

She waves her hand infront of his face and then he stops looking at her.

Angad:Huh?
Kripa:Tum jao aur betho, I'll finish on my own
Angad:No it's ok I'll help you
Kripa:Nahin tum jao aur tv dekho aur mein khana banaoogi
Angad:Fine but if you need anything I'm here
Kripa:Okay (smiles)

After about a half an hour Kripa is done making the pav bajji and calls Angad.

Kripa:Angad, kaana tayar hai
Angad:Wow smells great

Angad eats some and smiles at Kripa.

Angad:Kya baat hai Kripa, this is wonderful

Kripa smiles as they eat the pav bajji and then get back to work later on. After about an hour, Angad and Kripa are finally done writing.

Angad:Uh finally we are done
Kripa:Yeaah, mujhe ab jana chahiye mamma aur papa intasare kar rahe honge
Angad:Haan, theek hai. Um Kripa?
Kripa:Yep?
Angad:Mujhe pata hai dosti mein thank you nahin kehte lekin agar tum yahaan nahin hote toh phir mera kya hota. Thanks for all your help (smiles)
Kripa:Angad tumhe toh pata hai na, I'll always be there for you. Thanks kehne ki koi zarurat nahin hai.

Angad gives her a friendly hug and she leaves the Khanna house. She rings the doorbell of her house, her mom opens the door and she goes inside.

Gayatri:Kripa beta assignment finish kiya?
Kripa:Haan maa
Gayatri:Beta khana khaya?
Kripa:Haan, mamma mein bohot thak jayi hoon, kamre mein jaa rahi hoon
Gayatri:Theek hai beta

Kripa goes in her room and lies on her bed. She takes out her diary which was hidden under her pillow and starts writing in it.

Dear Diary,

Today Angad forgot to do his assignment, so Ms Kapoor told him to copy it 10 times! After school ended I went to his house and helped him write it all. We had a few more copies to do but then Angad was hungry, so we started to make pav bajji. He cut himself my accident. Pata nahin kyun par usse dard mein dekhar mujhe bhi dard hua tha. Maybe that only happened because I'm such a close friend afterall we know eachother for a long time and we share everything. Mujhe kya ho raha hai?

Edited by totally_desi - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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grt part....love the bloos scene...lol...cont. soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tiaz

wow...awesome fan-fic...plzzzz continue soon..:D


thanks tiaz
i'll post the next part tomorrow😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: BABY-GIRL7

grt part....love the bloos scene...lol...cont. soon


thanks
glad you enjoyed it
i will😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awesome Anjali!!!!!
I am so glad you decided to post it here!!!
Keep up the great work!
Good Luck! 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: love_iqbal_khan

Awesome Anjali!!!!!
I am so glad you decided to post it here!!!
Keep up the great work!
Good Luck! 👏 👏


Thanks jaan! Yep, I decided on posting it here since the other forum is quite unactive and I wanted to continue this fan-fiction.Thanks once again Ekta😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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thank you dear😛

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 4

Recap: Angad and Kripa finish the assignments, Kripa goes home and writes an entry in her diary

The next day Kripa wakes up, quickly gets ready and goes downstairs. She goes into the kitchen and finds her parents and brother there, eating breakfast.

Kripa: Good morning mamma, good morning papa, good morning bhai
Gayatri/Yash: Good morning beta
Josh: Good morning Kripa

They eat breakfast together and then Josh and Kripa leave for college. As they reach there, they meet up with Angad and Aaliyah at the front steps. After a few mintues of chatting, Josh and Aaliyah walk off together leaving Kripa and Angad alone. Angad walked away for a few minutes because a teacher had called him to discuss something. Kripa was standing alone waiting for him. Just then a guy was walking backwards blowing kisses at girls who were nearby. You can't see his face yet all you see is his mouth and his hands going over it when he was blowing kisses.

Boy: See you later girls (blowing kisses)

Since he was walking backwards he didn't see where he was going and bumped into Kripa. Both of them fell to the ground, and Kripa quickly got up.
Kripa: Can't you watch where your going?

The boy now gets up. You see his dark jeans and now the camera is going up so you can now you see his face. He's none other then the hot and dashing Vivan Bhatena. (Shabd from Maayka)



He just stood there staring at her.

Boy: Hey I'm Shabd, Shabd Sareen (grins and puts his hand out)

Kripa: Well, Shabd tumhare pass koi manners bhi hai kya? First you bump into me and then (interrupted)

Shabd takes his hands back and apologizes.

Shabd: Dekho im sorry
Kripa: Whatever (walks away in anger)
Shabd: Ise kya hua? (to himself)

Kripa goes back to Angad as he wasn't talking with the teacher anymore. Angad turns to see her.

Angad: Kripa kya hua? Naraaz lag rahi ho
Kripa: Woh koi stupid Shabd
Angad: Shabd? Kaun hai woh?
Kripa: Pata nahin but that guy has issuses (crosses her arms)

The bell rings, so they both head to class. Angad and Kripa walk into class and sit beside each other like they usuallly do. Angad is sitting at his desk,Kripa is sitting on his left side and the other seat beside kripa is empty. Shabd enters the class and sits beside Kripa but she didn't see him as she was talking with Angad.

Ms Kapoor: Class, we have someone new joining us, please welcome Mr. Shabd Sareen

Just then Kripa raises her head and sees Shabd, the guy who had bumped into her earlier and gets mad again. She leans towards Angad and whispers to him...

Kripa: Angad that's him, that's the stupid Shabd guy that bumped into me

Before he could whisper back Ms. Kapoor started speaking again.

Ms Kapoor: Angad tum Shabd ko jante hai right?

Kripa looks at Angad.

Angad: Yes Ms.Kapoor

Kripa looks at him with a shocked expression.

Kripa: Angad you know this guy? (whispering)
Angad: Yeah (whispering)
Kripa: Kaise? (whispering)
Angad: Dadi's friend's grandson. I met him a few times (whispering)

Ms Kapoor: Angad did you do your assignment copies or did you forget those too?
Angad: Yes m'aam I have them (takes them out)
Ms Kapoor: Well done Mr Khanna. Okay class take out your textbooks and we will start today's lesson

While everyone was taking out their books Shabd leaned over to Kripa. He couldn't stand having someone angry at him so he decided to apologize once again.

Shabd: Look I know your very mad, I'm sorry for what happened

Kripa just ignored him and listened to Ms Kapoor's lecture.
Edited by totally_desi - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awww wat a nice ficc...reaelly nicee....shabd is cutee...as long as he doesnt come in between AK...loll
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Smileyface

awww wat a nice ficc...reaelly nicee....shabd is cutee...as long as he doesnt come in between AK...loll


Aw thanks, glad you enjoy reading it. Yes I agree he's very cute, I just had to add him to the story. You'll have to continue reading it to find out if he does😉

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