FanFic ~**~ Destiny~**~ Part 6 page 13 - Page 4

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Posted: 17 years ago
#31
^Thanks

And New update coming up. 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 3

Sorry for the long wait.

Ranbir and Kanya are out eating dinner while Shanta Tai is running every where searching for Kanya.

So than Shanta decides to call Ranbir after:

Shanta Tai (ST)

ST: Oyeee Balllonn ki dukan. Tuna meri Kanya ko kya? Beechari pati nahin kahan hogi. Kis halat mein hogi?

Ranu: Ehhhhh Chipkali ki poonch zada bhonk (shout) matt. Yeah jo abhi tuna kaha na bechariiii kanya kahan hogi.. Woh koi beechari nahin hai.. ek dam callu hai.. Chipkali kahi ki.

ST: Tu na meri kanya ko callu kaha tu ruk bata muhje kaha hai tu.

Rannu closes the phone leaving Shanta angry.

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Ran Kan return back home..

Malika- Kanya aur Ranbir where were you both?

Kanya: Mami ji wohh..

Ranu- Tum chup main batata hoon.. woh kya ha na mom we were out to go eat lunch..

Malika- Oh I see I hope you both enjoyed..

Kanya: (Thinking) umm enjoy aur woh bhi is jungeee janwar ka sath.. beechara waiter ko bhi confuse kar ka rakh diya sooch raha hoga kosna pagaal aya gaya hai.

Ranbir... than takes Kanya with him to the room..

Kanya: Sach kahati hai wasia Shanta tai tum jasa janwar ko toh jungle mein jodh dana chahiya...

Ranbir: Ayee chikali jada udhh matt galti kisi sa bhi ho sakti hai.

Kanya: yeh toh ni ki waiter na galat order la diya aur tumna usa chata mar diya.

Ranbir: woh tum hi toh thi jo roo rahi thii mujhe woh chahiya tha. Aur mujhe deekha nahin gaya.

Kanya: shut upp

Ranbir: kamal hai ek toh care karo aur upar se "shut up"?

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Reva out there is making a new plan with Shanya, and decide to use Shanta Tai as help..

which Shata tai overhears and sprints into Kanya and Ranbir's room.

Trying to walk up kanya..:

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ST: Yeh toh woh ganda lag raha hai.. lagta hai ki kanya waha par hai..

Ehh Kanya get up woh phata Kaparra ek aur naya plan banya rahi hai.. while moving shanta accidenlty slips and fells on ranbir's legs..

Ranuu:; Akkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk (Shouting) Natasha Natasha Natsha..

Kanya also gets up..

Shanta: Lo isa raat mein bhi Nataha hi deekh thi hai.

Rannu: Ehhh tu yahan kya kar rahi hai.. aur awwww meri paar.

Shanta: Zada bhoook mat main toh tujhe yeh batana ayi oh wohh jo terii Babii hai phata kapdra.. ek aur naya plan bana rahi hai...

Ranta and Kanya: Kyaaa

THE END sorry can't think of thinking else.😆

Enjoy For now.😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
#33
loll think moreeeee cuz i wann read moreeeeee that was goood i loved it
update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#34
gr8 update
I love shanta tai and ranbir 2gether
Plzz continue
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Posted: 17 years ago
#35
Aww thank you all. 😳 Will try to continue soon. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#36
pls continue sooon.... i loved part 3
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Posted: 17 years ago
#37
aman its nice..hope u cont soon......! 😳 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#38

Part 4:

Espiode starts with Ranbir and Kanya thinking what Reva is up too..

and than:

Kanya: Efff tuhara ghar ek dam pagal kahna hai. Main toh ja rahi nahana..

Ranbir: Me first..

Than ranbir rushes to the bathroom which leaves Kanya shouting and knocking the door.

Kanya: Saandh kahi ka ek dam janwar hai janwar..

After an hour Ranbir comes out and Kanya goes.. and comes out wearning a nice red color sari..

And Ranbir just keeps looking at her..

Kanya: yeh Ankaan phad phad kar kya deekh raha ho? Chala abh..

Ranbir: Haa chalo

Out side everyone is stunned to see Kanya in a new avatar.

Malika- Kanya you look amazing in a sari

Kanya: Thanku Mamiji.

Ranbir: Mom iski jada tarif mat karo.

Kanya- Kyu tum jalta ho? Main ek dam slim and fit. Aur tum ek dam kan Kajura. Ganda kahi kaa.

Everyone laughs..

Malika: Okay ab tum dono late ho raha ho.. go.

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In the Car:

Ranbir: Ehh ek toh mom na tumha kya zarurat hai mera sath mera friend ki party main jana ki?

Kanya: Mujhe kya padi hai.. Tumhara dost bhi ek dam thumhari tara hoga.. Ek naya ganda..

Ranbir: Just shup okay.. Tumhari friends bhi toh ek dam chipkali ki tarah hai..

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both Ranbir and Kanya enter the party..

Ranbir's friend comes up and takes Ranbir which leaves Kanya standing alone..

Roma comes and starts talking to Ranbir and asks him to dance with her..

Kanya just looks with a evil look and ask Ranbir to come.

Kanya: Hum abhi vapas ja raha hai.

Ranbir: Kyu

Kanya: I don't like your stupid party's.

Ranbir: I'm not going you can go if you want.

Kanya: Picks up her cell phone and says Mami jii

Ranbir- Acha achaa caloo.

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In the car:

Ranbir: Kahi jalna ki khushbo nahin ayarahi..

Kanya: kya matlab..

Ranbir: Tum achi tarah samaj rahi ho ki main kya kahana cha raha hoon.

Kanya: Tum kahana cha raha ho ki main tumsa aur wohh titli reva sa jalti hoon? aur woh bhi tum jasa Saandh ka liya never

Ranbir: Quit lying I can see by the expressions you were showing.. I just wished I had a video camera to record that.

Kanya: ahhhhhh tum kuch dar ka liya apna ya stupid sense of humor rok sakta ho?

Ranbir: Ehh Chipkali I have full faith in my sense of humor.. It always makes sense

Kanya: Ahh kuch samaj toh ati nahin kya kahana cha raha ho. Aur yeah sab choodo aur yeah socho ki hum ghar ja kar sab sa kya kaho ga. Ki Hum itni jaldi vapas kasa ayaga?

Ranbir: Woh tumhari problem hai tum sochoo..

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Malika- Tum dono itni jaldi kasa vapas ayaga?

Shanta Tai thinking in her mind- party aur yeah sanndh. Woh bhi Kanya ka saath kabhi nahin.

Reva Thinking in her mind: Kuch toh hua hai..

Malika- Ab kuch Batayo ga bhi ka nahin? Itni Jaldi kaisa vapas ayaga?

The End

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Edited by *Aman_I* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#39
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
kanyas jealous!
realli nice! 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#40
great update...plz continue soon 😊

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