FanFic ~**~ Destiny~**~ Part 6 page 13 - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
#11

Nice Aman!!
Continue soon!! Sounds like this will be fun!! 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
#12
okies so jaldi update soon 😛 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Aww thanku all.. Update coming up. 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#14

Part 1: Just a perfect beginning...

(Shot part)

Tringgg tringgg the alarm rang..

Ranbir got up first next to him Kanya's sleeping

Ranbir- Kya yeh mom bhi naa. First I had to face this Miss. 2 by2 only at home and now at office too.

Ehhhh Kanya.... oyee Chipkali get up don't u remember mom said were working at office togther now.

Kanya- Ehhhh yeh koi tarika hai kisiko jagana ka? Junglee Saandh kahi ka.

Ranbir- Ehhh tum na mujhee Junglee Saandh kaha? Tum kya hoo you little chipkali pata bhi nahin lagta ki tum is room mein ho bhi ka nahin.

Kanya- oyee get lost btw you should thank me that I'm helping you.

Ranbir- Excuse mee thank I don't even know the meaning of that word. And why do you think that I will say thank especially to you.

Kanya- ehhhhhhhhh enough I'm not going to office with you..

mamii ji mammi jii..

Malika comes running..

Malika comes running...- Kya hua kanya.

Kanya- Mamiji I'm thinking of not going to office anymore.. cause some people here have problems with me going to office...

Ranbir (thinking in his mind)- Yeah kanya ehhhh ek dam Kanyaaa jaisi hi acting karagi.

Ranbir- Mom see kanya doesn't want to go to office we shouldn't force her. Well atleast thats what I'm thinking.

Malika- You shut up I dold you not to trouble her anymore and now I'm going to call the office and let them know that from now on you and Kanya will work in the same Cabin.

Ranbir ( in his mind) ohhh nooo ekkkkkkkk

Malika leaves..

Kanya goes up to Ranbir and puts her elbow on his shoulder.. Kyuu kya hua laga na ek jhatka. Ranbir takes Kanya's arm down and says youuu you just wait and watch asa kuch karu ga ki mom tumha khud office sa dhaka mar kar nikal dagi.

The end

Sorry friends a short update don't have enough time to do an long update.😳

Anyways enjoy

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Posted: 17 years ago
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very nice.

ranbir is so scared of his mom.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#16

hehee i was calling u DI coz other people were calling u the same and they're the same age as u (ahem-ahem wahiii)😆😆😆 anyhoo OMG this part was soooooooooooo long Mizz lawyer😳😳😳 I finished even before i started reading it *rolling eyes*😵

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sam78

very nice.

ranbir is so scared of his mom.

thankuu..😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: JK_5

hehee i was calling u DI coz other people were calling u the same and they're the same age as u (ahem-ahem wahiii)😆😆😆 anyhoo OMG this part was soooooooooooo long Mizz lawyer😳😳😳 I finished even before i started reading it *rolling eyes*😵

🤣 I tried but I didn't want you all to find the update boring. see like u did "😵"😭

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Posted: 17 years ago
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that was really good...make sure u update it soon 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#20
hawwwwww that was an OKay part 😆 😆 sounds like what we already see in the serial, as in the fights 😆

short parts are better than long ones 😆 😆 so keep it up like this 😛 😆

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