FF:by rainshine_11:pg 51 ENDING!!!!!!!!!!

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Niroo

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Posted: 17 years ago

#191

what that was not cool at all.
continue soon

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bollyrockstar

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Posted: 17 years ago

#192

so im new on this site...but def love your story and just read it all in one day haha!! good job!!

plz continue soon!! suspense is killerrr

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jennie

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Posted: 17 years ago

#193

amazing job 😃 i love it i wanna know why she did this... please continue sooonnn

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Raina

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Posted: 17 years ago

#194

Thanz alot guyz...

i actually thought u wud hate 😭me for even thinking of summthin like that but believe me Ranbir n Kanya will be more closer

btw......luv y'alll

THANZ ALOT😳😉

Edited by rainshine_11 - 17 years ago

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Raina

@rainshine_11

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Posted: 17 years ago

#195

Ri:woh america mey hai
R;kya kanya zinda hai.....kanya zinda hai......mein use lene jao ga......lekin yeh batao usne ehsa kyun kiya?
Ri:yeh wohi bata sakti hai
Ranbir leaves when riya grabs his hand
Ri:mein bhi chalti hun
R:woh waha kese rahti hai?
Ri:college mey uske dosto ke pas....lekin mere paas uska adress hai...woh akeli rehti hai...lekin sab hai wahan uske liye
....Ayaan comes and riya tells him she'll b bac w/ kanya
A:what?! woh zinda hai?
Ranbir n rya sum how get tickets n leave n land in USA...
.....................................
KNOCK KNOCK
K:aati hun....roko baba
She opens the door n sees ranbirs face.....n ranbir sees hers
They both cant believe their eyes...
Kanya turns around un able to face ranbir
He comes in and closes the door.....
Kanya faces him
K:woh mein-
(((((((((SLAP))))))))
Ranbir gives kanya a slap w/ real anger
Kanya looks at him w/ tears in her eyes...
and then ranbir takes her in his arms....
and he gets teary too....
R:kyun kiya tumne ehsa?....tumari himat kese hui.....pata hai mein kitna....chodo tumhe kya farak ho ga.....
He had his chin on her head and she was buried in his coat crying it all out..
Ranbir leaves kanya and goes out the door n bac in w/ riya....
R:riya ise packing karao hum kuch ganto mey wapas india jaa rahe hai.....
Riya pulled kanya.....into her room and started packing ....while kanya took her anger off on riya
K:riya maine tumhe meri kasam di thi.....riya tum esa kese kar sakti ho....riya tum janti ho ke-
Riya just snapped
Ri: MERI KOI GALTI NAHI HAI.....JIJ NE MUJHE TUMARE SAAT BAAT KARTE SUN LIYE.....AUR TUM MERE PAR GHUSA kaRO AUR WahAN SE JIJ....MEIN BHI INSAAN HUN...
maine kuch nahi kiya..(crying)
Kanya went over and hugged riya real tight..
K:mujhe maaf kardo....im sry....plz mujhe maaf kardo...plz
Riya forced her to do her packing and soon they were on the flight n in india..
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Ayaan spread the news that kanya was alive.....and everyone was tensed sitting in the living room.....
Ranbir stepped in placed her bags and left for his room
And then in stepped kanya and RIya
Everyone asked her question n she explained how she went to the doctor what the doc had said...and that there was no chance....
Reva:yeh toh bohot aachi baat hai(whispers)ab sari property...giggles
M:jao beta ranbir ke paas jao....
Kanya left for their room....she opened the door and found ranbir staring out the window....
Kanya got the guts to go about next to him...but lost her courage and was walking back out the door (crying) when ranbir called "kanya"
She turned and around and went to ranbir standing there waiting for him to speak......but he stayed silent....
Then rnbir just squeshed her into his arms and they both sttayed in eachothers arms for what seemed like nothing but was alot......
Then ranbir asks:kyun mujhe chodh kar chali gayi thi?....kyun kanya?
K:ranbir.....(takes a deep breath)...wohh din jab sab ne masak mey ke diya tha ke shayad mein maa bane wali hun....mein aur riya doctor ke paas gaye the...humne test kara yi.....lekin negetive aayi.....aur woh sirf food poisoning tha...
R:i no u told me....but wat was the reason u left...???
K:doctor ne mujhe phir bulaya tha....aur unone kaha ke mein maa nahi ban sakti
Ranbir n Kanya and everything went black n white
K:aur mein dusare doctor se milne wali thi ...lekin mere doctor ne mana kiya...
aur mein tumhe yeh baat batake tumari zindagi barbaat nahi karna chati is liye mein tumari zindagi se humesha chali jana chaati thi....aur ab bhi mera phasla badla nahi.....tumari aur shanaya ki shaadi ho jaye aur mein humesha ke liye USA chali jau gi
R:KYA....TUMARA DIMAK TOH KARAB NAHI HO GAYA???
the arguement keeps going until morning....when they find eachotheer sleeping arms in arms.....n this time ranbir wakes up first...when he hears a knock...
M:kanya?.....
R:maa....woh so rahi hai....
M:use utao appointment hai....
R:appointment?...kesi appointment?
M:doctor ki....mujhe pura vishvas hai ke kanya maa ban sake gi...
With this excitement ranir goes to kanya when malika leaves for breakfast..
Ranbir stares at her laying there in sleep......the win blowing in from the window and touching kanyas face.....he gently placed a kiss on her eyes and it made kanya wake up....ranbir was on his knees by the bed....
K:sry woh mein so gayi........aaj se mein mere ghar vapas chali jau gi....
R:bakwas baand karo aur tayar ho jao.....
............................................................ .....
Kanya and Malika went to a doctor who was a frind of malika
Doc:kanya ko toh koi problem nahi hai....shes absolutely fine!
M:kya?
K:yeh kese ho sakta hai?
Malika and kanya left and while talking malika thought of going to the doctor kanya said she had gone to ......
when they arrived there.....the doctor said like he had said b4...that kanya is capable of being a mother...
Malika cudnt sand it and threatened the doc she wud call the police....
the doc admitted that he was bribed by a woman in a black outfit w/ a veil over her face....
the doc said shes probably outside, since he said she was alwayz here when kanya was......
Malika and kanya went outside and saw the woman the doc was talking bout....somehow the woman figured they found out and started running and kanya followed her ....got her hand....but then she set free and escaped...
WHO IS SHE???????

HOPE U LIKE IT......RANBIR N KANYA WILL ALWAYZ B TOGETHER

Edited by rainshine_11 - 17 years ago

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Raina

@rainshine_11

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Posted: 17 years ago

#196

Originally posted by: iqbal_neha89
great

thanz alot ur the 1st one to read just when i was editing...

plz cont reading n commenting

thanz😉

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Shazeen

@miss5stars

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Posted: 17 years ago

#197

omg whoooo is it--this is rele intresting 😆 😳

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Roshni

@dilkeroshni

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Posted: 17 years ago

#198

I LOVE IT.. great.. hehe can't wait to find out who she is...

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sam

@sam78

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Posted: 17 years ago

#199

very nice.

wow ranbir and kanya are back together. 👏

i'm sohappyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

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Mina

@Mina H

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+ 4

Posted: 17 years ago

#200

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww i just love ur updates!!!!!!!!!!!! even those dis is da first tme iam replying!!! but i always read wot u write, and it was just toooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo goooooooooooooooooooooodddddddddddddddddddddddddddd 👏!!!! loved it!!!!!!!!!!!! and thank kan is bac!!!!

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