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Posted: 17 years ago
hey it was a nice part
looks like Angad is getting jealous and now will turn some what possseive type where the man thinks she only belongs to him and will constantly keep reminding her.
cool part once again.
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Posted: 17 years ago
omg!! i was about to ask u when u were gonna introduce riddhima and u finally did! wooohoo!! and about time!!
aww armaan is fida over riddhima soo cute!! now kripa can tease him about riddhima! hehee!
and boy was armaan sayin a bit too much...poor kripa was blushing and aww poor him...he is gonna be beaten to bits by kripa!!
and what the heck was wrong with angad...starin at kripa, whisperin in ear, dancing closely with him...did her lecture impact him that much or was it the way she dressed hmmmm?? well he ain't gettin back kripa that easily!
great part! looved it!
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Posted: 17 years ago
armaan is so hilarious😆 loved this part cont soon plz!!!!!!!!!👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
really cute amazing and exciting loved it pls do con soon cant wait
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Posted: 17 years ago
What is Angad going to do?Armaan got struck by Rodz at first sight,it's going to be more fun.He have to maintain his acting with Kripa ang at the same time he had to impress Ridz,it's really going to be fun😆
It will be hard for to hide her love towards Angad,if he starts showing more affection to her😉
Edited by teri_susan - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey dear it was simply great and lovely part can't wait to read what will happen next and i really want them to get together soon so i colud have some romance part awwwwwwwwww feel so sorry for kripa hope angad got some sense in him
pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee continue soon
love ya
mittal
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: rima791

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wonderful part thankss hun glad you liked the update😃
armaan😆😆😆 omg!! he is just too funny, finally ridz came😳 yup finally she is here for our adorable armaan😛
poor armaan, he is def getting some spanks from kripa for sure😆😆 lol nah kripa is not that cruel😆
hmm angad was really quite😕 lol he always is ...poor guy😆
can't wait till kripa teases armaan about love at first sight
do cont soon choco😃 will do now !

Originally posted by: superstar15

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Now that i read the part, wat a game armaan and kripa are playing
its just so funny lol yeh seems like fun to huh😆, aww armaan is in love with our ridizie but too bad
hes taken hehehe lol yup poor armaan 😆, i loved angad's reactions in this part too much
jealousy for him, and wen angad said you look better in my arms
then his yup there's the jealous angad for you😆 though he is telling the truth lol😛means he does believes wen kripa said the truth and lets see wha thappens next😉
now i have a feeling he is going go after her and win her back and
he must have realised he loves her so now angad is now on a mission
to break armaan and kripa hehehe, maybe they shud include ridz and neeve
in ths plan, well i hope things get better soon plz cont soon thankss hun! will cont today! and i am waiting
for a new part for ur new ff His Sweetheart i'll try and update that today too and plz vote for new ak ff by me
Love Ya Hun <3 ya 2
Rhea🤗

Originally posted by: marzia

omg this was so cute aww thank you😃

plzz continue soon. will do ton.!
i loved it.. thankss glad you luved it😳

Originally posted by: iamsmart

Wow! so Angad is actually feelin guilty.. yup he is, suprising i know😆.and now he's even more jealous. afterall he said to kripa ?that you look better in my arms than you do in his?.😉 hahah yup there's the jealous angad😉though he is true about it😆 aww.... Armaan is in love.😃 yup luv at first sight 😃wonderful part. loved it. can't wait to read the next part. cont soon. thankss hun glad you liked the update, will con ton. 😃

Sana

Originally posted by: Kaj!

choco!!!! hey!😃 reading ur fan fic after ages hahaha yup that is for sure!. it was a very entertaining part glad to know you enjoyed reading the part, especially armaan. i wanna see his butt being kicked in by kripa😆 lol you will but later in the ff😉😆 thankss!

Originally posted by: deeya123

great part thankyou deeya!😛

i really liked the relationship between kripa and armaan.he is indeed a good friend and finally ridhima has entered.yup ar friendship is def. something!! and yeh i thought about time she entered😆
loved when angad said u look better in my arms than his.that was superb glad you liked that part hehe😆
cont soonwill do now!

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: *F^a^i^z^a*

sweeet; awww that was an awesome part. thankss glad you liked the update 😃lol armaan fianlly caught sight of his ridimaa hahah yep finally😆, angad is so totally jelous but e deserves it. yep he def. is and of course he was the one to drive kripa away from himself I just hope his jelousy isnt a game and its true nah he is guilty but that doesn't mean he will get kripa that quickly right😉; keep it choco and I loved your other ff 'his sweetheart' thanks hun and glad you like my other ff!!😃

Originally posted by: Mimi_Rani

oooh awesome part finally thankss sukhi!!😃angad is starting to get super duper jealous..hahah yep he def. is jealous 😉.haila armaan is in love hehe. lol yep 😆..i cant believe it well actually i can lol..yep its armaan after all lol..and angad finally said something nice about kripa instead of being such a rude jerk under a pathetic misunderstanding ...suprising huh he actually has nice things to say to her 😆..ooh cant wait to read more please do continue soon cant wait to read...c= thankss hun will cont. tonight!!

sukhi :)

Originally posted by: angullgrl91

gr8 part! thankss hun! glad you liked the part!!

Originally posted by: Kiran_1

Soooo Armaan loves riddhima and is trying to make her jealous with Kripa who is trying to make Angad jealous with Armaan and Angad now wants Kripa back well armaan isn't doing it on purpose he just asked kripa if she would be 😆 though yeh kripa is usuing armaan ..pretty bad huh

Armaan's definetly in trouble with Kripa but his comments were funny and how Angad interupted him Ar- why th........ Anyone want some more whine angad asked interrupting armaan was just 😆 hahaha glad you liked that part...angad is so jealous huh😆and armaan jus tknows how to rub it in

I wonder does Angad realllllly want Kripa back or is he trying to break her and Armaan up and get revenge whatever the reason its gonna be entertaining hmmm that we will just have to see lol😉
Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soooooooooooon will do ton. thanksss!😃

Originally posted by: arwa72

hey it was a nice part hey thankss!

looks like Angad is getting jealous yup he is! and now will turn some what possseive type where the man thinks she only belongs to him and will constantly keep reminding her. hmm maybe maybe not...lets see what happens next 😉
cool part once again. thankss glad you liked the part😃

Originally posted by: desiqt8806

omg!! i was about to ask u when u were gonna introduce riddhima lol well here she is!!and u finally did! wooohoo!! and about time!! yeh i reckon huh lol

aww armaan is fida over riddhima soo cute!! yup head over heels for her it seems now kripa can tease him about riddhima! hehee! hehehe i certainly would 😆
and boy was armaan sayin a bit too much... i know so talkative about he soon to be wife lol poor kripa was blushing and aww poor him...he is gonna be beaten to bits by kripa!! lol lets see what kripa does 😆
and what the heck was wrong with angad...starin at kripa, whisperin in ear, dancing closely with him...did her lecture impact him that much or was it the way she dressed hmmmm?? lol haha the way you put it , he comes across as some freak lol lets see did he really change😉 well he ain't gettin back kripa that easily! def. not lol
great part! looved it! thankss hun glad you liked it!

Originally posted by: iqbals4ever

armaan is so hilarious😆 lol yeh he's the laughter in this ff😆 loved this part thankss and glad you luved the update!😃cont soon plz!!!!!!!!!👏will do ton. hun thankss!😳

Originally posted by: armaghan0

really cute amazing and exciting loved it aww thank you!😳 i'm glad you liked the update!! pls do con soon cant wait will continue tonight for sure!😃

Originally posted by: teri_susan

What is Angad going to do?lol thats a good question 😉Armaan got struck by Rodz at first sight yup...poor guy 😆,it's going to be more fun.He have to maintain his acting with Kripa ang at the same time he had to impress Ridz,it's really going to be fun😆 lol haha yeah i would hate to be in his place😆

It will be hard for to hide her love towards Angad,if he starts showing more affection to her😉oh def. and being so close to her ...pretty hard to resist 😉😆thanks!!

Originally posted by: sweet_mittal

hey dear it was simply great and lovely part can't wait to read what will happen next thanks hun glad you enjoyed the update!! and i'll post the next part soon and i really want them to get together soon so i colud have some romance part awwwwwwwwww feel so sorry for kripa hope angad got some sense in him they will be together soon but first angad needs to be teased a little😉
pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee continue soon
love ya
mittal thankss will cont tonight <3
Note: if i don;t reaply to ur part then don;t feel that i don;t like it or i don't want to comment it just i am going to nursing college so i only get time to comment on the weekends some time i got time in the middle of the week then i do comment it so sorry for that aww dnt be sorry i udnerstand , so please dnt say sorry ...comment whenever you get the time😃

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Posted: 17 years ago

Part 24

Kripa felt her cheeks warm up, she couldn't breathe right now… her mind kept replaying Angad's words… "Kripa you know that you look better in my arms than you do in his." her thoughts were interrupted when she felt Angad's finger under her chin, lifting her face so her eyes could meet with his…which they did a few seconds later. And it was as if time had stopped … that was until armaan took her hand, causing their little eye lock session to end. Ar- hey come on…I already miss you he said looking at angad and then at their entwined hands. Kripa's eyes soon followed Armaan's gaze and pulled her hands back, turning to leave with him when she stopped in her tracks as he grabbed her hand again. She was about to turn around when she heard him whisper into her ear… "I want to talk to you later"… letting go of her hand he left while armaan had to drag her with him as she stood there still and rather dazed.

"Kripa what happened" armaan asked as soon as they reached the bar. K- angad…angad, Ar- okay angad what…did he say something to you again…gosh he never changes he said about to leave when kripa quickly grabbed his arm, K- no he didn't say something to hurt me…he said he wanted to talk to me later, Ar- WHAT….wow knowing the truth sure made him change fast huh, kripa nodded her head when she suddenly remembered what he had also said causing her to smile. Ar- what are you smiling about he asked her rather curious…kripa rarely smiled by herself. K- oh it's just that I finally can see it, Ar- see what, K- Angad's jealous , Ar- oh yeh about time you realized he said grinning,

Ar- did he say something kripa, K- well yeh he said that I look better in his arms than I do in yours, A-WHOA…someone burning or what huh, Kripa just blushed. Ar- okay kripa I know you're happy and all but don't forget he hasn't said "I love you" and honestly ...
"I know armaan he hasn't said those three words, and honestly I don't know if he will anytime soon, but I hope he does…it's just that I feel really great knowing that he likes having me close to him and all" kripa interrupted him. Ar- I know so are you going to talk to him, K-NO, Ar- huh why…I mean don't you want to work everything out with him and then move on…and let me make my move he added softly as he eyed a very happy and jumpy riddhima. K- well I want to tease him, he has to feel guilty for a little while, I'm not going to give in so easy…not after how he has hurt me with his words…I mean just because he was all rude and mean due to a misunderstanding he shouldn't accused me …his friend. He has to feel what I had felt; kripa said getting Armaan's attention again. Ar- hmmm I guess you're right… I mean why should he be forgiven so quickly…but kripa just remember don't take too long, K- I know.

"Hey guys, come on lets go and dance" riddhima said pulling kripa and armaan with her. Kripa shook her head, she didn't want to dance anymore. K- No riddhima …my feet hurt but take armaan…he loves to dance she said smiling at armaan who was too busy looking at riddhima. R- are you sure, K- yeh I just want to sit here …you two go and have fun, R- okay let's go armaan, armaan looked back at kripa…Ar- are you sure kripa, maybe I should just sit here with you, K- no, no please go and enjoy your self , Ar- are you sure, K- yes now go before I push you to the dance floor, Ar- okay …see you in a bit he said kissing her forehead leaving for the dance floor again.

Kripa turned around to order a soft drink when a glass appeared in front of her; she looked down at the glass and then the figure that sat itself down beside her that caused her heart to beat twice as fast. "Here take it, I got it for you" angad said looking at her while she stared back into his eyes, shaking her head a few seconds later. K- I don't drink that much , A- oh I didn't know sorry, K- yeh well that's not surprising considering you don't know me at all she said getting up to leave when he grabbed her hand. A- come on kripa I just want to talk to you, kripa turned around shaking her head as she pulled her hand back….god his touch did wonders to her. K- what's there to talk about…if you're trying to say sorry about everything then listen... I won't forgive you. A- But why …come on kripa I'm sorry I was under… " under a misunderstanding, that's what you wanted to say…well guess what angad that doesn't mean you go accuse you're so called friend of being a gold digger and then ignoring her like she's a stranger, so don't say sorry because sorry won't do it" she said , leaving him when she was done.

"RISE AND SHINE DARLING" kripa screamed into Armaan's ear only to laugh a few seconds when got up instantly. Ar- KRIPA WHAT THE HECK, Kr- okay sorry…it's just it already two in the afternoon…hmmm so hows the head right now ,Ar- well worse thanks to your lovely voice he said still annoyed. K- okay, okay I'm sorry but I did try to wake you up before and it wouldn't work so I had no chance, Ar- hmmm fine …oh yeah I'm sorry you had to leave in a cab yesterday, you should have told me , probably wouldn't have a hang over right now he laughed. K- nah you were having fun and all plus I was fine, Ar- so was it cause of angad… I had saw him walking over to you, K- yeh, he was trying to apologize and all, Ar- hmm so did you let him have it, K- yup , yup…alright now go and have a shower…you smell pretty back she said laughing, Ar- please I smell good and you know it darling, I bet I smell so good that you just want to smell me all day he said grinning, K- armaan, Ar- yes, K- SHUT UP, Ar- got the point he said laughing as he headed into the bathroom while kripa lay on the bed smiling.

"Hey kripa"
kripa looked up at armaan who came out of the bathroom, making his way to sit beside kripa.
K- yes armaan…what do you want,
Ar- umm do you think riddhima was jealous of you…like you and me,
K-WHAT she bursted laughing ,
K- um armaan why would she be…one she doesn't know you and two we're engaged ,
Ar- dang you're right …I thought so , K- omg do you like her ,
Ar- no I don't like her…it's actually more like "love at first sight"
K- aww armaan she said hugging him, K- that's so cute,
Ar- yeh okay I shouldn't have told you. K- aww armaan is in love ,
Ar well what can I say except for
"ek ladki ko dekha to aisa laga ,
Ek ladki ko dekha to aisa laga
Jaise khilta gulaab,

Jaise shaayar ka khwaab ,

Jaise ujli kiran,
Jaise van mein hiran,
Jaise chaandni raat,
Jaise naghme ki baat ,
Jaise mandir mein ho ek jalta diya,
Ho ek ladki ko dekha to aisa laga……"

"ARMAAN" kripa yelled only to burst out laughing a few seconds later while armaan just stood there all of a sudden rather embarrassed. K- hmmm seems like someone has it bad for miss riddhima, but I must say nice choice armaan, Ar- well I do have good taste, K- uh huh she replied rolling at his eyes …K- so Mr. ek ladki ko dekha what are you going to do about riddhima, Ar- well I can't since I'm "engaged" to you remember he said sulking, K- aww my poor baby she said sarcastically while it was his turn to roll his eyes. K- why don't you tell her the truth, Ar- and you think she'll believe me,K- well why wouldn't she , Ar- uh because maybe … " hey I'm not in love with kripa , it's just to get back at angad who caused kripa so much pain and yeh well I think I'm falling in love with you…no wait I'm probably already in love with you, okay bye" K- what's wrong with that she asked trying not to laugh. Ar- haha you're so funny he said rolling his eyes once again. Kripa sighed, wrapping an arm around him. K- I'm sorry if you weren't helping me with angad then you wouldn't be worrying about this I'm sorry armaan, Ar- hey don't say sorry pluuuu…when he was interrupted by a knock at the door. K- I'll go get it , Ar- nah you stay here I'll get it he said making his way to the door while kripa went into the bathroom to get something.

"armaan…what are you doing here" a confused angad asked, Ar- oh hey and um why wouldn't I be here , this is my room he said laughing , A- oh maybe the receptionist gave me the wrong number or I heard wrong can you tell me what room krip… he was interrupted when he heard a voice from behind armaan, " who is it" ….kripa asked walking to the door, when she stood there surprised upon seeing angad…K- angad …….

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Angad what are doing here, armaan is not here so come back later she said closing the door when angad stopped her. A- you know why I'm here kripa, you know very well that I'm here to talk to you and not armaan. K-well guess what , I don't want to talk to you, A- oh but you will talk to me, K- what are you going to force me , A- yup he said pushing her out of the way as he made his way into the room. K- angad what are you doing, just get out, A- no kripa listen to m… when the lights went off. K- oh god what's wrong …its not even raining , A- probably something wrong with the hotel , K- I wasn't asking you…I was talking to myself, A- wow that's kind of creepy he said laughing as he slowly moved towards her. He didn't need the lights on…for some reason you could feel where kripa was in the room, plus her loud breaths helped a lot. Kripa closed her eyes scared, not because of the darkness but the fact angad was right in front of her…she could feel his closeness…..



okay sorry for the delay...was really busy and not feeling too well either plus my hols are ending soon:( anyways heres the next part, i don't really like it but thats all i could come up with for now ...thankss once again for the comments!!😃 i shall post the next part soon...prob thursday <3 choco!😃 oh and sorry if there's any mistakes i did read through it but my mind wasn't paying much attention lol


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Hey choco i got the hot seat hehe, that was a good part
now that angad nos the truth he is gonna do a lot of begging
and armaan and kripa are going to use this to their advantage
lets bug angad some more hehe, aww ammy loves ridz y dont u
include her in the plan then u dont have to fake engagement infront
of her and woo her hehe, now the ff is gonna get more interesting.
Plz Cont Soon!
Love Ya Hun
Rhea🤗
Edited by superstar15 - 17 years ago

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